Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYA5DZASES6QVAPBTBX8VK3

Run Details

Duration:
53.4s
Cost:
$0.000821
Provider:
Parasail

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against Detective Harlow Quinn’s face, plastering strands of salt-and-pepper hair to her forehead. The slick cobblestones of Soho offered treacherous footing, mirroring the situation. Ahead, a figure in a dark overcoat—Julian Devereux, the magician—sprinted, weaving through the late-night crowd. He moved with a disturbing fluidity, a practiced grace that didn’t quite align with a man supposedly fearing arrest. Her worn leather watch showed 2:17 AM. Perfect. The city exhaled a cold, damp breath. She adjusted her grip on her regulation Glock, the metal cold against her palm. Three blocks. He’d given her three blocks of clean running before disappearing into the maze of side streets. “Devereux! Metropolitan Police!” she called, the sound swallowed by the rain and the throb of bass from a nearby club. He didn’t even glance back. Good. Let him run. It narrowed her options, forced a decision. He cut sharply left, disappearing into the gloom beneath a distinctive green neon sign. *The Raven’s Nest*. Silas’ bar. Not the destination, but a convenient stopping point. Quinn cursed under her breath. She knew Silas. Loose-lipped, but fiercely protective of his patrons. Obtaining information wouldn't be simple. She slowed, eyes scanning the street. No immediate backup. Standard for a Friday night. She’d been running this chase alone since the initial tip came in. A burner phone, a panicked voice, a string of coded words about “transactions” and “the Market.” Quinn pushed through the bar's heavy door. The air shifted, thick with cigarette smoke and the scent of stale beer. The low hum of conversation and the clinking of glasses felt muted, distant. The interior was a collector's obsession made real. Old maps adorned every available inch of wall space, their faded colours whispering tales of forgotten lands. Black-and-white photographs, portraits of stern-faced men and women from a bygone era, stared down from ornate frames. Devereux wasn't at the bar. A gruff voice startled her. “Can I help you, Detective?” Silas. He leaned against the polished mahogany, a tumbler of amber liquid in his hand. His gaze was steady, assessing. “Devereux. Julian Devereux. Just came through here.” Quinn kept her tone even, professional. Silas swirled the liquid in his glass. “Magician. Showman. Plays cards in the back sometimes. Don't know where he is now.” “He was heading this way. I’m tracking him on a matter of… public safety.” A half-truth. She wasn't ready to reveal the strange currents swirling around Devereux, the whispers of something *more* than simple fraud. Silas didn’t react. “Soho's full of folks heading somewhere, Detective. Doesn't mean I keep tabs on ‘em.” He gestured with his glass. “Unless they’re causing trouble.” “He’s suspected of dealing in… illicit goods.” Silas’s lips twitched. “Illicit? Everything in Soho is illicit after midnight.” He paused, then his gaze hardened. “Look, I run a clean establishment. I don’t appreciate you implying otherwise.” Quinn held his stare. “Just looking for information, Silas. A direction he might have taken.” He sighed, then nodded towards a bookshelf crammed with leather-bound volumes. “He sometimes uses the back room. For… private games. The shelf over there. Third book from the left. Pull it.” She moved to the bookshelf, ignoring the curious glances from a handful of patrons. The third book was a first edition of *Grimm’s Fairy Tales*, its spine cracked and faded. She gripped it and pulled. The bookshelf groaned, then swung inward, revealing a narrow hallway shrouded in darkness. The air immediately grew colder, carrying a faint, earthy smell. “What is this?” Quinn asked, her hand resting on the butt of her weapon. “Just a room. For gentlemen’s pursuits.” Silas’s voice was carefully neutral. “And Devereux?” “Wouldn’t know.” Silas turned back to his polishing. Dismissed. Quinn hesitated. The hallway reeked of secrets. It was a convergence point. Devereux had chosen *this* exit. The thought sent a prickle of unease down her spine. The air tasted… different. Older. She pulled out her radio. “Quinn to Dispatch. I’m at The Raven’s Nest, and I’m pursuing a suspect. Requesting backup, possible breach of a secondary location.” Static crackled. “Copy that, Quinn. Backup en route. ETA five minutes.” Five minutes. Too long. Devereux could be miles away by then. Her gut tightened. This felt different from the usual chase. The coded tip, the magician's unnatural agility, this hidden room… She took a deep breath, the stale air filling her lungs. Switching on her tactical flashlight, she stepped into the darkness. The hallway opened into a descending staircase, slick with moisture. The air grew colder with each step, the smell of earth intensifying, mingling with something metallic, acrid. The beam of her flashlight danced across damp brick walls, revealing strange symbols etched into the stone— spirals, triangles, geometric patterns that seemed to shift and writhe at the edge of her vision. The staircase ended abruptly in a cavernous space. Quinn found herself in a sprawling, underground market. It wasn’t a market of fruit and vegetables. This was something… else. Stalls lined the space, illuminated by flickering gas lamps that cast long, distorted shadows. Vendors hawked their wares in hushed tones. But the goods weren't what she expected. Glass jars filled with iridescent liquids sat beside stacks of antique books bound in human skin. Strange, metallic instruments lay displayed on velvet cloths. A man with eyes like a reptile offered her a shrunken head. This was the Veil Market. She’d heard whispers about it, tales dismissed as urban legends by most of the force. A hidden black market for the supernatural, operating beneath the city. And there, across the chaotic expanse, she saw him. Devereux. He was bargaining with a woman whose face was hidden behind a silver mask, handing over a small, intricately carved box. He glanced around, then disappeared into the crowd. Her jaw tightened. This was a new level of complication. A warrant for fraud didn’t cover navigating a supernatural bazaar. A risk assessment flashed through her mind. No backup yet. Unknown entities. Potential for… what? She didn't want to consider it. She could turn back. Radio in, call for heavy reinforcements. Seal off the entrances. Play it by the book. But Devereux was getting away. Plus, the urgency of the initial tip hadn’t lessened. Whatever he was dealing in, it was important. Too important to let him vanish into this… underworld. She stepped further into the Veil Market, her hand tightening around her Glock. A couple of figures turned to look at her. Their expressions weren't hostile, exactly. More… assessing. Curious. A man bumped into her, muttering an apology. As he passed, she caught a glimpse of a medallion around his neck—Saint Christopher, worn smooth with age. He had kind eyes, warm brown like melted chocolate, and a faint scar tracing his left forearm. He paused, looking back at her with a flicker of recognition. “You look lost, Detective,” he said, his voice a soft murmur against the din of the market. “This isn't a place for tourists.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
