| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 51 | | tagDensity | 0.216 | | leniency | 0.431 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 83.73% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 922 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.77% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 922 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "gloom" | | 3 | "flicked" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "trembled" | | 7 | "charged" | | 8 | "velvet" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 114 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 916 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 676 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 2.07 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Rory | 10 | | Lucien | 14 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Knew | 4 | | Wanted | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.464 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 45.83% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like it belonged in a museum, not" | | 1 | "tasted like cloves and sin" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 916 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 49.71% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "knew that tone" | | 1 | "knew that half" | | 2 | "chose that moment" | | 3 | "knew that look" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 62 | | mean | 14.77 | | std | 12.21 | | cv | 0.827 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 63 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 44 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 42 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 43 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 29 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 147 | | matches | | |
| 17.54% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 114 | | ratio | 0.044 | | matches | | 0 | "A gust of cold air rushed in, carrying the scent of rain-slicked pavement and something sharper—winter spice, like cloves and burnt sugar." | | 1 | "The cane clicked against the floorboards as they turned, the amber eye catching the lamplight first—then the black one, like a shadow given form." | | 2 | "She knew that tone—Lucien’s voice when he was playing a game, when he was already three moves ahead." | | 3 | "But the way he said it—like it cost him something—made her stomach twist." | | 4 | "The air between them crackled, charged with something she hadn’t felt in years—something dangerous, something alive." |
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| 92.66% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 682 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.04838709677419355 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004398826979472141 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 114 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 114 | | mean | 8.04 | | std | 5.45 | | cv | 0.678 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 46.20% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.32456140350877194 | | totalSentences | 114 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the light spilled." | | 1 | "Too tall for this flat." | | 2 | "Then Ptolemy chose that moment" |
| | ratio | 0.043 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "His cane tapped against the" | | 1 | "She laughed, sharp and bitter" | | 2 | "he finished, cutting her off" | | 3 | "She knew that tone—Lucien’s voice" | | 4 | "She should’ve laughed." | | 5 | "she asked, voice quieter than" | | 6 | "She knew that half." | | 7 | "she said, but her voice" | | 8 | "She wanted to ask him" | | 9 | "He hissed, low and warning," | | 10 | "She exhaled sharply, rubbing her" | | 11 | "he said, stepping closer still" | | 12 | "She should’ve told him to" | | 13 | "she said, voice rough" | | 14 | "She paused, stirring the last" | | 15 | "She turned, meeting his gaze." | | 16 | "She knew that look." | | 17 | "She wanted to ask him" | | 18 | "She’d lose him again." |
| | ratio | 0.275 | |
| 75.94% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "The door creaked open before" | | 1 | "A gust of cold air" | | 2 | "Rory froze, her fingers still" | | 3 | "A figure stood there, backlit" | | 4 | "The cane in their hand" | | 5 | "Rory said, voice steadier than" | | 6 | "The figure stepped inside, the" | | 7 | "The cane clicked against the" | | 8 | "Lucien said, his voice smooth" | | 9 | "Rory exhaled through her nose," | | 10 | "Lucien’s lips quirked, just once," | | 11 | "His cane tapped against the" | | 12 | "Rory crossed her arms, the" | | 13 | "Lucien’s gaze flicked to the" | | 14 | "She laughed, sharp and bitter" | | 15 | "he finished, cutting her off" | | 16 | "The flat felt smaller suddenly," | | 17 | "She knew that tone—Lucien’s voice" | | 18 | "The word hung between them," | | 19 | "Rory’s fingers twitched at her" |
| | ratio | 0.768 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The figure stepped inside, the door swinging shut behind them with a finality that made her chest tighten." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory said, voice steadier than she felt" | | 1 | "Lucien said, his voice smooth as aged whiskey" | | 2 | "she asked, voice quieter than she intended" | | 3 | "she said, but her voice cracked" | | 4 | "she said, voice rough" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 51 | | tagDensity | 0.176 | | leniency | 0.353 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.039 | |