Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9Y3RQD4EDYR4ASRXFDNHV

Run Details

Duration:
17.3s
Cost:
$0.000650
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in the grove was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something like crushed petals and the faintest hint of honey, though no bees stirred here. Aurora stepped forward, her boots sinking into the soft moss as she followed Nyx’s shifting silhouette. The standing stones loomed around them, their bark etched with spirals that seemed to breathe in the dim light filtering through the canopy above. The trees here were unlike anything she’d seen before, their leaves shifting colors like liquid gold and sapphire, pulsing faintly in time with the breath of the world. “It’s… alive,” Nyx murmured, their voice a whisper that slithered around Aurora’s ears like smoke. She glanced back, her fingers brushing the crimson pendant at her throat. The stone pulsed weakly, as if aware of their presence. Isolde had warned her about the grove—about the way time here could bend—but Aurora had never expected it to feel like this. Like being in a place where the air itself held secrets. Aurora’s pulse quickened as she reached the center of the clearing, where the standing stones formed a circle. The ground beneath her was no longer solid. It was like walking on a bed of woven roots, shifting beneath her feet as if the earth itself was waiting. The light here was different too, softer, as if the sun had been filtered through a thousand layers of lace. The wildflowers bloomed year-round, their petals shimmering with hues Aurora hadn’t known existed—deep violets, electric blues, and golds that caught the light like scattered sunlight. “It’s beautiful,” she breathed, her voice barely audible over the hum of the world around her. Nyx’s form flickered, their silhouette dissolving into a shadow that seemed to drink in the light. “And dangerous,” they said, their voice a whisper that slithered into her mind. Aurora flinched, but the sensation passed, leaving only the faintest prickle of awareness. She turned to Isolde, who stood in the center of the circle, her silver hair catching the light like scattered stars. The seer’s eyes were pale lavender, watching them with a gaze that seemed to see beyond the surface of things. Aurora had expected riddles, but Isolde’s expression was quiet, almost solemn. “You’ve come to the place where the Veil thins,” she said, her voice like wind through leaves. “And the Veil is not kind to those who wander too close.” Aurora’s breath hitched. The Veil. The barrier between realms. She remembered the lore—how it weakened at the solstice, how it was monitored by the Wardens. But this was no ordinary rift. This was a place where the boundaries between worlds blurred, where the air itself seemed to hum with unseen energy. “What do you see?” Nyx asked, their voice a whisper that carried on the breeze. Isolde’s fingers traced the edge of one of the standing stones, and for a moment, Aurora thought she saw something shift beneath her skin—a flicker of something unseen. “The hunger,” Isolde said, her voice low. “The hunger of the realms beyond. And the hunger of those who dare to look.” Aurora’s stomach twisted. She had expected prophecy, but this was something else. Something darker. She turned back to Nyx, her mind racing. “What do you feel?” Nyx’s form rippled, their shadow stretching unnaturally long. “The weight of the world,” they said. “And the weight of what lies beyond it.” Aurora’s heart pounded. She had come here for answers, but she wasn’t sure if she wanted them yet. The grove was a place of wonder, yes, but it was also a place of danger. And the danger here was not just physical—it was something deeper, something that seemed to coil around her like a living thing. She took a step forward, her boots sinking deeper into the moss. The standing stones loomed around her, their bark etched with spirals that seemed to breathe in the dim light. The air was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older, something like crushed petals and the faintest hint of honey. She reached out, her fingers brushing the crimson pendant at her throat. The stone pulsed faintly, as if aware of her presence. “What is this place?” she asked, her voice barely audible over the hum of the world around her. Isolde’s gaze never left her. “A place where the boundaries between worlds blur,” she said. “And where the hungry wait.” Aurora’s breath caught. She had expected answers, but she wasn’t sure if she wanted them yet. The grove was a place of wonder, yes, but it was also a place of danger. And the danger here was not just physical—it was something deeper, something that seemed to coil around her like a living thing. She turned back to Nyx, her mind racing. “What do you feel?” Nyx’s form flickered, their shadow stretching unnaturally long. “The weight of the world,” they said. “And the weight of what lies beyond it.” Aurora’s pulse quickened. She had come here for answers, but she wasn’t sure if she wanted them yet. The grove was a place of wonder, but it was also a place of unease. And the unease here was not just in the air—it was in her bones. She took another step forward, her boots sinking deeper