| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She gestured vaguely [vaguely]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 47 | | tagDensity | 0.106 | | leniency | 0.213 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.043 | |
| 76.62% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1283 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1283 | | totalAiIsms | 31 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "unreadable" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "loomed" | | 5 | "sentinels" | | 6 | "etched" | | 7 | "flicked" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "quickened" | | 11 | "stomach" | | 12 | "gleaming" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 134 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 27 | | totalWords | 1280 | | ratio | 0.021 | | matches | | 0 | "\"This is not Earth.\"" | | 1 | "\"Hungry things?\"" | | 2 | "\"What is this place?\"" | | 3 | "\"And what do they feed on?\"" | | 4 | "\"What is happening?\"" | | 5 | "\"What do we do?\"" | | 6 | "\"What do we do?\"" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 45 | | wordCount | 1008 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.79 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Shade | 1 | | Aurora | 18 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Isolde | 16 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.607 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "smelled like damp earth and something swee" | | 1 | "as if testing the boundaries of the space" | | 2 | "runes that seemed to shift when she stared too long" | | 3 | "quite a smile" | | 4 | "symbols that seemed to shift when she looked at them" | | 5 | "as if dying" | | 6 | "as if dying" | | 7 | "as if dying" | | 8 | "as if dying" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1280 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 57 | | mean | 22.46 | | std | 18.34 | | cv | 0.816 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 60 | | 5 | 47 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 42 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 34 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 49 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 57 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 35 | | 18 | 65 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 36 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 47 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 53 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 44 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 52 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 46 | | 47 | 26 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 90.01% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "were blackened" | | 1 | "were blackened" | | 2 | "were blackened" | | 3 | "were blackened" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 187 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 134 | | ratio | 0.015 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn’t dare look at it too closely—she’d felt its heat before, a warning, a promise." | | 1 | "Aurora’s fingers twitched toward the dagger at her belt—the Fae-forged blade, cold and heavy against her thigh." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1011 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.036597428288822946 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010880316518298714 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 134 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 134 | | mean | 9.55 | | std | 6.48 | | cv | 0.679 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 34.33% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 21 | | diversityRatio | 0.1791044776119403 | | totalSentences | 134 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn’t dare look at" | | 1 | "She didn’t turn as they" | | 2 | "she said, her voice like" | | 3 | "She gestured vaguely toward the" | | 4 | "She hadn’t drawn it yet," | | 5 | "She stepped closer, her bare" | | 6 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 7 | "She turned, her silver hair" | | 8 | "She simply stepped forward, her" | | 9 | "She stepped forward, her boots" | | 10 | "She drew the dagger, the" |
| | ratio | 0.122 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 89 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled like damp" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter stepped forward, her" | | 2 | "The pendant at her throat" | | 3 | "She didn’t dare look at" | | 4 | "The Shade’s violet eyes flickered" | | 5 | "Aurora exhaled slowly, her breath" | | 6 | "The grove opened before them," | | 7 | "The ancient oaks loomed like" | | 8 | "Wildflowers bloomed in clusters, their" | | 9 | "The air hummed, a low" | | 10 | "Isolde stood at the center" | | 11 | "She didn’t turn as they" | | 12 | "she said, her voice like" | | 13 | "Isolde finally turned, her lips" | | 14 | "She gestured vaguely toward the" | | 15 | "Nyx stepped forward, their form" | | 16 | "Isolde’s gaze flicked to them," | | 17 | "Aurora’s fingers twitched toward the" | | 18 | "She hadn’t drawn it yet," | | 19 | "Isolde tilted her head, her" |
| | ratio | 0.989 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 38.69% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Beside her, Nyx moved like a shadow given form, their silhouette stretching and contracting as if testing the boundaries of the space." | | 1 | "Wildflowers bloomed in clusters, their petals shimmering with an inner light, pulsing in time with something unseen." | | 2 | "Isolde finally turned, her lips curling into something that wasn’t quite a smile." | | 3 | "The wildflowers here were blackened, their petals curling in on themselves, as if dying." | | 4 | "The wildflowers here were blackened, their petals curling in on themselves, as if dying." | | 5 | "The wildflowers here were blackened, their petals curling in on themselves, as if dying." | | 6 | "The wildflowers here were blackened, their petals curling in on themselves, as if dying." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped, her bare feet leaving no imprint in the moss" | | 1 | "She reached out, her fingers brushing the nearest standing stone" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 47 | | tagDensity | 0.021 | | leniency | 0.043 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |