| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her benefactor had simply [simply]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.565 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.077 | |
| 71.46% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1051 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "perfectly" | | 3 | "very" | | 4 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1051 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "gloom" | | 1 | "echo" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "etched" | | 6 | "intricate" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "comforting" | | 9 | "oppressive" | | 10 | "apprehension" | | 11 | "resolving" | | 12 | "ceaseless" | | 13 | "fleeting" | | 14 | "echoed" | | 15 | "cacophony" | | 16 | "shimmered" | | 17 | "spectral" | | 18 | "desire" | | 19 | "glistening" | | 20 | "resonance" | | 21 | "chilling" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 53 | | matches | | |
| 8.09% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 53 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1059 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 894 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.67 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Belphegor" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 6 | | Fae-Forged | 3 | | Blade | 3 | | Nyx | 4 | | Dymas | 2 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | Isolde | 4 | | Suddenly | 1 | | Prince | 1 | | Belphegor | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Belphegor" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 5.77% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "symbols that seemed to writhe beneath her gaze" | | 1 | "drone that seemed to penetrate her skull" | | 2 | "felt like a probe, a deliberate invitat" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.944 | | wordCount | 1059 | | matches | | 0 | "not figures, but *impressions* overlaid on the obsidian" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 20 | | mean | 52.95 | | std | 29.1 | | cv | 0.549 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 106 | | 1 | 58 | | 2 | 84 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 82 | | 5 | 55 | | 6 | 95 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 91 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 74 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 53 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 82 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 44 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 56 | | 19 | 31 |
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| 98.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 138 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 63 | | ratio | 0.19 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn’t a scent, exactly; more a pressure against her sinuses, a viscosity in the back of her throat." | | 1 | "Their boots sank silently into a carpet of moss that glowed with an internal, phosphorescent light – a sickly green that seemed to vibrate with an unsettling energy." | | 2 | "Isolde stepped forward, her boots – surprisingly, normal leather boots – leaving no trace on the glowing moss." | | 3 | "The plum-like scent intensified, overlaid with the sharp tang of spices she couldn’t identify – cinnamon, cloves, something vaguely rotten." | | 4 | "It wasn’t a language she recognized, yet she felt the meaning within it – a ceaseless indulgence, a bottomless appetite." | | 5 | "Shadows danced at the periphery of her vision, coalescing into fleeting shapes – monstrously obese figures gorging themselves on glittering fruits, rivers of wine flowing through impossible landscapes." | | 6 | "She saw then – not figures, but *impressions* overlaid on the obsidian." | | 7 | "A banquet table, vast and opulent, materialized from the darkness – laden with delicacies of impossible appearance: cakes that shimmered with captured starlight, meats decorated with jewels, goblets overflowing with viscous, iridescent liquids." | | 8 | "As Aurora watched, a small, perfectly formed pineapple – glowing with an internal, molten gold – rolled off the table and towards her." | | 9 | "It wasn’t merely an object; it felt like a probe, a deliberate invitation." | | 10 | "A colossal form emerged from the arch - Prince Belphegor, ruler of Dymas, a towering figure of glistening, iridescent flesh, his face a grotesque parody of a smile." | | 11 | "He was surrounded by an entourage of similarly monstrous figures – servants, guards, and countless captured souls, all rendered into grotesque, immobile effigies of unending indulgence." |
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| 89.97% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 886 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "viscous, ruby-colored liquid." |
| | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.03837471783295711 | | lyAdverbCount | 22 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.024830699774266364 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 63 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 63 | | mean | 16.81 | | std | 7.96 | | cv | 0.473 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 33 | | 41 | 26 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 67.72% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.4444444444444444 | | totalSentences | 63 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 62.89% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, a wave of heat" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 69.06% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn’t a scent, exactly;" | | 1 | "She adjusted the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 2 | "Their boots sank silently into" | | 3 | "She didn’t bother to look" | | 4 | "Her lavender eyes, usually pools" | | 5 | "It pulsed with a faint," | | 6 | "She hadn't known what to" | | 7 | "It felt more like a" | | 8 | "she said, her voice tight" | | 9 | "she said, her gaze fixed" | | 10 | "It wasn’t a language she" | | 11 | "It wasn’t a single voice," | | 12 | "She saw then – not" | | 13 | "It wasn’t merely an object;" | | 14 | "She instinctively took a step" | | 15 | "He was surrounded by an" | | 16 | "She hadn’t come seeking a" | | 17 | "Her benefactor had simply given" | | 18 | "she said, her voice surprisingly" | | 19 | "he paused, his gaze lingering" |
| | ratio | 0.377 | |
| 26.04% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted of overripe" | | 1 | "It wasn’t a scent, exactly;" | | 2 | "She adjusted the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 3 | "Their boots sank silently into" | | 4 | "Isolde murmured, her voice a" | | 5 | "She didn’t bother to look" | | 6 | "Her lavender eyes, usually pools" | | 7 | "The tiles spiraled downwards, vanishing" | | 8 | "The trees themselves weren’t wood," | | 9 | "Nyx stated, their voice a" | | 10 | "Aurora pulled the Heartstone Pendant" | | 11 | "It pulsed with a faint," | | 12 | "She hadn't known what to" | | 13 | "It felt more like a" | | 14 | "she said, her voice tight" | | 15 | "Isolde stepped forward, her boots" | | 16 | "she said, her gaze fixed" | | 17 | "The plum-like scent intensified, overlaid" | | 18 | "The hum grew louder, resolving" | | 19 | "It wasn’t a language she" |
| | ratio | 0.868 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Their boots sank silently into a carpet of moss that glowed with an internal, phosphorescent light – a sickly green that seemed to vibrate with an unsettling en…" | | 1 | "Above, the amber sky of Dymas, visible through gaps in the towering, fungal trees that loomed like grotesque cathedrals, pulsed with an unnatural warmth." | | 2 | "The trees themselves weren’t wood, but a kind of solidified resin, black and polished, etched with intricate, alien symbols that seemed to writhe beneath her ga…" | | 3 | "The hum grew louder, resolving itself into a chorus of voices, a constant, murmuring drone that seemed to penetrate her skull." | | 4 | "Shadows danced at the periphery of her vision, coalescing into fleeting shapes – monstrously obese figures gorging themselves on glittering fruits, rivers of wi…" | | 5 | "A banquet table, vast and opulent, materialized from the darkness – laden with delicacies of impossible appearance: cakes that shimmered with captured starlight…" | | 6 | "She instinctively took a step back, the Heartstone Pendant pulsing wildly against her chest, urging her onward." | | 7 | "Belphegor let out another booming laugh, a sound that echoed with the boundless satisfaction of a king." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice tight with contained apprehension" | | 1 | "Nyx observed, their form flickering slightly" | | 2 | "Isolde whispered, her voice strained" | | 3 | "Nyx warned, their voice sharp with urgency" | | 4 | "Isolde said, her voice tight with concentration" | | 5 | "she said, her voice surprisingly firm" | | 6 | "he paused, his gaze lingering on the Heartstone Pendant," |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx stated (state)" | | 2 | "Nyx observed (observe)" | | 3 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "Nyx warned (warn)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.391 | | leniency | 0.783 | | rawRatio | 0.556 | | effectiveRatio | 0.435 | |