| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.84% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1092 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1092 | | totalAiIsms | 32 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "hulking" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "palpable" | | 4 | "throb" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "gloom" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "oppressive" | | 9 | "unwavering" | | 10 | "flicker" | | 11 | "rhythmic" | | 12 | "stomach" | | 13 | "perfect" | | 14 | "searing" | | 15 | "echoed" | | 16 | "resonated" | | 17 | "chilling" | | 18 | "flickered" | | 19 | "fragmented" | | 20 | "shimmered" | | 21 | "echoes" | | 22 | "whisper" | | 23 | "intensity" | | 24 | "sense of" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.06% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 98 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 28 | | totalWords | 1098 | | ratio | 0.026 | | matches | | 0 | "“Welcome, Keeper.”" | | 1 | "“We are echoes,”" | | 2 | "“Remnants of a forgotten bargain. You have been chosen to fulfill it.”" | | 3 | "“The bargain,”" | | 4 | "“requires a sacrifice. A heart offered willingly.”" | | 5 | "find" | | 6 | "become" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 11 | | wordCount | 1026 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.19 | | worstName | "Park" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Park" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 2 | | Richmond | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like Richmond Park, pressed in aro" | | 1 | "not quite" | | 2 | "seemed unnaturally still" | | 3 | "felt like something was actively trying" | | 4 | "as if struggling to escape its restraints" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1098 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 28.89 | | std | 16.92 | | cv | 0.586 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 85 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 36 | | 4 | 51 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 45 | | 8 | 40 | | 9 | 39 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 47 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 54 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 33 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 37 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 42 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 45 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 30 | | 29 | 38 | | 30 | 36 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 36 | | 34 | 30 | | 35 | 28 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 170 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 98 | | ratio | 0.122 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn’t expected this – not quite." | | 1 | "The scent intensified – the sweetness was now edged with decay." | | 2 | "It wasn’t simply darkness; it was a pressure, a weight pressing down on her chest." | | 3 | "The sounds started subtly – a rustle in the undergrowth that couldn’t be attributed to the wind, a distant, almost imperceptible sigh." | | 4 | "A flash of movement – a flicker of white at the edge of her vision." | | 5 | "It wasn’t just the temperature; it felt like something was actively trying to freeze her." | | 6 | "The scent of decay intensified, overlaid with a metallic tang – blood, perhaps." | | 7 | "Around his neck, a silver chain held a miniature crimson pendant – a perfect replica of her own." | | 8 | "A memory flickered – a brief, fragmented image of a face, a man with sharp features and cold, blue eyes." | | 9 | "As it did, more figures emerged from the shadows – dozens of them, all distorted and grotesque, clad in rags of grey and crimson." | | 10 | "She recognized the pendant on the altar – a miniature version of her own." | | 11 | "This wasn't just a replica; it was a key." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1009 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.03369672943508424 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013875123885034688 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 98 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 98 | | mean | 11.2 | | std | 5.26 | | cv | 0.47 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 44.90% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.336734693877551 | | totalSentences | 98 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the oppressive quiet and" | | 1 | "Just the trees, the shadows," | | 2 | "Then, a flicker of defiance." |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 20.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn’t expected this –" | | 1 | "She’d followed the insistent thrum" | | 2 | "It had led her here," | | 3 | "she muttered, her breath misting" | | 4 | "It wasn’t a frantic pulse" | | 5 | "It pointed deeper into the" | | 6 | "She pushed through the branches," | | 7 | "It wasn’t simply darkness; it" | | 8 | "She knelt, examining it, a" | | 9 | "she said, her voice swallowed" | | 10 | "She strained her ears, trying" | | 11 | "She continued forward, following the" | | 12 | "She spun around, heart hammering" | | 13 | "she told herself, her voice" | | 14 | "She focused on the pendant," | | 15 | "It wasn’t just the temperature;" | | 16 | "She rounded a bend in" | | 17 | "It was ancient, covered in" | | 18 | "It wasn’t immediately clear what" | | 19 | "It resembled a man, but" |
| | ratio | 0.5 | |
| 18.14% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 76 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted of rain" | | 1 | "Rory pulled her jacket tighter," | | 2 | "Richmond Park, or what felt" | | 3 | "The standing stones, hulking and" | | 4 | "She hadn’t expected this –" | | 5 | "She’d followed the insistent thrum" | | 6 | "It had led her here," | | 7 | "she muttered, her breath misting" | | 8 | "The pendant warmed, a palpable" | | 9 | "It wasn’t a frantic pulse" | | 10 | "It pointed deeper into the" | | 11 | "She pushed through the branches," | | 12 | "The scent intensified – the" | | 13 | "The shadows deepened, swallowing the" | | 14 | "It wasn’t simply darkness; it" | | 15 | "A single wildflower, a vibrant" | | 16 | "She knelt, examining it, a" | | 17 | "The pendant pulsed faster." | | 18 | "she said, her voice swallowed" | | 19 | "The sounds started subtly –" |
| | ratio | 0.884 | |
| 58.14% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Before her, in a small," |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 15.31% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory pulled her jacket tighter, the damp wool offering little comfort against the chill that seeped from the ground." | | 1 | "She’d followed the insistent thrum of the Heartstone Pendant, a subtle pulse against her skin that escalated into a demanding vibration as she’d crossed the bou…" | | 2 | "It pointed deeper into the grove, towards a thicket of thorny bushes that seemed unnaturally still." | | 3 | "She pushed through the branches, the thorns snagging at her jacket, drawing tiny beads of blood." | | 4 | "The sounds started subtly – a rustle in the undergrowth that couldn’t be attributed to the wind, a distant, almost imperceptible sigh." | | 5 | "The trees grew denser, their branches interlocking overhead, blotting out the last of the sky." | | 6 | "It was ancient, covered in lichen and moss, and stained with a dark, viscous substance that resembled dried blood." | | 7 | "The pendant flared, violently pulsing against her skin, a searing heat that threatened to overwhelm her." | | 8 | "The figure on the altar shifted, its limbs contorting further, as if struggling to escape its restraints." | | 9 | "She focused on the pendant, channeling its energy, willing it to protect her." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, her breath misting in the cold air" | | 1 | "She didn’t, but the word resonated with a chilling familiarity" | | 2 | "she demanded, her voice shaking" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 3 | "the voice continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.571 | | effectiveRatio | 0.571 | |