| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.515 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.82% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1138 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1138 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "intricate" | | 3 | "echoed" | | 4 | "symphony" | | 5 | "etched" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "rhythmic" | | 9 | "throb" | | 10 | "resonated" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "sense of" | | 13 | "fragmented" | | 14 | "fleeting" | | 15 | "magnetic" | | 16 | "echoes" | | 17 | "churned" | | 18 | "whisper" | | 19 | "racing" | | 20 | "potential" | | 21 | "echoing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 102 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 4 | | totalWords | 1136 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 32.02% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 59 | | wordCount | 890 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 2.36 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Isolde | 14 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Rory | 21 | | Euclidean | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Seer | 1 | | Pool | 1 | | Brendan | 1 | | Dymas | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Pendant" | | 4 | "Seer" | | 5 | "Brendan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Heartstone" |
| | globalScore | 0.32 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 73.08% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite seeing" | | 1 | "quite fear" |
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| 23.94% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.761 | | wordCount | 1136 | | matches | | 0 | "not by being revealed, but by coalescing, the air above the earth liquefying into a sur" | | 1 | "not from any disturbance in the air, but from within the water itself" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 29.89 | | std | 17.57 | | cv | 0.588 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 81 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 55 | | 4 | 70 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 64 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 35 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 54 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 56 | | 19 | 41 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 37 | | 34 | 31 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 42 | | 37 | 35 |
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| 93.02% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "being watched" | | 1 | "being revealed" | | 2 | "was strained" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 152 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 102 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.57% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 892 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.042600896860986545 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.020179372197309416 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 102 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 102 | | mean | 11.14 | | std | 6.07 | | cv | 0.545 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 26 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 61.44% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.4215686274509804 | | totalSentences | 102 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 84.39% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, she saw her father," | | 1 | "Instead, she focused on Isolde’s" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "They passed between two ancient" | | 1 | "It wasn’t a dramatic change," | | 2 | "It was subtler, a realignment" | | 3 | "They weren’t runes, not exactly." | | 4 | "They possessed a flowing, organic" | | 5 | "It pulsed with a faint" | | 6 | "She hadn’t noticed it before," | | 7 | "she asked, her voice hushed" | | 8 | "She’d been picturing some sort" | | 9 | "It wasn't perfectly round, but" | | 10 | "He reached for another goblet," | | 11 | "Her heart hammered against her" | | 12 | "It had felt…" | | 13 | "She stumbled back, catching herself" | | 14 | "she breathed, her voice barely" | | 15 | "It was definitely Dymas." | | 16 | "It was a deliberate assault." | | 17 | "She looked at Rory, her" | | 18 | "they said, their voice echoing" |
| | ratio | 0.241 | |
| 4.30% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted of overripe" | | 1 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "Nyx flowed beside her, less" | | 3 | "Rory asked, voicing the doubt" | | 4 | "Isolde didn’t turn." | | 5 | "Rory shot a glance at" | | 6 | "The air grew noticeably warmer," | | 7 | "They passed between two ancient" | | 8 | "It wasn’t a dramatic change," | | 9 | "It was subtler, a realignment" | | 10 | "The familiar green of the" | | 11 | "Flowers in shades of amethyst" | | 12 | "Vines thick as pythons coiled" | | 13 | "Rory breathed, searching for a" | | 14 | "Nyx’s voice whispered, barely audible" | | 15 | "The grove wasn’t large, maybe" | | 16 | "The one constant was the" | | 17 | "Orchids clung to the bark" | | 18 | "Isolde stopped before a ring" | | 19 | "They weren’t runes, not exactly." |
| | ratio | 0.911 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 14.65% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Ahead, Isolde moved with a grace that felt less like walking and more like drifting, her silver hair a shimmering banner in the muted light." | | 1 | "Nyx flowed beside her, less a companion and more a shadow mimicking a person, the edges of their form blurring against the verdant density of Richmond Park." | | 2 | "Rory shot a glance at Nyx, who offered no comfort, only the unsettling sensation of being watched by something that wasn’t quite seeing." | | 3 | "The grove wasn’t large, maybe the size of a tennis court, but it felt boundless, as if it stretched inward, defying Euclidean geometry." | | 4 | "It pulsed with a faint warmth, a rhythmic throb that resonated against her skin." | | 5 | "Isolde’s face paled, her lavender eyes widening with something that wasn’t quite fear." | | 6 | "Nyx, who had been silent until now, shifted closer, their form coalescing into something almost solid." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "she asked, her voice hushed" | | 1 | "Rory whispered, her voice cracking" | | 2 | "Isolde warned, her hand gripping Rory’s shoulder" | | 3 | "Nyx asked, their voice a dispassionate murmur" | | 4 | "she breathed, her voice barely a whisper" | | 5 | "Rory asked, her hand instinctively reaching for the blade" | | 6 | "Rory said, her mind already racing through potential contacts" | | 7 | "She looked, her gaze piercing" | | 8 | "they said, their voice echoing with an ancient weariness" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 16 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "Nyx’s voice whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "Isolde warned (warn)" | | 5 | "she breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.485 | | leniency | 0.97 | | rawRatio | 0.375 | | effectiveRatio | 0.364 | |