9.52% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He paused then [then]"
1"Silas turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.19
91.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1166
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.39% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1166
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"treacherous"
count1
1
word"perfect"
count1
2
word"throb"
count1
3
word"gloom"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"standard"
count1
6
word"coded"
count2
7
word"down her spine"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"velvet"
count1
10
word"chaotic"
count1
11
word"navigating"
count1
12
word"potential"
count1
13
word"tracing"
count1
14
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"treacherous"
1"perfect"
2"throb"
3"gloom"
4"scanning"
5"standard"
6"coded"
7"down her spine"
8"etched"
9"velvet"
10"chaotic"
11"navigating"
12"potential"
13"tracing"
14"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"a flicker of recognition"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences125
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences125
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences137
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords8
totalWords1154
ratio0.007
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"more"
2"Grimm’s Fairy Tales"
3"this"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount977
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.82
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn8
Soho1
Julian1
Devereux7
Glock2
Raven1
Silas7
Friday1
Fairy1
Dismissed1
Veil2
Market2
Saint1
Christopher1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Julian"
3"Devereux"
4"Raven"
5"Silas"
6"Saint"
7"Christopher"
places
0"Soho"
1"Veil"
globalScore1
windowScore0.667
80.56% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite align with a man supposedly fearing arrest"
1"patterns that seemed to shift and writhe at the edge of her vision"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.867
wordCount1154
matches
0"Not the destination, but a convenient stopping point"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences137
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean28.15
std16.89
cv0.6
sampleLengths
060
147
236
347
442
575
65
710
820
913
1021
1135
1226
137
1429
1515
1631
1735
1823
1914
2011
212
229
2332
2426
2511
2631
2721
2860
2916
3012
3164
3231
3339
3441
3519
3631
3730
3843
3911
4023
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences125
matches
0"was hidden"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs164
matches
0"was bargaining"
1"was dealing"
80.29% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences137
ratio0.022
matches
0"Ahead, a figure in a dark overcoat—Julian Devereux, the magician—sprinted, weaving through the late-night crowd."
1"The beam of her flashlight danced across damp brick walls, revealing strange symbols etched into the stone— spirals, triangles, geometric patterns that seemed to shift and writhe at the edge of her vision."
2"As he passed, she caught a glimpse of a medallion around his neck—Saint Christopher, worn smooth with age."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount293
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount7
adverbRatio0.023890784982935155
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.006825938566552901
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences137
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences137
mean8.42
std5.79
cv0.688
sampleLengths
015
111
215
319
47
51
67
714
82
916
1020
115
121
133
147
1514
163
172
188
195
203
217
225
236
243
255
2612
2716
287
2913
3013
318
3217
3317
345
355
365
371
3814
395
4013
417
4214
4316
4419
453
4619
474
487
493
66.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.45255474452554745
totalSentences137
uniqueOpeners62
32.05% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences104
matches
0"Too important to let him"
ratio0.01
85.38% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences104
matches
0"He moved with a disturbing"
1"Her worn leather watch showed"
2"She adjusted her grip on"
3"He’d given her three blocks"
4"she called, the sound swallowed"
5"He didn’t even glance back."
6"It narrowed her options, forced"
7"He cut sharply left, disappearing"
8"She knew Silas."
9"She slowed, eyes scanning the"
10"She’d been running this chase"
11"He leaned against the polished"
12"His gaze was steady, assessing."
13"She wasn't ready to reveal"
14"He gestured with his glass"
15"He paused, then his gaze"
16"He sighed, then nodded towards"
17"She moved to the bookshelf,"
18"She gripped it and pulled."
19"It was a convergence point."
ratio0.337
56.15% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences104
matches
0"Rain lashed against Detective Harlow"
1"The slick cobblestones of Soho"
2"He moved with a disturbing"
3"Her worn leather watch showed"
4"The city exhaled a cold,"
5"She adjusted her grip on"
6"He’d given her three blocks"
7"she called, the sound swallowed"
8"He didn’t even glance back."
9"It narrowed her options, forced"
10"He cut sharply left, disappearing"
11"*The Raven’s Nest*."
12"Quinn cursed under her breath."
13"She knew Silas."
14"She slowed, eyes scanning the"
15"She’d been running this chase"
16"A burner phone, a panicked"
17"Quinn pushed through the bar's"
18"The air shifted, thick with"
19"The low hum of conversation"
ratio0.808
48.08% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences104
matches
0"Plus, the urgency of the"
ratio0.01
84.94% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He moved with a disturbing fluidity, a practiced grace that didn’t quite align with a man supposedly fearing arrest."
1"The beam of her flashlight danced across damp brick walls, revealing strange symbols etched into the stone— spirals, triangles, geometric patterns that seemed t…"
2"Stalls lined the space, illuminated by flickering gas lamps that cast long, distorted shadows."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Quinn kept, professional"
1"Quinn asked, her hand resting on the butt of her weapon"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.1042%