Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYA318TXVS3SJXWQYNDT90S

Run Details

Duration:
6.8s
Cost:
$0.000273
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air smelled of damp earth and something older, something that clung to the back of her throat like rust. Aurora Carter stepped past the gnarled oak standing stones, her boots sinking slightly into the moss beneath. The pendant at her throat—given to her by a stranger in a back alley, its weight unfamiliar—pulsed faintly, warm against her skin. She ignored it. The grove swallowed her whole. Wildflowers, their petals too bright, too *wrong*, lined the path. They didn’t sway with the wind. They *twitched*, as if something beneath the soil had just shifted. Aurora’s fingers tightened around the delivery bag slung over her shoulder. She’d come here for the package. A job. Nothing more. But the way the shadows pooled at her feet, the way the trees seemed to lean in just a little too close—it made her pulse jump. She shouldn’t have come. The grove wasn’t supposed to be this way. A rustle. Not from the wind. From *something*. Aurora froze, her breath shallow. The bag dug into her ribs. She turned slowly, scanning the undergrowth. Nothing. Just the usual—feral cats, maybe. Or foxes. Or— A whisper. It slithered through the air, too low to be human. Too *wet*. Aurora’s stomach twisted. She took a step back, then another, her boots crunching over dead leaves that hadn’t fallen yet. The pendant burned against her collarbone. *Wrong.* The path forked ahead. Left or right. She chose left. The wrongness coiled tighter around her ribs. A sound like tearing fabric. Then silence. Aurora’s breath hitched. She pressed her back against the trunk of an oak, its bark smooth despite the centuries it must have seen. The pendant pulsed again, brighter this time. She didn’t dare look at it. Didn’t dare *think* about it. Something moved at the edge of her vision. A flicker of movement, too quick to be real. Aurora’s fingers curled into the bark. The air smelled like iron now, like old blood. *You shouldn’t be here.* The voice wasn’t in her head. It was *around* her, wrapping itself around her skull like a noose. Aurora’s skin prickled. She swallowed hard, forcing her voice steady. “Who’s there?” No answer. Just the grove, breathing. She took a step forward. Then another. The path narrowed. The trees pressed closer. The pendant burned hot against her skin. A shadow detached itself from the trunk of a tree. Too tall. Too *wrong*. Aurora’s breath came in ragged gasps. The shadow stretched, elongating, until it stood before her—a figure, but not quite. Its limbs were too long, its joints bending in ways that made her stomach clench. It tilted its head. Its face—if it had one—was smooth, featureless. Like polished stone. Aurora’s fingers trembled. She clutched the pendant, her knuckles white. The figure took a step forward. The air grew thick, suffocating. “You don’t belong here,” it said, its voice a chorus of whispers. Aurora’s pulse roared in her ears. She turned, running. Branches lashed at her arms, but she didn’t stop. The path twisted, the trees closing in. The pendant burned like fire. She couldn’t outrun this. A hand—cold, skeletal—closed around her ankle. Aurora screamed, twisting, but the grip didn’t loosen. The figure dragged her back, its breath a wet rasp against her ear. “You shouldn’t have come,” it hissed. Aurora’s vision blurred. The pendant pulsed, searing against her skin. She could feel it now, the pull of something *else*, something waiting just beyond the grove. And then— A sound. A *click*. The figure stilled. The grip on her ankle loosened. Aurora gasped, stumbling back, her breath ragged. The figure was gone. The grove was silent. But the pendant— It pulsed brighter than ever.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount621
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount621
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count4
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count2
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"trembled"
count1
9
word"searing"
count1
10
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"pulsed"
2"pulse"
3"scanning"
4"whisper"
5"stomach"
6"silence"
7"flicker"
8"trembled"
9"searing"
10"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans11
markdownWords14
totalWords612
ratio0.023
matches
0"wrong"
1"twitched"
2"something"
3"wet"
4"Wrong."
5"think"
6"You shouldn’t be here."
7"around"
8"wrong"
9"else"
10"click"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
42.03% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount602
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity2.16
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Aurora13
persons
0"Carter"
1"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.42
windowScore0.667
38.89% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"smelled like iron now, like old blood"
1"not quite"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount612
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean19.13
std18.3
cv0.957
sampleLengths
062
15
274
34
48
534
62
738
81
917
107
1141
1232
134
1428
152
166
1721
1848
1914
2021
2112
2230
234
2427
256
2626
272
284
2924
303
315
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs103
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences97
ratio0.093
matches
0"The pendant at her throat—given to her by a stranger in a back alley, its weight unfamiliar—pulsed faintly, warm against her skin."
1"But the way the shadows pooled at her feet, the way the trees seemed to lean in just a little too close—it made her pulse jump."
2"Just the usual—feral cats, maybe."
3"Or—"
4"The shadow stretched, elongating, until it stood before her—a figure, but not quite."
5"Its face—if it had one—was smooth, featureless."
6"A hand—cold, skeletal—closed around her ankle."
7"And then—"
8"But the pendant—"
89.17% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount611
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.05237315875613748
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004909983633387889
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean6.31
std4.84
cv0.768
sampleLengths
020
117
222
33
45
510
66
711
811
96
102
112
1226
134
148
152
164
172
185
196
206
211
225
232
241
252
2610
272
283
2917
306
311
324
333
343
357
365
372
383
3920
407
416
425
438
449
456
469
474
486
4912
39.69% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.26804123711340205
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners26
86.58% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences77
matches
0"Just the usual—feral cats, maybe."
1"Just the grove, breathing."
ratio0.026
95.32% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences77
matches
0"She ignored it."
1"They didn’t sway with the"
2"They *twitched*, as if something"
3"She’d come here for the"
4"She shouldn’t have come."
5"She turned slowly, scanning the"
6"It slithered through the air,"
7"She took a step back,"
8"She chose left."
9"She pressed her back against"
10"She didn’t dare look at"
11"*You shouldn’t be here.*"
12"It was *around* her, wrapping"
13"She swallowed hard, forcing her"
14"She took a step forward."
15"Its limbs were too long,"
16"It tilted its head."
17"Its face—if it had one—was"
18"She clutched the pendant, her"
19"it said, its voice a"
ratio0.312
11.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences77
matches
0"The air smelled of damp"
1"Aurora Carter stepped past the"
2"The pendant at her throat—given"
3"She ignored it."
4"The grove swallowed her whole."
5"Wildflowers, their petals too bright,"
6"They didn’t sway with the"
7"They *twitched*, as if something"
8"Aurora’s fingers tightened around the"
9"She’d come here for the"
10"She shouldn’t have come."
11"The grove wasn’t supposed to"
12"Aurora froze, her breath shallow."
13"The bag dug into her"
14"She turned slowly, scanning the"
15"It slithered through the air,"
16"Aurora’s stomach twisted."
17"She took a step back,"
18"The pendant burned against her"
19"The path forked ahead."
ratio0.896
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences16
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The air smelled of damp earth and something older, something that clung to the back of her throat like rust."
1"Aurora Carter stepped past the gnarled oak standing stones, her boots sinking slightly into the moss beneath."
2"She took a step back, then another, her boots crunching over dead leaves that hadn’t fallen yet."
3"Its limbs were too long, its joints bending in ways that made her stomach clench."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"it said, its voice a chorus of whispers"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"it hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
69.5843%