Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9Y3006R3GB16KMBQBN5DS

Run Details

Duration:
15.5s
Cost:
$0.000155
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The insistent rapping vibrated through the floorboards, a dull thrum that made Rory shift on the worn armchair. It wasn’t a polite tap, more a declaration. She’d been meticulously organizing her collection of outdated maps – a habit born of boredom and a need for order in a chaotic life – and the sound had startled her. She glanced at the peephole, then back at the door. It was ridiculous. She hadn’t told anyone she was expecting company. “Who is it?” she called out, her voice deliberately flat, betraying none of the sudden, prickly awareness that was tightening her chest. “It’s Lucien Moreau,” a voice replied, smooth and accented, laced with a hint of amusement. “I trust you’re busy cataloging cartographical relics.” Rory hesitated. Lucien Moreau. The name felt like a shard of ice against her skin. Five years. Five years since they’d last exchanged more than a cursory word, five years since the sudden, brutal severing of their connection. She hadn’t spoken to him since… since leaving Evan. It was a strange, illogical compulsion, really, to feel this surge of something akin to alarm. She fumbled with the deadbolts, the familiar click of the locks strangely loud in the small space. Pulling the door open a crack, she peered out. He was standing on her doorstep, a silhouette against the dim light of the Brick Lane night. He was impeccably Lucien, as always. Charcoal suit, slicked-back platinum hair gleaming under the streetlights, and his cane resting casually against the doorframe. His heterochromatic eyes – amber and black – assessed her with an unnerving precision. “Rory,” he said, his voice devoid of any pretense of pleasantry. “I trust your life above Silas’ is proving… stimulating.” She pulled the door wider, stepping back to allow him entry. The flat smelled faintly of curry and old paper, a comforting, if slightly overwhelming, combination. Ptolemy, her tabby cat, emerged from beneath a stack of books, regarding Lucien with cautious suspicion. “It’s… productive,” Rory managed, adjusting the strap of her messenger bag. She busied herself straightening a pile of maps, a futile attempt to regain control of the situation. “What do you want, Lucien?” He moved with a fluid grace that was both elegant and subtly predatory, stepping inside without invitation. He didn’t offer a greeting, didn’t comment on the state of the flat, didn’t acknowledge Ptolemy’s presence. He simply surveyed the room as if it were a particularly tedious piece of evidence. “Information,” he stated, his gaze sweeping over the walls crammed with books and scrolls. "Specifically, information regarding a certain Mr. Evan Davies.” Rory’s hand tightened on the map she’d been smoothing. The air in the room thickened, charged with the unspoken history between them. “I’m not sure what you’re implying.” Lucien’s lips curved into a ghost of a smile – a flicker of something sharp and knowing. “Don’t insult my intelligence, Rory. You left London precisely because of him. And I’ve been… tracking your movements ever since.” “You’ve been spying on me?” The words came out sharper than she intended. She hated feeling vulnerable, hated letting him see this flicker of defensiveness. “Let’s call it a strategic observation,” he corrected, his tone neutral. “I require a certain… assessment of Davies’ current activities. He’s been exhibiting behavior inconsistent with his established patterns.” “And you think I know something?” Rory challenged, turning her back to him and resuming her meticulous arrangement of the maps. It was a shield, a way to avoid his eyes, his unnerving ability to dissect a person with a single glance. “You were his… partner,” he said, the word hanging in the air like a fragile accusation. She didn’t turn around. “That’s not relevant.” “Everything is relevant, Rory,” Lucien replied, stepping closer. She could feel the subtle scent of sandalwood and something indefinably… demon-like clinging to his clothes. "Especially when it involves a dangerous individual with a predilection for exploiting those he deems beneath him.” The proximity was suffocating. He stopped just a few feet away, close enough that she could feel the warmth radiating from his body. She risked a glance at him. His amber eye seemed to bore into her, assessing, weighing. “You’re still clinging to this self-imposed exile,” he observed, his voice softer now, almost gentle. “It’s a remarkably inefficient use of your considerable talents.” Rory swallowed, the familiar sting of his words. He'd always been able to cut to the core of things, to dismantle her carefully constructed defenses with a single, well-placed observation. “I’m… comfortable.” A lie, a pathetic, brittle lie. She hadn’t been comfortable in years. Lucien tilted his head, considering her. “Comfort is stagnation, Rory. It’s the breeding ground of regret.” He gestured towards the maps. “You have a knack for uncovering secrets. A gift for connecting the dots. I need that gift.” “And what’s in it for me?” she asked, her voice flat. She refused to give him anything, not even an opening. He paused, a subtle calculation playing out in his eyes. Then, he reached into his coat and produced a small, intricately carved wooden box. He placed it on the table between them. "A debt, of sorts. A reminder of a promise made long ago." Rory recognized it instantly - a miniature replica of the silver locket her mother had given her before she died. She hadn’t seen it since she’d been a child. Her mother had given it to her and Lucien to share, a symbol of their friendship. She had been so young and foolish back then, so convinced that it would last forever. "You kept this?" The words were barely a whisper. “Sentimentality is a dangerous weakness,” Lucien replied, his expression unreadable. “I simply preserved it. For the right circumstances.” He straightened, his gaze sweeping across the room once more. “Now, about Mr. Davies…” As he began to outline his questions, detailing Davies' recent movements and contacts, Rory found herself listening, not with annoyance or resentment, but with a strange, unsettling curiosity. The air in the flat shifted again, not with tension this time, but with a nascent awareness – a recognition of the complicated, tangled threads that bound them together, a thread she thought had been irrevocably severed, but which, it seemed, was stubbornly refusing to break. The scent of sandalwood was stronger now, and she realized, with a jolt, that she wasn't entirely averse to it. Her hand brushed against the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, a phantom ache reminding her of a childhood accident, a reminder of a life before Evan, before London, before Lucien. And for the first time in a long time, Rory felt a flicker of something other than guardedness, something akin to… anticipation.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.533
