Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYA4MVSWS8H6XSNYVD1H4FS

Run Details

Duration:
15.8s
Cost:
$0.000158
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain was a greasy smear across the slick asphalt, reflecting the neon vomit of Soho back at her. Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the worn leather strap of her watch, the rhythmic tick a small, insistent pulse against the drumming of the rain. It had been a solid hour since she’d picked up Herrera’s trail, a loose thread of arcane energy and expensive cologne leading her through the maze of rain-slicked alleys and shadowed doorways. He was fast, unnervingly so, but not graceful. A desperate scramble, a reliance on shortcuts only someone intimately familiar with the city’s underbelly could manage. Her breath plumed out in white clouds as she rounded a corner onto a narrow street dominated by a distinctive green neon sign: The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Herrera had been here. The energy signature hadn't dissipated, just shifted, subtly tainted with something darker, older. Quinn pulled out her phone, activating the spectral tracer she’d cobbled together from salvaged police tech and a contact in MI5’s more… unorthodox division. It flickered, painting a hazy blue outline on the rain-streaked street, leading down a flight of rusted stairs concealed behind a perpetually overflowing bin. The air immediately shifted, growing colder, heavier with the scent of damp earth and something faintly metallic. Below, the street dissolved into a cavernous space lit by flickering gas lamps and the sickly glow of phosphorescent fungi clinging to the damp walls. This was The Veil Market. Quinn recognized it instantly, a recurring nightmare in her increasingly unsettling investigations. An abandoned Tube station beneath Camden, accessible only with a bone token – a grim currency in this world of shadows. Rough-hewn stalls lined the narrow passageways, displaying wares that defied explanation: vials of shimmering liquid, intricately carved bone charms, books bound in what looked unsettlingly like human skin. A motley collection of figures milled about – wraiths bargaining for forgotten memories, dwarves haggling over enchanted tools, and humans with eyes that held an unsettling depth of knowing. Quinn felt a familiar prickle of unease, a cold awareness that she was trespassing in a realm that didn’t want her there. She followed the tracer, pushing past a group of gnarled goblins examining a rusty dagger. The blue glow intensified, pulling her towards a particularly darkened corner of the market. There, amidst a collection of dusty apothecary jars, stood Herrera. He was talking to a tall, slender woman with skin the color of polished obsidian, her fingers tracing the intricate patterns on a small, pulsating amulet. “Herrera,” Quinn called out, her voice cutting through the market’s low hum. “Don’t run.” He didn’t react, didn’t even glance her way. The obsidian woman, who Quinn recognized from surveillance footage as a notorious information broker known only as ‘Silas’ informant, simply turned her head slightly, her eyes – black as pitch – fixed on Quinn. Quinn moved with practiced efficiency, drawing her Glock and leveling it at Herrera. “This ends now.” He finally turned, a flicker of something that might have been fear crossing his face. His olive skin glistened with rain, and the Saint Christopher medallion around his neck swung gently as he moved. "Detective Quinn," he said, his voice surprisingly calm, devoid of the panic Quinn expected. "I was expecting you." "Expecting me? You’ve been leading me on a merry chase into a den of… this," she gestured around at the market with a grimace. "What are you doing here? What are you selling?" "Information," Herrera replied, his gaze returning to the obsidian woman. "And perhaps a few remedies. The woman over there specializes in stabilizing volatile magical signatures—similar to yours, I suspect." He tilted his head slightly towards Silas' informant. Quinn ignored him, focusing on the exchange. The amulet the woman was examining felt *wrong*. It radiated a faint, insistent pulse of chaotic energy – the kind she'd encountered near the site of DS Morris's… disappearance. "Don’t play coy, Herrera," she said, her voice hardening. "I know you’ve been working with the clique. You’re exploiting the supernatural network for profit, and you’re playing with things you don’t understand.” Herrera sighed, a weary gesture that suggested he was well-versed in such accusations. “The clique… they are a complicated organization, Detective. They dabble in dangerous things. I’m simply providing a service. A discreet one.” “A service that involves trafficking in stolen spells and potentially destabilizing ancient wards?" Quinn pressed, bringing the Glock’s barrel closer. "Don’t insult my intelligence.” Suddenly, a hand clamped down on her arm, stopping her advance. She turned to see Silas himself – a portly, red-faced man with a disconcerting fondness for velvet jackets – looming over her. He exuded an aura of quiet menace. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice a gravelly rumble. “I don’t appreciate interruptions. Herrera here is a valued client. And frankly, your presence is disrupting the flow of commerce.” Silas’ gaze swept over the market, lingering on several pairs of eyes that seemed to observe her with detached curiosity. Quinn felt a tightening in her chest, a primal instinct warning her that she was outnumbered, outgunned, and deeply out of her element. "I'm conducting an investigation," she stated, trying to project an authority she didn’t entirely feel. "I’m here to question a suspect." “Suspects have a way of disappearing in places like this,” Silas chuckled, a dry, unpleasant sound. “Especially those who aren't supposed to be here.” Before Quinn could react, Herrera stepped forward, placing a hand on her arm. “Detective, I implore you. Let’s talk this through. You don’t understand the stakes here.” “I understand you’re protecting them,” Quinn retorted, pulling her arm free. The obsidian woman murmured something in a language she didn't recognize, and a small, intricately carved knife appeared in her hand. The market, already a claustrophobic maze, seemed to shrink around her. She glanced at the spectral tracer – it now pulsed erratically, as if struggling to maintain a connection. The air thrummed with a palpable sense of unease, a silent warning that this was far more dangerous than she'd initially realized. She weighed her options—arrest Herrera, potentially triggering a chaotic and violent confrontation, or follow him deeper into the Veil Market, into a realm where the rules were fluid and the danger was absolute. The memory of DS Morris—his eyes wide with terror, his face frozen in a silent scream— flashed through her mind. “Fine,” she said, her voice tight, her hand tightening on her Glock. “I’m going with you.” Herrera’s eyes widened slightly in surprise, then a flicker of something that might have been relief crossed his face. “Good. Perhaps then you’ll understand." He turned and melted back into the throng of figures, his pace quickening, disappearing into the swirling shadows of the Veil Market. Quinn followed, the rain continuing to fall, washing the grime of the city – and the secrets of the underworld – into the relentless flow of the street.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she gestured around [around]"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.56
leniency1
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.071
78.17% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1145
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"gently"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
8.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1145
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"spectral"
count2
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"amidst"
count1
6
word"tracing"
count1
7
word"intricate"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count2
9
word"chaotic"
count2
10
word"velvet"
count1
11
word"looming"
count1
12
word"disrupting"
count1
13
word"pulsed"
count1
14
word"palpable"
count1
15
word"sense of"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"pulse"
2"familiar"
3"spectral"
4"flickered"
5"amidst"
6"tracing"
7"intricate"
8"flicker"
9"chaotic"
10"velvet"
11"looming"
12"disrupting"
13"pulsed"
14"palpable"
15"sense of"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
96.75% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences59
matches
0"e with terror"
1"y in surprise"
94.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences59
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences73
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1147
ratio0.001
matches
0"wrong"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount906
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.55
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn14
Herrera9
Raven1
Nest1
Veil3
Market3
Tube1
Camden1
Glock3
Saint1
Christopher1
Morris2
Suddenly1
Silas2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Herrera"
3"Raven"
4"Market"
5"Glock"
6"Saint"
7"Christopher"
8"Morris"
9"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Veil"
globalScore0.727
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if struggling to maintain a connection"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1147
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean45.88
std24.37
cv0.531
sampleLengths
0100
193
280
379
465
514
642
716
852
933
1037
1136
1232
1334
1424
1569
1643
1721
1824
1927
2032
2151
2253
2316
2474
99.32% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"was outnumbered"
65.77% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs149
matches
0"was trespassing"
1"was talking"
2"was examining"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences73
ratio0.11
matches
0"An abandoned Tube station beneath Camden, accessible only with a bone token – a grim currency in this world of shadows."
1"A motley collection of figures milled about – wraiths bargaining for forgotten memories, dwarves haggling over enchanted tools, and humans with eyes that held an unsettling depth of knowing."