into the moss. The standing stones loomed around her, their bark etched with spirals that seemed to breathe in the dim light. The air was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older, something like crushed petals and the faintest hint of honey. She reached out, her fingers brushing the crimson pendant at her throat. The stone pulsed faintly, as if aware of her presence. Isolde’s voice was a whisper, carried on the breeze. “The hunger of the realms beyond,” she said. “And the hunger of those who dare to look.” Aurora’s stomach twisted. She had expected prophecy, but this was something else. Something darker. She turned to Nyx, her mind racing. “What do you see?” Nyx’s form rippled, their shadow stretching unnaturally long. “The Veil,” they said. “And the tears in it.” Aurora’s breath hitched. The Veil. The barrier between Earth and Hel and the Fae Realms. She remembered the lore—how it weakened at the solstice, how it was monitored by the Wardens. But this was no ordinary rift. This was a place where the boundaries between worlds blurred, where the air itself seemed to hum with unseen energy. She stepped closer to the center of the circle, her fingers tracing the edge of one of the standing stones. The bark was warm to the touch, almost alive. She leaned in, her breath catching as she caught the scent of something sweet and rotten, like the first bloom of spring and the last whisper of autumn. “What is this?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Isolde’s gaze never wavered. “A place where the hungry wait,” she said. “And where the hungry are fed.” Aurora’s heart pounded. She had expected answers, but she wasn’t sure if she wanted them yet. The grove was a place of wonder, but it was also a place of unease. And the unease here was not just in the air—it was in her bones. She turned to Nyx, her mind racing. “What do you feel?” Nyx’s form flickered, their shadow stretching unnaturally long. “The weight of the world,” they said. “And the weight of what lies beyond it.” Aurora’s pulse quickened. She had come here for answers, but she wasn’t sure if she wanted them yet. The grove was a place of wonder, but it was also a place of danger. And the danger here was not just physical—it was something deeper, something that seemed to coil around her like a living thing. She took a deep breath, her fingers still tracing the standing stones. The air was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older, something like crushed petals and the faintest hint of honey. The standing stones loomed around her, their bark etched with spirals that seemed to breathe in the dim light. The light here was different too, softer, as if the sun had been filtered through a thousand layers of lace. She looked up at the sky, which was a vast expanse of twilight, streaked with stars that seemed to twinkle with an unnatural brightness. The trees here were unlike anything she’d seen before, their leaves shifting colors like liquid gold and sapphire, pulsing faintly in time with the breath of the world. Aurora’s breath caught. She had never seen anything like this before. The grove was a place of wonder, but it was also a place of unease. And the unease here was not just in the air—it was in her bones. She turned back to Isolde, her mind racing. “What do you see?” Isolde’s eyes were pale lavender, watching her with a gaze that seemed to see beyond the surface of things. “The hunger,” Isolde said. “The hunger of the realms beyond. And the hunger of those who dare to look.” Aurora’s stomach twisted. She had expected answers, but she wasn’t sure if she wanted them yet. She took another step forward, her boots sinking deeper into the moss. The standing stones formed a circle around her, their bark etched with spirals that seemed to breathe in the dim light. Nyx’s form flickered, their shadow stretching unnaturally long. “The Veil,” they said. “And the tears in it.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She reached out, her fingers brushing the crimson pendant at her throat. The stone pulsed faintly, as if aware of her presence. She looked around, her eyes taking in the alien beauty of the grove. The wildflowers bloomed year-round, their petals shimmering with hues she hadn’t known existed. The trees pulsed with colors that seemed to shift with the breath of the world. Isolde’s voice was a whisper, carried on the breeze. “The hunger of the realms beyond,” she said. “And the hunger of those who dare to look.” Aurora’s heart pounded. She had expected answers, but she wasn’t sure if she wanted them yet. The grove was a place of wonder, but it was also a place of danger. And the danger here was not just physical—it was something deeper, something that seemed to coil around her like a living thing. She took a deep breath, her fingers still tracing the standing stones. The air was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older, something like crushed petals and the faintest hint of honey. The standing stones loomed around her, their bark warm and almost alive. She turned to Nyx, her mind racing. “What do you feel?” Nyx’s form rippled, their shadow stretching unnaturally long. “The Veil,” they said. “And the tears in it.” Aurora’s pulse quickened. She had come here for answers, but she wasn’t sure if she wanted them yet. The grove was a place of wonder, but it was also a place of unease. And the unease here was not just in the air—it was in her bones. She stepped closer to the center of the circle, her fingers tracing the edge of one of the standing stones. The bark was warm, almost alive. She leaned in, her breath catching as she caught the scent of something sweet and rotten. “What is this place?