Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYA2E9DR4XJHK6FVJMQ13EK

Run Details

Duration:
17.6s
Cost:
$0.000160
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air tasted of rain and something else, something ancient and cloying, like overripe fruit left too long in the sun. Rory pulled her jacket tighter, the damp wool offering little comfort against the chill that seeped from the ground. Richmond Park, or what felt like Richmond Park, pressed in around her, a suffocating green bowl under a bruised, indigo sky. The standing stones, hulking and moss-slicked, marked the perimeter of The Fae Grove with an unsettling precision. She hadn’t expected this – not quite. She’d followed the insistent thrum of the Heartstone Pendant, a subtle pulse against her skin that escalated into a demanding vibration as she’d crossed the boundary. It had led her here, to this unsettling quiet, to this place where the trees seemed to watch. “Right,” she muttered, her breath misting in the cold air. “Let’s just… get this over with.” The pendant warmed, a palpable heat against her palm. It wasn’t a frantic pulse anymore, but a steady, insistent throb. It pointed deeper into the grove, towards a thicket of thorny bushes that seemed unnaturally still. She pushed through the branches, the thorns snagging at her jacket, drawing tiny beads of blood. The scent intensified – the sweetness was now edged with decay. The shadows deepened, swallowing the last vestiges of twilight. It wasn’t simply darkness; it was a pressure, a weight pressing down on her chest. A single wildflower, a vibrant violet against the deepening gloom, lay on the forest floor. She knelt, examining it, a desperate attempt to ground herself. The pendant pulsed faster. “Okay, this is weird,” she said, her voice swallowed by the stillness. “Really weird.” The sounds started subtly – a rustle in the undergrowth that couldn’t be attributed to the wind, a distant, almost imperceptible sigh. She strained her ears, trying to pinpoint the source. Nothing. Just the oppressive quiet and the growing certainty that she was being observed. She continued forward, following the unwavering pull of the pendant. The trees grew denser, their branches interlocking overhead, blotting out the last of the sky. The ground became uneven, slick with mud and something else she didn’t want to identify. A flash of movement – a flicker of white at the edge of her vision. She spun around, heart hammering against her ribs, but there was nothing. Just the trees, the shadows, and the unnerving feeling of being watched. “Just a shadow,” she told herself, her voice brittle. “It’s the light.” But the shadows seemed to lengthen and contort, taking on vaguely humanoid shapes. She focused on the pendant, on its rhythmic pulse, clinging to it as a lifeline. The air grew colder, radiating a bone-deep chill. It wasn’t just the temperature; it felt like something was actively trying to freeze her. The scent of decay intensified, overlaid with a metallic tang – blood, perhaps. She rounded a bend in the path and stopped, a knot of dread tightening in her stomach. Before her, in a small, circular clearing, was a stone altar. It was ancient, covered in lichen and moss, and stained with a dark, viscous substance that resembled dried blood. And on the altar lay a figure. It wasn’t immediately clear what it was. It resembled a man, but horribly distorted. His limbs were elongated and skeletal, his skin a sickly grey. His eyes were wide and vacant, staring up at the sky. Around his neck, a silver chain held a miniature crimson pendant – a perfect replica of her own. As she watched, the figure’s head slowly turned, its gaze fixing on hers. Its lips peeled back in a silent, grotesque smile. “Don’t…” she breathed, taking a step backward. The pendant flared, violently pulsing against her skin, a searing heat that threatened to overwhelm her. The figure on the altar shifted, its limbs contorting further, as if struggling to escape its restraints. A voice, thin and rasping, echoed in her mind. It wasn’t spoken aloud, but rather imprinted directly onto her consciousness. *“Welcome, Keeper.”* She didn’t know what ‘Keeper’ meant, but the word resonated with a chilling familiarity. A memory flickered – a brief, fragmented image of a face, a man with sharp features and cold, blue eyes. Evan. Her ex. “This isn’t –” she started, but the words died in her throat. The air shimmered, and the trees around the clearing began to sway violently, even though there was no wind. The standing stones pulsed with a faint, inner light. Time felt… wrong. She glanced at her watch, but the numbers blurred, shifting erratically. Panic constricted her chest. She turned to flee, but the path behind her had vanished, replaced by a wall of impenetrable thorns. The figure on the altar rose, a slow, agonizing movement. As it did, more figures emerged from the shadows – dozens of them, all distorted and grotesque, clad in rags of grey and crimson. They moved with a fluid, unnatural grace, surrounding her, closing in. “Who are you?” she demanded, her voice shaking. *“We are echoes,”* the voice replied, closer now, a whisper in her mind. *“Remnants of a forgotten bargain. You have been chosen to fulfill it.”