"Figures moved among them—translucent at first glance, but solidifying into people as they approached."
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"\"Because it's Hel's gut. Gluttony doesn't hide; it bloats.\" They phased partially incorporeal, scouting ahead, then reformed with a shiver."
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"Steam rose in spirals, forming shapes—faces pleading, hands reaching—before dissolving into savory clouds."
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"Unease knotted her gut; this wonder bordered on horror, indulgence masking chains."
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"\"Contracts like the ones that dragged Evan under?\" Aurora's voice sharpened, memories of her ex's descent flashing—his rants about deals in the dark."
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"Inside, shelves groaned with bottles, labels curling like tongues, liquids within swirling in impossible colors—emerald tears, ruby storms."
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"Wonder mixed in; the hall's chaos held beauty in its excess—the way light fractured through crystal decanters, painting floors in rainbows of temptation."
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"Nyx melted into the gloom beside her, their silhouette elongating, edges fraying like smoke."
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"Aurora stumbled onto soft earth, knees sinking into loamy soil that clung like wet velvet."
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"She straightened, blinking against a sky that burned amber, low and heavy, as if the sun had curdled into honey overhead."
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"Vines draped from unseen heights, heavy with clusters of grapes that swelled purple-black, skins stretched taut."
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"Juice burst free, sticky and warm, staining her skin with a sweetness that coated her tongue from the mere whiff."
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"Aurora's scar on her wrist itched, the old crescent mark from her childhood fall flaring as if the air itself scratched at it."
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"Tables groaned under platters: towers of pastries flaky with unseen spices, fruits carved into sculptures that wept nectar, meats glistening in pools of sauce t…"
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"She licked her lips, tasting salt from the park's lingering dew."
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"She turned away, spotting a path winding between hedgerows heavy with blossoms that exhaled perfume in sighs."
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"Petals unfurled as they passed, releasing motes of light that danced like fireflies drunk on wine."
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"Nyx hovered near the fountain, their shadow form rippling as if tasting the steam."
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"One cluster cheered around a central pit where flames licked at a spit-roasted beast, its hide crackling, scents of spice and char flooding the space."
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"Isolde wove through the throng, her presence parting them like mist, no one quite meeting her gaze."