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Isolde’s gaze never wavered. “A place where the boundaries between worlds blur,” she said. “And where the hungry wait.” Aurora’s breath caught. She had expected answers, but she wasn’t sure if she wanted them yet. The grove was a place of wonder, but it was also a place of danger. The danger here was not just physical—it was something deeper, something that seemed to coil around her like a living thing. She turned back to Nyx, her mind racing. The air was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older, something like crushed petals and honey. The standing stones loomed around her, their bark etched with spirals that seemed to breathe in the dim light. Nyx’s form flickered, their shadow stretching unnaturally long. “The Veil,” they said. “And the tears in it.” Aurora’s fingers tightened around the pendant at her throat. The stone pulsed faintly, as if responding to her unease. She looked up at the sky, the stars twinkling with an unnatural brightness. “What do you see?” she asked Isolde. The seer’s voice was quiet, almost sorrowful. “The hunger,” she said. “And the hunger of those who dare to look.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She had expected answers, but she wasn’t sure if she wanted them yet. The grove was a place of wonder, but it was also a place of danger. The danger here was not just in the air—it was in her bones, in her heart. She took a step forward, her boots sinking into the moss. The standing stones formed a circle around her, their bark warm and alive. The air was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older, something like crushed petals and honey. Nyx’s whisper slithered into her mind. “The weight of the world,” they said. “And the weight of what lies beyond it.” Aurora’s pulse quickened. She had come here for answers, but she wasn’t sure if she wanted them yet. The grove was a place of wonder, but it was also a place of unease. And the unease here was not just in the air—it was in her bones. She reached out, her fingers brushing the standing stone. The bark was warm, almost alive. She leaned in, her breath catching as she caught the scent of something sweet and rotten. “What is this place?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Isolde’s gaze was steady, her voice a whisper on the wind. “A place where the hungry wait,” she said. “And where the hungry are fed.” Aurora’s heart pounded. She had expected answers, but she wasn’t sure if she wanted them yet. The grove was a place of wonder, but it was also a place of danger. The danger here was not just physical—it was something deeper, something that coiled around her like a living thing. She turned to Nyx, their form flickering like a candle flame in the wind. “What do you feel?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Nyx’s shadow stretched unnaturally long, their voice a whisper that slithered into her mind. “The Veil,” they said. “And the tears in it.” Aurora’s breath caught. The pendant at her throat pulsed faintly, as if responding to the weight of what she was seeing. The standing stones loomed around her, their bark etched with spirals that seemed to breathe in the dim light. The air was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older, something like crushed petals and honey. She took a step closer, her fingers tracing the edge of the stone. The bark was warm, almost alive. She leaned in, her breath catching as she caught the scent of something sweet and rotten. “What do you see?” she asked Isolde, her voice barely above a whisper. Isolde’s eyes were pale lavender, watching her with a gaze that seemed to see beyond the surface of things. “The hunger,” the seer said. “The hunger of the realms beyond. And the hunger of those who dare to look.” Aurora’s stomach twisted. She had expected answers, but she wasn’t sure if she wanted them yet. The grove was a place of wonder, but it was also a place of unease. The unease here was not just in the air—it was in her bones. She turned back to Nyx, their form flickering like a shadow caught in the wind. “What do you feel?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Nyx’s whisper slithered into her mind. “The Veil,” they said. “And the tears in it.” Aurora’s fingers tightened around the pendant. The stone pulsed faintly, as if sensing her unease. The standing stones loomed around her, their bark warm and alive. The air hummed with something unseen, something that coiled around her like a living thing. She took a deep breath, her mind racing. The grove was a place of wonder, but it was also a place of danger. And the danger here was not just physical—it was something deeper, something that seemed to coil around her like a living thing. Isolde’s voice was a whisper on the wind. “The hunger,” she said. “And the hunger of those who dare to look.