* She recognized the pendant on the altar – a miniature version of her own. This wasn't just a replica; it was a key. A key to something vast and terrible. She fumbled for her keys, her hands slick with sweat. She needed to get out, to break this connection, to escape the Grove. But the figures kept closing in, their empty eyes fixed on her with unnerving intensity. A thorn pierced her arm, drawing a thin line of blood. It felt insignificant, yet it amplified the creeping sense of dread. A child’s laughter, high-pitched and chilling, drifted through the air. It didn’t belong here. She raised her hand, clutching the Heartstone Pendant. It burned against her palm, a desperate plea for help. *“The bargain,”* the voice continued, *“requires a sacrifice. A heart offered willingly.”* She glanced at the altar, at the grotesque figure mimicking her own form. The realization hit her with the force of a physical blow. She wasn’t here to *find* something. She was here to *become* something. The figures surged forward, their hands outstretched, skeletal fingers reaching for her. She closed her eyes, bracing herself for the inevitable. The cold intensified, wrapping around her like a shroud. Then, a flicker of defiance. She focused on the pendant, channeling its energy, willing it to protect her. It pulsed wildly, bathing the clearing in a crimson glow. A single word formed in her mind, a desperate, defiant cry. “No.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.84% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1092
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1092
totalAiIsms32
found
0
word"chill"
count2
1
word"hulking"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count3
3
word"palpable"
count1
4
word"throb"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"gloom"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count3
8
word"oppressive"
count1
9
word"unwavering"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count2
11
word"rhythmic"
count1
12
word"stomach"
count1
13
word"perfect"
count1
14
word"searing"
count1
15
word"echoed"
count1
16
word"resonated"
count1
17
word"chilling"
count2
18
word"flickered"
count1
19
word"fragmented"
count1
20
word"shimmered"
count1
21
word"echoes"
count1
22
word"whisper"
count1
23
word"intensity"
count1
24
word"sense of"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"hulking"
2"pulse"
3"palpable"
4"throb"
5"weight"
6"gloom"
7"pulsed"
8"oppressive"
9"unwavering"
10"flicker"
11"rhythmic"
12"stomach"
13"perfect"
14"searing"
15"echoed"
16"resonated"
17"chilling"
18"flickered"
19"fragmented"
20"shimmered"
21"echoes"
22"whisper"
23"intensity"
24"sense of"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
80.06% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences91
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans7
markdownWords28
totalWords1098
ratio0.026
matches
0"“Welcome, Keeper.”"
1"“We are echoes,”"
2"“Remnants of a forgotten bargain. You have been chosen to fulfill it.”"
3"“The bargain,”"
4"“requires a sacrifice. A heart offered willingly.”"
5"find"
6"become"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount1026
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.19
worstName"Park"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Park"
discoveredNames
Park2
Richmond2
Fae1
Grove2
Heartstone2
Pendant2
persons
0"Pendant"
places
0"Park"
1"Richmond"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"felt like Richmond Park, pressed in aro"
1"not quite"
2"seemed unnaturally still"
3"felt like something was actively trying"
4"as if struggling to escape its restraints"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1098
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean28.89
std16.92
cv0.586
sampleLengths
085
144
216
336
451
529
614
745
840
939
1012
1128
1236
1347
147
1554
1622
177
1833
1920
202
2137
2212
2342
2422
2545
268
2725
2830
2938
3036
3118
3212
3336
3430
3528
3611
371
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"were elongated"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs170
matches
0"was being"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences98
ratio0.122
matches
0"She hadn’t expected this – not quite."
1"The scent intensified – the sweetness was now edged with decay."
2"It wasn’t simply darkness; it was a pressure, a weight pressing down on her chest."
