Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9Y1W890H5KZBJX9MSJSCK

Run Details

Duration:
9.4s
Cost:
$0.001105
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door creaked open before the third knock, the sound raw as a fingernail dragged across glass. Rory stood frozen in the doorway, the delivery bag from Golden Empress still clutched in one hand, the other gripping the edge of the frame like it might save her from whatever stood on the other side. The flat’s dim light spilled out, illuminating the polished toes of a pair of expensive black shoes before climbing higher—tailored charcoal trousers, a crisp white shirt left open at the collar, the faintest glint of a silver chain disappearing beneath the fabric. Lucien Moreau leaned against the jamb, one hand in his pocket, the other resting on the ivory handle of his cane. His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—scanned her face with the same detached curiosity a collector might reserve for a rare artifact. The scent of bergamot and something darker, something like ozone after a storm, curled around her. “You’ve taken to locking your door,” he observed, voice smooth as aged brandy. “I’d almost think you were afraid of something.” Rory’s fingers tightened around the bag’s straps. “I’m not afraid. I’m just not expecting company.” “Neither was I.” His gaze flicked past her, taking in the cluttered hallway, the half-unpacked boxes still stacked near the door. “Though I suppose this place has always been… *lived in*.” She stepped back, not inviting him in, but not stopping him either. The flat smelled of takeout and old books, of the faint metallic tang of the city seeping through the windows. “What do you want, Lucien?” He pushed off the doorframe, entering without hesitation, his cane tapping a slow, deliberate rhythm against the floorboards. “I want to know why you ran.” The words hit like a blade between the ribs. Rory exhaled sharply, turning toward the kitchenette. “I didn’t run. I left.” “Semantics.” He followed, his polished shoes silent against the worn carpet. “You vanished without a word. No note. No explanation. Just… gone.” She pulled a bottle of whiskey from the cabinet, the glass clinking as she set it down. “You had everything you needed.” “Did I?” His voice dropped, the amusement bleeding out of it. “Because I don’t recall asking for your silence.” Rory poured two fingers into a chipped tumbler, the amber liquid catching the light. “You didn’t.” “No.” He stepped closer, close enough that she could see the faint scar threading through his eyebrow, a relic from some long-ago fight. “I didn’t. But you gave it to me anyway.” The air between them thickened, charged with the weight of everything unsaid. She downed the whiskey in one swallow, the burn doing little to dull the memory of his hands on her skin, the way his voice had sounded when he whispered her name like a prayer. Lucien watched her, his black eye darkening as his gaze dropped to her wrist—the small crescent scar peeking out from beneath the sleeve of her oversized sweater. “You’re still wearing that.” Rory followed his gaze, then yanked her sleeve down. “It’s not a fashion statement.” “No.” His voice was a velvet drawl. “It’s a reminder.” She turned away, busying herself with the kettle. “Of what?” “That you’re not as untouchable as you pretend to be.” The kettle whistled, the shrill sound cutting through the tension. Rory ignored it, her fingers curling around the edge of the counter. “I don’t pretend to be anything.” “Liar.” He stepped forward, close enough that she could feel the heat of him, the way his presence seemed to warp the air around them. “You’re still here, Rory. Still in London. Still delivering for that little Chinese restaurant like you’re hiding.” She whirled on him, the mug in her hand sloshing tea onto the counter. “I’m not hiding.” “Then why won’t you look at me?” Because looking at him meant remembering the way his lips had tasted like sin, the way his touch had set her skin on fire. Because looking at him meant admitting that she’d spent the last two years trying to outrun the ghost of him—and failing. Rory set the mug down with deliberate care. “What do you want, Lucien? Really?” His expression didn’t change, but something flickered in his heterochromatic eyes—something sharp, something hungry. “I want to know why you left.” “Because I had to.” “And now?” Now, she wanted to slam the door in his face and never think about him again. Now, she wanted to drag him into her bed and never let him leave. Now, she wanted to scream. Instead, she said, “Now, I’m working.” Lucien’s lips quirked, just slightly. “At midnight?” “Golden Empress doesn’t close until one.” “And yet, here you are.” He reached into his jacket, pulling out a folded piece of paper. “I need your help.” Rory took it, unfolding it with a sharp tug. A name. An address. A date. Her stomach twisted. “What is this?” “A job.” She looked up, meeting his gaze. “You know I don’t do jobs anymore.” “Not since Evan.” His voice was low, almost gentle. “But you’re not with him anymore.” “No.” She crumpled the paper in her fist. “I’m not.” “Then let me help you.” Rory exhaled sharply, her breath shaky. “Why?” “Because,” he said, stepping closer, his cane tapping against the floor like a metronome counting down to something inevitable, “you’re the only person I trust.” The words hung between them, heavy with meaning. Trust. The one thing she’d never given him freely. The one thing he’d never asked for. She should have said no. Should have slammed the door in his face and pretended this conversation never happened. But the truth was, she’d been waiting for him to come back. And now that he had, she wasn’t sure she could let him go again.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.217
leniency0.435
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.32% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount967
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"really"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.78% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount967