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She had come here for answers, but she wasn’t sure if she wanted them yet. The grove was a place of wonder, but it was also a place of unease. And the unease here was not just in the air—it was in her bones. She stepped forward, her boots sinking into the moss. The standing stones formed a circle around her, their bark etched with spirals that seemed to breathe in the dim light. The air was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older, something like crushed petals and honey. Nyx’s whisper slithered into her mind. “The weight of the world,” they said. “And the weight of what lies beyond it.” Aurora’s pulse quickened. She had come here for answers, but she wasn’t sure if she wanted them yet. The grove was a place of wonder, but it was also a place of danger. And the danger here was not just physical—it was something deeper, something that coiled around her like a living thing. She reached out, her fingers brushing the standing stone. The bark was warm, almost alive. She leaned in, her breath catching as she caught the scent of something sweet and rotten. “What is this place?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Isolde’s gaze was steady, her voice a whisper on the wind. “A place where the boundaries between worlds blur,” she said. “And where the hungry wait.” Aurora’s heart pounded. The pendant at her throat pulsed faintly, as if responding to the weight of what she was seeing. The standing stones loomed around her, their bark etched with spirals that seemed to breathe in the dim light. The air hummed with unseen energy, something that coiled around her like a living thing. She turned to Nyx, their form flickering like a shadow caught in the wind. “What do you see?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Nyx’s whisper slithered into her mind. “The Veil,” they said. “And the tears in it.” Aurora’s breath caught. She had expected answers, but she wasn’t sure if she wanted them yet. The grove was a place of wonder, but it was also a place of unease. And the unease here was not just in the air—it was in her bones. She took a step closer, her fingers tracing the edge of the standing stone. The bark was warm, alive. She leaned in, her breath catching as the scent of crushed petals and honey filled her nostrils. “What do you feel?” she asked Isolde, her voice barely above a whisper. Isolde’s eyes were pale lavender, watching her with a gaze that seemed to pierce the veil between worlds. “The hunger,” the seer said. “And the hunger of those who dare to look.” Aurora’s stomach twisted. The pendant at her throat pulsed faintly, as if sensing her unease. The standing stones loomed around her, their spirals breathing in the dim light. The air hummed with something unseen, something that coiled around her like a living thing. She took a deep breath, her mind racing. The grove was a place of wonder, but it was also a place of danger. And the danger here was not just physical—it was something deeper, something that coiled around her like a living thing. Nyx’s whisper slithered into her mind. “The Veil,” they said. “And the tears in it.” Aurora’s fingers tightened around the pendant. The stone pulsed faintly, as if responding to the weight of what she was seeing. The standing stones formed a circle around her, their bark warm and alive. The air was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older, something like crushed petals and honey. She turned to Nyx, their form flickering like a shadow caught in the wind. “What do you see?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Nyx’s voice was a whisper on the wind. “The Veil,” they said. “And the tears in it.” Aurora’s breath caught. The pendant pulsed faintly, as if sensing the depth of her unease. The standing stones loomed around her, their spirals breathing in the dim light. The air hummed with something unseen, something that coiled around her like a living thing. She stepped forward, her boots sinking into the moss. The world around her seemed to shift, the light flickering like a candle flame in the wind. The standing stones formed a circle, their bark warm and alive. The air was thick with the scent of crushed petals and honey. Isolde’s voice was a whisper on the wind. “The hunger,” she said. “And the hunger of those who dare to look.” Aurora’s heart pounded. She had come here for answers, but the grove was a place of wonder and danger, of wonder and unease. And the unease here was not just in the air—it was in her bones, in her heart. She reached out, her fingers brushing the standing stone. The bark was warm, alive. She leaned in, her breath catching as the scent of something sweet and rotten filled her nostrils. “What do you see?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Isolde’s gaze was steady, her voice a whisper on the wind. “The hunger,” she said. “And the hunger of those who dare to look.” Aurora’s breath caught. The pendant pulsed faintly, as if responding to the weight of what she was seeing. The standing stones formed a circle around her, their spirals breathing in the dim light. The air hummed with unseen energy, coiled around her like a living thing. She turned to Nyx, their form flickering like a shadow caught in the wind. “What do we do now?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Nyx’s whisper slithered into her mind. “We walk,” they said. “And we listen.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags49
