Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYA5N83RS82W6JA39C66YDM

Run Details

Duration:
17.1s
Cost:
$0.000161
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air tasted of rain and something else—something metallic and faintly sweet, like overripe fruit left too long in the sun. Detective Harlow Quinn took a slow, deliberate breath, adjusting the worn leather strap of her watch. The dampness clung to the arched ceiling of the abandoned Tube station, a cold, insistent weight. This wasn’t a crime scene she’d ever encountered in sixteen years on the force. Not by a long shot. The Veil Market was less a scene and more a disregard for the laws of physics and frankly, decency. “Doesn’t exactly scream ‘police procedural’ does it?” Eva Kowalski muttered, her breath puffing out in white clouds as she adjusted her round glasses. Her red hair, as always, was a defiant halo against the gloom. She clutched her leather satchel tighter, a small fortress against the unsettling energy thrumming beneath the concrete. “No,” Quinn agreed, her voice flat. The flickering sodium lamps cast long, distorted shadows across the platform, revealing stalls crammed with the bizarre and the unsettling. Glass cases displayed shimmering powders and intricately carved bone artifacts. A hooded figure offered vials of viscous liquids to a customer, their voice a low murmur lost in the damp air. This was the Veil Market, a black market for the supernatural, and the victim—Mr. Silas Blackwood, a collector of rare grimoires—lay sprawled amongst a pile of discarded spell components. Blackwood’s eyes were wide and vacant, fixed on a point just above the platform’s edge. A single, precise puncture wound marred his forehead. No signs of a struggle, no forced entry. Just…gone. “The wound is too neat,” Quinn stated, kneeling beside the body. She disregarded the grimy stains on the platform and focused on the details—the way the rain had distorted the reflection of the sodium lamps in Blackwood’s eyes, the subtle shift in the ambient temperature around the corpse. “Professional. Someone who knows what they’re doing.” “Maybe he was expecting someone?” Eva offered, her fingers nervously tucking a strand of red hair behind her ear. “He collected esoteric texts, after all. Perhaps a disgruntled scholar?” Quinn grunted, carefully examining a small, tarnished object near Blackwood’s hand—a Veil Compass. It was a miniature brass compass, its face etched with a complex array of protective sigils. The needle, a thin sliver of blackened metal, pointed stubbornly upwards, away from the station’s exit. “This wasn’t here before forensics arrived.” “It’s…interesting,” Eva said, stepping closer, her glasses catching the light. “The sigils are quite old. Definitely Shade craftsmanship. They’re designed to navigate rifts, not just record location.” “Shades,” Quinn repeated, the word a dry rasp in her throat. She hadn’t spoken the name aloud in years. It still held a bitter tang of loss, of DS Morris and the inexplicable nightmare that had ended his life. “The Veil Market operates on their terms. This wasn’t a random robbery.” She stood, her movements economical and precise, a military precision honed by years of training and grief. “Check for residue. Any traces of magical manipulation.” Eva quickly retrieved a small sampling kit from her satchel, her movements swift and practiced. "Already on it. There’s a faint shimmer of…residual kinetic energy. Very minimal, but definitely present." “And the bone token?” Quinn asked, gesturing to the entry requirement listed in the codex. “It’s missing.” “Wouldn’t you think someone trying to get into this place would have left a trace?” Eva frowned, her brow furrowed. “This feels...orchestrated. Too clean. Like a performance.” Quinn walked towards a stall selling dried herbs and arcane ingredients, ignoring the proprietor's overly theatrical greeting. The air here was thick with pungent aromas—lavender, myrrh, something acrid and unsettlingly familiar. She examined a small pile of crushed Beetle’s Eye root, a common ingredient in summoning rituals. It was arranged in a neat, deliberate pile, almost as if it had been placed there after the fact. “Crime scene technicians missed this,” she observed, pointing to a nearly invisible smear of iridescent dust on the edge of the stall. "This isn't Beetle's Eye. It's iridescent Nightshade. Used for…minor disruptions. Illusion weaving, mostly." “So, someone used an illusion to funnel Blackwood here?” Eva suggested, her eyes widening. “But why?” “Blackwood collected grimoires,” Quinn said, her voice tightening. “Dangerous grimoires. Books that shouldn't be read. The kind that attract unwanted attention.” She remembered DS Morris’s obsession with forbidden knowledge, the warnings he’d whispered about delving too deep. “I suspect Blackwood stumbled onto something he wasn’t meant to see.” She turned back to the Veil Compass, turning it over in her fingers. The needle continued to point upwards, unwavering. "The Compass isn’t pointing to a rift," she stated, "it's pointing…upwards. Towards the ceiling." Eva followed her gaze, then knelt down, examining the concrete above them. Scratched faintly into the surface, almost imperceptible beneath the grime, were symbols – the same sigils as those on the Veil Compass. “They’ve been layered. Repeatedly.” “Someone was using this space,” Quinn said, her voice low, “as a conduit. A gateway.” Suddenly, a sharp report echoed through the station, followed by a collective gasp from the vendors nearby. A hooded figure, clearly flustered, was attempting to flee through the crowd, clutching a small, leather-bound book. He tripped, dropping the book, and scattering a handful of shimmering dust into the air. Quinn didn’t hesitate. She moved with a speed born of years of training, tackling the fleeing figure to the ground. The man struggled briefly, his face obscured by the deep cowl of his hood, before finally succumbing to her grip. “Identify yourself,” Quinn demanded, pinning him to the damp concrete. The man choked out, “Lysander… Lysander Crowe…I…I just delivered.” As Quinn secured him with handcuffs, Eva knelt beside the dropped book. It was a small, unassuming volume, bound in dark leather and secured with a silver clasp. She carefully opened it, revealing a page filled with precise, unsettling diagrams and stylized script. “This isn’t a grimoire,” she said, her voice filled with a chilling realization. “It’s a blueprint. A schematic…for creating a portal." Quinn glanced up at the ceiling, at the layered sigils, at the Veil Compass relentlessly pointing upwards. The metallic sweetness lingered in the air, stronger now, and she understood. This wasn't just a murder. It was a calculated act of summoning, a desperate attempt to breach something far more dangerous than a black market for enchanted goods. It was an act of opening a door—a door that might not be meant to be opened at all. The rain continued to fall, washing over the Veil Market, a silent testament to the dark secrets hidden beneath London's cobbled streets. And Detective Harlow Quinn knew, with a certainty that chilled her to the bone, that her partner’s death was just the beginning.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.548
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
73.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1124
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"nervously"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count2
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"nervously"
1"carefully"
2"quickly"
3"very"
4"suddenly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Blackwood"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.72% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1124
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"complex"
count1
4
word"navigate"
count1
5
word"furrowed"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"delving"
count1
8
word"unwavering"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"chilling"
count1
11
word"calculated"
count1
12
word"testament"
count1
13
word"chilled"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"gloom"
2"etched"
3"complex"
4"navigate"
5"furrowed"
6"familiar"
7"delving"
8"unwavering"
9"echoed"
10"chilling"
11"calculated"
12"testament"
13"chilled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences66
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences66
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences80
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1117
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
71.61% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions53
wordCount893
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.57
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow2
Quinn14
Tube1
Veil7
Market3
Kowalski1
Mr1
Blackwood4
Compass4
Morris2
Eva8
Beetle1
Eye1
Suddenly1
London1
Detective2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Mr"
4"Blackwood"
5"Compass"
6"Morris"
7"Eva"
8"Beetle"
places
0"Veil"
1"London"
globalScore0.716
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1117
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean41.37
std25.37
cv0.613
sampleLengths
091
152
286
332
455
529
651
727
851
925
1030
1117
1227
1366
1435
1516
1648
1734
1838
1915
2049
2140
2210
239
2443
2521
26120
99.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"was arranged"
1"been placed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs143
matches
0"was attempting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences80
ratio0.1
matches
0"The air tasted of rain and something else—something metallic and faintly sweet, like overripe fruit left too long in the sun."
