Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYA0V2J0RAJP9RXTH66Y0RW

Run Details

Duration:
46.3s
Cost:
$0.000383
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air tasted like crushed petals and something metallic, something old. Rory adjusted the strap of her messenger bag, the weight of the Fae-Forged Blade a cold comfort against her hip. Ahead, the ancient oak standing stones blurred at the edges, the air within their circle shimmering. Nyx drifted through the last stone, their form momentarily fracturing into a cascade of shadows before solidifying. “Well,” Nyx’s voice rasped, like wind through dry leaves, “that’s different.” Isolde didn’t bother with pleasantries. She simply stepped through, her silver hair seeming to collect the ambient light. No disturbance to the carpet of wildflowers coating the ground—not a single stem bent beneath her feet. Rory followed, a prickle running up her spine as she passed between the stones. It wasn’t a cold sensation, but a…disorientation. Like stepping sideways. She blinked, and the familiar green expanse of Richmond Park had vanished. The Fae Grove wasn’t a place you *saw* so much as *felt*. Light didn’t simply illuminate; it resonated, making the tiny hairs on her arms stand on end. The trees weren't trees, not exactly. Their bark swirled with shades of amethyst and emerald, and their branches intertwined to form a cathedral ceiling dripping with bioluminescent moss. The wildflowers weren’t just colorful; they pulsed with a soft, internal light. “Time flows strangely here,” Isolde murmured, already walking deeper into the grove. “Don’t be surprised if we spend an hour and only minutes have passed outside.” Rory glanced back, but the standing stones were gone, replaced by a wall of woven branches and shimmering leaves. She suppressed a shiver. Trapped already? It felt like more than just a possibility. “Where are we going?” Rory asked, her voice sounding small in the overwhelming silence. “To the heart of it,” Isolde replied without turning. “Where the whispers are loudest.” They moved deeper. The ground, soft beneath Rory’s boots, gave way to a path paved with smooth, grey stones. The air grew thick with the scent of jasmine and something else, something wilder, like rain on hot earth. Strange, flute-like melodies drifted through the grove, melodic yet haunting. Nyx moved with a fluid grace that defied gravity, their shadow stretching and contracting with each step. They ran a hand across the bark of a nearby tree, their fingers sinking in as if it were water. “The Veil is thin here,” Nyx said, their voice barely audible. “I can feel the currents. Fae energy, raw and untamed.” Rory reached for the Heartstone Pendant beneath her shirt, her fingers tracing its cool surface. It pulsed with a faint warmth, a reassuring anchor in this unsettling place. “Is that good or bad?” “Both,” Isolde answered, stopping before a pool of water so clear it seemed to have no bottom. Around the pool, stones shaped like open hands cradled the water. “The closer we are to the Fae, the more potent their influence. It can illuminate… or it can deceive.” Rory bent closer to the pool’s edge, peering into the depths. Instead of her reflection, she saw fleeting images – a swirling vortex of colors, a crumbling castle, a face she couldn't quite make out. She jerked back, a wave of dizziness washing over her. “Careful,” Nyx cautioned, their violet eyes fixed on her. “The waters show you what you *expect* to see, not necessarily what *is*.” “Expect?” Rory frowned, rubbing her temples. “I wasn't expecting…any of that.” Isolde finally paused, standing beneath a tree whose leaves were the color of polished silver. She raised a hand, and a single leaf drifted down, landing in Rory’s palm. It felt strangely warm, almost alive. “This place responds to intent,” Isolde explained, her pale lavender eyes meeting Rory’s. “It reflects your desires, your fears. It's a mirror, but a fractured one.” “Great,” Rory muttered. She didn't need this place digging up whatever mess was already swirling inside her head. They continued. The grove opened into a clearing bathed in an ethereal glow. In the center stood a structure that defied description – a woven lattice of branches and vines, shaped like a spiral that seemed to reach for the sky. It throbbed with the same internal light as the wildflowers, a soft, rhythmic pulse. “What is that?” Rory breathed, instinctively reaching for the dagger at her hip. “A waystation,” Nyx said, circling the structure. “A nexus point between realms. It's old. Very old. I haven’t felt a convergence like this in centuries.” Isolde approached the spiral, reaching out to touch its woven surface. Her fingers disappeared into the vines as if they weren’t there. “The threads are frayed,” she said, her voice distant. “The Veil weakens. Something is… pressing against it.” Rory stepped closer, studying the structure. The Heartstone Pendant was now radiating heat, almost burning against her skin. She touched the woven branches tentatively. As she did, a vision exploded in her mind – a landscape of warm amber skies, sprawling vineyards, and endless feasts. Laughter echoed in her ears, mingled with the clinking of goblets and the sizzle of roasting meat. “Dymas,” Rory whispered, pulling her hand back as if burned. “I… I saw Dymas.” “Gluttony,” Nyx confirmed, their form flickering. “The realm of Prince Belphegor. A place of decadence and excess.” “And you saw that through touch?” Nyx asked. “It just…came to me,” Rory said, shaking her head. “Like a memory. A terrible, tempting memory.” Isolde withdrew her hand from the spiral. “The connection is growing stronger. Someone, or something, is attempting to widen the rift.” “Someone in Hel?” Rory asked, clutching the pendant. Isolde didn’t answer directly. Instead, she turned towards a dark patch of trees at the edge of the clearing. “The answer lies that way,” she said, her gaze fixed on the shadows. “But be warned. The path ahead is guarded by illusions.” The air grew colder. The flute-like music shifted, becoming discordant and unsettling. Rory could feel eyes on her, watching from the darkness. Nyx shifted, their form solidifying. "An illusion requires belief to take hold. Don't trust what you see, only what you *feel*." Isolde started forward, disappearing into the darkness without a sound. Rory took a deep breath, gripped the Fae-forged blade, and followed, Nyx gliding silently beside her. The earth beneath them turned to black moss, damp and cold. The floral scent faded, replaced by the stench of decay. They continued into the darkness, and the whispers grew louder.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:56:54.236Z" 2/20/2026, 7:56:54 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Nyx’s voice rasped like [like]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.543
