| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 27 | | adverbTagCount | 6 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "He moved further [further]" | | 1 | "Rory gestured around [around]" | | 2 | "he said smoothly [smoothly]" | | 3 | "he said quietly [quietly]" | | 4 | "Lucien turned away [away]" | | 5 | "He paused then [then]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 54 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.222 | | effectiveRatio | 0.222 | |
| 82.92% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1171 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 18.87% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1171 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "simmering" | | 1 | "navigate" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "electric" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "charged" | | 6 | "eyebrow" | | 7 | "flicker" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "facade" | | 11 | "chill" | | 12 | "down her spine" | | 13 | "unspoken" | | 14 | "weight" | | 15 | "charm" | | 16 | "affection" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "flicker of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "hung in the air" | | 1 | "a flicker of amusement" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 103 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1156 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 49.46% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 746 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.01 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Lucien | 6 | | Moreau | 1 | | French | 1 | | Rory | 15 | | Avaros | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Ptolemy | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Lucien" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Carter" | | 4 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.495 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1156 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 24.6 | | std | 12.49 | | cv | 0.508 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 49 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 35 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 48 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 43 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 36 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 31 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 30 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 27 | | 34 | 35 | | 35 | 35 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 30 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 28 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 29 | | 43 | 30 | | 44 | 57 | | 45 | 33 | | 46 | 25 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 127 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 103 | | ratio | 0.097 | | matches | | 0 | "The hallway reeked of simmering spices and stale beer—the usual aroma clinging to the building." | | 1 | "Just watched her, those unsettlingly mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—pinned on her." | | 2 | "The scent of his cologne—expensive, unfamiliar—cut through the curry and beer." | | 3 | "A wave of memories crashed over her—late nights in dimly lit bars, whispered conversations about secrets neither of them fully understood, the electric charge that crackled between them." | | 4 | "“Circumstances have changed.” His expression didn’t alter, but something in his voice shifted—a subtle hardness that made her skin crawl." | | 5 | "\"Your quick thinking. Your ability to adapt. And, of course, your… tenacity.\" His gaze traveled down her arm, pausing on the small, crescent-shaped scar on her wrist—a relic from a childhood accident, a detail he remembered with unsettling clarity." | | 6 | "She’d glimpsed snippets of his world—a world of shadows, ancient grudges, and dangerous power." | | 7 | "“Avaros? Your home?” Rory knew enough about demonology to understand the implications; Avaros was a volatile realm, a source of immense power and unimaginable corruption." | | 8 | "And something else—a flicker of something that might, perhaps, have once been genuine affection." | | 9 | "But a part of her—a stubborn, reckless part—was intrigued." |
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| 77.36% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 759 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, tarnished silver paperweight" | | 1 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.0461133069828722 | | lyAdverbCount | 20 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.026350461133069828 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 103 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 103 | | mean | 11.22 | | std | 7 | | cv | 0.624 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 39 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 64.72% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.4174757281553398 | | totalSentences | 103 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, Lucien Moreau leaned against" | | 1 | "Just watched her, those unsettlingly" | | 2 | "Instead, he picked up a" |
| | ratio | 0.042 | |
| 39.72% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "She finally got the lock" | | 1 | "He looked impeccably out of" | | 2 | "He radiated an unsettling calm." | | 3 | "He didn't smile." | | 4 | "he replied, his voice smooth," | | 5 | "He pushed off the doorframe," | | 6 | "She closed the door, a" | | 7 | "He surveyed the flat, his" | | 8 | "He moved further into the" | | 9 | "she said, her voice quieter" | | 10 | "He didn’t look at her" | | 11 | "He finally looked up, his" | | 12 | "He placed the paperweight back" | | 13 | "She laughed, a short, brittle" | | 14 | "His expression didn’t alter, but" | | 15 | "He ignored her sarcasm." | | 16 | "His gaze traveled down her" | | 17 | "He raised an eyebrow, a" | | 18 | "Her voice shook, despite her" | | 19 | "he said smoothly" |
| | ratio | 0.451 | |
| 16.34% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "The hallway reeked of simmering" | | 1 | "Rory squinted, fumbling with her" | | 2 | "Another late shift." | | 3 | "Another mountain of orders to" | | 4 | "She finally got the lock" | | 5 | "He looked impeccably out of" | | 6 | "A tailored charcoal suit, crisp" | | 7 | "He radiated an unsettling calm." | | 8 | "He didn't smile." | | 9 | "Rory’s hand froze on the" | | 10 | "he replied, his voice smooth," | | 11 | "He pushed off the doorframe," | | 12 | "The scent of his cologne—expensive," | | 13 | "She closed the door, a" | | 14 | "He surveyed the flat, his" | | 15 | "Rory retorted, crossing her arms" | | 16 | "He moved further into the" | | 17 | "A wave of memories crashed" | | 18 | "The sharp, painful end." | | 19 | "she said, her voice quieter" |
| | ratio | 0.887 | |
| 70.42% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 77.92% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 22 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "A wave of memories crashed over her—late nights in dimly lit bars, whispered conversations about secrets neither of them fully understood, the electric charge t…" | | 1 | "And something else—a flicker of something that might, perhaps, have once been genuine affection." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 27 | | uselessAdditionCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "he replied, his voice smooth, laced with a faint French accent" | | 1 | "she said, her voice quieter this time" | | 2 | "Rory tried, but her pulse hammered against her ribs" | | 3 | "He raised, a flicker of amusement in his amber eye" | | 4 | "he said quietly, his voice losing some of its usual polish" | | 5 | "she asked, her voice barely a whisper" | | 6 | "He paused, his expression darkening" | | 7 | "Rory knew, a source of immense power and unimaginable corruption" | | 8 | "she protested, but the denial lacked conviction" | | 9 | "Rory asked, frustration rising in her voice" |
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| 94.44% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory retorted (retort)" | | 1 | "She laughed (laugh)" | | 2 | "she protested (protest)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 54 | | tagDensity | 0.185 | | leniency | 0.37 | | rawRatio | 0.3 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |