| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.3 | | leniency | 0.6 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 89.71% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 486 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 486 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "stomach" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "gloom" | | 6 | "pounding" | | 7 | "loomed" | | 8 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 43 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 43 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 14 | | markdownWords | 50 | | totalWords | 482 | | ratio | 0.104 | | matches | | 0 | "\"You shouldn’t be here.\"" | | 1 | "hung" | | 2 | "\"I came for the portal,\"" | | 3 | "\"I need to get back.\"" | | 4 | "\"The portal’s not here.\"" | | 5 | "\"Then what is?\"" | | 6 | "screamed" | | 7 | "\"You’re not supposed to be here.\"" | | 8 | "moved" | | 9 | "\"You don’t understand,\"" | | 10 | "\"This isn’t just a place. It’s a hunger.\"" | | 11 | "\"Then I’ll feed it something else.\"" | | 12 | "ran" | | 13 | "\"It’s gone,\"" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 69.72% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 10 | | wordCount | 436 | | uniqueNames | 2 | | maxNameDensity | 1.61 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.697 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 53.85% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 26 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "something like old blood and crushed petals" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 4.149 | | wordCount | 482 | | matches | | 0 | "not wind, not breath, but something" | | 1 | "not breath, but something" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 18 | | mean | 26.78 | | std | 19.85 | | cv | 0.741 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 55 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 73 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 54 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 38 | | 14 | 40 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 50 | | ratio | 0.1 | | matches | | 0 | "A whisper slithered through the trees—not wind, not breath, but something that coiled around her ribs." | | 1 | "The shape moved in the periphery—something tall, too tall, its limbs bending wrong, like a child’s doll with too many joints." | | 2 | "The thing’s form shifted, the edges of its silhouette sharpening—too many fingers, too many eyes." | | 3 | "She *moved*—not fast, not fast enough to be graceful, just enough to keep it from grabbing her wrist." | | 4 | "Behind her, the grove exhaled—something wet and hungry, something that followed." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 440 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.03636363636363636 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004545454545454545 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 50 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 50 | | mean | 9.64 | | std | 7.09 | | cv | 0.735 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 29 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 38.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.22 | | totalSentences | 50 | | uniqueOpeners | 11 | |
| 81.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 83.41% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | | 0 | "She froze, pressing her back" | | 1 | "She didn’t need to." | | 2 | "It stood just beyond the" | | 3 | "she said, voice steady despite" | | 4 | "It reached out, and the" | | 5 | "She didn’t look away." | | 6 | "She didn’t even flinch." | | 7 | "She *moved*—not fast, not fast" | | 8 | "it hissed, voice now a" | | 9 | "She *ran*, her boots pounding" | | 10 | "She didn’t look back." | | 11 | "She didn’t need to." | | 12 | "She stumbled through them, the" | | 13 | "She collapsed onto the grass," |
| | ratio | 0.341 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the grove" | | 1 | "Aurora stepped through the standing" | | 2 | "The moment her boots touched" | | 3 | "A whisper slithered through the" | | 4 | "She froze, pressing her back" | | 5 | "The pulse of the Heartstone" | | 6 | "The voice came from the" | | 7 | "Aurora didn’t turn." | | 8 | "She didn’t need to." | | 9 | "The shape moved in the" | | 10 | "It stood just beyond the" | | 11 | "she said, voice steady despite" | | 12 | "The thing tilted its head." | | 13 | "The sound was a rasp," | | 14 | "Aurora exhaled sharply." | | 15 | "The light flickered." | | 16 | "The thing’s form shifted, the" | | 17 | "It reached out, and the" | | 18 | "Aurora’s breath hitched." | | 19 | "She didn’t look away." |
| | ratio | 0.951 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 23.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 18 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The flashlight swung, the beam cutting through the gloom, and the thing recoiled, its form dissolving into something worse, something that writhed in the dark l…" | | 1 | "She *ran*, her boots pounding against the damp earth, the flashlight cutting through the trees like a blade." | | 2 | "Behind her, the grove exhaled—something wet and hungry, something that followed." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, voice steady despite the creeping dread" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "it hissed (hiss)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.3 | | leniency | 0.6 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |