Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYA1CK7VHZQ30KDGWJ36T5E

Run Details

Duration:
39.2s
Cost:
$0.000259
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The hallway reeked of simmering spices and stale beer—the usual aroma clinging to the building. Rory squinted, fumbling with her keys. Another late shift. Another mountain of orders to navigate through London’s snarling traffic. She finally got the lock to click and shoved the door open, expecting the familiar chaos of her flat. Instead, Lucien Moreau leaned against the doorframe, a silhouette framed by the dim light of the stairwell. He looked impeccably out of place amongst the peeling wallpaper and mismatched furniture. A tailored charcoal suit, crisp white shirt, the platinum blond hair slicked back flawlessly. He radiated an unsettling calm. He didn't smile. Didn't offer a greeting. Just watched her, those unsettlingly mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—pinned on her. Rory’s hand froze on the doorknob. “Lucien? What…what are you doing here?” “Surprising you, I trust,” he replied, his voice smooth, laced with a faint French accent. He pushed off the doorframe, stepping inside without invitation. The scent of his cologne—expensive, unfamiliar—cut through the curry and beer. She closed the door, a futile gesture. “You could have called.” “Where’s the fun in that?” He surveyed the flat, his gaze lingering on the overflowing bookshelves, the chipped mugs on the counter. “Still living amongst the detritus of academia, I see.” “It’s called ‘organized chaos’,” Rory retorted, crossing her arms. “And you’re trespassing.” “I’m merely visiting an old friend. Haven't I earned that much?” He moved further into the flat, ignoring her pointed glare. A wave of memories crashed over her—late nights in dimly lit bars, whispered conversations about secrets neither of them fully understood, the electric charge that crackled between them. And the fallout. The sharp, painful end. “It’s been… a while, Lucien,” she said, her voice quieter this time. “Indeed. Three years, seven months, and eleven days, to be precise.” He didn’t look at her when he recited the time. Instead, he picked up a small, tarnished silver paperweight from her desk, turning it over in his fingers. “You still collect these, I see. Odd little trinkets.” “They’re interesting.” Rory tried to project an air of indifference, but her pulse hammered against her ribs. He finally looked up, his eyes meeting hers. “Interesting. Like you?” The question hung in the air, heavy and charged. Rory swallowed, refusing to be drawn into his game. “What do you want, Lucien?” “Direct as always, Rory. Refreshing.” He placed the paperweight back on the desk with a quiet click. "I require a…favor.” “A favor? From me? After everything?” She laughed, a short, brittle sound. “That's rich.” “Circumstances have changed.” His expression didn’t alter, but something in his voice shifted—a subtle hardness that made her skin crawl. “Let’s just say…someone needs your particular skillset.” "My skillset? You mean delivering Thai food?" Rory gestured around the small, cluttered flat. “Last I checked, pad see ew wasn’t exactly a sought-after commodity in the supernatural underworld.” He ignored her sarcasm. "Your quick thinking. Your ability to adapt. And, of course, your… tenacity." His gaze traveled down her arm, pausing on the small, crescent-shaped scar on her wrist—a relic from a childhood accident, a detail he remembered with unsettling clarity. Rory instinctively pulled her arm back. “Don’t.” “Don't what?” He raised an eyebrow, a flicker of amusement in his amber eye. “Don’t pretend you care about my ‘tenacity’ or anything else. You left, Lucien. You disappeared. You didn’t even offer an explanation.” Her voice shook, despite her best efforts to control it. “Explanations are often superfluous,” he said smoothly. “And rarely satisfying.” “That’s convenient, isn’t it? Just walk away and leave me to pick up the pieces.” He finally stepped closer, closing the distance between them. Rory felt a familiar heat rise in her cheeks, an unwelcome reaction to his proximity. “Don’t mistake my silence for indifference, Rory. It was a necessity. A…protection.” “Protection? From what? From me?” “From forces you couldn’t possibly comprehend,” he said quietly, his voice losing some of its usual polish. "Forces that would have consumed you." Her defenses crumbled slightly. She knew he wasn't entirely lying. She’d glimpsed snippets of his world—a world of shadows, ancient grudges, and dangerous power. A world she'd desperately tried to escape. “And now?” she asked, her voice barely a whisper. “What’s changed that suddenly makes me useful?” “There’s a… disturbance. A ripple in the veil. Something is stirring in Avaros.” He paused, his expression darkening. “And it concerns you.” “Avaros? Your home?” Rory knew enough about demonology to understand the implications; Avaros was a volatile realm, a source of immense power and unimaginable corruption. “Why