Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYA2M8EBJZCTFV0GKQK5KXF

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Duration:
2m 8s
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$0.011569
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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
I yank Eva’s flat door open before the third deadbolt clicks fully free. I’ve ducked in to grab the crumpled delivery bags I left the night before, ones stuffed with Yu-Fei’s spare order slips and a half-eaten spring roll. Ptolemy’s tabby fur brushes my calf as I step back, and his purr dies the second my gaze locks on the man on the step. Tailored charcoal suit clinging to his broad shoulders, slicked platinum blond hair catching the faint neon glow from the curry house below, he holds an ivory-handled cane that taps a steady tick-tock against the worn brick step. His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—pin me to the door frame, and I freeze, hand still curled around the brass knob. Copper stings my nostrils, a faint tang I don’t recognize until I remember his half-demon lineage. The crescent scar on my left wrist throbs, a ghost of the night he pressed a cool salve to it after we fended off rogue imps outside Silas’ bar. He vanished before I could ask his name beyond Lucien, before I could admit the flutter in my chest when his fingers brushed my skin. "Why are you here?" "Eva sent for me." "Eva’s in Edinburgh for a research conference—you know that." I shift my weight, crinkling a rolled scroll under my shoe. The brittle paper cracks, and Ptolemy hisses, darting back into the flat. "Interesting. Someone’s been using her name to lure you out." His cane taps once more, harder this time, as he steps closer. The curry house’s spicy steam wraps around us, mixing with the copper tang to cloy at my throat. "You’re the one who vanished without a word. Why show up now?" I keep my voice steady—cool-headed, like my father taught me—even as my pulse races. "Circumstances demanded it." He nods at my left wrist, where my sleeve has slipped down to reveal the scar. "That accident didn’t stay a childhood memory, did it?" I step aside before he can press further, letting him cross the threshold into Eva’s flat. The move is calculated—cool-headed thinking to assess his intentions, not a surrender. The cramped one-bedroom swallows us whole, every surface stacked with Eva’s leather-bound books and rolled scrolls—some marked with faded red symbols I don’t recognize. A chipped ceramic mug of cold chai sits on the windowsill, its spiced scent drowned out by the curry below. Ptolemy hisses again from under the armchair, his tabby form huddled against a stack of astrology tomes. I glance at the kitchen drawer where Eva keeps a scuffed baseball bat, my fingers itching to grab it. "Evan’s back." He says the name like a curse, and my jaw tightens. My abusive ex left Cardiff the day I fled for London, but I’ve checked over my shoulder every time I deliver Yu-Fei’s dumplings since. "How do you know that?" "He made a deal." Lucien picks up a scroll from the nearest stack, his fingers brushing the faded symbols. The paper glows faintly, a pale blue light that makes his amber eye flicker. "With a minor demon from Avaros—my father’s realm." "I don’t care about your realm. I care about why you left before." I step closer, my delivery bag crinkling against my hip. "You bailed me out of the imp mess, then vanished. No note, no trace." "Telling you would have made you a target." He drops his hand, his jaw tightening again. "Evan’s deal gives the demon access to your location. He’s tracking you through the delivery routes—Yu-Fei’s restaurant is a weak point." "I can handle Evan." I grab the delivery bag’s spare order slip from my pocket, scribbling a note to Yu-Fei to cover my shifts. The pen skips over the paper, leaving smudged ink marks. "You can handle a human abuser. You can’t handle a demon that feeds on fear." He picks up his ivory cane, twirling it to reveal the thin blade hidden inside. The metal glints in the faint blue light from the scroll. "Then teach me." I set the note on the windowsill, next to the cold chai. "You’re a fixer. Information broker. Earn your keep." A loud clatter makes us both jump—Ptolemy has knocked over a stack of books, their leather covers thudding against the floor. The scroll in Lucien’s hand flares brighter, and he curses in French, a language I recognize from my father’s barrister colleagues. I glance at the window, where the neon curry house sign flickers on and off, casting strange shadows across the scrolls. The copper tang thickens, stinging my nostrils so sharply I blink back tears. "You’re running out of time." He tucks the scroll into his suit pocket, his blade sliding back into the cane. "The demon’s close. I can feel it—its presence hums in the walls." "I have a plan." I grab the scuffed baseball bat from the kitchen drawer, gripping it so tight my knuckles whiten. "We’ll lure Evan to Silas’ bar—his flat is above it, so he won’t suspect a trap. The bar’s back room has a metal door that locks from the inside. I can block the windows with beer kegs." "Cleaver." He nods, a faint smile tugging at his lips. "I knew your quick thinking would come in handy." "Don’t flatter yourself." I step toward the door, but he blocks my path. His hand brushes my arm again, and the crescent scar throbs once more. The heat from his suit seeps through my shirt, a warmth I didn’t realize I’d missed until now. "I’m not here to flatter you. I’m here to keep you alive." His voice is low, almost a whisper, and I can feel the weight of his secret—his demon side, the reason he vanished—hanging between us. "Then stop blocking the door." I stare him down, my cool-headed facade back in place. "We don’t have time to waste on half-truths." He steps aside, and I make for the threshold, but a sudden shift in the air makes me pause. The copper tang bursts into a roar, stinging my throat so sharply I cough. The scrolls on the table flare neon blue, their symbols swirling into a chaotic pattern. Ptolemy screeches, darting out of the flat through the open door. Before I can react, a deafening crash splits the air. The window shatters inward, glass raining down on the scrolls and books. A clawed hand—black, scaled, oozing a viscous green liquid—snakes through the gap, grabbing the edge of the windowsill. The liquid burns through a nearby scroll, leaving a smoldering hole in its paper. Lucien’s demon side flickers to life: his black eye glows brighter, his fingernails lengthen into sharp claws, and a low growl rumbles in his chest. I swing the baseball bat at the clawed hand, but it yanks back just in time, leaving deep scratches in the windowsill. Another hand pushes through the gap, followed by a scaled arm that bulges with sinew, and I realize the demon is bigger than I thought—bigger than the imps we fended off before. Lucien raises his cane, the thin blade sliding free again, and charges toward the window.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.621
