Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYA6KSPQ9J947ZBAJ2YGGRB

Run Details

Model:
Grok 4
Duration:
1m 49s
Cost:
$0.046470
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door creaked open on rusted hinges, releasing a puff of stale air laced with curry spices from the shop below. Rory peered through the narrow gap, chain still latched, her bright blue eyes narrowing at the figure on the threshold. Lucien stood there, impeccable in his tailored charcoal suit, platinum hair slicked back like he owned the entire shadowed alley of Brick Lane. His heterochromatic gaze—one amber eye glowing faintly in the dim streetlight, the other black as midnight—locked onto hers. He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, the one she knew hid a blade sharper than regret. "Rory." His voice rolled out smooth, laced with that Marseille accent that used to make her pulse skip. No hello, no apology for the hour. Just her name, like he'd never walked away. She gripped the doorframe, knuckles whitening. The small crescent scar on her left wrist itched, a phantom reminder of old wounds—childhood ones, and the deeper cuts he'd left. "What the hell are you doing here, Luc?" He tilted his head, a faint smile tugging at his lips. Not quite arrogant, but close. "Eva called. Said you needed a fixer. Something about shadows creeping too close to your doorstep." "Eva's not here." Rory unlatched the chain with a sharp click, but she didn't step aside. The three deadbolts gleamed behind her, a barrier she'd locked herself after their last encounter. Books and scrolls cluttered every surface inside, Eva's research notes spilling like secrets onto the worn floorboards. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, slunk past her legs, eyeing Lucien with lazy suspicion before vanishing under a stack of ancient tomes. "And I don't need you. Not anymore." Lucien adjusted his grip on the cane, the ivory handle catching the light. He stepped forward, close enough that she caught the faint scent of his cologne—sandalwood and something darker, like brimstone from his father's realm. "You say that, but your eyes tell a different story. Let me in, Rory. This isn't about us." She blocked the doorway, her straight black hair falling across one shoulder as she crossed her arms. At 5'6", she had to tilt her chin up to meet his 5'11" frame, but she held her ground. Memories flooded back unbidden: stolen nights in hidden corners of London's underworld, his hands tracing paths of fire across her skin, whispers of promises he never kept. Then the fight, the accusations, him vanishing into the night with words lodged in her throat. Hurt coiled in her chest, sharp and familiar. "Everything's about us with you. You show up unannounced, at midnight, and expect me to just... what? Forget?" He exhaled, the sound low and frustrated. His amber eye flickered, a tell she remembered from their heated arguments—the demon side surfacing. "I didn't come to rehash the past. But if that's what you want..." He reached out, fingers brushing her arm, light as a question. She jerked back, but not far enough. Electricity sparked where he touched, pulling her into the orbit she'd fought to escape. The flat's cramped space loomed behind her, bookshelves groaning under the weight of forgotten lore, the single bedroom door ajar to reveal a rumpled bed where she'd crashed after her latest delivery shift at the Golden Empress. Curry scents mingled with the musty odor of old paper, wrapping around them like an unwelcome embrace. "Fine." Rory stepped aside, the door swinging wide. "But make it quick. Eva's out chasing leads, and I'm not in the mood for your games." Lucien crossed the threshold, his polished shoes clicking against the floor. He surveyed the chaos—scrolls unfurled across the tiny kitchen table, a half-eaten bowl of rice pushed aside—with a raised eyebrow. "Still living like a scholar in exile? Suits you." He set his cane against the wall, the concealed blade a silent threat in the room's tension. She slammed the door shut, twisting all three deadbolts with deliberate force. "It's Eva's place. I'm just... borrowing it. My flat above Silas' bar got compromised. Shadows, like you said." She moved to the kitchenette, grabbing a chipped mug from the counter, anything to keep her hands busy. Water sloshed as she filled it from the tap, but she didn't drink. "You left, Luc. After everything. No note, no explanation. Just gone." He followed her into the narrow space, his presence filling it like smoke. Ptolemy leaped onto a shelf, knocking a book to the floor with a thud. Lucien bent to pick it up, fingers lingering on the leather cover—a grimoire on demonic pacts, fitting. "I left to protect you. Avaros isn't a realm you wander into lightly. My father... he saw us together. Saw the weakness in it." "Weakness?" Rory set the mug down hard, water spilling over the edge. She whirled on him, close enough to see the faint scar on his jaw from a deal gone wrong, one she'd bandaged in a dingy safehouse. Attraction surged, unwanted, heating her skin. "That's what you call it? I bared my soul to you, Luc. Told you about Evan, about running from Cardiff. And you vanished like I was just another mark." His black eye darkened further, the amber one burning bright. He closed the distance, backing her against the counter. "You think it was easy? Walking away from the one person who saw through my masks?" His hand cupped her cheek, thumb tracing the line of her