Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYA1NFQPZCDRRFMQ3MBSD36

Run Details

Duration:
2.5s
Cost:
$0.000163
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the grove was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older, something like old blood and crushed petals. Aurora stepped through the standing stones, the cold metal biting into her palms. The moment her boots touched the moss, the world tilted. A whisper slithered through the trees—not wind, not breath, but something that coiled around her ribs. She froze, pressing her back against the trunk of an ancient oak, its bark rough as gravel. The pulse of the Heartstone in her pocket stuttered, warm against her skin, but the glow inside it didn’t match the darkness. *"You shouldn’t be here."* The voice came from the dark, low and wet, like leaves shifting in a storm. Aurora didn’t turn. She didn’t need to. The shape moved in the periphery—something tall, too tall, its limbs bending wrong, like a child’s doll with too many joints. It stood just beyond the light of her phone flashlight, its face obscured by the shadows, but the way it *hung* there, suspended between the branches, made her stomach twist. *"I came for the portal,"* she said, voice steady despite the creeping dread. *"I need to get back."* The thing tilted its head. The sound was a rasp, like gravel underfoot. *"The portal’s not here."* Aurora exhaled sharply. *"Then what is?"* The light flickered. The thing’s form shifted, the edges of its silhouette sharpening—too many fingers, too many eyes. It reached out, and the air between them *screamed*. Aurora’s breath hitched. She didn’t look away. *"You’re not supposed to be here."* Silence. Then, a sound like a bone snapping. The thing lunged. Aurora didn’t flinch. She didn’t even flinch. She *moved*—not fast, not fast enough to be graceful, just enough to keep it from grabbing her wrist. The flashlight swung, the beam cutting through the gloom, and the thing recoiled, its form dissolving into something worse, something that writhed in the dark like a living thing. *"You don’t understand,"* it hissed, voice now a chorus of whispers. *"This isn’t just a place. It’s a hunger."* Aurora’s fingers tightened around the Heartstone. The pulse inside it flared, bright and desperate. *"Then I’ll feed it something else."* The thing lunged again. This time, Aurora didn’t wait. She *ran*, her boots pounding against the damp earth, the flashlight cutting through the trees like a blade. Behind her, the grove exhaled—something wet and hungry, something that followed. She didn’t look back. She didn’t need to. The standing stones loomed ahead, their edges glowing faintly, like a warning. She stumbled through them, the cold metal biting into her skin, and the world outside the grove swallowed her whole. The air was sharp, clean, the kind that made her lungs burn. She collapsed onto the grass, gasping, the flashlight still in her hand. The Heartstone pulsed against her chest, warm and steady. *"It’s gone,"* she whispered. The grove was silent.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount486
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount486
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"whisper"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"gloom"
count1
6
word"pounding"
count1
7
word"loomed"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"pulse"
2"stomach"
3"flickered"
4"silence"
5"gloom"
6"pounding"
7"loomed"
8"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences43
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences43
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences50
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans14
markdownWords50
totalWords482
ratio0.104
matches
0"\"You shouldn’t be here.\""
1"hung"
2"\"I came for the portal,\""
3"\"I need to get back.\""
4"\"The portal’s not here.\""
5"\"Then what is?\""
6"screamed"
7"\"You’re not supposed to be here.\""
8"moved"
9"\"You don’t understand,\""
10"\"This isn’t just a place. It’s a hunger.\""
11"\"Then I’ll feed it something else.\""
12"ran"
13"\"It’s gone,\""
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
69.72% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions10
wordCount436
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity1.61
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone3
Aurora7
persons
0"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.697
windowScore0.833
53.85% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences26
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like old blood and crushed petals"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords4.149
wordCount482
matches
0"not wind, not breath, but something"
1"not breath, but something"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs18
mean26.78
std19.85
cv0.741
sampleLengths
046
155
24
373
418
517
66
727
813
911
1054
1119
1220
1338
1440
1533
164
174
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences43
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs76
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences50
ratio0.1
matches
0"A whisper slithered through the trees—not wind, not breath, but something that coiled around her ribs."
1"The shape moved in the periphery—something tall, too tall, its limbs bending wrong, like a child’s doll with too many joints."
2"The thing’s form shifted, the edges of its silhouette sharpening—too many fingers, too many eyes."
3"She *moved*—not fast, not fast enough to be graceful, just enough to keep it from grabbing her wrist."
4"Behind her, the grove exhaled—something wet and hungry, something that followed."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount440
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.03636363636363636
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.004545454545454545
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences50
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences50
mean9.64
std7.09
cv0.735
sampleLengths
023
113
210
316
417
522
64
715
83
94
1021
1130
1213
135
145
158
164
173
183
193
2015
219
223
234
246
251
267
273
283
294
3018
3129
3211
338
346
358
366
374
385
3918
4011
414
424
4312
4420
4512
4612
479
484
494
38.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.22
totalSentences50
uniqueOpeners11
81.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences41
matches
0"Then, a sound like a"
ratio0.024
83.41% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences41
matches
0"She froze, pressing her back"
1"She didn’t need to."
2"It stood just beyond the"
3"she said, voice steady despite"
4"It reached out, and the"
5"She didn’t look away."
6"She didn’t even flinch."
7"She *moved*—not fast, not fast"
8"it hissed, voice now a"
9"She *ran*, her boots pounding"
10"She didn’t look back."
11"She didn’t need to."
12"She stumbled through them, the"
13"She collapsed onto the grass,"
ratio0.341
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount39
totalSentences41
matches
0"The air in the grove"
1"Aurora stepped through the standing"
2"The moment her boots touched"
3"A whisper slithered through the"
4"She froze, pressing her back"
5"The pulse of the Heartstone"
6"The voice came from the"
7"Aurora didn’t turn."
8"She didn’t need to."
9"The shape moved in the"
10"It stood just beyond the"
11"she said, voice steady despite"
12"The thing tilted its head."
13"The sound was a rasp,"
14"Aurora exhaled sharply."
15"The light flickered."
16"The thing’s form shifted, the"
17"It reached out, and the"
18"Aurora’s breath hitched."
19"She didn’t look away."
ratio0.951
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences41
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The flashlight swung, the beam cutting through the gloom, and the thing recoiled, its form dissolving into something worse, something that writhed in the dark l…"
1"She *ran*, her boots pounding against the damp earth, the flashlight cutting through the trees like a blade."
2"Behind her, the grove exhaled—something wet and hungry, something that followed."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, voice steady despite the creeping dread"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"it hissed (hiss)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.4
64.6603%