Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYA4EEWN1ZYRA300RX6A8PT

Run Details

Duration:
56.4s
Cost:
$0.000391
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air tasted of overripe fruit and something metallic, like warm pennies. Rory adjusted the strap of her bag, the weight of the Fae-Forged Blade familiar against her hip. Ahead, Isolde moved with a grace that felt less like walking and more like drifting, her silver hair a shimmering banner in the muted light. Nyx flowed beside her, less a companion and more a shadow mimicking a person, the edges of their form blurring against the verdant density of Richmond Park. “Are you certain this is the place?” Rory asked, voicing the doubt that had been pressing on her since Isolde had led them off the marked paths. Isolde didn’t turn. “Certainty is a brittle thing, child. Let’s say… overwhelmingly probable.” Rory shot a glance at Nyx, who offered no comfort, only the unsettling sensation of being watched by something that wasn’t quite seeing. The air grew noticeably warmer, the scent of fruit intensifying to a cloying sweetness. They passed between two ancient oak trees, their gnarled branches interwoven like skeletal fingers, and the world shifted. It wasn’t a dramatic change, not a flash of light or a sudden burst of color. It was subtler, a realignment of perception. The familiar green of the park faded, replaced by a riot of blooms Rory couldn't name. Flowers in shades of amethyst and gold spilled across the ground, their petals impossibly intricate. Vines thick as pythons coiled around trees, laden with fruit that glowed with an internal luminescence. “This…” Rory breathed, searching for a word that wouldn’t feel inadequate. “A thinning,” Nyx’s voice whispered, barely audible above the hum of insects. “A place where the weave between worlds is… porous.” The grove wasn’t large, maybe the size of a tennis court, but it felt boundless, as if it stretched inward, defying Euclidean geometry. The one constant was the relentless, overwhelming presence of life. Orchids clung to the bark of trees, their roots exposed and pulsing with a faint, violet light. Strange, melodious chirps and whistles echoed through the air, a symphony of unseen creatures. Isolde stopped before a ring of standing stones, each etched with symbols Rory didn’t recognize. They weren’t runes, not exactly. They possessed a flowing, organic quality, like vines sculpted into glyphs. “The boundary,” Isolde murmured, running a pale hand over the cool stone. “Here, the border blurs. Time eddies. Be mindful where you place your gaze.” Rory’s hand instinctively went to the Heartstone Pendant beneath her shirt. It pulsed with a faint warmth, a rhythmic throb that resonated against her skin. She hadn’t noticed it before, but now it felt… urgent. “Hel proximity?” she asked, her voice hushed. Nyx flickered, their form momentarily solidifying. “A ripple. Faint, but present. Dymas, I suspect. Though the currents are… convoluted.” Dymas. The realm of Gluttony. The thought left a sickly sweet taste in Rory's mouth. The pendant’s warmth intensified, almost uncomfortably. Isolde ignored them, her lavender eyes fixed on the center of the stone circle. “The Seer’s Pool awaits. But the path is not straight. It reflects what you *seek*, not what *is*.” A pool. Rory hadn’t expected a pool. She’d been picturing some sort of… threshold, a shimmering portal. The Seer’s Pool materialized before them, not by being revealed, but by coalescing, the air above the earth liquefying into a surface of dark, obsidian water. It wasn't perfectly round, but rather, organically shaped, like a teardrop. “Observe,” Isolde said, her voice losing some of its cryptic quality, replaced by a solemn tone. “But do not *look*.” Rory hesitated, then knelt at the edge of the pool. The water was still, reflecting nothing but the distorted shapes of the surrounding foliage. It felt… ancient. The weight of centuries pressed down on her, a suffocating sense of history she couldn’t comprehend. As she stared, the surface began to ripple, not from any disturbance in the air, but from within the water itself. Images coalesced, fragmented and fleeting. A lavish banquet table groaning under the weight of impossible foods. A vineyard stretching endlessly under a warm amber sky. A figure cloaked in shadow, their face obscured by feasting. Rory felt a pull, a magnetic force drawing her gaze deeper. Suddenly, she saw her father, Brendan, laughing, surrounded by plates piled high with food. But his laughter was strained, his eyes hollow. He reached for another goblet, his hand trembling. “Father?” Rory whispered, her voice