Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYA33CC85VF8NP71FYJ9TB2

Run Details

Duration:
3m 13s
Cost:
$0.017809
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory hefted the stack of bamboo steamers onto her hip, their wicker edges digging into the soft flesh above her waist. The Golden Empress logo blazed red across her jacket’s back as she pushed through The Raven’s Nest’s creaky door, the sound of Soho’s traffic fading into a distant hum behind her. The green neon sign’s glow bleached the edge of her sleeve before the dim interior swallowed it—thick, smoke-tinged air curling around her like a forgotten blanket. Old maps crinkled at the corners of the walls, their faded ink marking trade routes and shadowed alleyways from cities she’d never heard of; black-and-white photos of shadowed figures stared down from above the mahogany bar, their faces half-obscured by fedoras and cigarette smoke. She scanned the room for the contact Yu-Fei had named—some bloke with a silver signet ring, a slight limp—when a limping step scraped the floor behind her, the sound sharp enough to cut through the low murmur of a jukebox playing old jazz. “Cardiff accent’s still thick enough to stir into a pint of Guinness, even after all these years.” Rory jolted. The steamers shifted, their contents clinking softly inside; she clamped a hand to their tops to keep them from toppling, her fingers brushing the warm bamboo. She turned, her straight shoulder-length black hair swinging into her face, and froze. A man with grey-streaked auburn hair and a neatly trimmed matching beard leaned against the bar’s edge, his elbows propped on the mahogany surface. His left leg angled slightly inward, a faint furrow in his brow as he studied her, his hazel eyes narrowing like he was trying to piece together a broken map. A silver signet ring glinted on his right hand, its surface etched with a raven’s head—she recognized it immediately, the same ring he’d worn when he’d sat on her father’s porch in Cardiff, drinking whisky and talking about secret missions. “Silas Blackwood?” He pushed off the bar, his weight shifting to his right leg as he crossed the room, each step a quiet declaration of the knee injury he carried—she remembered him telling her once, when she was ten, that he’d gotten it jumping from a rooftop in Prague. He stopped a foot away, his hazel eyes locking on her bright blue ones, and she could see the faint lines around his eyes that hadn’t been there when they’d last met. “Last I saw you, you were ten years old, climbing your father’s bookcase to steal his barrister’s wig. You landed on a brass paperweight—cut your left wrist bad enough to need three stitches. Your mother cried for an hour; your father yelled for two. I gave you a lollipop shaped like a raven to calm you down.” Rory’s throat tightened, a knot forming that she couldn’t swallow. She set the steamers down on a nearby oak table, her left wrist brushing the wood—she tugged her jacket’s sleeve down to cover the crescent scar, the fabric soft against the still-throbbing skin. That memory was buried under layers of Evan’s shouts, of Cardiff University’s sterile lecture halls, of the train ride to London that had felt like a jailbreak, her backpack slung over her shoulder and her phone’s screen cracked beyond repair. “Reckless is what he calls running from a man who broke my phone so I couldn’t call for help. Refusing pre-law is what he calls choosing to breathe instead of living his dream. He never told you about Evan, did he?” Silas’s face fell, his jaw tightening as he processed her words. He turned to the bar, his limp scraping the floor as he fetched a glass of cold water, his ring clinking against the glass as he picked it up. He set it in front of her, the water’s ripples catching the table lamp’s light. “He said you’d grown distant. Refused to come to family dinners. He didn’t mention a man.” Rory stared at the water’s ripples, her eyes tracing the circles as they faded into the glass. She’d forgotten how Silas used to listen—how he’d sat with her for an hour after her mother’s first breakdown, not saying a word but handing her a lollipop every time she started to cry. She’d forgotten how he’d defended her when her father had yelled at her for painting the living room walls blue, telling him that she was just expressing herself. “I lived above a kebab shop for two months after I got to London. The floor was sticky, the walls were covered in mold, and I could hear the neighbors fighting every night. Eva—my childhood friend—found me, got me the delivery job at Golden Empress. I just found a flat last week—above some bar I haven’t checked out yet. The landlord didn’t give his name.” Silas froze, his hazel eyes widening as he processed her words. He turned back to her, his left leg shifting to take less weight, and he could feel the faint throb in his knee that always flared up when he was surprised. “The flat above The Raven’s Nest. It’s been empty for six months. I put the ad up last Tuesday, didn’t put my name on it—didn’t want old MI6 contacts showing up at my door. The rent’s half what any other spot in Soho charges, no credit check, no questions asked.” Rory blinked, her bright blue eyes widening as she stared at him. She thought of the kebab shop’s sticky floors, of Evan’s face appearing in the window one night, of the way she’d hidden in a closet for three hours until he left. She thought of the old stories Silas had told her—of outsmarting guards, of finding hidden rooms, of choosing your own path—and she could feel the faint flicker of hope that she hadn’t felt in months. “Why are you doing this?” Silas gestured to her sleeve, his ring glinting in the table lamp’s light. He could see the faint outline of the scar under the fabric, the same scar he’d helped her clean when she was ten. “I saw the