2"It radiated a faint, insistent pulse of chaotic energy – the kind she'd encountered near the site of DS Morris's…"
3"She turned to see Silas himself – a portly, red-faced man with a disconcerting fondness for velvet jackets – looming over her."
4"She glanced at the spectral tracer – it now pulsed erratically, as if struggling to maintain a connection."
5"She weighed her options—arrest Herrera, potentially triggering a chaotic and violent confrontation, or follow him deeper into the Veil Market, into a realm where the rules were fluid and the danger was absolute."
6"The memory of DS Morris—his eyes wide with terror, his face frozen in a silent scream— flashed through her mind."
7"Quinn followed, the rain continuing to fall, washing the grime of the city – and the secrets of the underworld – into the relentless flow of the street."
95.91% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount281
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.03558718861209965
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.02491103202846975
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences73
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences73
mean15.71
std8.32
cv0.53
sampleLengths
019
124
232
38
417
526
62
74
813
922
102
1124
1217
1325
145
1512
1621
1728
1829
1922
2015
2114
2210
2326
2412
252
268
2734
2813
293
3015
3119
3214
334
3424
359
3610
3727
387
398
4020
411
429
4323
4413
4521
4620
474
4811
4922
65.75% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.410958904109589
totalSentences73
uniqueOpeners30
58.48% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"Suddenly, a hand clamped down"
ratio0.018
65.61% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences57
matches
0"It had been a solid"
1"He was fast, unnervingly so,"
2"Her breath plumed out in"
3"It flickered, painting a hazy"
4"She followed the tracer, pushing"
5"He was talking to a"
6"He didn’t react, didn’t even"
7"He finally turned, a flicker"
8"His olive skin glistened with"
9"he said, his voice surprisingly"
10"she gestured around at the"
11"He tilted his head slightly"
12"It radiated a faint, insistent"
13"she said, her voice hardening"
14"She turned to see Silas"
15"He exuded an aura of"
16"he said, his voice a"
17"she stated, trying to project"
18"She glanced at the spectral"
19"She weighed her options—arrest Herrera,"
ratio0.386
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences57
matches
0"The rain was a greasy"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the"
2"It had been a solid"
3"He was fast, unnervingly so,"
4"A desperate scramble, a reliance"
5"Her breath plumed out in"
6"Herrera had been here."
7"The energy signature hadn't dissipated,"
8"Quinn pulled out her phone,"
9"It flickered, painting a hazy"
10"The air immediately shifted, growing"
11"This was The Veil Market."
12"Quinn recognized it instantly, a"
13"An abandoned Tube station beneath"
14"A motley collection of figures"
15"Quinn felt a familiar prickle"
16"She followed the tracer, pushing"
17"The blue glow intensified, pulling"
18"There, amidst a collection of"
19"He was talking to a"
ratio0.93
87.72% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"Before Quinn could react, Herrera"
ratio0.018
43.65% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Rough-hewn stalls lined the narrow passageways, displaying wares that defied explanation: vials of shimmering liquid, intricately carved bone charms, books boun…"
1"A motley collection of figures milled about – wraiths bargaining for forgotten memories, dwarves haggling over enchanted tools, and humans with eyes that held a…"
2"Quinn felt a familiar prickle of unease, a cold awareness that she was trespassing in a realm that didn’t want her there."
3"He was talking to a tall, slender woman with skin the color of polished obsidian, her fingers tracing the intricate patterns on a small, pulsating amulet."
4"She glanced at the spectral tracer – it now pulsed erratically, as if struggling to maintain a connection."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Quinn called out, her voice cutting through the market’s low hum"
1"he said, his voice surprisingly calm, devoid of the panic Quinn expected"
2"Herrera replied, his gaze returning to the obsidian woman"
3"she said, her voice hardening"
4"he said, his voice a gravelly rumble"
5"she stated, trying to project an authority she didn’t entirely feel"
6"she said, her voice tight, her hand tightening on her Glock"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Quinn called out (call out)"
1"Quinn pressed (press)"
2"she stated (state)"
3"Silas chuckled (chuckle)"
4"Quinn retorted (retort)"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.4
74.2175%