| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 83.90% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 621 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 621 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "flicker" | | 8 | "trembled" | | 9 | "searing" | | 10 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 97 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 11 | | markdownWords | 14 | | totalWords | 612 | | ratio | 0.023 | | matches | | 0 | "wrong" | | 1 | "twitched" | | 2 | "something" | | 3 | "wet" | | 4 | "Wrong." | | 5 | "think" | | 6 | "You shouldn’t be here." | | 7 | "around" | | 8 | "wrong" | | 9 | "else" | | 10 | "click" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 42.03% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 14 | | wordCount | 602 | | uniqueNames | 2 | | maxNameDensity | 2.16 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.42 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 38.89% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "smelled like iron now, like old blood" | | 1 | "not quite" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 612 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 19.13 | | std | 18.3 | | cv | 0.957 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 62 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 74 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 34 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 38 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 32 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 48 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 5 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 97 | | ratio | 0.093 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant at her throat—given to her by a stranger in a back alley, its weight unfamiliar—pulsed faintly, warm against her skin." | | 1 | "But the way the shadows pooled at her feet, the way the trees seemed to lean in just a little too close—it made her pulse jump." | | 2 | "Just the usual—feral cats, maybe." | | 3 | "Or—" | | 4 | "The shadow stretched, elongating, until it stood before her—a figure, but not quite." | | 5 | "Its face—if it had one—was smooth, featureless." | | 6 | "A hand—cold, skeletal—closed around her ankle." | | 7 | "And then—" | | 8 | "But the pendant—" |
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| 89.17% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 611 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.05237315875613748 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004909983633387889 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 97 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 97 | | mean | 6.31 | | std | 4.84 | | cv | 0.768 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 39.69% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.26804123711340205 | | totalSentences | 97 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 86.58% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the usual—feral cats, maybe." | | 1 | "Just the grove, breathing." |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 95.32% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "She ignored it." | | 1 | "They didn’t sway with the" | | 2 | "They *twitched*, as if something" | | 3 | "She’d come here for the" | | 4 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 5 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 6 | "It slithered through the air," | | 7 | "She took a step back," | | 8 | "She chose left." | | 9 | "She pressed her back against" | | 10 | "She didn’t dare look at" | | 11 | "*You shouldn’t be here.*" | | 12 | "It was *around* her, wrapping" | | 13 | "She swallowed hard, forcing her" | | 14 | "She took a step forward." | | 15 | "Its limbs were too long," | | 16 | "It tilted its head." | | 17 | "Its face—if it had one—was" | | 18 | "She clutched the pendant, her" | | 19 | "it said, its voice a" |
| | ratio | 0.312 | |
| 11.95% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled of damp" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter stepped past the" | | 2 | "The pendant at her throat—given" | | 3 | "She ignored it." | | 4 | "The grove swallowed her whole." | | 5 | "Wildflowers, their petals too bright," | | 6 | "They didn’t sway with the" | | 7 | "They *twitched*, as if something" | | 8 | "Aurora’s fingers tightened around the" | | 9 | "She’d come here for the" | | 10 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 11 | "The grove wasn’t supposed to" | | 12 | "Aurora froze, her breath shallow." | | 13 | "The bag dug into her" | | 14 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 15 | "It slithered through the air," | | 16 | "Aurora’s stomach twisted." | | 17 | "She took a step back," | | 18 | "The pendant burned against her" | | 19 | "The path forked ahead." |
| | ratio | 0.896 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 16 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled of damp earth and something older, something that clung to the back of her throat like rust." | | 1 | "Aurora Carter stepped past the gnarled oak standing stones, her boots sinking slightly into the moss beneath." | | 2 | "She took a step back, then another, her boots crunching over dead leaves that hadn’t fallen yet." | | 3 | "Its limbs were too long, its joints bending in ways that made her stomach clench." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "it said, its voice a chorus of whispers" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |