| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she gestured around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.56 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.071 | |
| 78.17% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1145 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 8.30% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1145 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "rhythmic" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "spectral" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "amidst" | | 6 | "tracing" | | 7 | "intricate" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "chaotic" | | 10 | "velvet" | | 11 | "looming" | | 12 | "disrupting" | | 13 | "pulsed" | | 14 | "palpable" | | 15 | "sense of" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 96.75% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "e with terror" | | 1 | "y in surprise" |
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| 94.43% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1147 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 45 | | wordCount | 906 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 1.55 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Soho | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 14 | | Herrera | 9 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Veil | 3 | | Market | 3 | | Tube | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Glock | 3 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Morris | 2 | | Suddenly | 1 | | Silas | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Herrera" | | 3 | "Raven" | | 4 | "Market" | | 5 | "Glock" | | 6 | "Saint" | | 7 | "Christopher" | | 8 | "Morris" | | 9 | "Silas" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.727 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if struggling to maintain a connection" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1147 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 45.88 | | std | 24.37 | | cv | 0.531 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 100 | | 1 | 93 | | 2 | 80 | | 3 | 79 | | 4 | 65 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 42 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 52 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 37 | | 11 | 36 | | 12 | 32 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 69 | | 16 | 43 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 32 | | 21 | 51 | | 22 | 53 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 74 |
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| 99.32% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | |
| 65.77% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 149 | | matches | | 0 | "was trespassing" | | 1 | "was talking" | | 2 | "was examining" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 73 | | ratio | 0.11 | | matches | | 0 | "An abandoned Tube station beneath Camden, accessible only with a bone token – a grim currency in this world of shadows." | | 1 | "A motley collection of figures milled about – wraiths bargaining for forgotten memories, dwarves haggling over enchanted tools, and humans with eyes that held an unsettling depth of knowing." | | 2 | "It radiated a faint, insistent pulse of chaotic energy – the kind she'd encountered near the site of DS Morris's…" | | 3 | "She turned to see Silas himself – a portly, red-faced man with a disconcerting fondness for velvet jackets – looming over her." | | 4 | "She glanced at the spectral tracer – it now pulsed erratically, as if struggling to maintain a connection." | | 5 | "She weighed her options—arrest Herrera, potentially triggering a chaotic and violent confrontation, or follow him deeper into the Veil Market, into a realm where the rules were fluid and the danger was absolute." | | 6 | "The memory of DS Morris—his eyes wide with terror, his face frozen in a silent scream— flashed through her mind." | | 7 | "Quinn followed, the rain continuing to fall, washing the grime of the city – and the secrets of the underworld – into the relentless flow of the street." |
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| 95.91% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 281 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 10 | | adverbRatio | 0.03558718861209965 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02491103202846975 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 73 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 73 | | mean | 15.71 | | std | 8.32 | | cv | 0.53 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 34 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 23 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 65.75% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.410958904109589 | | totalSentences | 73 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 58.48% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, a hand clamped down" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 65.61% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "It had been a solid" | | 1 | "He was fast, unnervingly so," | | 2 | "Her breath plumed out in" | | 3 | "It flickered, painting a hazy" | | 4 | "She followed the tracer, pushing" | | 5 | "He was talking to a" | | 6 | "He didn’t react, didn’t even" | | 7 | "He finally turned, a flicker" | | 8 | "His olive skin glistened with" | | 9 | "he said, his voice surprisingly" | | 10 | "she gestured around at the" | | 11 | "He tilted his head slightly" | | 12 | "It radiated a faint, insistent" | | 13 | "she said, her voice hardening" | | 14 | "She turned to see Silas" | | 15 | "He exuded an aura of" | | 16 | "he said, his voice a" | | 17 | "she stated, trying to project" | | 18 | "She glanced at the spectral" | | 19 | "She weighed her options—arrest Herrera," |
| | ratio | 0.386 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain was a greasy" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the" | | 2 | "It had been a solid" | | 3 | "He was fast, unnervingly so," | | 4 | "A desperate scramble, a reliance" | | 5 | "Her breath plumed out in" | | 6 | "Herrera had been here." | | 7 | "The energy signature hadn't dissipated," | | 8 | "Quinn pulled out her phone," | | 9 | "It flickered, painting a hazy" | | 10 | "The air immediately shifted, growing" | | 11 | "This was The Veil Market." | | 12 | "Quinn recognized it instantly, a" | | 13 | "An abandoned Tube station beneath" | | 14 | "A motley collection of figures" | | 15 | "Quinn felt a familiar prickle" | | 16 | "She followed the tracer, pushing" | | 17 | "The blue glow intensified, pulling" | | 18 | "There, amidst a collection of" | | 19 | "He was talking to a" |
| | ratio | 0.93 | |
| 87.72% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Quinn could react, Herrera" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 43.65% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Rough-hewn stalls lined the narrow passageways, displaying wares that defied explanation: vials of shimmering liquid, intricately carved bone charms, books boun…" | | 1 | "A motley collection of figures milled about – wraiths bargaining for forgotten memories, dwarves haggling over enchanted tools, and humans with eyes that held a…" | | 2 | "Quinn felt a familiar prickle of unease, a cold awareness that she was trespassing in a realm that didn’t want her there." | | 3 | "He was talking to a tall, slender woman with skin the color of polished obsidian, her fingers tracing the intricate patterns on a small, pulsating amulet." | | 4 | "She glanced at the spectral tracer – it now pulsed erratically, as if struggling to maintain a connection." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn called out, her voice cutting through the market’s low hum" | | 1 | "he said, his voice surprisingly calm, devoid of the panic Quinn expected" | | 2 | "Herrera replied, his gaze returning to the obsidian woman" | | 3 | "she said, her voice hardening" | | 4 | "he said, his voice a gravelly rumble" | | 5 | "she stated, trying to project an authority she didn’t entirely feel" | | 6 | "she said, her voice tight, her hand tightening on her Glock" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Quinn called out (call out)" | | 1 | "Quinn pressed (press)" | | 2 | "she stated (state)" | | 3 | "Silas chuckled (chuckle)" | | 4 | "Quinn retorted (retort)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |