Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYA5MARPGWD5Z1YBA1GQ2RW

Run Details

Duration:
19.5s
Cost:
$0.001622
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora gripped the silver chain around her neck, the Heartstone Pendant throbbing like a second pulse against her skin. Heat bloomed from the crimson gem, sharper than before, as the air ahead rippled. The Veil hung there, a smear of distortion catching the moonlight in Richmond Park's shadows. Nyx melted into the gloom beside her, their silhouette elongating, edges fraying like smoke. Isolde stood a step back, silver hair swaying without a breeze, her pale lavender eyes fixed on the shimmer. "This tear leads where hunger reigns," Isolde murmured, her voice threading through the night like silk over thorns. "Step through, and taste the feast of forgotten gluttons." Aurora swallowed the knot in her throat. The park's familiar crunch of leaves underfoot faded as she pushed forward. Nyx flowed after, a chill draft in their wake. Isolde glided last, leaving the grass untouched. The world flipped. Cool night air turned thick, laced with scents of overripe fruit and roasting meats. Aurora stumbled onto soft earth, knees sinking into loamy soil that clung like wet velvet. She straightened, blinking against a sky that burned amber, low and heavy, as if the sun had curdled into honey overhead. Nyx solidified beside her, their violet eyes flickering like distant stars. "Smells like excess piled on excess. Feel that pull in your gut?" Aurora nodded, pressing a hand to her stomach. A low hum vibrated through her bones, not sound but sensation, urging her to consume, to fill the emptiness she hadn't noticed until now. Vines draped from unseen heights, heavy with clusters of grapes that swelled purple-black, skins stretched taut. She reached out, fingers brushing one. Juice burst free, sticky and warm, staining her skin with a sweetness that coated her tongue from the mere whiff. Isolde tilted her head, inhaling deeply. "The vines whisper of vines that drank the blood of stars. Harvest them, and they harvest you in turn." They moved deeper, feet padding over moss that pulsed faintly underfoot, each step sending ripples outward like breaths from a living chest. Distant laughter echoed, not human but layered, overlapping in a chorus that twisted joy into something sharper. Aurora's scar on her wrist itched, the old crescent mark from her childhood fall flaring as if the air itself scratched at it. "Look there." Nyx pointed, their arm a fluid extension of shadow merging with the twilight. A pavilion rose ahead, columns carved from bone-white stone veined with gold. Tables groaned under platters: towers of pastries flaky with unseen spices, fruits carved into sculptures that wept nectar, meats glistening in pools of sauce that simmered without fire. Figures moved among them—translucent at first glance, but solidifying into people as they approached. No, not people. Their eyes gleamed too wide, skins stretched over frames that devoured without pause. One soul, a burly man with a chef's apron smeared in crimson, shoveled bites into his mouth, fork scraping plate after plate. He paused, locking eyes with Aurora. "Fresh meat? Come, join the endless course. Prince Belphegor's vintage waits—no bill, just your endless appetite." Aurora's mouth watered despite herself. She licked her lips, tasting salt from the park's lingering dew. "We're not here to eat. Just passing through." The chef laughed, a wet rumble. "Passing? Nothing passes in Dymas. It sticks. Like the sauce on your fingers." He waved a dripping hand, and the air thickened, carrying the sizzle of unseen grills. Nyx slipped closer to Aurora, their form brushing her side in a cool void. "These helbound ones—they're contracted cooks, souls bartered for skill. Feel how the ground drinks their spills? It's feeding on them." Isolde wandered to a nearby orchard, silver hair catching glints from bioluminescent fruits hanging like lanterns. She plucked one, a pear-shaped thing with skin like hammered opal, and bit in. Juice dribbled down her chin, iridescent. "The trees bear burdens of mortal wants. One bite reveals the sin that rooted it." Aurora watched her, unease crawling up her spine. The half-fae's compulsion kept her from lies, but her words twisted like roots. What vision hid behind that calm bite? She turned away, spotting a path winding between hedgerows heavy with blossoms that exhaled perfume in sighs. Petals unfurled as they passed, releasing motes of light that danced like fireflies drunk on wine. Deeper in, the hum grew insistent, syncing with her heartbeat. Aurora's delivery boots, scuffed from London streets, sank deeper into the soil, which now bubbled softly, exuding a mist that tasted of caramel on her tongue. "This place... it's alive. Not like the grove. The Fae spot felt hidden, contained. Here, it's pulling at everything." Nyx's whisper cut the mist. "Because it's Hel's gut. Gluttony doesn't hide; it bloats." They phased partially incorporeal, scouting ahead, then reformed with a shiver. "Gardens give way to arenas up there. Culinary battles—chefs dueling with flames and flavors. Losers feed the vines." Aurora's hand drifted to the Fae-Forged Blade at her belt, its moonsilver hilt cold, a stark contrast to the warmth seeping everywhere else. Isolde had gifted it back in the grove, after her riddles unveiled the pendant's secret pull to this realm. The blade hummed faintly now, luminescent edges catching the amber light. "Stay sharp. If demons prowl these feasts, this might cut through their tricks." Isolde wiped her chin, eyes gleaming with reflected glows. "Blades carve paths, but paths carve the blade. What demon fears a leaf's edge when the fruit tempts with eternity?" They pressed on, the path widening into a courtyard where fountains bubbled not with water but with bubbling broths, aromatic and thick. Steam rose in spirals, forming shapes—faces pleading, hands reaching—before dissolving into savory clouds. A woman lounged by one edge, her form ethereal yet plump, dipping a goblet into the flow. She raised it to them, lips curving. "Thirst's the first sin here. Drink, wanderers, and forget the barren worlds beyond." Aurora shook her head, but her throat burned dry. The pendant pulsed hotter, guiding them toward a grand archway beyond, carved with