would it concern me?" “Your mother.” His words hit her like a physical blow. Rory stared at him, her mind reeling. Her mother? Jennifer Carter, a Welsh schoolteacher with a penchant for gardening and a deep suspicion of anything remotely unusual? “My mother has nothing to do with any of this,” she protested, but the denial lacked conviction. Rory had always sensed a hidden depth to her mother, a quiet strength that belied the ordinary facade. “Don't be so sure.” Lucien turned away, walking towards the window and gazing out at the bustling street below. "She possesses something... a lineage. An inheritance. Something that someone in Avaros very much wants back." He paused, then added, almost casually, “They believe you hold the key.” Rory felt a chill run down her spine. “And you need me to… what? Stop them?” Lucien finally turned back to her, his mismatched eyes serious. “I need you to find out who they are. What they want. And why they believe you can help them.” "And what's in it for you?" Lucien smirked. "Let's just say I have…investments in maintaining the equilibrium between our worlds." He paused. "Besides, a little bit of familial loyalty. It goes a long way." A tabby cat, Ptolemy, emerged from beneath a pile of books, winding around Lucien’s legs. He absentmindedly stroked the cat’s fur. "You expect me to trust you, after you left me? To walk into this mess—this whole *world*—because my mother has some ‘inheritance’?" Rory asked, frustration rising in her voice. "I am offering you an opportunity, Rory." Lucien’s gaze locked onto hers. “An opportunity to understand the past. To protect your future. And perhaps...to finally settle what was left unfinished.” The air in the flat thickened with unspoken words, with the weight of their shared history. Rory looked at him, really looked at him, past the expensive suit and the practiced charm. She saw the weariness in his eyes, the burden he carried. And something else—a flicker of something that might, perhaps, have once been genuine affection. She hesitated. Everything in her screamed at her to refuse. To slam the door in his face and forget he ever appeared. But a part of her—a stubborn, reckless part—was intrigued. And terrified. "What kind of 'ripple' are we talking about?" Rory asked, walking past him towards the kettle. "And why didn't you tell me about this before?"
created_at"2026-02-20T19:57:12.179Z" 2/20/2026, 7:57:12 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount6
adverbTags
0"He moved further [further]"
1"Rory gestured around [around]"
2"he said smoothly [smoothly]"
3"he said quietly [quietly]"
4"Lucien turned away [away]"
5"He paused then [then]"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.222
82.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1171
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
2"very"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
18.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1171
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"simmering"
count1
1
word"navigate"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"electric"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"charged"
count1
6
word"eyebrow"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count2
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"facade"
count1
11
word"chill"
count1
12
word"down her spine"
count1
13
word"unspoken"
count1
14
word"weight"
count1
15
word"charm"
count1
16
word"affection"
count1
highlights
0"simmering"
1"navigate"
2"familiar"
3"electric"
4"pulse"
5"charged"
6"eyebrow"
7"flicker"
8"silence"
9"whisper"
10"facade"
11"chill"
12"down her spine"
13"unspoken"
14"weight"
15"charm"
16"affection"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
1"a flicker of amusement"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences76
matches
0"felt a chill"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1156
ratio0.001
matches
0"world"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
49.46% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount746
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.01
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
London1
Lucien6
Moreau1
French1
Rory15
Avaros1
Carter1
Welsh1
Ptolemy1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Carter"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.495
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1156
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean24.6
std12.49
cv0.508
sampleLengths
053
149
219
312
435
511
631
712
821
935
1012
1148
1217
1311
1423
1520
1614
1727
1829
1943
207
2114
2231
2310
2415
2536
265
2723
2831
2916
3022
3130
3210
3327
3435
3535
3612
3716
3830
396
4028
4121
4229
4330
4457
4533
4625
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"was intrigued"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs127
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences103
ratio0.097
matches
0"The hallway reeked of simmering spices and stale beer—the usual aroma clinging to the building."