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1112
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"precisely"
count1
4
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"deliberately"
1"really"
2"slightly"
3"precisely"
4"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1112
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"vibrated"
count1
1
word"chaotic"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"gleaming"
count1
4
word"comforting"
count1
5
word"charged"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count3
8
word"could feel"
count2
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"to the core"
count1
11
word"constructed"
count1
12
word"comfortable"
count2
13
word"reminder"
count2
14
word"whisper"
count1
15
word"unreadable"
count1
16
word"tension"
count1
17
word"anticipation"
count1
highlights
0"vibrated"
1"chaotic"
2"familiar"
3"gleaming"
4"comforting"
5"charged"
6"unspoken"
7"flicker"
8"could feel"
9"warmth"
10"to the core"
11"constructed"
12"comfortable"
13"reminder"
14"whisper"
15"unreadable"
16"tension"
17"anticipation"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
84.94% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences74
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences87
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1115
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
99.10% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount884
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.02
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory8
Moreau1
Evan2
Brick1
Lane1
Lucien9
Ptolemy2
London1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Evan"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
globalScore0.991
windowScore1
25.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a shard of ice against her sk"
1"something akin to alarm"
2"something akin to…"
20.63% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.794
wordCount1115
matches
0"not with annoyance or resentment, but with a strange, unsettling curiosity"
1"not with tension this time, but with a nascent awareness"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"convinced that it"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean38.45
std20.66
cv0.537
sampleLengths
078
122
222
363
480
520
642
733
849
922
1028
1137
1225
1329
1442
1516
167
1741
1839
1924
2044
2138
2221
2344
2461
259
2632
2794
2853
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
9.52% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs140
matches
0"was expecting"
1"was tightening"
2"was standing"
3"was suffocating"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences87
ratio0.057
matches
0"She’d been meticulously organizing her collection of outdated maps – a habit born of boredom and a need for order in a chaotic life – and the sound had startled her."
1"His heterochromatic eyes – amber and black – assessed her with an unnerving precision."
2"Lucien’s lips curved into a ghost of a smile – a flicker of something sharp and knowing."
3"Rory recognized it instantly - a miniature replica of the silver locket her mother had given her before she died."
4"The air in the flat shifted again, not with tension this time, but with a nascent awareness – a recognition of the complicated, tangled threads that bound them together, a thread she thought had been irrevocably severed, but which, it seemed, was stubbornly refusing to break."
90.51% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount761
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.04862023653088042
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.022339027595269383
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean12.82
std7.35
cv0.574
sampleLengths
018
18
231
310
43
58
622
715
87
92
102
1111
122
1321
146
153
1616
1717
189
1917
206
2117
2214
2311
249
2511
2615
2716
2811
2917
305
3117
3217
3315
3414
358
369
3713
386
3917
4020
4113
4212
4311
4418
4521
4621
4716
484
493
56.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3793103448275862
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners33
47.62% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"Then, he reached into his"
ratio0.014
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences70
matches
0"It wasn’t a polite tap,"
1"She’d been meticulously organizing her"
2"She glanced at the peephole,"
3"It was ridiculous."
4"She hadn’t told anyone she"
5"she called out, her voice"
6"She hadn’t spoken to him"
7"It was a strange, illogical"
8"She fumbled with the deadbolts,"
9"He was standing on her"
10"He was impeccably Lucien, as"
11"His heterochromatic eyes – amber"
12"he said, his voice devoid"
13"She pulled the door wider,"
14"She busied herself straightening a"
15"He moved with a fluid"
16"He didn’t offer a greeting,"
17"He simply surveyed the room"
18"he stated, his gaze sweeping"
19"She hated feeling vulnerable, hated"
ratio0.586
2.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences70
matches
0"The insistent rapping vibrated through"
1"It wasn’t a polite tap,"
2"She’d been meticulously organizing her"
3"She glanced at the peephole,"
4"It was ridiculous."
5"She hadn’t told anyone she"
6"she called out, her voice"
7"a voice replied, smooth and"
8"The name felt like a"
9"She hadn’t spoken to him"
10"It was a strange, illogical"
11"She fumbled with the deadbolts,"
12"He was standing on her"
13"He was impeccably Lucien, as"
14"Charcoal suit, slicked-back platinum hair"
15"His heterochromatic eyes – amber"
16"he said, his voice devoid"
17"She pulled the door wider,"
18"The flat smelled faintly of"
19"Ptolemy, her tabby cat, emerged"
ratio0.914
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
81.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The insistent rapping vibrated through the floorboards, a dull thrum that made Rory shift on the worn armchair."
1"He moved with a fluid grace that was both elegant and subtly predatory, stepping inside without invitation."
2"The air in the flat shifted again, not with tension this time, but with a nascent awareness – a recognition of the complicated, tangled threads that bound them …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"he said, his voice devoid of any pretense of pleasantry"
1"he corrected, his tone neutral"
2"he said, the word hanging in the air like a fragile accusation"
3"he observed, his voice softer now, almost gentle"
4"she asked, her voice flat"
5"Lucien replied, his expression unreadable"
6"He straightened, his gaze sweeping across the room once more"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she called out (call out)"
1"he stated (state)"
2"he corrected (correct)"
3"Rory challenged (challenge)"
4"he observed (observe)"
5"he began (begin)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.4
63.1882%