Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYA49B0SJPDR12MCQQXF4W7

Run Details

Duration:
16.1s
Cost:
$0.000201
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory stepped through the archway, the damp air clinging to her like a shroud. Rain hadn’t fallen in weeks, yet this place smelled of it – wet stone and something else, something ancient and sickly sweet. Silas’ bar, normally a haven of smoky beer and disgruntled regulars, had dissolved behind her, replaced by a tunnel carved from obsidian that pulsed with a faint, internal light. Beside her, Nyx shifted, their shadow deepening, almost solidifying against the slick walls. “Definitely Hel,” Nyx murmured, their voice a rustle of dry leaves. “And not the particularly pleasant kind.” Isolde moved ahead, her silver hair gleaming in the arch’s strange luminescence. She didn’t speak, simply continued deeper into the tunnel, her footsteps silent, leaving no trace on the obsidian. Rory followed, clutching the Heartstone Pendant around her neck. It warmed against her skin, a small, insistent pulse against the chilling air. The tunnel opened abruptly into a vast cavern. Amber light, not from any discernible source, saturated the space, casting elongated, distorted shadows. Before them stretched a landscape unlike anything Rory had ever imagined. Rolling hills of bruised purple velvet undulated beneath a sky that swirled with shades of ochre and crimson. Crystalline trees, their branches laden with glowing, amber fruit, dotted the landscape. A sluggish river, the color of arterial blood, snaked through the valley, reflecting the bizarre sky. “By the Old Gods,” Isolde finally said, her voice a low, measured cadence. “Dymas.” The air thrummed with a palpable decadence, a thick, cloying sweetness that coated Rory’s tongue. It was the scent of ripe fruit overripe to the point of decay, of crushed spices mingled with something dark and ferrous. A low, rhythmic chanting resonated through the cavern, seemingly emanating from the hills themselves. “What is that?” Rory asked, her hand instinctively moving to the Fae-Forged Blade at her hip. The cold metal seemed to mock the warmth of the Heartstone. Nyx tilted their head, their violet eyes scanning the horizon. “Celebration. A harvest of souls, perhaps. Prince Belphegor’s kind of party.” They began to walk, the ground yielding softly beneath their feet, like walking on a bed of moss. The crystalline trees emitted a subtle hum, a high-pitched resonance that vibrated in Rory’s teeth. As they moved further, the chanting grew louder, punctuated by the clatter of what sounded like metallic instruments and boisterous, guttural laughter. “It’s… overwhelming,” Rory admitted, her brow furrowed. “I feel… lighter. Like something’s pulling at me.” Isolde stopped abruptly, raising a slender hand. “The Veil is thin here. We tread carefully.” She gestured towards a towering structure in the distance – a palace built from interlocking cubes of obsidian, its surface shimmering with trapped light. “That is Prince Belphegor’s seat. We are not invited.” As they approached the palace, the sounds intensified. They saw figures moving within the obsidian walls - grotesque, elongated shapes draped in shimmering silks, their faces obscured by elaborate masks. Some carried enormous goblets overflowing with viscous, iridescent liquids. Others engaged in what appeared to be ritualistic dances around towering braziers filled with smoke that smelled of burnt sugar. “Look,” Nyx hissed, pointing to a cluster of figures gathered around a massive table laden with exotic delicacies. “They’re *consuming* something. Not just eating it. They’re… absorbing it.” On the table lay a mosaic of shimmering, golden flesh, sculpted into grotesque shapes and adorned with jewels. Two of the figures were kneeling, their mouths open wide, feeding directly from the flesh, their bodies visibly swelling with each bite. Rory’s stomach churned. The casual brutality, the sheer excess, was horrifying. She felt a strange pressure building in her chest, a pull towards the feast, a desire to partake in the oblivion offered by the indulgence. “Don’t,” she said, her voice strained. She instinctively clutched the Heartstone pendant tighter, drawing on its warmth, battling the unnatural urge. Suddenly, a voice echoed through the cavern, rich and resonant, laced with amusement. “Welcome, little voyagers. We’ve been expecting you.” They turned to see a figure emerge from the palace gates – a towering being of living shadow, radiating an unsettling warmth. It was Nyx, but… older, darker, more substantial. He wore a crown of polished obsidian and carried a staff topped with a pulsing, crimson stone. “You should not be here,” Nyx said, their voice a chilling whisper. “Dymas offers no hospitality to those who wander from its designated paths.” “And yet, here you are,” Nyx—this older, darker version—responded, a flicker of something akin to sadness in their violet eyes. “Fate, perhaps? Or a bargain struck long ago?” “I don’t appreciate necromantic company,” Rory said, her hand tightening on the blade. The Fae-Forged Blade pulsed with a faint, icy light, a stark contrast to the oppressive warmth of Dymas. “You carry a gift,” the shadow-being said, gesturing towards the Heartstone Pendant. “A remnant of a forgotten price. It draws you here, doesn't it?” As he spoke, the ground beneath them trembled. The crystalline trees began to sway violently, their amber fruit raining down in a shower of sparks. The chanting intensified, coalescing into a cacophony of