1"Just watched her, those unsettlingly mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—pinned on her."
2"The scent of his cologne—expensive, unfamiliar—cut through the curry and beer."
3"A wave of memories crashed over her—late nights in dimly lit bars, whispered conversations about secrets neither of them fully understood, the electric charge that crackled between them."
4"“Circumstances have changed.” His expression didn’t alter, but something in his voice shifted—a subtle hardness that made her skin crawl."
5"\"Your quick thinking. Your ability to adapt. And, of course, your… tenacity.\" His gaze traveled down her arm, pausing on the small, crescent-shaped scar on her wrist—a relic from a childhood accident, a detail he remembered with unsettling clarity."
6"She’d glimpsed snippets of his world—a world of shadows, ancient grudges, and dangerous power."
7"“Avaros? Your home?” Rory knew enough about demonology to understand the implications; Avaros was a volatile realm, a source of immense power and unimaginable corruption."
8"And something else—a flicker of something that might, perhaps, have once been genuine affection."
9"But a part of her—a stubborn, reckless part—was intrigued."
77.36% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount759
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small, tarnished silver paperweight"
1"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.0461133069828722
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.026350461133069828
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean11.22
std7
cv0.624
sampleLengths
015
16
23
310
419
517
613
714
85
93
104
1112
126
136
1415
159
1611
177
184
1922
209
219
223
2321
2428
253
264
2712
2821
2918
309
3117
328
333
349
359
365
3717
383
3912
402
4120
427
4314
4415
454
4639
476
481
4914
64.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4174757281553398
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners43
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences71
matches
0"Instead, Lucien Moreau leaned against"
1"Just watched her, those unsettlingly"
2"Instead, he picked up a"
ratio0.042
39.72% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences71
matches
0"She finally got the lock"
1"He looked impeccably out of"
2"He radiated an unsettling calm."
3"He didn't smile."
4"he replied, his voice smooth,"
5"He pushed off the doorframe,"
6"She closed the door, a"
7"He surveyed the flat, his"
8"He moved further into the"
9"she said, her voice quieter"
10"He didn’t look at her"
11"He finally looked up, his"
12"He placed the paperweight back"
13"She laughed, a short, brittle"
14"His expression didn’t alter, but"
15"He ignored her sarcasm."
16"His gaze traveled down her"
17"He raised an eyebrow, a"
18"Her voice shook, despite her"
19"he said smoothly"
ratio0.451
16.34% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences71
matches
0"The hallway reeked of simmering"
1"Rory squinted, fumbling with her"
2"Another late shift."
3"Another mountain of orders to"
4"She finally got the lock"
5"He looked impeccably out of"
6"A tailored charcoal suit, crisp"
7"He radiated an unsettling calm."
8"He didn't smile."
9"Rory’s hand froze on the"
10"he replied, his voice smooth,"
11"He pushed off the doorframe,"
12"The scent of his cologne—expensive,"
13"She closed the door, a"
14"He surveyed the flat, his"
15"Rory retorted, crossing her arms"
16"He moved further into the"
17"A wave of memories crashed"
18"The sharp, painful end."
19"she said, her voice quieter"
ratio0.887
70.42% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"To slam the door in"
ratio0.014
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"A wave of memories crashed over her—late nights in dimly lit bars, whispered conversations about secrets neither of them fully understood, the electric charge t…"
1"And something else—a flicker of something that might, perhaps, have once been genuine affection."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"he replied, his voice smooth, laced with a faint French accent"
1"she said, her voice quieter this time"
2"Rory tried, but her pulse hammered against her ribs"
3"He raised, a flicker of amusement in his amber eye"
4"he said quietly, his voice losing some of its usual polish"
5"she asked, her voice barely a whisper"
6"He paused, his expression darkening"
7"Rory knew, a source of immense power and unimaginable corruption"
8"she protested, but the denial lacked conviction"
9"Rory asked, frustration rising in her voice"
94.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Rory retorted (retort)"
1"She laughed (laugh)"
2"she protested (protest)"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.185
leniency0.37
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.111
75.2951%