leniency1
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.053
95.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1064
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
6.02% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1064
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"resonated"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"depths"
count1
8
word"fleeting"
count1
9
word"almost alive"
count1
10
word"fractured"
count1
11
word"structure"
count3
12
word"throbbed"
count1
13
word"rhythmic"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
15
word"echoed"
count1
16
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"familiar"
2"resonated"
3"pulsed"
4"silence"
5"tracing"
6"warmth"
7"depths"
8"fleeting"
9"almost alive"
10"fractured"
11"structure"
12"throbbed"
13"rhythmic"
14"pulse"
15"echoed"
16"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences78
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords5
totalWords1064
ratio0.005
matches
0"saw"
1"felt"
2"expect"
3"is"
4"feel"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
41.96% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount833
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.16
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Isolde10
Richmond1
Park1
Fae3
Grove1
Rory18
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Nyx10
Fae-forged1
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Rory"
2"Nyx"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
globalScore0.42
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"tasted like crushed petals and something"
1"felt like more than just a possibility"
2"quite make out"
3"spiral that seemed to reach for the sky"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1064
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean28.76
std16.44
cv0.572
sampleLengths
064
111
235
336
468
526
633
714
814
948
1037
1121
1233
1347
1445
1522
1611
1735
1826
1918
2055
2113
2225
2322
2417
2562
2614
2717
288
2916
3021
318
3219
3323
3422
3521
3657
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs153
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences94
ratio0.064
matches
0"No disturbance to the carpet of wildflowers coating the ground—not a single stem bent beneath her feet."
1"Light didn’t simply illuminate; it resonated, making the tiny hairs on her arms stand on end."
2"The wildflowers weren’t just colorful; they pulsed with a soft, internal light."
3"Instead of her reflection, she saw fleeting images – a swirling vortex of colors, a crumbling castle, a face she couldn't quite make out."
4"In the center stood a structure that defied description – a woven lattice of branches and vines, shaped like a spiral that seemed to reach for the sky."
5"As she did, a vision exploded in her mind – a landscape of warm amber skies, sprawling vineyards, and endless feasts."
99.29% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount833
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.04081632653061224
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.013205282112845138
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean11.32
std5.2
cv0.459
sampleLengths
011
120
216
317
411
55
613
717
814
97
103
1112
1212
1316
146
1522
1612
1712
1814
1919
204
212
228
2314
249
255
263
2716
2819
2910
3017
3120
3211
3310
3415
3513
365
3717
3811
3919
4011
4124
4210
439
4413
456
465
4715
4814
496
65.60% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.425531914893617
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners40
90.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences74
matches
0"Instead of her reflection, she"
1"Instead, she turned towards a"
ratio0.027
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences74
matches
0"She simply stepped through, her"
1"It wasn’t a cold sensation,"
2"She blinked, and the familiar"
3"Their bark swirled with shades"
4"She suppressed a shiver."
5"It felt like more than"
6"They moved deeper."
7"They ran a hand across"
8"It pulsed with a faint"
9"She jerked back, a wave"
10"She raised a hand, and"
11"It felt strangely warm, almost"
12"She didn't need this place"
13"It throbbed with the same"
14"Her fingers disappeared into the"
15"she said, her voice distant"
16"She touched the woven branches"
17"she said, her gaze fixed"
18"They continued into the darkness,"
ratio0.257
20.81% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences74
matches
0"The air tasted like crushed"
1"Rory adjusted the strap of"
2"Nyx drifted through the last"
3"Nyx’s voice rasped, like wind"
4"Isolde didn’t bother with pleasantries."
5"She simply stepped through, her"
6"Rory followed, a prickle running"
7"It wasn’t a cold sensation,"
8"She blinked, and the familiar"
9"The Fae Grove wasn’t a"
10"Light didn’t simply illuminate; it"
11"The trees weren't trees, not"
12"Their bark swirled with shades"
13"The wildflowers weren’t just colorful;"
14"Isolde murmured, already walking deeper"
15"Rory glanced back, but the"
16"She suppressed a shiver."
17"It felt like more than"
18"Rory asked, her voice sounding"
19"Isolde replied without turning"
ratio0.878
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Ahead, the ancient oak standing stones blurred at the edges, the air within their circle shimmering."
1"Nyx moved with a fluid grace that defied gravity, their shadow stretching and contracting with each step."
2"Her fingers disappeared into the vines as if they weren’t there."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Rory asked, her voice sounding small in the overwhelming silence"
1"Nyx said, their voice barely audible"
2"Nyx cautioned, their violet eyes fixed on her"
3"she said, her voice distant"
4"Nyx confirmed, their form flickering"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1"Isolde explained (explain)"
2"Rory muttered (mutter)"
3"Rory breathed (breathe)"
4"Rory whispered (whisper)"
5"Nyx confirmed (confirm)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.457
leniency0.914
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.343
73.6966%