Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9YR76CWH4G8D5XEXHMPA1

Run Details

Duration:
11.4s
Cost:
$0.000417
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked shut with a sharp *thunk*. Rory didn’t turn around. She knew that sound. Knew the way the air in the flat thickened, like the moment before a storm breaks. Ptolemy’s tail twitched, his ears flattening against his skull. “You’re late,” she said, voice steady. Too steady. The door swung open. Lucien Moreau stood there, filling the frame like he owned it—charcoal suit stretched over broad shoulders, the amber eye catching the dim light of the hallway, the black one unreadable. His cane leaned against the jamb, ivory handle gleaming. “I had to wait for the right moment.” Rory exhaled through her nose. “You always did have a flair for the dramatic.” His lips quirked, just once, before he stepped inside. The flat was small, cluttered with Eva’s books and scrolls spilling over every surface, but Lucien didn’t seem to notice. His gaze locked onto Rory like she was the only thing in the room. “You look the same.” “And you look like you’ve been drinking again.” A laugh, low and rough. “Only when I’m nervous.” She crossed her arms. “You’re not nervous.” “Aren’t I?” Ptolemy slunk between them, tail puffed. Lucien crouched—effortless, like he did it every day—and held out a hand. The cat sniffed, then batted at his fingers before deigning to press his head against Lucien’s palm. “Traitor,” Rory muttered. Lucien didn’t look up. “He remembers me.” “Animals have better memories than you do.” That got his attention. He straightened, slow, deliberate. “Is that what this is about?” “What’s what about?” “The last time we spoke.” His voice was quiet, but it carried. “You stormed out. Didn’t look back.” Rory’s fingers twitched toward the scar on her wrist, the one Evan’s ring had left. “I had things to do.” “Bullshit.” His cane tapped the floor, once. “You were running.” She didn’t answer. Couldn’t. The air between them was too thick, too old, the kind of silence that hummed with things unsaid. Lucien exhaled, sharp. “I came to apologise.” Rory blinked. “For what?” “For everything.” His hands flexed at his sides. “For not being there when you needed me. For letting you think I didn’t care.” She laughed, sharp and bitter. “You never cared about anything but yourself.” His jaw tightened. “That’s not fair.” “Isn’t it?” She stepped closer, close enough to see the faintest dark circles under his eyes, the way his suit jacket strained over his shoulders. “You had your life, your deals, your—” “Demons,” he finished. “Yeah, I know.” “And I had mine.” “You ran.” “And you let me.” A beat. Then, quieter: “I was an idiot.” Rory’s chest ached. “You always were.” Lucien’s hand shot out, gripping her wrist before she could pull away. His thumb brushed the scar. “You’re still bleeding.” She yanked free. “It’s nothing.” “It’s not nothing.” His voice was rough. “You left without a word. Didn’t even tell Eva where you were going.” “She knew.” “She *thought* she knew.” His fingers curled into a fist. “I had to find you.” Rory’s breath hitched. “You did?” “Took me three months.” His gaze burned into hers. “Three fucking months to track you down.” She should’ve been angry. Should’ve pushed him away. But the words stuck in her throat. Lucien’s voice dropped. “I missed you.” The words hit her like a physical force. She stumbled back, knocking into the bookshelf. A stack of loose papers cascaded to the floor. Lucien didn’t move. Just stood there, vulnerable in a way she’d never seen before. “I should’ve been there. For you. For *us*.” Rory’s hands trembled. “There is no *us*.” “There could be.” She swallowed hard. “You don’t get to decide that.” “No.” His voice was raw. “But I get to try.” Ptolemy yowled, leaping onto the couch. The sound snapped Rory back to reality. She grabbed Lucien’s wrist, yanking him toward the door. “Get out.” “Rory—” “Now.” He resisted for half a second, then let her pull him into the hallway. The door slammed behind him, the sound echoing through the flat. Rory leaned against it, heart pounding. Outside, Lucien didn’t move. Just stood there, silhouetted against the dim streetlight. “You’re making a mistake,” he said. She didn’t answer. “You always did have a habit of running from things that scared you.” She turned the deadbolts one by one, the clicks sharp in the silence. Lucien’s voice followed her, low and steady. “But you can’t outrun me forever.” The last bolt locked with a final *thunk*. Rory didn’t look back.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:55:45.777Z" 2/20/2026, 7:55:45 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.179
