| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx’s voice rasped like [like]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.543 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.053 | | effectiveRatio | 0.053 | |
| 95.30% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1064 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 6.02% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1064 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "resonated" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "tracing" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "depths" | | 8 | "fleeting" | | 9 | "almost alive" | | 10 | "fractured" | | 11 | "structure" | | 12 | "throbbed" | | 13 | "rhythmic" | | 14 | "pulse" | | 15 | "echoed" | | 16 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 1064 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "saw" | | 1 | "felt" | | 2 | "expect" | | 3 | "is" | | 4 | "feel" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 41.96% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 51 | | wordCount | 833 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 2.16 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Isolde | 10 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 1 | | Rory | 18 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Nyx | 10 | | Fae-forged | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.42 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "tasted like crushed petals and something" | | 1 | "felt like more than just a possibility" | | 2 | "quite make out" | | 3 | "spiral that seemed to reach for the sky" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1064 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 28.76 | | std | 16.44 | | cv | 0.572 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 64 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 36 | | 4 | 68 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 48 | | 10 | 37 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 33 | | 13 | 47 | | 14 | 45 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 35 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 55 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 62 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 57 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 153 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 94 | | ratio | 0.064 | | matches | | 0 | "No disturbance to the carpet of wildflowers coating the ground—not a single stem bent beneath her feet." | | 1 | "Light didn’t simply illuminate; it resonated, making the tiny hairs on her arms stand on end." | | 2 | "The wildflowers weren’t just colorful; they pulsed with a soft, internal light." | | 3 | "Instead of her reflection, she saw fleeting images – a swirling vortex of colors, a crumbling castle, a face she couldn't quite make out." | | 4 | "In the center stood a structure that defied description – a woven lattice of branches and vines, shaped like a spiral that seemed to reach for the sky." | | 5 | "As she did, a vision exploded in her mind – a landscape of warm amber skies, sprawling vineyards, and endless feasts." |
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| 99.29% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 833 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.04081632653061224 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013205282112845138 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 94 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 94 | | mean | 11.32 | | std | 5.2 | | cv | 0.459 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 65.60% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.425531914893617 | | totalSentences | 94 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 90.09% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead of her reflection, she" | | 1 | "Instead, she turned towards a" |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "She simply stepped through, her" | | 1 | "It wasn’t a cold sensation," | | 2 | "She blinked, and the familiar" | | 3 | "Their bark swirled with shades" | | 4 | "She suppressed a shiver." | | 5 | "It felt like more than" | | 6 | "They moved deeper." | | 7 | "They ran a hand across" | | 8 | "It pulsed with a faint" | | 9 | "She jerked back, a wave" | | 10 | "She raised a hand, and" | | 11 | "It felt strangely warm, almost" | | 12 | "She didn't need this place" | | 13 | "It throbbed with the same" | | 14 | "Her fingers disappeared into the" | | 15 | "she said, her voice distant" | | 16 | "She touched the woven branches" | | 17 | "she said, her gaze fixed" | | 18 | "They continued into the darkness," |
| | ratio | 0.257 | |
| 20.81% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted like crushed" | | 1 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "Nyx drifted through the last" | | 3 | "Nyx’s voice rasped, like wind" | | 4 | "Isolde didn’t bother with pleasantries." | | 5 | "She simply stepped through, her" | | 6 | "Rory followed, a prickle running" | | 7 | "It wasn’t a cold sensation," | | 8 | "She blinked, and the familiar" | | 9 | "The Fae Grove wasn’t a" | | 10 | "Light didn’t simply illuminate; it" | | 11 | "The trees weren't trees, not" | | 12 | "Their bark swirled with shades" | | 13 | "The wildflowers weren’t just colorful;" | | 14 | "Isolde murmured, already walking deeper" | | 15 | "Rory glanced back, but the" | | 16 | "She suppressed a shiver." | | 17 | "It felt like more than" | | 18 | "Rory asked, her voice sounding" | | 19 | "Isolde replied without turning" |
| | ratio | 0.878 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 91.84% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Ahead, the ancient oak standing stones blurred at the edges, the air within their circle shimmering." | | 1 | "Nyx moved with a fluid grace that defied gravity, their shadow stretching and contracting with each step." | | 2 | "Her fingers disappeared into the vines as if they weren’t there." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory asked, her voice sounding small in the overwhelming silence" | | 1 | "Nyx said, their voice barely audible" | | 2 | "Nyx cautioned, their violet eyes fixed on her" | | 3 | "she said, her voice distant" | | 4 | "Nyx confirmed, their form flickering" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 16 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Isolde explained (explain)" | | 2 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 3 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 4 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "Nyx confirmed (confirm)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.457 | | leniency | 0.914 | | rawRatio | 0.375 | | effectiveRatio | 0.343 | |