Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYA5FT0NWSFX2XPWTYBY5MV

Run Details

Duration:
8.1s
Cost:
$0.000415
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked shut with a final, sharp *snick*. Rory didn’t turn around. She knew that sound. Knew the way the air in the flat thickened, like the moment before a storm breaks. Ptolemy’s tail twitched against the armchair, his ears flattening. “You’re late,” she said, voice steady. Too steady. The door swung open before she could brace herself. Lucien Moreau stood there, filling the frame in a charcoal suit that looked freshly pressed, his cane tucked under one arm like it was an afterthought. The amber eye locked onto hers, unreadable. The black one flicked past her shoulder, taking in the chaos of Eva’s flat—the stacks of books, the half-empty teacups, the way the lamplight made the scar on her wrist glow pale against her skin. “You always were,” he said. Rory exhaled through her nose. “Not helping.” He stepped inside, close enough that she caught the scent of him—bergamot and something metallic, like old coins. The door clicked shut behind him. Three deadbolts. Three layers of steel. And still, he’d walked in like he owned the place. “Eva not here?” His gaze skimmed the room, landing on the open laptop screen. A half-finished translation of a 17th-century grimoire, the margins scribbled with notes in Eva’s looping hand. “She’s at the British Library.” Rory crossed her arms. “You know that.” Lucien smirked, slow and deliberate. “Or you’re lying.” “Or you’re assuming I’d tell you if she was.” A beat. The air between them hummed, charged. She remembered the last time he’d stood this close—the way his fingers had traced the line of her jaw, the way his voice had dropped to something rougher than this. *Don’t.* “You look well,” he said. “Bullshit.” His smirk faltered, just for a second. Then he adjusted his cuffs, all business again. “I needed to see you.” “Could’ve called.” “Could’ve.” He tilted his head, studying her. “But I didn’t want to.” Rory’s pulse jumped. She hated how easily he read her. Hated how her body remembered things her mind tried to forget—the press of his palm against the small of her back, the way his lips had tasted like whiskey and something darker. “What do you want, Lucien?” she asked, voice low. His jaw tightened. “A job.” She blinked. “A *job*?” “You heard me.” “No, I heard *you* showing up unannounced like a—” She cut herself off. No point in playing his game. “What kind of job?” He hesitated, just a fraction. Then, “The kind that pays well.” Rory leaned against the doorframe, arms crossed. “You’re not here for money.” His cane thudded against the floor as he shifted his weight. “No.” “Then what?” Lucien exhaled, slow. “There’s a problem. In the underworld.” “Of course there is.” “This one’s bad.” She arched a brow. “You’re telling me.” His gaze snapped back to hers, sharp. “I need your help.” Rory laughed, sharp and humourless. “Funny. I was just thinking the same thing.” Silence. Then, the faintest ghost of a smile tugging at his mouth. “You always were quick.” “And you always were stubborn.” He stepped closer, close enough that she could see the flecks of gold in his amber eye, close enough to smell the rain on his coat. “We make a good team.” “We made a mess,” she corrected. His smile vanished. “That’s not what I’m here for.” “Then what?” Lucien reached into his jacket. For a second, Rory tensed—old habits, old fears. But he only pulled out a folded piece of paper, pressed between his fingers. “A name. A location. A problem that needs solving.” She took it. The paper was thin, the ink smudged at the edges. *Vesper Lane. Midnight. Don’t be late.* “You’re asking me to break into a demon’s stronghold,” she said. “No.” His voice was quiet. “I’m asking you to come with me.” Rory’s fingers curled around the paper. The weight of it, the weight of *him*, pressing in. She remembered the last time she’d stood in a place like that—the way the air had tasted like ozone and old blood, the way Lucien’s hand had been the only thing steadying her when the world had tilted. “Why me?” she asked. His gaze dropped to her wrist, to the scar she’d gotten trying to keep up with him once. “Because you’re the only one who knows how to handle me.” The words hung between them, raw and unspoken. The attraction. The hurt. The way they’d left things. Rory swallowed. “And if I say no?” Lucien’s voice dropped, rough. “Then I’ll find someone else.” She should’ve believed him. Should’ve walked away. Instead, she crumpled the paper in her fist. “When do we leave?”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount782
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.06% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount782
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"unreadable"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"charged"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"weight"
count3
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"unreadable"
1"flicked"
2"charged"
3"traced"
4"pulse"
5"weight"
6"silence"
7"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences75
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords11
totalWords774
ratio0.014
matches
0"snick"
1"Don’t."