reliefs of banquets where guests morphed into platters themselves. Unease knotted her gut; this wonder bordered on horror, indulgence masking chains. Nyx hovered near the fountain, their shadow form rippling as if tasting the steam. "She's a glutton spirit, bound to serve. But listen—the water murmurs contracts. Souls who signed away years for one perfect meal." "Contracts like the ones that dragged Evan under?" Aurora's voice sharpened, memories of her ex's descent flashing—his rants about deals in the dark. Isolde stepped to the archway, her bare feet silent on the warming stone. "Doors open to those who hunger for more than bread. Beyond, the prince's hall awaits, where excess crowns the empty." They crossed under the arch, the air shifting to a roar of voices and clatter of silverware. A vast hall unfolded, walls draped in tapestries woven from silk threads that shifted scenes: harvest moons bleeding into wine rivers, tables collapsing under mountains of delicacies. Helbound souls bustled, some in aprons, others as guests, all caught in loops of feast and refill. One cluster cheered around a central pit where flames licked at a spit-roasted beast, its hide crackling, scents of spice and char flooding the space. Aurora's stomach growled, betraying her. She clenched her fists, nails biting palms. "We can't linger. The pendant's leading us somewhere specific—feel it tug?" Nyx nodded, eyes scanning the crowd. "Toward the back, past the wine cellars. But these shades... they watch without watching. Slipping between solid and not keeps me hidden, but you two glow like fresh loaves." Isolde wove through the throng, her presence parting them like mist, no one quite meeting her gaze. "The watchers seek the unwary palate. Yours tastes of mortal fire—untasted, yet." A server approached, tray balanced with goblets foaming at the brim. His eyes, milky with overindulgence, fixed on Aurora. "A sip for the road? Belphegor's brew erases the step before." She sidestepped, the Fae blade's chill grounding her. The pendant flared, warmth spiking as they neared a shadowed alcove. Inside, shelves groaned with bottles, labels curling like tongues, liquids within swirling in impossible colors—emerald tears, ruby storms. Discovery hit like a stolen breath. Aurora traced a bottle's neck, frost blooming under her touch despite the heat. "These aren't just wines. Nyx, look—the corks pulse like hearts." Nyx leaned in, incorporeal fingers phasing through glass without shattering it. "Souls distilled. Gluttons who ate their way to essence. One uncork, and it pours out memories of feasts that never end." Unease deepened as a low groan echoed from the depths, the ground trembling faintly. Wonder mixed in; the hall's chaos held beauty in its excess—the way light fractured through crystal decanters, painting floors in rainbows of temptation. But the pull of it all clawed at Aurora's resolve, whispering of relief in surrender. Isolde paused at a pedestal, where a single fruit rested, larger than her head, skin veined with gold. "This one ripened on regrets. Bite, and see the prince's shadow." Aurora pulled her back just as the hall's din swelled, a new wave of laughter crashing like waves on overfull plates. They moved on, the pendant's heat a compass through the indulgence, deeper into Dymas' heart, where the air grew sweeter, heavier, alive with unspoken hungers.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:59:31.172Z" 2/20/2026, 7:59:31 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"They phased partially [partially]"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.231
leniency0.462
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.077
96.79% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1559
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1559
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"silk"
count2
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"chill"
count2
5
word"velvet"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count2
7
word"vibrated"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count2
9
word"pulsed"
count2
10
word"echoed"
count2
11
word"glistening"
count1
12
word"stark"
count1
13
word"warmth"
count2
14
word"gleaming"
count1
15
word"perfect"
count1
16
word"scanning"
count1
17
word"traced"
count1
18
word"depths"
count1
19
word"fractured"
count1
20
word"crystal"
count1
21
word"resolve"
count1
22
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"gloom"
2"silk"
3"familiar"
4"chill"
5"velvet"
6"stomach"
7"vibrated"
8"whisper"
9"pulsed"
10"echoed"
11"glistening"
12"stark"
13"warmth"
14"gleaming"
15"perfect"
16"scanning"
17"traced"
18"depths"
19"fractured"
20"crystal"
21"resolve"
22"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fists"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences85
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1540
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
72.55% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1162
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.55
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Veil1
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora18
Nyx9
London1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Isolde10
Fae2
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Veil"
2"Aurora"
3"Nyx"
4"Blade"
5"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Fae-Forged"
4"Fae"
globalScore0.725
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if tasting the steam"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords2.597
wordCount1540
matches
0"not sound but sensation, urging her to consume, to fill the emptiness she"
1"not human but layered, overlapping in a chorus"
2"not with water but with bubbling broths, aromatic"
3"not keeps me hidden, but you two glow like fresh loaves"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
78.09% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean44
std18.63
cv0.423
sampleLengths
081
127
235
353
423
574
625
762
885
944
1024
1134
1234
1351
1461
1555
1643
1766
1829
1972
2043
2135
2223
2333
2486
2523
2635
2729
2830
2937
3029
3132
3252
3329
3446
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs214
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences106
ratio0.066
matches
0"Figures moved among them—translucent at first glance, but solidifying into people as they approached."
