Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYA47BVN8C2FMWZ4TZZD333

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Duration:
1m 59s
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$0.010535
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory slams Eva’s flat door toward Lucien’s chest, but his ivory-handled cane jams the frame with a sharp crack. The three deadbolts she’d fumbled to unlatch five seconds prior rattle. Turmeric and garlic curl up from the curry house below, thick enough to coat her tongue as she grips the doorjamb, her left wrist’s crescent scar peeking from the frayed sleeve of her Golden Empress delivery uniform. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, skitters across a stack of leather-bound scrolls behind her, hissing at Lucien’s slicked-back platinum blond hair. “Leave.” “Evan’s tracked you.” Rory’s fingers tighten on the doorjamb, her nails digging into the chipped paint. Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—catch the neon curry house sign’s flicker through the gap. His tailored charcoal suit fits him like a second skin, the lavender sachet in his pocket cutting through the curry stench when he shifts his weight. “You lost the right to mention his name when you vanished.” “I didn’t vanish. I hid you from the demon hunters who tailed me after I revealed my half-demon nature.” The word hangs between them, thick as the ink smudges on Eva’s research notes scattered across the windowsill. Rory’s breath catches; she scratches her wrist’s scar, the old childhood accident’s ghost pain flaring. Last time they’d spoken, in a back alley behind Silas’ bar (her flat’s below), he’d pulled his cane’s hidden blade to fend off a stray demon from Avaros—his father’s realm—and she’d run, scared he’d drag her into a supernatural war on top of Evan’s abuse. “I fled to London to escape one monster. I don’t need another tied to my heels.” Lucien’s cane shifts, the thin blade’s faint click making Ptolemy yowl and dart under the kitchen sink. The curry house’s clock ticks-tock above the bar below, a steady beat that matches Rory’s racing heart. “Evan isn’t just a man anymore. He made a bargain with a lesser demon from Avaros. In exchange for power to find you, he’s feeding it the souls of stray cats from Brick Lane.” Rory freezes. She’d found three dead tabbies in Eva’s fire escape planter last week, their throats slit clean through. She’d blamed a stray dog, but the lack of paw prints now makes her stomach lurch. “You’re lying.” Lucien pulls a crumpled piece of paper from his suit pocket and shoves it through the door gap. It’s a flier for an occult supply shop in Camden, the same one Eva had mentioned in her scroll notes. A handwritten note scrawled in Evan’s messy handwriting covers the back: “Find the girl. Feed the beast.” Rory snatches the flier, her fingers trembling. The paper reeks of sulfur, a scent she’d noticed on the dead tabbies’ fur. “Let me in. I can explain how to break his bargain.” She hesitates, then yanks the door back, letting him step over the threshold before slamming it shut and twisting all three deadbolts into place. The flat’s cramped space closes in—every surface stacked with books, scrolls tied with twine, Eva’s half-eaten plate of curry on the coffee table. Ink smudges stain the couch’s armrest, and a stack of Golden Empress delivery bags leans against the wall, her unfinished shift’s leftover work. Lucien’s cane taps the floor twice, a quiet signal he’d used back when they’d worked together to avoid Evan’s surveillance. She ignores it, flipping through the occult flier’s pages to find a list of soul-feeding rituals, each one marked with Evan’s initials. “He’s been watching Eva’s flat for a week. I saw him loitering outside the curry house last night, talking to a shadow that moved without a body.” Rory’s gaze snaps to his heterochromatic eyes. The amber one glows faintly, a sign he’s using his demon senses to track Evan’s aura. She’d seen that glow once before, when he’d saved her from a mugger in Cardiff, and she’d brushed it off as a trick of the light. Now, she knows better. “Why are you helping me? You could’ve left me to the demon’s hunger.” Lucien’s fingers brush her left wrist, his touch cold through her uniform sleeve. He taps the crescent scar once, a gentle motion that makes her skin prickle. “I made a promise to your father, Brendan, when he defended me in a supernatural court in Marseille ten years ago. He said if I ever crossed your path, I’d keep you safe. I intend to keep that promise.” Rory’s breath catches. She’d never known her Irish barrister father had ties to the supernatural underworld. The revelation makes her head spin; she sits on the couch’s edge, the ink-stained armrest digging into her back. The curry house’s clatters drift up—plates clinking, a chef yelling about overcooked naan—mixing with the faint hissing of Ptolemy from under the sink. “You never told me about my father.” “I couldn’t. Your mother, Jennifer, made me swear to keep you in the dark. She feared the supernatural would ruin your pre-law plans in Cardiff.” Rory snorts. Her pre-law plans had been ruined long before Evan’s abuse—she’d hated every lecture, every textbook, every moment she’d tried to live up to her father’s barrister legacy. Fleeing to London had been the first choice she’d made for herself, and now, Lucien’s revelation was tearing that choice apart. “Evan’s bargain expires at midnight. If he doesn’t feed the demon your soul by then, it’ll take his instead. He’ll come for you before then, with the demon’s power to break through these deadbolts.” Lucien’s cane taps the floor again, this time harder. The thin blade’s click makes Rory glance at the hidden weapon, her mind racing with out-of-the-box ideas. She could use her Golden Empress delivery bag’s thermal insulation to block the demon’s fire, or Eva’s scrolls’ protective symbols to ward off the attack. But first, she needs to confirm Lucien’s loyalty. “Prove you’re not working with him.” Lucien pulls his cane’s hidden blade, the steel glinting in the curry house’s neon light. He slices his palm, black blood dripping onto the floor. The scent of sulfur fills the flat, making Ptolemy yowl again. “Demon blood repels Evan’s lesser beast. If I were working with him, I’d never expose myself like this.” Rory stares at the black blood, her stomach lurching. She’d never seen anything like it, but the way it makes the air hum with a faint energy confirms his truth. Before she can speak, a loud bang rattles the curry house’s front door below. Then another, harder, the wood splintering. A deep, guttural growl echoes up the stairs, a sound that makes Rory’s skin crawl. Lucien’s amber eye glows bright, his hand tightening around his cane’s blade handle. The growl gets closer, climbing the stairs toward Eva’s flat, each heavy step shaking the floorboards under Rory’s feet.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.235
leniency0.471
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1138
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.06% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1138
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"racing"
count2
3
word"stomach"
count2
4
word"lurch"
count1
5
word"glinting"
count1
6
word"lurching"
count1
7
word"echoes"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"weight"
2"racing"
3"stomach"
4"lurch"
5"glinting"
6"lurching"
7"echoes"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences52
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences68
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1122
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
69.15% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount804
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.62
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva8
Lucien12
Golden3
Empress3
Ptolemy4
Rory13
Camden1
Evan5
Cardiff1
Irish1
London1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
places
0"Camden"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore0.692
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1122
matches(empty)
68.63% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences68
matches
0"seen that glow"
1"tearing that choice"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean32.06
std20.64
cv0.644
sampleLengths
019
168
21
33
454
511
619
778
816
934
1034
1135
122
1355
1421
1511
1670
1742
1827
1953
2013
2127
2239
2358
247
2525
2650
2734
2859
296
3036
3118
3230
3348
3419
98.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences52
matches
0"been ruined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs115
matches
0"was tearing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences68
ratio0.088
matches
0"Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—catch the neon curry house sign’s flicker through the gap."
1"Rory’s breath catches; she scratches her wrist’s scar, the old childhood accident’s ghost pain flaring."
2"The flat’s cramped space closes in—every surface stacked with books, scrolls tied with twine, Eva’s half-eaten plate of curry on the coffee table."
3"The revelation makes her head spin; she sits on the couch’s edge, the ink-stained armrest digging into her back."
4"The curry house’s clatters drift up—plates clinking, a chef yelling about overcooked naan—mixing with the faint hissing of Ptolemy from under the sink."
5"Her pre-law plans had been ruined long before Evan’s abuse—she’d hated every lecture, every textbook, every moment she’d tried to live up to her father’s barrister legacy."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount400
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.02
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences68
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences68
mean16.5
std9.03
cv0.547
sampleLengths
019
111
237
320
41
53
613
715
826
911
1019
1118
1215
1345
1416
1517
1617
1734
182
1917
2016
212
2218
2320
2417
257
2614
2711
2824
2923
3023
3120
3222
3327
347
3516
3626
374
3813
3913
4014
4139
423
4313
4419
4523
467
4725
482
4927
60.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.38235294117647056
totalSentences68
uniqueOpeners26
66.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences50
matches
0"Then another, harder, the wood"
ratio0.02
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences50
matches
0"His tailored charcoal suit fits"
1"She’d found three dead tabbies"
2"She’d blamed a stray dog,"
3"It’s a flier for an"
4"She hesitates, then yanks the"
5"She ignores it, flipping through"
6"She’d seen that glow once"
7"He taps the crescent scar"
8"She’d never known her Irish"
9"Her pre-law plans had been"
10"She could use her Golden"
11"He slices his palm, black"
12"She’d never seen anything like"
ratio0.26
30.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences50
matches
0"Rory slams Eva’s flat door"
1"The three deadbolts she’d fumbled"
2"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, skitters"
3"Rory’s fingers tighten on the"
4"Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
5"His tailored charcoal suit fits"
6"The word hangs between them,"
7"Rory’s breath catches; she scratches"
8"Lucien’s cane shifts, the thin"
9"The curry house’s clock ticks-tock"
10"She’d found three dead tabbies"
11"She’d blamed a stray dog,"
12"Lucien pulls a crumpled piece"
13"It’s a flier for an"
14"A handwritten note scrawled in"
15"Rory snatches the flier, her"
16"The paper reeks of sulfur,"
17"She hesitates, then yanks the"
18"The flat’s cramped space closes"
19"Ink smudges stain the couch’s"
ratio0.86
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences50
matches
0"Now, she knows better."
1"Before she can speak, a"
ratio0.04
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The curry house’s clock ticks-tock above the bar below, a steady beat that matches Rory’s racing heart."
1"He taps the crescent scar once, a gentle motion that makes her skin prickle."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
91.18% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Last time they’d (would)"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.059
leniency0.118
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.118
88.0329%