Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYA2V6B4Z825N23GF9APM3X

Run Details

Duration:
13.3s
Cost:
$0.000477
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door swung open before the second knock even landed, as if Rory had been hovering just behind it, waiting. She stood there in the dim glow of the hallway light, her bright blue eyes wide, the crescent scar on her wrist catching the faint illumination like a sliver of moon. For a heartbeat, neither of them moved. Then Lucien stepped forward, his polished black shoe scuffing against the threadbare rug. "Rory," he said, his voice smooth, almost amused, though his heterochromatic gaze—one amber, one black—burned with something sharper. "You always were quick to answer." She didn’t invite him in. Didn’t have to. He’d already crossed the threshold, his tailored charcoal suit brushing against the doorframe like a shadow given form. The scent of bergamot and something darker, something *demonic*, clung to him, the same way it always had. She should’ve slammed the door. Should’ve told him to leave, to go back to whatever corner of London he’d slithered out of this time. But her fingers curled around the edge of the frame instead, knuckles white. The flat was exactly as he remembered—cluttered, alive. Books stacked precariously on every surface, scrolls pinned to the walls with bent paper clips, the air thick with the scent of old paper and something faintly metallic, like the ghost of Eva’s incense. Ptolemy, the tabby, wound between his ankles with deliberate slowness, tail flicking. He didn’t even glance up. Rory exhaled through her nose, a sound that was almost a laugh. "You’re lucky he hasn’t clawed you yet." Lucien smirked, adjusting the grip on his cane. "I’ve survived worse." She should’ve lied. Should’ve said she didn’t know what he was talking about. But the words died in her throat because, of course, she did. She *always* knew. That was the problem. The silence stretched, thick and brittle, until she finally stepped aside, just enough for him to pass. "You’re not here for small talk." "No." His voice was a velvet rasp. "I’m not." The flat was small, but it had always felt bigger when she was alone. Now, with him filling the space—his presence like a physical weight—she could feel the walls pressing in. She moved to the kitchenette, where a chipped mug sat half-full of cold tea, and busied herself with rinsing it out. The tap squeaked. Lucien leaned against the doorframe, cane propped beside him, fingers tapping against the ivory handle. "You look well." She shot him a glance over her shoulder. "You look like you’ve been dragged through hell and back." His lips quirked. "Flatterer." She turned fully then, arms crossed. "What do you want, Lucien?" He pushed off the frame, stepping closer. Too close. The heat of him rolled off in waves, something primal and dangerous. "I need your help." Rory stiffened. "With what?" His gaze flicked to the scar on her wrist—the one she’d gotten when she was sixteen, falling off the roof of her childhood home, trying to prove she wasn’t afraid of heights. He’d been there. Had caught her before she hit the ground. But he hadn’t stopped her from jumping in the first place. She yanked her hand back, hiding it behind her. "Don’t." Lucien didn’t flinch. "I’m not here to dredge up the past, Rory. Not tonight." "Not tonight?" She scoffed, turning away. "When, then? When it’s convenient?" The air between them crackled, charged with something she couldn’t name. Not anger. Not regret. Something older. Something that had always been there, simmering just beneath the surface. Lucien exhaled, slow and deliberate. "There’s a job. Dangerous. And I need someone who can think on their feet." She whirled back around. "You know I don’t do jobs." "Not anymore." His voice was low, almost a growl. "But you used to." She swallowed. Used to. Before Evan. Before the night she’d looked over her shoulder and seen Lucien’s face in the crowd, seen the way he’d *watched* her walk away. Seen the way he’d let her. Ptolemy chose that moment to leap onto the counter, landing with a thud beside her. She grabbed his scruff, fingers tangling in his fur. "I don’t work for you anymore." Lucien’s jaw tightened. "You never did." The words hit like a blade. Because it was true. She’d never *worked* for him. Not really. She’d been his equal, his partner in the few months they’d spent tangled together—before he’d walked away, before she’d run. She set the cat down and turned her back on him, staring out the grimy window at the neon glow of Brick Lane. "What’s the job?" He didn’t answer right away. When he finally spoke, his voice was softer. "A demon. Low-level, but dangerous. It’s been causing problems in the underworld. Stealing, killing. And it’s getting bolder." Rory’s fingers twitched. She missed the rush. Missed the *thrill* of it. But she also missed the way Lucien’s hands had felt on her skin, the way his voice had sounded when he was laughing, when he was *hers*. She didn’t turn around. "Why me?" "Because you’re the only one I trust." The words hung between them, heavy and true. And that was the problem. She *had* trusted him. Once. She finally looked at him, really looked. His platinum hair was slightly disheveled, like he’d been running his hands through it. His suit was immaculate, but his eyes—*god*, his eyes—were tired. "You’re lying." "No." She crossed her arms. "You don’t trust anyone." A muscle in his jaw flickered. "I trust you." The air left her lungs in a rush. She wanted to believe him. Wanted to throw herself into the work, into the danger, into *him*. But the scars—physical and otherwise—ran too deep. Ptolemy meowed, rubbing against her leg. She crouched, scratching behind his ears. "What’s the pay?" Lucien’s lips twitched. "You’ve always been practical." She glared up at him. "I have to be." He reached into his jacket, pulling out a small velvet pouch. The gold clinked as he tossed it onto the counter. "Enough to make it worth your time." She didn’t touch it. "And if I say no?" His gaze darkened. "Then I’ll find someone else." She stood slowly, meeting his stare. "You won’t." For a long moment, neither of them moved. Then, with a sharp exhale, she reached for the pouch. Her fingers brushed his as she took it, and the spark that arced between them was electric. Lucien didn’t pull away. "When?" She weighed the pouch in her hand, the gold heavy and real. "Tomorrow night. Midnight. The usual place." His eyes gleamed. "The usual place." She turned back to the window, but this time, she didn’t look out. She looked at the reflection of his face in the glass—sharp, beautiful, *hers*—and let herself remember. And for the first time in years, she let herself hope.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.049