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"glint"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"eyebrow"
count1
5
word"charged"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"velvet"
count1
8
word"reminder"
count1
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"could feel"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"glint"
1"scanned"
2"flicked"
3"silence"
4"eyebrow"
5"charged"
6"weight"
7"velvet"
8"reminder"
9"tension"
10"could feel"
11"flickered"
12"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences57
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences91
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords2
totalWords959
ratio0.002
matches
0"lived in"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
88.61% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount733
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.23
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Golden1
Empress1
Moreau1
Rory9
Lucien3
persons
0"Empress"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Lucien"
places
0"Golden"
globalScore0.886
windowScore1
45.83% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"something like ozone after a storm, curled a"
1"tasted like sin, the way his touch had se"
95.72% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.043
wordCount959
matches
0"not inviting him in, but not stopping him either"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"admitting that she’d"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean21.31
std16.83
cv0.79
sampleLengths
096
158
221
315
431
537
625
721
822
922
1019
1116
1232
1347
1431
1514
1610
1710
1810
1928
2042
2117
227
2345
2414
2521
264
272
2835
296
307
316
3221
3321
342
3513
3615
3710
385
397
4025
4124
4219
4312
4414
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs131
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences91
ratio0.055
matches
0"The flat’s dim light spilled out, illuminating the polished toes of a pair of expensive black shoes before climbing higher—tailored charcoal trousers, a crisp white shirt left open at the collar, the faintest glint of a silver chain disappearing beneath the fabric."
1"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—scanned her face with the same detached curiosity a collector might reserve for a rare artifact."
2"Lucien watched her, his black eye darkening as his gaze dropped to her wrist—the small crescent scar peeking out from beneath the sleeve of her oversized sweater."
3"Because looking at him meant admitting that she’d spent the last two years trying to outrun the ghost of him—and failing."
4"His expression didn’t change, but something flickered in his heterochromatic eyes—something sharp, something hungry."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount741
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.029689608636977057
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005398110661268556
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences91
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences91
mean10.54
std8.09
cv0.768
sampleLengths
017
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242
321
421
516
613
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87
98
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1110
1212
1320
145
1518
167
179
187
195
2011
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2217
235
2411
258
2614
272
2823
299
3012
3135
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334
349
355
367
373
388
392
4010
4110
4212
436
4425
4517
4614
473
487
4924
56.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3626373626373626
totalSentences91
uniqueOpeners33
62.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"Instead, she said,"
ratio0.019
53.96% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences53
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
1"he observed, voice smooth as"
2"His gaze flicked past her,"
3"She stepped back, not inviting"
4"He pushed off the doorframe,"
5"He followed, his polished shoes"
6"She pulled a bottle of"
7"His voice dropped, the amusement"
8"He stepped closer, close enough"
9"She downed the whiskey in"
10"His voice was a velvet"
11"She turned away, busying herself"
12"He stepped forward, close enough"
13"She whirled on him, the"
14"His expression didn’t change, but"
15"He reached into his jacket,"
16"Her stomach twisted."
17"She looked up, meeting his"
18"His voice was low, almost"
19"She crumpled the paper in"
ratio0.415
44.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences53
matches
0"The door creaked open before"
1"Rory stood frozen in the"
2"The flat’s dim light spilled"
3"Lucien Moreau leaned against the"
4"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
5"The scent of bergamot and"
6"he observed, voice smooth as"
7"Rory’s fingers tightened around the"
8"His gaze flicked past her,"
9"She stepped back, not inviting"
10"The flat smelled of takeout"
11"He pushed off the doorframe,"
12"The words hit like a"
13"Rory exhaled sharply, turning toward"
14"He followed, his polished shoes"
15"She pulled a bottle of"
16"His voice dropped, the amusement"
17"Rory poured two fingers into"
18"He stepped closer, close enough"
19"The air between them thickened,"
ratio0.83
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount5
totalSentences53
matches
0"Because looking at him meant"
1"Because looking at him meant"
2"Now, she wanted to slam"
3"Now, she wanted to drag"
4"Now, she wanted to scream."
ratio0.094
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He pushed off the doorframe, entering without hesitation, his cane tapping a slow, deliberate rhythm against the floorboards."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he observed, voice smooth as aged brandy"
1"He followed, his polished shoes silent against the worn carpet"
2"His voice dropped, the amusement bleeding out of it"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.065
leniency0.13
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.043
82.0024%