Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9Z6BHT0G900GC91DAVKWG

Run Details

Duration:
46.7s
Cost:
$0.000317
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked, then the final one. Aurora hadn’t expected him to actually *be* here. Not after six months. Not after the way things had ended. She pulled the door inward, bracing for… she didn’t even know what. Lucien stood in the hallway, filling it. Not with size, though he was tall enough, but with an aura of expensive tailoring and contained power. Charcoal suit, of course. Platinum hair slicked back, revealing a sharp jawline. And those eyes. Still mismatched. Amber and black, assessing her with a coolness that felt practiced. He held his cane, the ivory handle gleaming in the dim light of the building. “Rory,” he said, the single syllable a low drawl that still had the effect of tightening something in her chest. “You look…well.” Well. As if six months of ramen dinners and ten-hour shifts delivering Golden Empress menus hadn’t left their mark. She lifted her chin, forcing herself to meet his gaze. “Luc. What a surprise.” He didn’t offer a reciprocal platitude. Didn't ask how *she* was. Lucien Moreau never did things the easy way. “May I come in?” The hallway wasn’t exactly spacious. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, wound around his ankles as if trying to determine if this expensive intrusion was friend or foe. She stepped back, reluctantly granting him entrance. The scent of his cologne, something woody and impossibly sophisticated, filled the small space. “Eva’s out,” she said, unnecessarily. “Research trip. Gloucestershire, something about standing stones and ley lines.” “Fitting.” He scanned the flat, his gaze sweeping over the teetering stacks of books and scrolls. “It retains its… chaotic charm.” “It's lived in,” Aurora countered, a little defensively. Eva’s flat was a disaster zone, but it was *their* disaster zone. It held the scent of old paper, strong tea, and a comfortable lack of judgment. Lucien’s presence felt… discordant. He leaned his cane against the wall, a move that seemed to subtly claim territory. “I need your help, Rory.” She crossed her arms, tucking them tighter against her chest. “Funny, I thought I was the one who needed help last time we spoke.” The memory of that conversation, harsh words exchanged in a rain-soaked alley, still stung. The accusations. The hurt. He didn’t flinch. “That was…unfortunate. Circumstances have changed.” “Oh, have they?” Sarcasm dripped from her tone. “Did the underworld suddenly develop a code of ethics?” A flicker of something – amusement, maybe? – crossed his face. “Hardly. Though a little ethics might save me a headache. This isn’t a matter of morality, Rory. It's about a missing artifact.” “An artifact?” She raised an eyebrow. “Let me guess. Something sparkly and cursed?” “More complicated. It’s a Lapis Lazuli pendant, said to have belonged to Baba Yaga. Not cursed, precisely, but…attuned to certain energies. And currently in the hands of someone who shouldn't have it.” Aurora sagged against the doorframe. Of course it was a pendant belonging to a mythical witch. Her life was a magnet for the absurd. "And why come to me? I deliver noodles. I don't dabble in ancient relics." “You have a gift, Rory. A knack for seeing patterns, for connecting dots that others miss. Eva has spoken highly of your… deductive abilities.” “Eva also says I have a tendency to get involved in things that will get me killed.” “A valid concern.” He actually smiled, a brief, unsettling flash of white teeth. It was the first genuine warmth she’d seen from him since… well, since before everything fell apart. “But I wouldn’t ask if I didn’t think you were capable. And if I didn’t believe you’re the only one who can help.” She didn’t want to believe him. Didn’t want to be drawn back into his world of shadows and secrets. But a part of her, a foolish, reckless part, was already intrigued. “What kind of someone shouldn’t have it?” she asked, her voice softer now. “A collector. Name of Valerius Thorne. Human, outwardly respectable. But…he has connections. Dark connections.” “Thorne. Doesn’t ring a bell." “It should. Seven years ago, he was investigated for trafficking in grimoires. The case went cold. Conveniently.” He paused, his gaze locking with hers. “He's dangerous, Rory. And if he manages to harness the pendant's power…” “Don’t leave me hanging.” “Let’s just say it wouldn't be good for anyone.” He straightened, adjusting his jacket. “I’ve already done some preliminary investigation. Thorne is hosting a private auction tonight. High society types, obscenely wealthy, and probably a few… connoisseurs of the unusual. I need you to get inside. Blend in. Find the pendant.” Aurora stared at him, her mind reeling. “Blend in? In what, exactly? I'm fairly certain I don't own anything that can be described as ‘high society.’” “I’ve anticipated that.” He reached inside his jacket and produced a small, velvet box. He opened it to reveal a dress. Black silk, intricately beaded, with a neckline that plunged dangerously low. “Absolutely not,” she said, her voice sharp. He raised an eyebrow. "It was tailored for someone your size. A… favor for Eva, who occasionally provides wardrobe consultation to certain clients." Aurora’s jaw tightened. Eva, always pulling strings. "This is ridiculous. I'm not becoming a spy in a fancy dress." "Think of it as… freelance research. Generously compensated, of course." “And what exactly is the compensation?” she asked, already knowing she was losing the battle. “Information. About Evan.” The air rushed from her lungs. Evan. Her ex. The reason she’d fled to London in the first place. The one topic Lucien knew would always get her attention. "What information?" she managed to ask, her voice barely a whisper. “I’ve learned he’s been asking questions. About you. About Eva. And about a… certain incident in Cardiff.” A cold dread coiled in her stomach. “What kind of questions?” Lucien’s gaze was unreadable. “The kind that suggest he’s not letting things lie. The kind that suggest he’s still dangerous.” She knew he was right. Evan had always been possessive, controlling. Even now, months later, the thought of him lurking, searching, sent shivers down her spine. She looked from the dress to Lucien’s face, his expression carefully neutral. It was a bargain with the devil, she knew. A desperate trade. Her skills for information about the man who had once made her life a living hell. “Fine,” she said, her voice raspy. “I’ll do it.” A ghost of a smile touched his lips. “Excellent. I’ll have a car waiting. And Rory?” She met his gaze, steeling herself. “What?” “Try not to break anything.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.313
leniency0.625
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1083
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"precisely"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"reluctantly"
1"suddenly"
2"precisely"
3"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
26.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1083
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"gleaming"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"chaotic"
count1
3
word"charm"
count1
4
word"comfortable"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"eyebrow"
count2
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"velvet"
count1
9
word"silk"
count1
10
word"absolutely"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"stomach"
count1
13
word"unreadable"
count1
14
word"sent shivers down"
count1
highlights
0"gleaming"
1"scanned"
2"chaotic"
3"charm"
4"comfortable"
5"flicker"
6"eyebrow"
7"warmth"
8"velvet"
9"silk"
10"absolutely"
11"whisper"
12"stomach"
13"unreadable"
14"sent shivers down"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences81
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords1083
ratio0.003
matches
0"be"
1"she"
2"their"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount635
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.94
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Well1
Golden1
Empress1
Moreau1
Eva3
Aurora5
London1
Lucien6
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Aurora"
3"Lucien"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
51.96% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if trying to determine if this expensive intrusion was friend or foe"
1"move that seemed to subtly claim territory"
15.33% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.847
wordCount1083
matches
0"Not with size, though he was tall enough, but with an aura of expensive tailoring"
1"Not cursed, precisely, but…attuned to certain energies"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean23.54
std14.5
cv0.616
sampleLengths
039
168
222
333
423
546
615
721
839
920
1042
118
1217
1333
1413
1532
1638
1724
1817
1953
2031
2113
2214
235
2436
254
2651
2726
2832
297
3023
3119
3210
3315
343
3529
3611
3717
3811
3920
4026
4140
429
4316
447
455
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs109
matches
0"was losing"
92.29% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences113
ratio0.018
matches
0"A flicker of something – amusement, maybe?"
1"– crossed his face."
88.15% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount635
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.05354330708661417
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.01889763779527559
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean9.58
std6.69
cv0.698
sampleLengths
08
18
24
37
47
55
67
718
84
98
103
112
1211
1315
1420
152
161
1718
1810
194
206
215
228
234
245
2520
267
2714
285
2910
3016
315
328
3312
3415
353
361
3715
385
3910
4028
412
422
433
445
458
469
477
484
4922
72.27% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.46017699115044247
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners52
45.05% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"Of course it was a"
ratio0.014
41.62% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences74
matches
0"She pulled the door inward,"
1"she didn’t even know what."
2"He held his cane, the"
3"he said, the single syllable"
4"She lifted her chin, forcing"
5"He didn’t offer a reciprocal"
6"She stepped back, reluctantly granting"
7"she said, unnecessarily"
8"He scanned the flat, his"
9"It held the scent of"
10"He leaned his cane against"
11"She crossed her arms, tucking"
12"He didn’t flinch."
13"She raised an eyebrow"
14"Her life was a magnet"
15"He actually smiled, a brief,"
16"It was the first genuine"
17"She didn’t want to believe"
18"she asked, her voice softer"
19"He paused, his gaze locking"
ratio0.446
47.84% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences74
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked, then"
1"Aurora hadn’t expected him to"
2"She pulled the door inward,"
3"she didn’t even know what."
4"Lucien stood in the hallway,"
5"Charcoal suit, of course."
6"Platinum hair slicked back, revealing"
7"Amber and black, assessing her"
8"He held his cane, the"
9"he said, the single syllable"
10"She lifted her chin, forcing"
11"He didn’t offer a reciprocal"
12"Lucien Moreau never did things"
13"The hallway wasn’t exactly spacious."
14"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, wound around"
15"She stepped back, reluctantly granting"
16"The scent of his cologne,"
17"she said, unnecessarily"
18"He scanned the flat, his"
19"Aurora countered, a little defensively"
ratio0.824
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences74
matches
0"As if six months of"
1"Even now, months later, the"
ratio0.027
6.80% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Amber and black, assessing her with a coolness that felt practiced."
1"As if six months of ramen dinners and ten-hour shifts delivering Golden Empress menus hadn’t left their mark."
2"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, wound around his ankles as if trying to determine if this expensive intrusion was friend or foe."
3"Black silk, intricately beaded, with a neckline that plunged dangerously low."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"she said, unnecessarily"
1"she asked, her voice softer now"
2"He paused, his gaze locking with hers"
3"she said, her voice sharp"
4"she managed, her voice barely a whisper"
5"she said, her voice raspy"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she managed (manage)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.146
leniency0.292
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.042
78.9656%