2"job"
3"you"
4"Vesper Lane. Midnight. Don’t be late."
5"him"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
72.68% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount582
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.55
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Eva2
Rory9
Lucien6
Lane1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
3"Lucien"
places
0"Lane"
globalScore0.727
windowScore0.833
2.94% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences34
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"tasted like whiskey and something darker"
1"tasted like ozone and old blood, the way"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount774
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences107
matches
0"knew that sound"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean15.18
std15.3
cv1.008
sampleLengths
043
18
277
35
47
540
630
712
88
99
1039
115
121
1320
142
1512
1642
179
185
194
203
2123
2211
2312
2412
252
269
274
283
297
3011
3113
3216
335
3431
356
369
372
3836
3919
4011
4112
4254
434
4429
4517
467
479
487
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs108
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences107
ratio0.056
matches
0"The black one flicked past her shoulder, taking in the chaos of Eva’s flat—the stacks of books, the half-empty teacups, the way the lamplight made the scar on her wrist glow pale against her skin."
1"He stepped inside, close enough that she caught the scent of him—bergamot and something metallic, like old coins."
2"She remembered the last time he’d stood this close—the way his fingers had traced the line of her jaw, the way his voice had dropped to something rougher than this."
3"Hated how her body remembered things her mind tried to forget—the press of his palm against the small of her back, the way his lips had tasted like whiskey and something darker."
4"For a second, Rory tensed—old habits, old fears."
5"She remembered the last time she’d stood in a place like that—the way the air had tasted like ozone and old blood, the way Lucien’s hand had been the only thing steadying her when the world had tilted."
99.41% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount590
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.04067796610169491
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.006779661016949152
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean7.23
std6.96
cv0.962
sampleLengths
010
14
24
316
49
56
62
79
826
97
1035
115
125
132
1418
156
162
174
1810
1914
2016
219
223
235
243
259
262
276
2830
291
305
311
327
338
345
352
367
375
383
397
4032
419
423
432
442
452
463
4713
486
494
53.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.37383177570093457
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners40
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences58
matches
0"Then he adjusted his cuffs,"
1"Then, the faintest ghost of"
2"Instead, she crumpled the paper"
ratio0.052
68.28% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences58
matches
0"She knew that sound."
1"she said, voice steady"
2"He stepped inside, close enough"
3"His gaze skimmed the room,"
4"She remembered the last time"
5"His smirk faltered, just for"
6"He tilted his head, studying"
7"She hated how easily he"
8"she asked, voice low"
9"His jaw tightened."
10"She cut herself off"
11"He hesitated, just a fraction."
12"His cane thudded against the"
13"She arched a brow."
14"His gaze snapped back to"
15"He stepped closer, close enough"
16"His smile vanished."
17"She took it."
18"His voice was quiet"
19"She remembered the last time"
ratio0.379
63.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences58
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked shut"
1"Rory didn’t turn around."
2"She knew that sound."
3"Ptolemy’s tail twitched against the"
4"she said, voice steady"
5"The door swung open before"
6"Lucien Moreau stood there, filling"
7"The amber eye locked onto"
8"The black one flicked past"
9"Rory exhaled through her nose."
10"He stepped inside, close enough"
11"The door clicked shut behind"
12"His gaze skimmed the room,"
13"A half-finished translation of a"
14"Rory crossed her arms"
15"Lucien smirked, slow and deliberate."
16"The air between them hummed,"
17"She remembered the last time"
18"His smirk faltered, just for"
19"He tilted his head, studying"
ratio0.793
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences17
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Lucien Moreau stood there, filling the frame in a charcoal suit that looked freshly pressed, his cane tucked under one arm like it was an afterthought."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, voice steady"
1"she asked, voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.156
leniency0.311
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.044
80.7236%