Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYA0NVF7FV8X6271TCWW6WZ

Run Details

Duration:
7.7s
Cost:
$0.000340
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door creaked open before the deadbolt could even click free, the hinges protesting like an old man’s joints. A gust of cold air rushed in, carrying the scent of rain-slicked pavement and something sharper—winter spice, like cloves and burnt sugar. Rory froze, her fingers still wrapped around the handle, the scar on her wrist prickling under the weight of her own pulse. Then the light spilled. A figure stood there, backlit by the flickering neon of the curry house below, their silhouette sharp against the gloom. Tall. Too tall for this flat. Too polished. The cane in their hand looked like it belonged in a museum, not on Brick Lane. “You’re late,” Rory said, voice steadier than she felt. The figure stepped inside, the door swinging shut behind them with a finality that made her chest tighten. The cane clicked against the floorboards as they turned, the amber eye catching the lamplight first—then the black one, like a shadow given form. “Not by much,” Lucien said, his voice smooth as aged whiskey. “But then, you always were a stickler for punctuality.” Rory exhaled through her nose, fingers curling into the fabric of her coat. “What do you want?” Lucien’s lips quirked, just once, before he let the mask slip. “I want to talk.” “About?” “About the job.” She blinked. “The one you didn’t pay me for?” “Ah.” His cane tapped against the floor again, a rhythm that set her teeth on edge. “That. Well. Circumstances have… changed.” Rory crossed her arms, the movement instinctive, protective. “You mean someone else’s circumstances changed, and now they’re paying you to do my work?” Lucien’s gaze flicked to the scar on her wrist, then away. “Let’s just say I have a new client. One who’s… interested in your particular skills.” “My skills?” She laughed, sharp and bitter. “You mean my ability to get into places I shouldn’t? To lie to people who trust me? To—” “To think on your feet,” he finished, cutting her off. “Yes. That.” She swallowed. “Why me?” “Because you’re the only one who can do it.” The flat felt smaller suddenly, the walls pressing in. She knew that tone—Lucien’s voice when he was playing a game, when he was already three moves ahead. “You’re not here to help me, are you?” “No.” The word hung between them, heavy as the silence that followed. Rory’s fingers twitched at her sides. “Then what are you doing here?” Lucien stepped closer, the cane between them like a barrier she wasn’t sure she wanted to cross. “I’m here because I owe you an apology.” She should’ve laughed. Should’ve told him to leave. But the way he said it—like it cost him something—made her stomach twist. “For what?” she asked, voice quieter than she intended. “For not telling you the truth,” he said. “For leaving you with half of it.” Rory’s breath hitched. She knew that half. Knew the way he’d looked at her that night, the way his hands had trembled when he’d touched her. Knew the way he’d walked away like she was nothing more than a debt to be settled. “You had your reasons,” she said, but her voice cracked. Lucien’s gaze darkened. “I had excuses. There’s a difference.” She wanted to ask him what the other half was. Wanted to know why he’d come back now, after all this time. But the words stuck in her throat, thick and useless. Then Ptolemy chose that moment to leap onto the windowsill, tail flicking like a metronome set to fury. He hissed, low and warning, his green eyes locked onto Lucien. Lucien didn’t flinch. “Hello, Ptolemy.” The cat’s fur bristled. “Get out,” Rory said, but it came out more like a plea. Lucien didn’t move. “He doesn’t like me.” “No shit.” “He doesn’t like many people.” She exhaled sharply, rubbing her temples. “Just go.” Lucien’s lips curled, just slightly. “I can’t.” “Why the hell not?” “Because,” he said, stepping closer still, “I need you.” The flat seemed to hold its breath. The air between them crackled, charged with something she hadn’t felt in years—something dangerous, something alive. Rory’s pulse hammered in her ears. “You need me to do a job.” “Yes.” “And if I say no?” Lucien’s gaze dropped to her lips, then back to her eyes. “Then I’ll find someone else.” She should’ve told him to try. Should’ve told him to go to hell. But the truth was, she wanted to see him again. Wanted to know what had changed. Wanted to know if he still tasted like cloves and sin. “Fine,” she said, voice rough. “But I want double.” Lucien’s smile was slow, dangerous. “Done.” Ptolemy let out a final, disgruntled meow before flopping onto the couch, tail still twitching. Rory turned away, her hands clenched into fists at her sides. “Where’s the job?” Lucien’s cane tapped against the floor as he followed her into the kitchen. “Tomorrow night. Midnight. A place called *The Velvet Hour*.” “The club?” “Yes.” She paused, stirring the last of the tea in the pot. “Why me?” Lucien’s voice was low, almost a growl. “Because you’re the only one who can get in.” She turned, meeting his gaze. “And if I can’t?” “Then we both lose.” Rory’s breath hitched. She knew that look. Knew the way his eyes darkened when he was serious. Knew the way his voice dropped, low and dangerous. She wanted to ask him what would happen if she failed. But she already knew. She’d lose him again.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.216