1"\"Because it's Hel's gut. Gluttony doesn't hide; it bloats.\" They phased partially incorporeal, scouting ahead, then reformed with a shiver."
2"Steam rose in spirals, forming shapes—faces pleading, hands reaching—before dissolving into savory clouds."
3"Unease knotted her gut; this wonder bordered on horror, indulgence masking chains."
4"\"Contracts like the ones that dragged Evan under?\" Aurora's voice sharpened, memories of her ex's descent flashing—his rants about deals in the dark."
5"Inside, shelves groaned with bottles, labels curling like tongues, liquids within swirling in impossible colors—emerald tears, ruby storms."
6"Wonder mixed in; the hall's chaos held beauty in its excess—the way light fractured through crystal decanters, painting floors in rainbows of temptation."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1174
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.018739352640545145
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.00596252129471891
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean14.53
std6.19
cv0.426
sampleLengths
019
114
215
314
419
518
69
77
812
99
107
113
1214
1315
1421
1511
1612
178
1824
1916
206
2120
226
2319
2422
2517
2623
2715
2812
2928
3014
313
3213
3322
346
3516
365
3711
388
396
4028
4114
4220
4316
4414
456
4615
478
4813
497
72.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.4339622641509434
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences85
matches
0"She straightened, blinking against a"
1"She reached out, fingers brushing"
2"They moved deeper, feet padding"
3"Their eyes gleamed too wide,"
4"He paused, locking eyes with"
5"She licked her lips, tasting"
6"He waved a dripping hand,"
7"She plucked one, a pear-shaped"
8"She turned away, spotting a"
9"They phased partially incorporeal, scouting"
10"They pressed on, the path"
11"She raised it to them,"
12"They crossed under the arch,"
13"She clenched her fists, nails"
14"His eyes, milky with overindulgence,"
15"She sidestepped, the Fae blade's"
16"They moved on, the pendant's"
ratio0.2
24.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences85
matches
0"Aurora gripped the silver chain"
1"Heat bloomed from the crimson"
2"The Veil hung there, a"
3"Nyx melted into the gloom"
4"Isolde stood a step back,"
5"Isolde murmured, her voice threading"
6"Aurora swallowed the knot in"
7"The park's familiar crunch of"
8"Nyx flowed after, a chill"
9"Isolde glided last, leaving the"
10"The world flipped."
11"Aurora stumbled onto soft earth,"
12"She straightened, blinking against a"
13"Nyx solidified beside her, their"
14"Aurora nodded, pressing a hand"
15"A low hum vibrated through"
16"Vines draped from unseen heights,"
17"She reached out, fingers brushing"
18"Juice burst free, sticky and"
19"Isolde tilted her head, inhaling"
ratio0.871
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount13
matches
0"Nyx melted into the gloom beside her, their silhouette elongating, edges fraying like smoke."
1"Aurora stumbled onto soft earth, knees sinking into loamy soil that clung like wet velvet."
2"She straightened, blinking against a sky that burned amber, low and heavy, as if the sun had curdled into honey overhead."
3"Vines draped from unseen heights, heavy with clusters of grapes that swelled purple-black, skins stretched taut."
4"Juice burst free, sticky and warm, staining her skin with a sweetness that coated her tongue from the mere whiff."
5"Aurora's scar on her wrist itched, the old crescent mark from her childhood fall flaring as if the air itself scratched at it."
6"Tables groaned under platters: towers of pastries flaky with unseen spices, fruits carved into sculptures that wept nectar, meats glistening in pools of sauce t…"
7"She licked her lips, tasting salt from the park's lingering dew."
8"She turned away, spotting a path winding between hedgerows heavy with blossoms that exhaled perfume in sighs."
9"Petals unfurled as they passed, releasing motes of light that danced like fireflies drunk on wine."
10"Nyx hovered near the fountain, their shadow form rippling as if tasting the steam."
11"One cluster cheered around a central pit where flames licked at a spit-roasted beast, its hide crackling, scents of spice and char flooding the space."
12"Isolde wove through the throng, her presence parting them like mist, no one quite meeting her gaze."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Isolde murmured, her voice threading through the night like silk over thorns"
1"He waved, and the air thickened, carrying the sizzle of unseen grills"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.038
leniency0.077
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.077
71.5013%