scar. You’re still the kid who climbed bookcases to take back what’s hers. I’m still the man who should have been there to catch her when she fell. After Prague, I shut myself off from most of my old contacts—your father included. I thought I was protecting them from the mess I’d made. But I was wrong. I should have checked in. I should have been there for you when you needed it.” Rory pulled her sleeve up, the fabric sliding down her arm to reveal the crescent scar, which glinted in the table lamp’s light. She picked up the glass of water, took a sip, the cool liquid soothing her parched throat. She thought of the hidden back room Silas had mentioned, of the old maps and files, of the way he’d always been able to see the parts of her that her parents couldn’t. “I need to drop these steamers off to your contact. Yu-Fei said he’d be here at seven. Said you ordered pork dumplings for a meeting.” Silas’s jaw tightened, his hazel eyes narrowing as he thought of the clandestine meeting in the hidden back room—his old MI6 contact was coming to tell him about a new threat, one that could put Rory in danger if she stayed in Soho. He nodded, gesturing to the bookshelf in the corner, its edges worn like someone had pulled it open a hundred times. “That’s me. I ordered the dumplings for the meeting in the hidden back room—accessible through the bookshelf over there. Just pull the red-bound map of Prague, and it’ll swing open. But we can talk about the flat after you drop them off. I’ll leave the door unlocked for you.” Rory hefted the stack of bamboo steamers back onto her hip, their wicker edges digging into her waist again. She glanced at the bookshelf, its red-bound map of Prague sticking out slightly from the other books, and she could feel the faint flicker of hope growing stronger. She thought of the weight of time between them—of the ten-year-old girl who’d admired Silas, of the 25-year-old woman who needed a place to hide—and she could feel the unspoken regret hanging in the air, thick enough to cut with a knife. She walked toward the bookshelf, her straight black hair swinging into her face, and Silas watched her go, his limp making it hard to follow. He thought of his father’s old stories about loyalty, of the way he’d failed to be loyal to Rory and her family, of the way he’d shut himself off after Prague. He thought of the hidden room’s maps, of the contacts he’d be meeting with, of the way Rory’s accent still sounded like Cardiff’s rain, and he could feel the faint throb in his knee flaring up again.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
90.05% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1508
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
30.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1508
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"tinged"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"weight"
count3
4
word"processed"
count2
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"could feel"
count5
7
word"throb"
count2
8
word"flicker"
count2
9
word"glinting"
count1
10
word"clandestine"
count1
11
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"tinged"
1"scanned"
2"etched"
3"weight"
4"processed"
5"tracing"
6"could feel"
7"throb"
8"flicker"
9"glinting"
10"clandestine"
11"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences40
matches
0"was surprised"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences40
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences51
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen77
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1474
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1071
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.93
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Golden1
Empress1
Raven1
Nest1
Soho2
Yu-Fei1
Cardiff3
Prague3
Evan2
University1
London1
Silas9
Rory10
persons
0"Nest"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Evan"
3"University"
4"Silas"
5"Rory"
places
0"Raven"
1"Soho"
2"Cardiff"
3"Prague"
4"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
21.79% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences39
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a jailbreak, her backpack slu"
1"sounded like Cardiff’s rain, and he could"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.678
wordCount1474
matches
0"not saying a word but handing her a lollipop every time she started to cry"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences51
matches
0"forming that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean58.96
std34.29
cv0.582
sampleLengths
0165
117
241
394
42
579
657
783
841
955
1016
1179
1265
1342
1450
1578
165
1736
1876
1973
2025
2164
2249
2389
2493
87.72% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences40
matches
0"was buried"
1"was surprised"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs179
matches
0"was trying"
1"was coming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences51
ratio0.235
matches
0"The green neon sign’s glow bleached the edge of her sleeve before the dim interior swallowed it—thick, smoke-tinged air curling around her like a forgotten blanket."
1"Old maps crinkled at the corners of the walls, their faded ink marking trade routes and shadowed alleyways from cities she’d never heard of; black-and-white photos of shadowed figures stared down from above the mahogany bar, their faces half-obscured by fedoras and cigarette smoke."
2"She scanned the room for the contact Yu-Fei had named—some bloke with a silver signet ring, a slight limp—when a limping step scraped the floor behind her, the sound sharp enough to cut through the low murmur of a jukebox playing old jazz."
3"The steamers shifted, their contents clinking softly inside; she clamped a hand to their tops to keep them from toppling, her fingers brushing the warm bamboo."