leniency0.431
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.73% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount922
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"sharply"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount922
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"trembled"
count1
7
word"charged"
count1
8
word"velvet"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"pulse"
2"gloom"
3"flicked"
4"silence"
5"stomach"
6"trembled"
7"charged"
8"velvet"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched into fists"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences74
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences114
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords3
totalWords916
ratio0.003
matches
0"The Velvet Hour"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount676
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.07
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Rory10
Lucien14
Ptolemy2
Knew4
Wanted3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.464
windowScore0.333
45.83% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like it belonged in a museum, not"
1"tasted like cloves and sin"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount916
matches(empty)
49.71% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount4
totalSentences114
matches
0"knew that tone"
1"knew that half"
2"chose that moment"
3"knew that look"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean14.77
std12.21
cv0.827
sampleLengths
063
14
244
39
442
520
617
715
81
93
109
1121
1223
1326
1425
1512
164
179
1835
191
2023
2125
2221
239
2415
2543
2610
279
2832
2929
305
3116
327
332
345
358
367
374
389
3923
4013
411
425
4316
4413
4516
4611
479
486
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs147
matches
0"was playing"
17.54% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences114
ratio0.044
matches
0"A gust of cold air rushed in, carrying the scent of rain-slicked pavement and something sharper—winter spice, like cloves and burnt sugar."
1"The cane clicked against the floorboards as they turned, the amber eye catching the lamplight first—then the black one, like a shadow given form."
2"She knew that tone—Lucien’s voice when he was playing a game, when he was already three moves ahead."
3"But the way he said it—like it cost him something—made her stomach twist."
4"The air between them crackled, charged with something she hadn’t felt in years—something dangerous, something alive."
92.66% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount682
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.04838709677419355
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004398826979472141
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean8.04
std5.45
cv0.678
sampleLengths
019
122
222
34
420
51
65
72
816
99
1018
1124
1211
139
1413
154
1611
174
181
193
202
217
2216
235
248
2515
2611
2715
287
2918
3010
312
322
332
349
359
3618
378
381
3911
406
416
4217
438
443
455
4613
479
488
497
46.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.32456140350877194
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners37
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences69
matches
0"Then the light spilled."
1"Too tall for this flat."
2"Then Ptolemy chose that moment"
ratio0.043
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences69
matches
0"His cane tapped against the"
1"She laughed, sharp and bitter"
2"he finished, cutting her off"
3"She knew that tone—Lucien’s voice"
4"She should’ve laughed."
5"she asked, voice quieter than"
6"She knew that half."
7"she said, but her voice"
8"She wanted to ask him"
9"He hissed, low and warning,"
10"She exhaled sharply, rubbing her"
11"he said, stepping closer still"
12"She should’ve told him to"
13"she said, voice rough"
14"She paused, stirring the last"
15"She turned, meeting his gaze."
16"She knew that look."
17"She wanted to ask him"
18"She’d lose him again."
ratio0.275
75.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences69
matches
0"The door creaked open before"
1"A gust of cold air"
2"Rory froze, her fingers still"
3"A figure stood there, backlit"
4"The cane in their hand"
5"Rory said, voice steadier than"
6"The figure stepped inside, the"
7"The cane clicked against the"
8"Lucien said, his voice smooth"
9"Rory exhaled through her nose,"
10"Lucien’s lips quirked, just once,"
11"His cane tapped against the"
12"Rory crossed her arms, the"
13"Lucien’s gaze flicked to the"
14"She laughed, sharp and bitter"
15"he finished, cutting her off"
16"The flat felt smaller suddenly,"
17"She knew that tone—Lucien’s voice"
18"The word hung between them,"
19"Rory’s fingers twitched at her"
ratio0.768
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The figure stepped inside, the door swinging shut behind them with a finality that made her chest tighten."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Rory said, voice steadier than she felt"
1"Lucien said, his voice smooth as aged whiskey"
2"she asked, voice quieter than she intended"
3"she said, but her voice cracked"
4"she said, voice rough"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.176
leniency0.353
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.039
79.6907%