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences86
tagDensity0.57
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount3743
totalAiIsmAdverbs12
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count12
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount3743
totalAiIsms126
found
0
word"loomed"
count11
1
word"etched"
count9
2
word"whisper"
count31
3
word"pulsed"
count13
4
word"pulse"
count6
5
word"quickened"
count6
6
word"electric"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count5
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count5
11
word"racing"
count9
12
word"weight"
count14
13
word"tracing"
count6
14
word"almost alive"
count6
15
word"wavered"
count2
highlights
0"loomed"
1"etched"
2"whisper"
3"pulsed"
4"pulse"
5"quickened"
6"electric"
7"flickered"
8"traced"
9"flicker"
10"stomach"
11"racing"
12"weight"
13"tracing"
14"almost alive"
15"wavered"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches10
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count10
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences293
matches(empty)
20.97% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount25
narrationSentences293
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences330
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords3715
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions56
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions100
wordCount3272
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.19
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Nyx30
Aurora39
Isolde23
Veil2
Wardens2
Earth1
Hel1
Fae1
Realms1
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Aurora"
2"Isolde"
places(empty)
globalScore0.904
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences224
glossingSentenceCount40
matches
0"something like crushed petals and the fainte"
1"spirals that seemed to breathe in the dim light filtering through the canopy above"
2"shadow that seemed to drink in the light"
3"gaze that seemed to see beyond the surface of things"
4"something that seemed to coil around her like a living thing"
5"spirals that seemed to breathe in the dim light"
6"something like crushed petals and the fainte"
7"something that seemed to coil around her like a living thing"
8"spirals that seemed to breathe in the dim light"
9"something like crushed petals and the fainte"
10"something that seemed to coil around her like a living thing"
11"something like crushed petals and the fainte"
12"spirals that seemed to breathe in the dim light"
13"stars that seemed to twinkle with an unnatural brightness"
14"gaze that seemed to see beyond the surface of things"
15"spirals that seemed to breathe in the dim light"
16"colors that seemed to shift with the breath of the world"
17"something that seemed to coil around her like a living thing"
18"something like crushed petals and the fainte"
19"something that seemed to coil around her like a living thing"
20"something like crushed petals and honey"
21"spirals that seemed to breathe in the dim light"
22"as if responding to her unease"
23"something like crushed petals and honey"
24"as if responding to the weight of what she was seeing"
25"spirals that seemed to breathe in the dim light"
26"something like crushed petals and honey"
27"gaze that seemed to see beyond the surface of things"
28"as if sensing her unease"
29"something that seemed to coil around her like a living thing"
30"spirals that seemed to breathe in the dim light"
31"something like crushed petals and honey"
32"as if responding to the weight of what she was seeing"
33"spirals that seemed to breathe in the dim light"
34"gaze that seemed to pierce the veil between worlds"
35"as if sensing her unease"
36"as if responding to the weight of what she was seeing"
37"something like crushed petals and honey"
38"as if sensing the depth of her unease"
39"as if responding to the weight of what she was seeing"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount3715
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences330
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs105
mean35.38
std19.01
cv0.537
sampleLengths
098
170
292
316
442
581
651
715
850
926
1023
1156
1276
1318
1420
1554
1612
1723
1847
1976
2026
2125
2217
2357
2457
2511
2618
2745
2811
2923
3055
3174
3252
3340
3412
3538
3649
3717
3825
3941
4026
4153
4247
4311
4417
4547
4642
4712
4819
4952
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences293
matches
0"been filtered"
1"was monitored"
2"was monitored"
3"been filtered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs552
matches
0"was waiting"
1"was seeing"
2"was seeing"
3"was seeing"
4"was seeing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount26
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences25
totalSentences330
ratio0.076
matches
0"The air in the grove was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something like crushed petals and the faintest hint of honey, though no bees stirred here."
1"Isolde had warned her about the grove—about the way time here could bend—but Aurora had never expected it to feel like this."
2"The wildflowers bloomed year-round, their petals shimmering with hues Aurora hadn’t known existed—deep violets, electric blues, and golds that caught the light like scattered sunlight."
3"She remembered the lore—how it weakened at the solstice, how it was monitored by the Wardens."
4"Isolde’s fingers traced the edge of one of the standing stones, and for a moment, Aurora thought she saw something shift beneath her skin—a flicker of something unseen."
5"And the danger here was not just physical—it was something deeper, something that seemed to coil around her like a living thing."
6"And the danger here was not just physical—it was something deeper, something that seemed to coil around her like a living thing."
7"And the unease here was not just in the air—it was in her bones."
8"She remembered the lore—how it weakened at the solstice, how it was monitored by the Wardens."
9"And the unease here was not just in the air—it was in her bones."
10"And the danger here was not just physical—it was something deeper, something that seemed to coil around her like a living thing."
11"And the unease here was not just in the air—it was in her bones."
12"And the danger here was not just physical—it was something deeper, something that seemed to coil around her like a living thing."
13"And the unease here was not just in the air—it was in her bones."
14"The danger here was not just physical—it was something deeper, something that seemed to coil around her like a living thing."
15"The danger here was not just in the air—it was in her bones, in her heart."
16"And the unease here was not just in the air—it was in her bones."
17"The danger here was not just physical—it was something deeper, something that coiled around her like a living thing."
18"The unease here was not just in the air—it was in her bones."
19"And the danger here was not just physical—it was something deeper, something that seemed to coil around her like a living thing."
20"And the unease here was not just in the air—it was in her bones."
21"And the danger here was not just physical—it was something deeper, something that coiled around her like a living thing."
22"And the unease here was not just in the air—it was in her bones."
23"And the danger here was not just physical—it was something deeper, something that coiled around her like a living thing."
