Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9ZA0WYX25DKSY7QVA7R87

Run Details

Duration:
18.7s
Cost:
$0.000209
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air thickened the moment they stepped through the crumbling archway, a slickness against their skin like disturbed water. Rain, not of water, but of iridescent dust, began to fall. It tasted of cinnamon and something acrid, like burnt metal. Aurora shivered, pulling her worn denim jacket tighter. Beside her, Nyx’s shadow seemed to deepen, absorbing the strange light. Isolde moved with an unsettling grace, her silver hair swirling around her face as if caught in a non-existent breeze. “Remarkable,” Isolde murmured, her voice a series of melodic fragments. “The solstice weakens the Veil. It offers a glimpse, a fleeting passage.” Dymas. Prince Belphegor’s domain. The smell of overripe fruit and simmering spices hung heavy, battling with the metallic tang of the dust. The sky wasn’t blue; it was a bruised amber, hanging low and oppressive. Twisted, gnarled vines, thick as pythons, draped across crumbling stone structures, pulsing with an internal light. Buildings, or what remained of them, resembled baroque nightmares - spiraling towers choked with foliage, balconies overgrown with luminous moss. It was a feast for the eyes, a glutinous, beautiful decay. “It’s… overwhelming,” Rory admitted, her hand instinctively going to the Heartstone Pendant nestled beneath her shirt. It pulsed with a faint warmth, a shaky reassurance against the unsettling stillness. “I didn’t realize Hel was… this.” “Hel is not a place of simple excess,” Nyx replied, their voice a low hum. “It is the culmination of desire, unbridled and corrupted. Every indulgence, every forgotten craving, sculpted into this grotesque beauty.” They shifted slightly, becoming almost entirely subsumed by the shadows that already clung to the edges of the archway. “A testament to appetites left untamed.” Isolde stopped, her hand resting on one of the ancient oak standing stones at the edge of a vast, overgrown courtyard. “This place was once a pleasure palace,” she said, her lavender eyes unfocused. “A sanctuary for those who reveled in the darkest of temptations. The court of Belphegor.” They moved forward cautiously, navigating a maze of verdant chaos. Giant, phosphorescent mushrooms illuminated bizarre sculptures – figures frozen in postures of ecstatic consumption, their faces contorted in grotesque smiles. A constant, low murmur filled the air, not of conversation, but of something… else. A chorus of whispers, promises, and regrets, layered upon each other. Rory spotted a fountain, sculpted from what appeared to be polished bone, overflowing with a viscous, ruby-colored liquid. “What is that?” she asked, sketching a quick note on a small pad. “Bloodwine," Isolde stated simply. “The lifeblood of Dymas’s inhabitants.” A figure emerged from a shadowed archway. A chef, tall and unnervingly thin, clad in a stained crimson apron. He carried a silver tray laden with exquisitely crafted pastries – miniature, shimmering replicas of various fruits and beasts, each radiating a faint heat. He regarded them with unnervingly bright, hungry eyes. “Welcome, travelers,” he said, his voice smooth as melted chocolate. “To Dymas. May I offer you a sample of our finest creation? A miniature griffin, baked with sun-ripened nectar and infused with the essence of regret.” Nyx stepped forward, a sliver of shadow extending from their form, a subtle warning. “We are merely observers,” they said, the whisper-like voice edged with something that sounded like displeasure. “We require no sustenance.” The chef tilted his head, a slow, deliberate movement. “Observation is a form of consumption, wouldn't you agree?” he responded, gesturing with a delicate hand towards a table laden with half-eaten delicacies. "The appreciation of beauty, even in decay, is a hunger of its own.” As they rounded a corner, the architecture shifted dramatically. The decaying grandeur gave way to a vast, echoing hall. A colossal banquet table stretched as far as the eye could see, laden with mountains of food – roasted meats, glistening fruits, cakes frosted with what looked like solidified starlight. Scores of spectral figures, clad in opulent robes, lounged about, indulging in endless feasts. Their faces were blank, devoid of emotion, their eyes reflecting only the sickly amber light. “They’re… not dead,” Rory whispered, a tremor in her voice. “Just… vacant.” “They are sustained,” Isolde replied, her voice laced with a chilling certainty. “By Belphegor’s power. Their desires, their appetites, are fed. They are trapped in eternal indulgence.” Suddenly, a single, piercing note cut through the murmuring chaos - a discordant melody played on a lute crafted from polished obsidian. All movement ceased. All eyes turned toward the source of the sound. Standing at the head of the table was Prince Belphegor. He was a towering figure, wreathed in shadow, his eyes burning with an unholy intensity. His skin shimmered with a sickly, golden sheen, and his smile was a jagged, predatory curve. “Intruders,” he boomed, his voice echoing through the hall. “You have stumbled upon my domain. You are welcome to observe… to marvel. But do not interfere.” He gestured to two hulking figures, who moved with unsettling speed towards them. They were bound, spectral warriors clad in armor crafted from petrified fruit and shimmering decay. “I believe we should leave,” Rory said, clutching the Heartstone Pendant tighter. As they