4"A silver signet ring glinted on his right hand, its surface etched with a raven’s head—she recognized it immediately, the same ring he’d worn when he’d sat on her father’s porch in Cardiff, drinking whisky and talking about secret missions."
5"He pushed off the bar, his weight shifting to his right leg as he crossed the room, each step a quiet declaration of the knee injury he carried—she remembered him telling her once, when she was ten, that he’d gotten it jumping from a rooftop in Prague."
6"“Last I saw you, you were ten years old, climbing your father’s bookcase to steal his barrister’s wig. You landed on a brass paperweight—cut your left wrist bad enough to need three stitches. Your mother cried for an hour; your father yelled for two. I gave you a lollipop shaped like a raven to calm you down.”"
7"She set the steamers down on a nearby oak table, her left wrist brushing the wood—she tugged her jacket’s sleeve down to cover the crescent scar, the fabric soft against the still-throbbing skin."
8"She’d forgotten how Silas used to listen—how he’d sat with her for an hour after her mother’s first breakdown, not saying a word but handing her a lollipop every time she started to cry."
9"She thought of the old stories Silas had told her—of outsmarting guards, of finding hidden rooms, of choosing your own path—and she could feel the faint flicker of hope that she hadn’t felt in months."
10"Silas’s jaw tightened, his hazel eyes narrowing as he thought of the clandestine meeting in the hidden back room—his old MI6 contact was coming to tell him about a new threat, one that could put Rory in danger if she stayed in Soho."
11"She thought of the weight of time between them—of the ten-year-old girl who’d admired Silas, of the 25-year-old woman who needed a place to hide—and she could feel the unspoken regret hanging in the air, thick enough to cut with a knife."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1096
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"thick, smoke-tinged air"
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.023722627737226276
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005474452554744526
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences51
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences51
mean28.9
std15.23
cv0.527
sampleLengths
021
131
226
344
443
517
62
726
813
924
1030
1140
122
1347
1432
1557
1610
1733
1840
1941
2011
2129
2215
2316
2417
2534
2628
2765
2811
2931
3050
3112
3231
3335
345
3513
3623
3776
3823
3917
4033
4125
4243
4321
4449
4519
4628
4742
4825
4931
30.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.27450980392156865
totalSentences51
uniqueOpeners14
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences39
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences39
matches
0"She scanned the room for"
1"She turned, her straight shoulder-length"
2"His left leg angled slightly"
3"He pushed off the bar,"
4"He stopped a foot away,"
5"She set the steamers down"
6"He turned to the bar,"
7"He set it in front"
8"She’d forgotten how Silas used"
9"She’d forgotten how he’d defended"
10"He turned back to her,"
11"She thought of the kebab"
12"She thought of the old"
13"He could see the faint"
14"She picked up the glass"
15"She thought of the hidden"
16"He nodded, gesturing to the"
17"She glanced at the bookshelf,"
18"She thought of the weight"
19"She walked toward the bookshelf,"
ratio0.564
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount38
totalSentences39
matches
0"Rory hefted the stack of"
1"The Golden Empress logo blazed"
2"The green neon sign’s glow"
3"She scanned the room for"
4"The steamers shifted, their contents"
5"She turned, her straight shoulder-length"
6"A man with grey-streaked auburn"
7"His left leg angled slightly"
8"A silver signet ring glinted"
9"He pushed off the bar,"
10"He stopped a foot away,"
11"Rory’s throat tightened, a knot"
12"She set the steamers down"
13"That memory was buried under"
14"Silas’s face fell, his jaw"
15"He turned to the bar,"
16"He set it in front"
17"Rory stared at the water’s"
18"She’d forgotten how Silas used"
19"She’d forgotten how he’d defended"
ratio0.974
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences39
matches(empty)
ratio0
32.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The steamers shifted, their contents clinking softly inside; she clamped a hand to their tops to keep them from toppling, her fingers brushing the warm bamboo."
1"He pushed off the bar, his weight shifting to his right leg as he crossed the room, each step a quiet declaration of the knee injury he carried—she remembered h…"
2"That memory was buried under layers of Evan’s shouts, of Cardiff University’s sterile lecture halls, of the train ride to London that had felt like a jailbreak,…"
3"Rory pulled her sleeve up, the fabric sliding down her arm to reveal the crescent scar, which glinted in the table lamp’s light."
4"She thought of the weight of time between them—of the ten-year-old girl who’d admired Silas, of the 25-year-old woman who needed a place to hide—and she could f…"
5"He thought of the hidden room’s maps, of the contacts he’d be meeting with, of the way Rory’s accent still sounded like Cardiff’s rain, and he could feel the fa…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
72.9099%