voices. The figures at the feast turned, their masked faces suddenly revealing expressions of brutal glee. “We feast on memories,” the shadow-being continued, a cruel smile playing on their lips. “And your memories are particularly… potent.” Nyx moved with impossible speed, intercepting a group of approaching figures, their shadow enveloping them in a chilling embrace. They dissolved into wisps of darkness, disappearing without a trace. “You will not interfere,” Rory warned, but the shadow-being merely laughed. “Interference is a form of sustenance, little warrior. Especially when it’s flavored with defiance.” Isolde stepped forward, her gaze piercing. “The Veil weakens when this place is disturbed. We must leave. Now.” A wave of nausea washed over Rory, the pull towards the feast intensifying. She felt her thoughts beginning to unravel, fragmented memories flashing before her eyes—a childhood birthday party, a first kiss, a painful argument with Evan. The Heartstone pulsed frantically, trying to shield her, but it was not enough. “The pendant… it’s struggling,” she gasped, her grip weakening. Nyx moved beside her, their hand brushing against hers. A jolt of cold energy surged through Rory, momentarily pushing back the encroaching darkness. “Focus,” Nyx urged. “On the blade. On the reality you know.” She forced herself to grip the Fae-Forged Blade tightly, channeling her will, her determination, into the cold metal. The blade flared with icy light, pushing back the oppressive warmth, sealing off a small pocket of reality around them. They retreated, fleeing back towards the tunnel, the echoes of Dymas’s decadent revelry pursuing them. As they ran, Rory caught a glimpse of the shadow-being, watching them with amusement, their violet eyes burning with an unsettling intelligence. “You cannot escape,” the being said, their voice a mournful whisper. “Dymas always claims what it is owed.”
created_at"2026-02-20T19:58:47.145Z" 2/20/2026, 7:58:47 PM
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num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde finally said [finally]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.516
leniency1
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.063
78.24% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1149
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count2
3
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"carefully"
2"suddenly"
3"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1149
totalAiIsms44
found
0
word"pulsed"
count3
1
word"gleaming"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"chilling"
count3
5
word"velvet"
count1
6
word"crystalline"
count3
7
word"measured"
count1
8
word"palpable"
count1
9
word"rhythmic"
count1
10
word"resonated"
count1
11
word"warmth"
count5
12
word"scanning"
count1
13
word"resonance"
count1
14
word"vibrated"
count1
15
word"furrowed"
count1
16
word"structure"
count1
17
word"dances"
count1
18
word"mosaic"
count1
19
word"stomach"
count1
20
word"churned"
count1
21
word"desire"
count1
22
word"echoed"
count1
23
word"whisper"
count2
24
word"flicker"
count1
25
word"stark"
count1
26
word"oppressive"
count2
27
word"trembled"
count1
28
word"cacophony"
count1
29
word"unravel"
count1
30
word"fragmented"
count1
31
word"echoes"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"gleaming"
2"footsteps"
3"pulse"
4"chilling"
5"velvet"
6"crystalline"
7"measured"
8"palpable"
9"rhythmic"
10"resonated"
11"warmth"
12"scanning"
13"resonance"
14"vibrated"
15"furrowed"
16"structure"
17"dances"
18"mosaic"
19"stomach"
20"churned"
21"desire"
22"echoed"
23"whisper"
24"flicker"
25"stark"
26"oppressive"
27"trembled"
28"cacophony"
29"unravel"
30"fragmented"
31"echoes"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
1
label"wave of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"stomach churned"
1"A wave of nausea"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences70
matches(empty)
61.22% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences70
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1142
ratio0.001
matches
0"consuming"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
79.81% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount926
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.4
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Nyx10
Isolde4
Heartstone5
Pendant2
Rory13
Fae-Forged3
Blade3
Dymas2
Evan1
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Isolde"
2"Rory"
3"Blade"
4"Dymas"
5"Evan"
places
0"Heartstone"
1"Fae-Forged"
globalScore0.798
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"gh the cavern, seemingly emanating from the"
1"sounded like metallic instruments and bois"
2"their bodies visibly swelling with each"
3"something akin to sadness in their violet eyes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.876
wordCount1142
matches
0"not interfere,” Rory warned, but the shadow-being merely laughed"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean33.59
std17.78
cv0.529
sampleLengths
078
117
252
379
414
551
627
721
855
915
1048
1159
1228
1340
1436
1521
1620
1747
1824
1928
2031
2124
2249
2320
2429
2511
2614
2718
2850
299
3034
3138
3237
3318
90.23% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences70
matches
0"being said"
1"being continued"
2"being said"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs163
matches
0"were kneeling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences86
ratio0.07
matches
0"Rain hadn’t fallen in weeks, yet this place smelled of it – wet stone and something else, something ancient and sickly sweet."