turned to retreat, Isolde stopped them. “Wait,” she said, her voice suddenly urgent. “The Heartstone.” She reached out and placed the pendant in Aurora’s hand. As it made contact, the pendant flared with a brilliant crimson light, bathing the hall in an unsettling glow. The spectral figures began to stir, their vacant expressions replaced with a flicker of something akin to recognition. The warriors faltered, their movements becoming sluggish. “The Heartstone recognizes Hel,” Isolde explained, her eyes widening. "It reveals the truth of this place—the trapped souls, the stolen desires. It disrupts the flow of Belphegor’s power.” Belphegor roared with rage, his shadow intensifying. "You dare interfere with my court!" Nyx moved with impossible speed, a blur of darkness weaving through the hall, disrupting the warriors and creating pockets of chaotic shadow. Rory, guided by Isolde’s cryptic instructions, realized the Heartstone wasn't just a passive receiver; it was a key. It reacted to the residual cravings, the echoes of the trapped souls. She focused on a particularly vibrant pastry – a miniature, perfectly formed dragon sculpted from honeycomb and dripping with golden syrup. As she did, a faint tendril of shadow snaked from the pendant, reaching out and… consuming the pastry. The room shuddered. “The key is to unravel their desires,” Isolde shouted over the growing chaos. “To starve them of the very thing that sustains them!” But Belphegor wasn’t going to let them easily escape. A wave of oppressive energy slammed into them, pushing them backward. The iridescent dust intensified, obscuring their vision. Before they could react, Rory felt a sharp, agonizing pain in her wrist – the location of her childhood scar. A shadowy tendril, cold and insistent, wrapped around her, attempting to drag her down into the depths of Dymas, into the endless feast. The Fae-Forged Blade, still clutched in her hand, pulsed with a frigid light. It wasn't a weapon of offense, Rory realized, but a conduit. A way to push back against the overwhelming hunger of this place, to sever the connection. Drawing on the blade’s power, she swung, not to strike, but to disrupt. The shimmering dagger sliced through the encroaching shadow, releasing a burst of icy cold air. The shadowy tendril recoiled, hissing as if burned. The fight for their survival had just begun.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:56:04.008Z" 2/20/2026, 7:56:04 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
82.35% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"They shifted slightly [slightly]"
1"Isolde stated simply [simply]"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.531
leniency1
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.118
75.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1227
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"cautiously"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count2
3
adverb"perfectly"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"cautiously"
2"suddenly"
3"perfectly"
4"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1227
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"remarkable"
count1
1
word"fleeting"
count1
2
word"simmering"
count1
3
word"oppressive"
count2
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"desire"
count1
7
word"testament"
count1
8
word"sanctuary"
count1
9
word"navigating"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"echoing"
count2
12
word"glistening"
count1
13
word"spectral"
count3
14
word"chilling"
count1
15
word"intensity"
count1
16
word"shimmered"
count1
17
word"hulking"
count1
18
word"flicker"
count1
19
word"disrupting"
count1
20
word"chaotic"
count1
21
word"echoes"
count1
22
word"unravel"
count1
23
word"depths"
count1
24
word"disrupt"
count1
highlights
0"remarkable"
1"fleeting"
2"simmering"
3"oppressive"
4"pulsed"
5"warmth"
6"desire"
7"testament"
8"sanctuary"
9"navigating"
10"whisper"
11"echoing"
12"glistening"
13"spectral"
14"chilling"
15"intensity"
16"shimmered"
17"hulking"
18"flicker"
19"disrupting"
20"chaotic"
21"echoes"
22"unravel"
23"depths"
24"disrupt"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences82
matches
0"d with rage"
73.17% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
2"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1228
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount990
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.91
worstName"Isolde"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
Nyx4
Dymas2
Belphegor4
Heartstone3
Pendant2
Isolde9
Suddenly1
Prince2
Aurora2
Rory7
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Belphegor"
2"Pendant"
3"Isolde"
4"Prince"
5"Aurora"
6"Rory"
7"Blade"
places
0"Heartstone"
globalScore1
windowScore1
48.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"sounded like displeasure"
1"looked like solidified starlight"
2"something akin to recognition"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.443
wordCount1228
matches
0"not of water, but of iridescent dust, began to fall"
1"not of conversation, but of something…"
2"not to strike, but to disrupt"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean39.61
std22.4
cv0.565
sampleLengths
079
122
282
335
459
549
655
731
89
951
1036
1134
1245
1378
1412
1527
1634
1741
1826
1928
2012
2117
2254
2328
2413
2522
2672
2723
2870
2976
308
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs178
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences97
ratio0.093
matches
0"The sky wasn’t blue; it was a bruised amber, hanging low and oppressive."
1"Buildings, or what remained of them, resembled baroque nightmares - spiraling towers choked with foliage, balconies overgrown with luminous moss."
2"Giant, phosphorescent mushrooms illuminated bizarre sculptures – figures frozen in postures of ecstatic consumption, their faces contorted in grotesque smiles."
3"He carried a silver tray laden with exquisitely crafted pastries – miniature, shimmering replicas of various fruits and beasts, each radiating a faint heat."
4"A colossal banquet table stretched as far as the eye could see, laden with mountains of food – roasted meats, glistening fruits, cakes frosted with what looked like solidified starlight."
5"Suddenly, a single, piercing note cut through the murmuring chaos - a discordant melody played on a lute crafted from polished obsidian."
6"Rory, guided by Isolde’s cryptic instructions, realized the Heartstone wasn't just a passive receiver; it was a key."
7"She focused on a particularly vibrant pastry – a miniature, perfectly formed dragon sculpted from honeycomb and dripping with golden syrup."
8"Before they could react, Rory felt a sharp, agonizing pain in her wrist – the location of her childhood scar."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount987
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"viscous, ruby-colored liquid."
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.028368794326241134
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.0182370820668693
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean12.66
std6.42
cv0.507
sampleLengths
019
111
210
38
411
520
610
712
81
93
1018
1113
1216
1320
1411
1516
1613
176
1815
1938
206
2121
2213
2315
2410
2520
2613
271
2811
2918
3013
314
325
337
3412
3524
368
3710
3826
3914
4016
414
429
4323
4413
459
4610
4730
4814
4915
64.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.4639175257731959
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners45
41.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"Suddenly, a single, piercing note"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences80
matches
0"It tasted of cinnamon and"
1"It was a feast for"
2"It pulsed with a faint"
3"They shifted slightly, becoming almost"
4"she said, her lavender eyes"
5"They moved forward cautiously, navigating"
6"she asked, sketching a quick"
7"He carried a silver tray"
8"He regarded them with unnervingly"
9"he said, his voice smooth"
10"they said, the whisper-like voice"
11"he responded, gesturing with a"
12"Their faces were blank, devoid"
13"He was a towering figure,"
14"His skin shimmered with a"
15"he boomed, his voice echoing"
16"He gestured to two hulking"
17"They were bound, spectral warriors"
18"she said, her voice suddenly"
19"She reached out and placed"
ratio0.288
60.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences80
matches
0"The air thickened the moment"
1"It tasted of cinnamon and"
2"Aurora shivered, pulling her worn"
3"Isolde moved with an unsettling"
4"Isolde murmured, her voice a"
5"Prince Belphegor’s domain."
6"The smell of overripe fruit"
7"The sky wasn’t blue; it"
8"Buildings, or what remained of"
9"It was a feast for"
10"Rory admitted, her hand instinctively"
11"It pulsed with a faint"
12"Nyx replied, their voice a"
13"They shifted slightly, becoming almost"
14"Isolde stopped, her hand resting"
15"she said, her lavender eyes"
16"They moved forward cautiously, navigating"
17"A constant, low murmur filled"
18"A chorus of whispers, promises,"
19"Rory spotted a fountain, sculpted"
ratio0.8
62.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"Before they could react, Rory"
ratio0.013
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Isolde moved with an unsettling grace, her silver hair swirling around her face as if caught in a non-existent breeze."
1"Isolde stopped, her hand resting on one of the ancient oak standing stones at the edge of a vast, overgrown courtyard."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Isolde murmured, her voice a series of melodic fragments"
1"Nyx replied, their voice a low hum"
2"he said, his voice smooth as melted chocolate"
3"he boomed, his voice echoing through the hall"
4"she said, her voice suddenly urgent"
5"Isolde explained, her eyes widening"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1"Rory admitted (admit)"
2"Isolde stated simply (state)"
3"he responded (respond)"
4"Rory whispered (whisper)"
5"Isolde explained (explain)"
6"Isolde shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.469
leniency0.938
rawRatio0.467
effectiveRatio0.438
73.4279%