leniency0.098
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1142
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.22% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1142
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count2
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"could feel"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"charged"
count1
6
word"simmering"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"electric"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"velvet"
2"weight"
3"could feel"
4"flicked"
5"charged"
6"simmering"
7"flickered"
8"electric"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences104
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences141
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans10
markdownWords10
totalWords1129
ratio0.009
matches
0"demonic"
1"always"
2"watched"
3"worked"
4"thrill"
5"hers"
6"had"
7"god"
8"him"
9"hers"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.03% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount944
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.06
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory4
Lucien10
London1
Eva1
Evan1
Brick1
Lane1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Eva"
3"Evan"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"London"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore0.97
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1129
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences141
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean21.71
std16.9
cv0.778
sampleLengths
058
137
281
359
419
511
632
723
89
955
1018
1118
124
1311
1425
154
1654
1710
1814
1911
2028
2119
2210
2313
2435
2530
266
2737
2826
2931
3039
316
327
3318
3433
351
368
379
3832
3915
407
419
4228
439
448
458
4635
475
4818
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs184
matches
0"was talking"
1"was laughing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences141
ratio0.057
matches
0"\"Rory,\" he said, his voice smooth, almost amused, though his heterochromatic gaze—one amber, one black—burned with something sharper."
1"The flat was exactly as he remembered—cluttered, alive."
2"Now, with him filling the space—his presence like a physical weight—she could feel the walls pressing in."
3"His gaze flicked to the scar on her wrist—the one she’d gotten when she was sixteen, falling off the roof of her childhood home, trying to prove she wasn’t afraid of heights."
4"She’d been his equal, his partner in the few months they’d spent tangled together—before he’d walked away, before she’d run."
5"His suit was immaculate, but his eyes—*god*, his eyes—were tired."
6"But the scars—physical and otherwise—ran too deep."
7"She looked at the reflection of his face in the glass—sharp, beautiful, *hers*—and let herself remember."
93.81% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount956
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.04707112970711297
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.011506276150627616
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences141
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences141
mean8.01
std6.5
cv0.812
sampleLengths
020
131
27
313
418
56
65
73
818
918
105
1119
1213
138
1434
1512
165
1712
187
198
203
213
2210
2312
243
254
2617
276
287
292
3014
3117
3221
333
3415
353
368
3710
383
391
406
415
427
432
4412
454
462
472
4832
493
45.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.2907801418439716
totalSentences141
uniqueOpeners41
70.92% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences94
matches
0"Then Lucien stepped forward, his"
1"Then, with a sharp exhale,"
ratio0.021
32.77% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences94
matches
0"She stood there in the"
1"he said, his voice smooth,"
2"She didn’t invite him in."
3"He’d already crossed the threshold,"
4"She should’ve slammed the door."
5"He didn’t even glance up."
6"She should’ve lied."
7"She *always* knew."
8"His voice was a velvet"
9"She moved to the kitchenette,"
10"She shot him a glance"
11"His lips quirked."
12"She turned fully then, arms"
13"He pushed off the frame,"
14"His gaze flicked to the"
15"He’d been there."
16"She yanked her hand back,"
17"She scoffed, turning away"
18"She whirled back around."
19"His voice was low, almost"
ratio0.468
77.02% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences94
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"She stood there in the"
2"he said, his voice smooth,"
3"She didn’t invite him in."
4"He’d already crossed the threshold,"
5"The scent of bergamot and"
6"She should’ve slammed the door."
7"The flat was exactly as"
8"Books stacked precariously on every"
9"Ptolemy, the tabby, wound between"
10"He didn’t even glance up."
11"Rory exhaled through her nose,"
12"Lucien smirked, adjusting the grip"
13"She should’ve lied."
14"She *always* knew."
15"That was the problem."
16"The silence stretched, thick and"
17"His voice was a velvet"
18"The flat was small, but"
19"She moved to the kitchenette,"
ratio0.766
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences94
matches
0"Now, with him filling the"
1"Before the night she’d looked"
2"Because it was true."
ratio0.032
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The door swung open before the second knock even landed, as if Rory had been hovering just behind it, waiting."
1"Something that had always been there, simmering just beneath the surface."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.024
leniency0.049
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.5335%