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1215
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count2
highlights
0"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1215
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"calculated"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"facade"
count1
7
word"chaotic"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"pulse"
2"calculated"
3"flicker"
4"warmth"
5"whisper"
6"facade"
7"chaotic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences55
filterMatches
0"realize"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences67
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1184
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount930
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.54
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Yu-Fei3
Lucien5
Ptolemy5
Cardiff1
London1
French1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Lucien"
3"Ptolemy"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
2"French"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1184
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs10
mean118.4
std68.93
cv0.582
sampleLengths
013
1109
270
3134
4108
5255
676
7212
859
9148
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs157
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences67
ratio0.119
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—pin me to the door frame, and I freeze, hand still curled around the brass knob."
1"\"You’re the one who vanished without a word. Why show up now?\" I keep my voice steady—cool-headed, like my father taught me—even as my pulse races."
2"The move is calculated—cool-headed thinking to assess his intentions, not a surrender."
3"The cramped one-bedroom swallows us whole, every surface stacked with Eva’s leather-bound books and rolled scrolls—some marked with faded red symbols I don’t recognize."
4"A loud clatter makes us both jump—Ptolemy has knocked over a stack of books, their leather covers thudding against the floor."
5"\"I’m not here to flatter you. I’m here to keep you alive.\" His voice is low, almost a whisper, and I can feel the weight of his secret—his demon side, the reason he vanished—hanging between us."
6"A clawed hand—black, scaled, oozing a viscous green liquid—snakes through the gap, grabbing the edge of the windowsill."
7"Another hand pushes through the gap, followed by a scaled arm that bulges with sinew, and I realize the demon is bigger than I thought—bigger than the imps we fended off before."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount610
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.02622950819672131
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.003278688524590164
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences67
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences67
mean17.67
std7.44
cv0.421
sampleLengths
013
126
225
337
421
516
629
725
84
94
1020
1112
1222
1318
1426
1519
169
1716
1812
1924
2020
2117
2219
2313
2424
255
2619
2714
288
2923
3014
3116
3221
3324
3410
3530
3611
3715
388
3921
4021
4121
4213
4320
4412
4521
4637
4710
489
4913
58.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3880597014925373
totalSentences67
uniqueOpeners26
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.64% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences55
matches
0"I yank Eva’s flat door"
1"I’ve ducked in to grab"
2"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
3"He vanished before I could"
4"I shift my weight, crinkling"
5"His cane taps once more,"
6"I keep my voice steady—cool—headed,"
7"He nods at my left"
8"I step aside before he"
9"I glance at the kitchen"
10"He says the name like"
11"My abusive ex left Cardiff"
12"I step closer, my delivery"
13"He drops his hand, his"
14"I grab the delivery bag’s"
15"He picks up his ivory"
16"I set the note on"
17"I glance at the window,"
18"He tucks the scroll into"
19"I grab the scuffed baseball"
ratio0.491
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences55
matches
0"I yank Eva’s flat door"
1"I’ve ducked in to grab"
2"Ptolemy’s tabby fur brushes my"
3"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
4"Copper stings my nostrils, a"
5"The crescent scar on my"
6"He vanished before I could"
7"I shift my weight, crinkling"
8"The brittle paper cracks, and"
9"His cane taps once more,"
10"The curry house’s spicy steam"
11"I keep my voice steady—cool—headed,"
12"He nods at my left"
13"I step aside before he"
14"The move is calculated—cool—headed thinking"
15"The cramped one-bedroom swallows us"
16"A chipped ceramic mug of"
17"Ptolemy hisses again from under"
18"I glance at the kitchen"
19"He says the name like"
ratio0.964
90.91% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences55
matches
0"Before I can react, a"
ratio0.018
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Tailored charcoal suit clinging to his broad shoulders, slicked platinum blond hair catching the faint neon glow from the curry house below, he holds an ivory-h…"
1"The paper glows faintly, a pale blue light that makes his amber eye flicker."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Lucien picks up, his fingers brushing the faded symbols"
1"I step, my delivery bag crinkling against my hip"
2"He drops, his jaw tightening again"
3"He tucks, his blade sliding back into the cane"
4"He nods, a faint smile tugging at his lips"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.034
leniency0.069
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.9328%