1"This was the Veil Market, a black market for the supernatural, and the victim—Mr."
2"Silas Blackwood, a collector of rare grimoires—lay sprawled amongst a pile of discarded spell components."
3"She disregarded the grimy stains on the platform and focused on the details—the way the rain had distorted the reflection of the sodium lamps in Blackwood’s eyes, the subtle shift in the ambient temperature around the corpse."
4"Quinn grunted, carefully examining a small, tarnished object near Blackwood’s hand—a Veil Compass."
5"The air here was thick with pungent aromas—lavender, myrrh, something acrid and unsettlingly familiar."
6"Scratched faintly into the surface, almost imperceptible beneath the grime, were symbols – the same sigils as those on the Veil Compass."
7"It was an act of opening a door—a door that might not be meant to be opened at all."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount900
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, leather-bound book."
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.03888888888888889
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.01888888888888889
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences80
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences80
mean13.96
std6.21
cv0.445
sampleLengths
021
116
216
314
45
519
623
712
817
96
1020
1110
1221
1314
1415
1515
168
178
181
1911
2037
217
2219
2310
2413
2516
2616
276
2810
2917
3011
318
3220
3312
3417
358
3615
3715
3815
392
4020
417
4217
4314
4416
4519
4622
4713
4814
492
70.42% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4375
totalSentences80
uniqueOpeners35
52.08% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"Suddenly, a sharp report echoed"
ratio0.016
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences64
matches
0"Her red hair, as always,"
1"She clutched her leather satchel"
2"She disregarded the grimy stains"
3"It was a miniature brass"
4"She hadn’t spoken the name"
5"It still held a bitter"
6"She stood, her movements economical"
7"She examined a small pile"
8"It was arranged in a"
9"she observed, pointing to a"
10"She remembered DS Morris’s obsession"
11"She turned back to the"
12"He tripped, dropping the book,"
13"She moved with a speed"
14"It was a small, unassuming"
15"She carefully opened it, revealing"
16"she said, her voice filled"
17"It was a calculated act"
18"It was an act of"
ratio0.297
6.88% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences64
matches
0"The air tasted of rain"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn took a"
2"The dampness clung to the"
3"This wasn’t a crime scene"
4"The Veil Market was less"
5"Eva Kowalski muttered, her breath"
6"Her red hair, as always,"
7"She clutched her leather satchel"
8"Quinn agreed, her voice flat"
9"The flickering sodium lamps cast"
10"Glass cases displayed shimmering powders"
11"A hooded figure offered vials"
12"This was the Veil Market,"
13"Silas Blackwood, a collector of"
14"Blackwood’s eyes were wide and"
15"A single, precise puncture wound"
16"Quinn stated, kneeling beside the"
17"She disregarded the grimy stains"
18"Eva offered, her fingers nervously"
19"Quinn grunted, carefully examining a"
ratio0.906
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"It still held a bitter tang of loss, of DS Morris and the inexplicable nightmare that had ended his life."
1"And Detective Harlow Quinn knew, with a certainty that chilled her to the bone, that her partner’s death was just the beginning."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Quinn agreed, her voice flat"
1"Eva frowned, her brow furrowed"
2"Eva suggested, her eyes widening"
3"Quinn said, her voice tightening"
4"Quinn said, her voice low,"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"Eva Kowalski muttered (mutter)"
1"Quinn agreed (agree)"
2"Quinn stated (state)"
3"Quinn repeated (repeat)"
4"she observed (observe)"
5"Eva suggested (suggest)"
6"she stated (state)"
7"Quinn demanded (demand)"
8"The man choked (choke)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.452
leniency0.903
rawRatio0.643
effectiveRatio0.581
76.1989%