24"And the unease here was not just in the air—it was in her bones, in her heart."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount3300
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount126
adverbRatio0.038181818181818185
lyAdverbCount37
lyAdverbRatio0.011212121212121211
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences330
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences330
mean11.26
std6.02
cv0.535
sampleLengths
030
116
224
328
415
512
610
722
811
918
108
1121
1220
1325
1416
1516
1613
1713
1821
1920
2011
2117
2212
233
242
254
2616
276
2820
2915
3028
317
3215
333
349
352
368
374
388
397
408
413
4215
4316
4422
4512
4619
4723
4812
4910
38.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats38
diversityRatio0.045454545454545456
totalSentences330
uniqueOpeners15
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences262
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.76% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount84
totalSentences262
matches
0"She glanced back, her fingers"
1"It was like walking on"
2"she breathed, her voice barely"
3"they said, their voice a"
4"She turned to Isolde, who"
5"she said, her voice like"
6"She remembered the lore—how it"
7"She had expected prophecy, but"
8"She turned back to Nyx,"
9"She had come here for"
10"She took a step forward,"
11"She reached out, her fingers"
12"she asked, her voice barely"
13"She had expected answers, but"
14"She turned back to Nyx,"
15"She had come here for"
16"She took another step forward,"
17"She reached out, her fingers"
18"She had expected prophecy, but"
19"She turned to Nyx, her"
ratio0.321
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount244
totalSentences262
matches
0"The air in the grove"
1"Aurora stepped forward, her boots"
2"The standing stones loomed around"
3"The trees here were unlike"
4"Nyx murmured, their voice a"
5"She glanced back, her fingers"
6"The stone pulsed weakly, as"
7"Isolde had warned her about"
8"Aurora’s pulse quickened as she"
9"The ground beneath her was"
10"It was like walking on"
11"The light here was different"
12"The wildflowers bloomed year-round, their"
13"she breathed, her voice barely"
14"Nyx’s form flickered, their silhouette"
15"they said, their voice a"
16"Aurora flinched, but the sensation"
17"She turned to Isolde, who"
18"The seer’s eyes were pale"
19"Aurora had expected riddles, but"
ratio0.931
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences262
matches(empty)
ratio0
29.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences158
technicalSentenceCount25
matches
0"Aurora stepped forward, her boots sinking into the soft moss as she followed Nyx’s shifting silhouette."
1"The standing stones loomed around them, their bark etched with spirals that seemed to breathe in the dim light filtering through the canopy above."
2"The trees here were unlike anything she’d seen before, their leaves shifting colors like liquid gold and sapphire, pulsing faintly in time with the breath of th…"
3"It was like walking on a bed of woven roots, shifting beneath her feet as if the earth itself was waiting."
4"The light here was different too, softer, as if the sun had been filtered through a thousand layers of lace."
5"The wildflowers bloomed year-round, their petals shimmering with hues Aurora hadn’t known existed—deep violets, electric blues, and golds that caught the light …"
6"Nyx’s form flickered, their silhouette dissolving into a shadow that seemed to drink in the light."
7"She turned to Isolde, who stood in the center of the circle, her silver hair catching the light like scattered stars."
8"And the danger here was not just physical—it was something deeper, something that seemed to coil around her like a living thing."
9"And the danger here was not just physical—it was something deeper, something that seemed to coil around her like a living thing."
10"And the danger here was not just physical—it was something deeper, something that seemed to coil around her like a living thing."
11"The light here was different too, softer, as if the sun had been filtered through a thousand layers of lace."
12"She looked up at the sky, which was a vast expanse of twilight, streaked with stars that seemed to twinkle with an unnatural brightness."
13"The trees here were unlike anything she’d seen before, their leaves shifting colors like liquid gold and sapphire, pulsing faintly in time with the breath of th…"
14"And the danger here was not just physical—it was something deeper, something that seemed to coil around her like a living thing."
15"The danger here was not just physical—it was something deeper, something that seemed to coil around her like a living thing."
16"The danger here was not just physical—it was something deeper, something that coiled around her like a living thing."
17"Nyx’s shadow stretched unnaturally long, their voice a whisper that slithered into her mind."
18"The air hummed with something unseen, something that coiled around her like a living thing."
19"And the danger here was not just physical—it was something deeper, something that seemed to coil around her like a living thing."
20"And the danger here was not just physical—it was something deeper, something that coiled around her like a living thing."
21"The pendant at her throat pulsed faintly, as if sensing her unease."
22"The air hummed with something unseen, something that coiled around her like a living thing."
23"And the danger here was not just physical—it was something deeper, something that coiled around her like a living thing."
24"The air hummed with something unseen, something that coiled around her like a living thing."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags49
uselessAdditionCount15
matches
0"they said, their voice a whisper that slithered into her mind"
1"Nyx asked, their voice a whisper that carried on the breeze"
2"Isolde said, her voice low"
3"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
4"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
5"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
6"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
7"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
8"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
9"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
10"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
11"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
12"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
13"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
14"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags49
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences86
tagDensity0.57
leniency1
rawRatio0.041
effectiveRatio0.041
64.9449%