cracking. “Do not linger on what is past, child,” Isolde warned, her hand gripping Rory’s shoulder. “The pool shows echoes, temptations. It does not offer truth.” Rory ripped her gaze away, gasping for air. Her heart hammered against her ribs. It had felt… so real. “What did you see?” Nyx asked, their voice a dispassionate murmur. “My father,” Rory said, shaking her head, trying to dispel the lingering image. “He… he was at a feast. But it wasn’t right. It felt… wrong.” Isolde nodded slowly. “Dymas preys on desires, on excess. Your father’s fondness for a good meal is known to the realms.” Rory's hand tightened around the hilt of the Fae-Forged Blade where it rested against her side. “He wouldn’t…” “The realms do not concern themselves with ‘wouldn’t’,” Nyx said, their tone bleak. “Only with ‘is’.” Isolde stepped closer to the pool, her silver hair brushing against the dark water. “I seek knowledge of the Veil’s weakening. Show me the source of the rift.” The pool churned again, the images shifting and swirling. This time, Rory didn't dare to look directly. Instead, she focused on Isolde’s face, watching her expression change as she… perceived. Isolde’s face paled, her lavender eyes widening with something that wasn’t quite fear. She stumbled back, catching herself on one of the standing stones. “By the Courts,” she breathed, her voice barely a whisper. “A convergence. A deliberate tearing.” “What is it?” Rory asked, her hand instinctively reaching for the blade. “Not a natural weakening,” Isolde said, her gaze fixed on something beyond the pool, beyond the grove. “Someone… something is forcing the Veil. It’s centered on a place… a building. Old. Stone. London, but not *of* London.” The Heartstone Pendant flared with heat, almost burning through Rory’s shirt. It was definitely Dymas. And whatever was happening, it was far beyond a simple ripple. It was a deliberate assault. “The Wardens should be alerted.” Rory said, her mind already racing through potential contacts. Isolde shook her head. "They are… preoccupied. Distracted by shadows within shadows. This is something else entirely.” She looked at Rory, her gaze piercing. “You have a role to play, Aurora Carter. A piece of the puzzle that even I cannot see.” Nyx, who had been silent until now, shifted closer, their form coalescing into something almost solid. “The veil thins,” they said, their voice echoing with an ancient weariness. “The echoes grow stronger. The feast… begins.”
created_at"2026-02-20T19:58:52.391Z" 2/20/2026, 7:58:52 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.515
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1138
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"suddenly"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1138
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"weight"
count3
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"intricate"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"symphony"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count2
8
word"rhythmic"
count1
9
word"throb"
count1
10
word"resonated"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"sense of"
count1
13
word"fragmented"
count1
14
word"fleeting"
count1
15
word"magnetic"
count1
16
word"echoes"
count2
17
word"churned"
count1
18
word"whisper"
count1
19
word"racing"
count1
20
word"potential"
count1
21
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"familiar"
2"intricate"
3"echoed"
4"symphony"
5"etched"
6"pulsed"
7"warmth"
8"rhythmic"
9"throb"
10"resonated"
11"flickered"
12"sense of"
13"fragmented"
14"fleeting"
15"magnetic"
16"echoes"
17"churned"
18"whisper"
19"racing"
20"potential"
21"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences86
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords4
totalWords1136
ratio0.004
matches
0"seek"
1"is"
2"look"
3"of"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
32.02% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions59
wordCount890
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity2.36
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Isolde14
Richmond1
Park1
Nyx7
Rory21
Euclidean1
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Gluttony1
Seer1
Pool1
Brendan1
Dymas2
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Nyx"
2"Rory"
3"Pendant"
4"Seer"
5"Brendan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Heartstone"
globalScore0.32
windowScore0.333
73.08% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite seeing"
1"quite fear"
23.94% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.761
wordCount1136
matches
0"not by being revealed, but by coalescing, the air above the earth liquefying into a sur"
1"not from any disturbance in the air, but from within the water itself"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean29.89
std17.57
cv0.588
sampleLengths
081
127
213
355
470
511
621
764
831
925
1035
117
1219
1321
1432
1554
1620
1743
1856
1941
206
2125
2219
2311
2426
2521
2618
2716
2828
2930
3024
3115
3212
3337
3431
3514
3642
3735
93.02% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences86
matches
0"being watched"
1"being revealed"
2"was strained"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs152
matches
0"was happening"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences102
ratio0
matches(empty)
97.57% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount892
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.042600896860986545
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.020179372197309416
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean11.14
std6.07
cv0.545
sampleLengths
012
117
225
327
427
53
610
723
814
918
1016
117
1216
1315
1416
1511
1612
179
1823
1910
2017
2114
2215
235
2411
2512
2613
2711
2814
299
301
317
326
3313
341
354
3610
376
3814
3918
402
415
426
434
4426
4511
4616
474
4810
4914
61.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.4215686274509804
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners43
84.39% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"Suddenly, she saw her father,"
1"Instead, she focused on Isolde’s"
ratio0.025
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences79
matches
0"They passed between two ancient"
1"It wasn’t a dramatic change,"
2"It was subtler, a realignment"
3"They weren’t runes, not exactly."
4"They possessed a flowing, organic"
5"It pulsed with a faint"
6"She hadn’t noticed it before,"
7"she asked, her voice hushed"
8"She’d been picturing some sort"
9"It wasn't perfectly round, but"
10"He reached for another goblet,"
11"Her heart hammered against her"
12"It had felt…"
13"She stumbled back, catching herself"
14"she breathed, her voice barely"
15"It was definitely Dymas."
16"It was a deliberate assault."
17"She looked at Rory, her"
18"they said, their voice echoing"
ratio0.241
4.30% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences79
matches
0"The air tasted of overripe"
1"Rory adjusted the strap of"
2"Nyx flowed beside her, less"
3"Rory asked, voicing the doubt"
4"Isolde didn’t turn."
5"Rory shot a glance at"
6"The air grew noticeably warmer,"
7"They passed between two ancient"
8"It wasn’t a dramatic change,"
9"It was subtler, a realignment"
10"The familiar green of the"
11"Flowers in shades of amethyst"
12"Vines thick as pythons coiled"
13"Rory breathed, searching for a"
14"Nyx’s voice whispered, barely audible"
15"The grove wasn’t large, maybe"
16"The one constant was the"
17"Orchids clung to the bark"
18"Isolde stopped before a ring"
19"They weren’t runes, not exactly."
ratio0.911
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
14.65% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Ahead, Isolde moved with a grace that felt less like walking and more like drifting, her silver hair a shimmering banner in the muted light."
1"Nyx flowed beside her, less a companion and more a shadow mimicking a person, the edges of their form blurring against the verdant density of Richmond Park."
2"Rory shot a glance at Nyx, who offered no comfort, only the unsettling sensation of being watched by something that wasn’t quite seeing."
3"The grove wasn’t large, maybe the size of a tennis court, but it felt boundless, as if it stretched inward, defying Euclidean geometry."
4"It pulsed with a faint warmth, a rhythmic throb that resonated against her skin."
5"Isolde’s face paled, her lavender eyes widening with something that wasn’t quite fear."
6"Nyx, who had been silent until now, shifted closer, their form coalescing into something almost solid."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"she asked, her voice hushed"
1"Rory whispered, her voice cracking"
2"Isolde warned, her hand gripping Rory’s shoulder"
3"Nyx asked, their voice a dispassionate murmur"
4"she breathed, her voice barely a whisper"
5"Rory asked, her hand instinctively reaching for the blade"
6"Rory said, her mind already racing through potential contacts"
7"She looked, her gaze piercing"
8"they said, their voice echoing with an ancient weariness"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Rory breathed (breathe)"
1"Nyx’s voice whispered (whisper)"
2"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
3"Rory whispered (whisper)"
4"Isolde warned (warn)"
5"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.485
leniency0.97
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.364
72.3747%