"She was still in her Golden Empress delivery uniform— a faded red shirt emblazoned with the restaurant’s dragon logo, black leggings scuffed from bike rides through East London’s potholed streets— and she’d been kneeling on Eva’s cramped living room floor for an hour, organizing scrolls about supernatural rifts when the knock came."
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"His eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers, and a jolt went through her that she couldn’t blame on the rain."
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"It was one of the four languages he spoke fluently—French, English, Spanish, Arabic, his human mother having taught him each to hide his demon side from Marseille’s supernatural underworld— and the same phrase he’d used when he’d first approached her at Silas’ bar last fall, offering information about Evan’s whereabouts."
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"Rory’s arms crossed over her chest, her left wrist brushing against her elbow—she didn’t mean to rub the crescent scar there, but the movement was instinctive, a habit she’d picked up when she was nervous about Evan, about the delivery shifts that took her through dark London alleys, about the way Lucien’s eyes made her forget how to breathe."
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"The book’s cover was embossed with a symbol she recognized— the same symbol Lucien had carved into a wall in the warehouse last winter to warn off demon enforcers."
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"Lucien’s gaze followed hers, his lips twitching into the faintest of smirks— the same smirk he’d worn when he’d helped her hide from Evan’s goons in that rat-infested warehouse."
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"The movement made his slicked hair fall just a little over his forehead, and Rory had to fight the urge to push it back— the same urge she’d had when they’d huddled together in the warehouse, his breath warm against her neck as they listened to Evan’s goons search for them."
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"“Cats don’t hold grudges,” Rory said, but she knew it was a lie—she’d held a grudge against Lucien for six months, ever since he’d vanished from that warehouse without a word, leaving her to patch up a cut on her forearm with a scrap of his suit fabric."
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"Lucien straightened, his grip on the ivory cane tightening—she knew what was inside, the thin blade he’d shown her once when they’d been hiding from a pair of demon enforcers, the blade he’d sworn he only used to protect people he cared about."
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"“I didn’t come to see Eva,” he said, his amber eye flaring just a little— a sign that his demon side was stirring, a sign she’d learned to read when they’d worked together."
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"The scar there throbbed— a childhood accident with a shard of broken glass from her father’s barrister office, but now it felt like a warning."
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"The curry smell intensified, mixing with the scent of his cologne— sandalwood and smoke, a scent she’d dreamed about more than once."
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"As he spoke, he knocked over a small clay statue of a Welsh folklore creature— a gift from her mother, who’d taught her about it when she was a child to distract her from the pain of her wrist scar."
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"Rory glanced down— it was the scroll Eva had been looking for, covered in handwritten notes about Avarian rifts and the half-demons who could seal them."
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"Rory stared at him, her anger melting into something softer— something she’d tried to bury since he’d left."
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"The thin blade inside didn’t fall out— he’d locked it, she knew."
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"For the first time in her life, she felt like she was where she belonged— pressed against the half-demon fixer who’d broken her heart and mended it in the same breath, in a cramped flat above a curry house, with a tabby cat purring between them and a world of supernatural danger waiting just outside the door."
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"But there was no mistaking the slicked-back platinum blond hair, the tailored charcoal suit that looked like it had never seen a drop of water, the ivory-handle…"
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"As he spoke, he knocked over a small clay statue of a Welsh folklore creature— a gift from her mother, who’d taught her about it when she was a child to distrac…"
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"Rory glanced down— it was the scroll Eva had been looking for, covered in handwritten notes about Avarian rifts and the half-demons who could seal them."
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"The notes included a line about her mother’s folklore books, which made Rory’s chest tighten."
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"For the first time in her life, she felt like she was where she belonged— pressed against the half-demon fixer who’d broken her heart and mended it in the same …"