1"“The Veil is thin here. We tread carefully.” She gestured towards a towering structure in the distance – a palace built from interlocking cubes of obsidian, its surface shimmering with trapped light."
2"They saw figures moving within the obsidian walls - grotesque, elongated shapes draped in shimmering silks, their faces obscured by elaborate masks."
3"They turned to see a figure emerge from the palace gates – a towering being of living shadow, radiating an unsettling warmth."
4"“And yet, here you are,” Nyx—this older, darker version—responded, a flicker of something akin to sadness in their violet eyes."
5"She felt her thoughts beginning to unravel, fragmented memories flashing before her eyes—a childhood birthday party, a first kiss, a painful argument with Evan."
94.34% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount165
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount7
adverbRatio0.04242424242424243
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.024242424242424242
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean13.28
std5.96
cv0.449
sampleLengths
014
122
229
313
411
56
612
718
89
913
108
1114
1211
1318
1412
1516
1613
171
1815
1922
2014
2116
2211
2310
2411
2518
2615
2722
287
298
307
3132
329
338
3422
359
3620
3718
3810
3918
4022
413
428
4325
446
4515
4613
477
4822
494
72.09% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.45348837209302323
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners39
48.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"Suddenly, a voice echoed through"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences69
matches
0"She didn’t speak, simply continued"
1"It warmed against her skin,"
2"It was the scent of"
3"They began to walk, the"
4"She gestured towards a towering"
5"They saw figures moving within"
6"She felt a strange pressure"
7"she said, her voice strained"
8"She instinctively clutched the Heartstone"
9"They turned to see a"
10"It was Nyx, but…"
11"He wore a crown of"
12"They dissolved into wisps of"
13"She felt her thoughts beginning"
14"she gasped, her grip weakening"
15"She forced herself to grip"
16"They retreated, fleeing back towards"
ratio0.246
46.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences69
matches
0"Rory stepped through the archway,"
1"Rain hadn’t fallen in weeks,"
2"Nyx murmured, their voice a"
3"Isolde moved ahead, her silver"
4"She didn’t speak, simply continued"
5"Rory followed, clutching the Heartstone"
6"It warmed against her skin,"
7"The tunnel opened abruptly into"
8"Amber light, not from any"
9"A sluggish river, the color"
10"Isolde finally said, her voice"
11"The air thrummed with a"
12"It was the scent of"
13"A low, rhythmic chanting resonated"
14"Rory asked, her hand instinctively"
15"The cold metal seemed to"
16"Nyx tilted their head, their"
17"They began to walk, the"
18"The crystalline trees emitted a"
19"Rory admitted, her brow furrowed"
ratio0.826
72.46% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"Before them stretched a landscape"
ratio0.014
38.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Beside her, Nyx shifted, their shadow deepening, almost solidifying against the slick walls."
1"Rolling hills of bruised purple velvet undulated beneath a sky that swirled with shades of ochre and crimson."
2"The air thrummed with a palpable decadence, a thick, cloying sweetness that coated Rory’s tongue."
3"The crystalline trees emitted a subtle hum, a high-pitched resonance that vibrated in Rory’s teeth."
4"Others engaged in what appeared to be ritualistic dances around towering braziers filled with smoke that smelled of burnt sugar."
5"Nyx moved with impossible speed, intercepting a group of approaching figures, their shadow enveloping them in a chilling embrace."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"Nyx murmured, their voice a rustle of dry leaves"
1"Isolde finally said, her voice a low, measured cadence"
2"Rory admitted, her brow furrowed"
3"She gestured, its surface shimmering with trapped light"
4"she said, her voice strained"
5"Nyx said, their voice a chilling whisper"
6"Rory said, her hand tightening on the blade"
7"the shadow-being continued, a cruel smile playing on their lips"
8"she gasped, her grip weakening"
9"the being said, their voice a mournful whisper"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
1"Rory admitted (admit)"
2"Nyx hissed (hiss)"
3"this older darker version—responded (respond)"
4"the shadow-being continued (continue)"
5"Rory warned (warn)"
6"she gasped (gasp)"
7"Nyx urged (urge)"
8"the being said (be say)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.484
leniency0.968
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.581
71.6219%