Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYA4ME4PRP13KDQWNXJJMM3

Run Details

Duration:
7.5s
Cost:
$0.000351
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door creaked open before Rory could even reach for the deadbolt, the hinges protesting like old bones. She froze, her fingers hovering over the lock, the scent of rain and something sharper—like ozone after a storm—filling the hallway before she could turn. Lucien stood there, his cane tapping once against the linoleum, the ivory handle catching the dim light from the streetlamp outside. His platinum blond hair was still slicked back, but the charcoal suit looked rumpled, the lapels slightly askew. One amber eye flicked toward her, the other black, unreadable. "You’re not supposed to be here," Rory said, her voice steadier than she felt. Lucien didn’t move. "I know." The words hung between them, heavy as the silence that followed. Rory exhaled through her nose, her pulse hammering in her throat. She should’ve locked the door. Should’ve known better than to leave it ajar, even for a second. But the flat had been quiet—too quiet—and she’d been half-asleep, the weight of the day pressing down on her like a wet blanket. Lucien stepped inside, his boots scuffing against the worn carpet. "You look tired." Rory crossed her arms, her knuckles brushing the scar on her wrist. "And you look like you’ve been dragged through a hedge backward." A ghost of a smile touched his lips. "Flattery won’t get you in here." "Try it again." He didn’t. Instead, his gaze dropped to the stack of unopened takeout containers on the kitchen counter, the scent of garlic and soy sauce thick in the air. "Still working for the Golden Empress?" "Still surviving," she corrected, though the word tasted bitter. She turned, grabbing a mug from the sink and filling it with water from the tap. The faucet dripped loudly, the sound filling the silence between them. Lucien watched her, his expression unreadable. "You left without saying goodbye." Rory didn’t look at him. "I didn’t owe you one." "No," he agreed, his voice low. "You didn’t." She set the mug down with a sharp clink, the sound echoing in the small space. "What do you want, Lucien?" His cane tapped again, once, twice. "I need your help." That got her attention. She turned, leaning against the counter. "With what?" "Something that requires… discretion." Rory raised an eyebrow. "You mean something that requires me to get involved in something I don’t want to be involved in?" Lucien’s lips twitched. "Something like that." She pushed off the counter, crossing her arms again. "Why me?" "Because you’re good at this," he said, gesturing vaguely at the flat, the books piled on the coffee table, the half-finished research notes scattered across the desk. "Because you don’t ask questions you don’t need to ask. And because you’re the only one I trust not to blab." Rory scoffed. "That’s a low bar." "Is it?" he countered. "Or is it just honest?" She opened her mouth, then closed it. The truth was, she didn’t know. She didn’t know why she’d let him in, why she wasn’t slamming the door in his face. Maybe it was the way his voice had dropped, rougher than usual, like he was already tired. Maybe it was the way his cane had rested against his thigh, the blade hidden beneath the ivory handle glinting in the dim light. Or maybe it was just the way he’d looked at her when she’d first opened the door—like he’d been waiting for her to do exactly that. Rory exhaled sharply, rubbing her temples. "Fine. What’s the job?" Lucien’s gaze flicked to her wrist, the scar she’d tried so hard to hide. "I need you to find something for me." She followed his gaze, her fingers twitching. "What?" "A person." Rory’s breath hitched. "Who?" Lucien hesitated, then reached into his jacket, pulling out a folded piece of paper. He unfolded it slowly, revealing a single name scrawled in ink: *Evan Carter.* Rory’s stomach dropped. She didn’t need to ask who it was. She knew. She’d known the moment he’d said *person.* Her fingers curled into fists. "You’re joking." Lucien’s expression didn’t change. "I’m not." Rory’s laugh was sharp, bitter. "You want me to find my ex?" "Your *ex*," Lucien corrected, his voice smooth. "Yes." She turned away, her back to him, her pulse roaring in her ears. "Why?" "Because he’s in trouble." Rory whirled back around. "And you think I care?" Lucien’s cane tapped once against the floor. "I think you might." She wanted to deny it. Wanted to tell him he was wrong, that she didn’t give a damn what happened to Evan Carter. But the words stuck in her throat, because she knew he was right. She did care. She’d cared once. And maybe, just maybe, she still did. Rory clenched her jaw, her fingers digging into her palms. "What kind of trouble?" Lucien’s gaze darkened. "The kind that gets people killed." Rory’s breath caught. She knew that kind of trouble. She’d seen it before. And she’d been right in the middle of it. She exhaled sharply, her voice steady despite the storm raging inside her. "When do I start?" Lucien’s lips curled into a smile, slow and dangerous. "Now." Rory didn’t wait for him to finish speaking. She grabbed her jacket from the hook by the door, pulling it on without looking back. The fabric brushed against her scarred wrist, the sensation grounding her. Lucien followed her out, his cane tapping against the stairs as they descended. The night air hit her face, cool and sharp, the sounds of the city fading into the background as she turned to him. "One condition," she said, her voice low. Lucien raised an eyebrow. "And what’s that?" She met his gaze, her own unflinching. "No more secrets." Lucien’s smile widened, just slightly. "Deal." Rory didn’t wait for him to say anything else. She turned and walked away, her boots echoing against the pavement as she disappeared into the night.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:58:58.514Z" 2/20/2026, 7:58:58 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.152
leniency0.304
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
74.67% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount987
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"sharply"
count2
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"sharply"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
18.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount987
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"flicked"
count2
1
word"unreadable"
count2
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"echoing"
count2
6
word"eyebrow"
count2
7
word"glinting"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"roaring"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"unreadable"
2"silence"
3"pulse"
4"weight"
5"echoing"
6"eyebrow"
7"glinting"
8"stomach"
9"roaring"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
1
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
1"clenched her jaw"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences81
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences120
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords4
totalWords982
ratio0.004
matches
0"Evan Carter."
1"person."
2"ex"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
48.35% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount787
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity2.03
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory16
Lucien15
Evan2
Carter2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Evan"
3"Carter"
places(empty)
globalScore0.483
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount982
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences120
matches
0"knew that kind"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean18.19
std15.53
cv0.854
sampleLengths
043
149
214
35
462
513
623
714
83
934
1036
1111
1210
138
1421
1510
1612
174
1822
196
2011
2148
226
239
2471
2526
2610
2722
288
292
304
3127
3220
337
346
3512
368
3714
384
399
4011
4149
4214
439
4422
4516
4610
4735
4836
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs157
matches
0"wasn’t slamming"
71.43% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences120
ratio0.025
matches
0"She froze, her fingers hovering over the lock, the scent of rain and something sharper—like ozone after a storm—filling the hallway before she could turn."
1"But the flat had been quiet—too quiet—and she’d been half-asleep, the weight of the day pressing down on her like a wet blanket."
2"Or maybe it was just the way he’d looked at her when she’d first opened the door—like he’d been waiting for her to do exactly that."
94.12% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount792
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.04671717171717172
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.010101010101010102
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences120
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences120
mean8.18
std6.36
cv0.778
sampleLengths
018
125
221
318
410
514
63
72
811
911
105
1112
1223
1310
143
1512
1611
178
186
193
202
2126
226
239
2416
2511
266
275
285
295
306
312
3216
335
346
354
364
376
382
394
404
4118
423
433
449
452
4627
4721
482
494
44.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3
totalSentences120
uniqueOpeners36
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences77
matches
0"Instead, his gaze dropped to"
1"Maybe it was the way"
2"Maybe it was the way"
ratio0.039
69.35% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences77
matches
0"She froze, her fingers hovering"
1"His platinum blond hair was"
2"She should’ve locked the door."
3"she corrected, though the word"
4"She turned, grabbing a mug"
5"he agreed, his voice low"
6"She set the mug down"
7"His cane tapped again, once,"
8"She turned, leaning against the"
9"She pushed off the counter,"
10"he said, gesturing vaguely at"
11"She opened her mouth, then"
12"She didn’t know why she’d"
13"She followed his gaze, her"
14"He unfolded it slowly, revealing"
15"She didn’t need to ask"
16"She’d known the moment he’d"
17"Her fingers curled into fists."
18"She turned away, her back"
19"She wanted to deny it."
ratio0.377
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences77
matches
0"The door creaked open before"
1"She froze, her fingers hovering"
2"Lucien stood there, his cane"
3"His platinum blond hair was"
4"Rory said, her voice steadier"
5"Lucien didn’t move."
6"The words hung between them,"
7"Rory exhaled through her nose,"
8"She should’ve locked the door."
9"Lucien stepped inside, his boots"
10"Rory crossed her arms, her"
11"A ghost of a smile"
12"she corrected, though the word"
13"She turned, grabbing a mug"
14"The faucet dripped loudly, the"
15"Lucien watched her, his expression"
16"Rory didn’t look at him."
17"he agreed, his voice low"
18"She set the mug down"
19"His cane tapped again, once,"
ratio0.857
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Lucien stood there, his cane tapping once against the linoleum, the ivory handle catching the dim light from the streetlamp outside."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Rory said, her voice steadier than she felt"
1"she corrected, though the word tasted bitter"
2"he agreed, his voice low"
3"Lucien corrected, his voice smooth"
4"she said, her voice low"
84.78% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she corrected (correct)"
1"he agreed (agree)"
2"Lucien corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.13
leniency0.261
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.13
80.1304%