3"The sounds started subtly – a rustle in the undergrowth that couldn’t be attributed to the wind, a distant, almost imperceptible sigh."
4"A flash of movement – a flicker of white at the edge of her vision."
5"It wasn’t just the temperature; it felt like something was actively trying to freeze her."
6"The scent of decay intensified, overlaid with a metallic tang – blood, perhaps."
7"Around his neck, a silver chain held a miniature crimson pendant – a perfect replica of her own."
8"A memory flickered – a brief, fragmented image of a face, a man with sharp features and cold, blue eyes."
9"As it did, more figures emerged from the shadows – dozens of them, all distorted and grotesque, clad in rags of grey and crimson."
10"She recognized the pendant on the altar – a miniature version of her own."
11"This wasn't just a replica; it was a key."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1009
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.03369672943508424
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.013875123885034688
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean11.2
std5.26
cv0.47
sampleLengths
021
119
221
317
47
526
618
710
86
99
1011
1116
1216
1311
149
1515
1615
1710
184
1912
202
2122
229
231
2413
2510
2615
2715
2815
2912
3012
319
323
3313
3415
358
3615
3713
3817
3911
4019
417
427
437
4411
4511
4618
4713
489
497
44.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.336734693877551
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners33
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences86
matches
0"Just the oppressive quiet and"
1"Just the trees, the shadows,"
2"Then, a flicker of defiance."
ratio0.035
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences86
matches
0"She hadn’t expected this –"
1"She’d followed the insistent thrum"
2"It had led her here,"
3"she muttered, her breath misting"
4"It wasn’t a frantic pulse"
5"It pointed deeper into the"
6"She pushed through the branches,"
7"It wasn’t simply darkness; it"
8"She knelt, examining it, a"
9"she said, her voice swallowed"
10"She strained her ears, trying"
11"She continued forward, following the"
12"She spun around, heart hammering"
13"she told herself, her voice"
14"She focused on the pendant,"
15"It wasn’t just the temperature;"
16"She rounded a bend in"
17"It was ancient, covered in"
18"It wasn’t immediately clear what"
19"It resembled a man, but"
ratio0.5
18.14% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences86
matches
0"The air tasted of rain"
1"Rory pulled her jacket tighter,"
2"Richmond Park, or what felt"
3"The standing stones, hulking and"
4"She hadn’t expected this –"
5"She’d followed the insistent thrum"
6"It had led her here,"
7"she muttered, her breath misting"
8"The pendant warmed, a palpable"
9"It wasn’t a frantic pulse"
10"It pointed deeper into the"
11"She pushed through the branches,"
12"The scent intensified – the"
13"The shadows deepened, swallowing the"
14"It wasn’t simply darkness; it"
15"A single wildflower, a vibrant"
16"She knelt, examining it, a"
17"The pendant pulsed faster."
18"she said, her voice swallowed"
19"The sounds started subtly –"
ratio0.884
58.14% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"Before her, in a small,"
ratio0.012
15.31% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"Rory pulled her jacket tighter, the damp wool offering little comfort against the chill that seeped from the ground."
1"She’d followed the insistent thrum of the Heartstone Pendant, a subtle pulse against her skin that escalated into a demanding vibration as she’d crossed the bou…"
2"It pointed deeper into the grove, towards a thicket of thorny bushes that seemed unnaturally still."
3"She pushed through the branches, the thorns snagging at her jacket, drawing tiny beads of blood."
4"The sounds started subtly – a rustle in the undergrowth that couldn’t be attributed to the wind, a distant, almost imperceptible sigh."
5"The trees grew denser, their branches interlocking overhead, blotting out the last of the sky."
6"It was ancient, covered in lichen and moss, and stained with a dark, viscous substance that resembled dried blood."
7"The pendant flared, violently pulsing against her skin, a searing heat that threatened to overwhelm her."
8"The figure on the altar shifted, its limbs contorting further, as if struggling to escape its restraints."
9"She focused on the pendant, channeling its energy, willing it to protect her."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she muttered, her breath misting in the cold air"
1"She didn’t, but the word resonated with a chilling familiarity"
2"she demanded, her voice shaking"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
2"she demanded (demand)"
3"the voice continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.571
effectiveRatio0.571
70.9129%