leniency0.357
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount752
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
46.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount752
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"unreadable"
count1
1
word"gleaming"
count1
2
word"effortless"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"trembled"
count1
5
word"echoing"
count1
6
word"pounding"
count1
highlights
0"unreadable"
1"gleaming"
2"effortless"
3"silence"
4"trembled"
5"echoing"
6"pounding"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences72
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords5
totalWords749
ratio0.007
matches
0"thunk"
1"thought"
2"us"
3"us"
4"thunk"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
30.95% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount504
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.38
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Eva1
Lucien12
Rory12
Evan1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Rory"
4"Evan"
5"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore0.31
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences34
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount749
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences115
matches
0"knew that sound"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean12.91
std11.03
cv0.855
sampleLengths
042
18
24
347
414
547
68
79
87
92
1038
117
127
1314
143
1518
1620
1710
1822
197
204
2123
2212
236
2432
256
264
272
284
298
306
3120
325
3320
342
3515
365
3716
3815
396
4024
4122
427
433
449
4510
4624
471
481
4925
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs105
matches(empty)
93.17% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences115
ratio0.017
matches
0"Lucien Moreau stood there, filling the frame like he owned it—charcoal suit stretched over broad shoulders, the amber eye catching the dim light of the hallway, the black one unreadable."
1"Lucien crouched—effortless, like he did it every day—and held out a hand."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount507
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.03747534516765286
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0019723865877712033
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean6.51
std4.85
cv0.745
sampleLengths
09
14
24
316
49
56
62
74
830
99
108
115
129
139
1420
1514
164
178
185
194
204
213
222
236
2412
2517
263
274
283
297
304
314
326
333
3412
356
3615
375
387
393
403
411
4218
433
444
452
462
478
4815
495
50.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.33043478260869563
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences64
matches
0"Just stood there, vulnerable in"
1"Just stood there, silhouetted against"
ratio0.031
51.25% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences64
matches
0"She knew that sound."
1"she said, voice steady"
2"His cane leaned against the"
3"His lips quirked, just once,"
4"His gaze locked onto Rory"
5"She crossed her arms."
6"He straightened, slow, deliberate."
7"His voice was quiet, but"
8"His cane tapped the floor,"
9"She didn’t answer."
10"His hands flexed at his"
11"She laughed, sharp and bitter."
12"His jaw tightened."
13"She stepped closer, close enough"
14"His thumb brushed the scar."
15"She yanked free."
16"His voice was rough"
17"His fingers curled into a"
18"His gaze burned into hers"
19"She should’ve been angry."
ratio0.422
6.88% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences64
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked shut"
1"Rory didn’t turn around."
2"She knew that sound."
3"Ptolemy’s tail twitched, his ears"
4"she said, voice steady"
5"The door swung open."
6"Lucien Moreau stood there, filling"
7"His cane leaned against the"
8"Rory exhaled through her nose."
9"His lips quirked, just once,"
10"The flat was small, cluttered"
11"His gaze locked onto Rory"
12"A laugh, low and rough."
13"She crossed her arms."
14"Ptolemy slunk between them, tail"
15"Lucien crouched—effortless, like he did"
16"The cat sniffed, then batted"
17"Lucien didn’t look up."
18"That got his attention."
19"He straightened, slow, deliberate."
ratio0.906
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences13
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, voice steady"
1"His cane tapped, once"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.054
leniency0.107
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.036
83.4926%