jaw. She didn't pull away this time. "I dreamed of you every night in that infernal pit. Your laugh, your fire. Things I never said... like how you make me feel human." Her breath caught. The hurt twisted, mingling with the old pull, the spark that had ignited between them in crowded supernatural dens, amid whispers of deals and dangers. She grabbed his lapel, fingers digging into the fine wool. "Then why come back now? Eva could've handled this." "Because it's you." Lucien's voice dropped, rough with unspoken need. He leaned in, lips brushing her ear. "And I couldn't stay away anymore." She shoved him back, but her hands lingered on his chest, feeling the steady thrum of his heart—half-human, half something wilder. The room spun with possibilities, books whispering forgotten spells from the shelves. Ptolemy watched from his perch, tail flicking. "You hurt me, Luc. Left me questioning everything. The attraction... it was real, but so was the pain." He nodded, expression cracking open. Regret etched lines around his eyes. "I know. And I'm here to fix it. Starting with whatever's hunting you." His fingers intertwined with hers, pulling her closer. The cane stood forgotten against the wall, blade hidden but ready. Rory's resolve faltered. She searched his face, the heterochromia a map of his divided soul. Memories resurfaced: Shared laughs over cheap wine in hidden bars, his stories of Marseille streets, her confessions about her barrister father and the life she'd fled. The unsaid words hung between them—love, perhaps, or something close. "Prove it. Tell me what you couldn't before." Lucien's grip tightened. "I love you, Rory. Not the half-demon way, twisted and possessive. The real way. The way that scares me because it's fragile." He kissed her then, fierce and unyielding, his mouth claiming hers with the hunger of lost time. She melted into it, hands sliding up to tangle in his slicked-back hair. The kiss deepened, erasing the months apart, the hurt dissolving in waves of heat. His body pressed against hers, solid and warm, the suit's fabric a barrier she wanted gone. They stumbled toward the bedroom, knocking over a stack of notes that fluttered like dying moths. In the dim light filtering through the single window, overlooking Brick Lane's neon glow, Rory broke the kiss, gasping. "This doesn't mean I forgive you." He smiled, that crooked one she remembered, pulling her onto the bed. "Then let me earn it." His fingers traced her scar, gentle, reverent. "Every inch." She arched under his touch, the world narrowing to them. Ptolemy meowed from the doorway, ignored. Books lay scattered, lore forgotten in the rush of rediscovery. Lucien's cane rested by the wall, a sentinel, as they tangled in sheets smelling of Eva's herbal teas. Hours blurred. Whispers filled the gaps—stories of Avaros' fiery landscapes, her Cardiff childhood under rainy skies. He spoke of his mother, human and fierce, and she admitted the fears Evan had instilled, the walls she'd built. Attraction reignited, fierce and unapologetic, bodies moving in rhythm honed by memory. Dawn crept in, casting long shadows across the flat. Rory lay beside him, head on his chest, listening to the dual beat of his heritage. "What now?" she murmured, tracing patterns on his skin. Lucien turned to her, amber eye softening. "We face it together. No more running." She nodded, the hurt easing, replaced by tentative hope. The unsaid words found voice in the quiet, binding them anew. Outside, Brick Lane stirred with morning vendors, curry scents rising again, but inside, they lingered, two souls forced back into each other's gravity.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory stepped aside [aside]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.484
leniency0.968
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.065
96.69% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1509
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1509
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"reminder"
count1
2
word"encounter"
count1
3
word"tracing"
count3
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"loomed"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"eyebrow"
count1
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count1
11
word"etched"
count1
12
word"resolve"
count1
13
word"fluttered"
count1
14
word"traced"
count1
15
word"sentinel"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"reminder"
2"encounter"
3"tracing"
4"familiar"
5"flickered"
6"loomed"
7"weight"
8"eyebrow"
9"tension"
10"unspoken"
11"etched"
12"resolve"
13"fluttered"
14"traced"
15"sentinel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences87
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1493
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1136
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.79
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Brick3
Lane3
Marseille2
Eva2
Lucien9
London1
Golden1
Empress1
Water1
Shared1
Rory7
Evan1
Ptolemy4
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Water"
3"Shared"
4"Rory"
5"Evan"
6"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Marseille"
3"London"
4"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.67
wordCount1493
matches
0"Not quite arrogant, but close"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
79.61% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean51.48
std22.07
cv0.429
sampleLengths
098
133
236
332
476
554
6105
746
875
925
1057
1172
1268
1373
1478
1547
1623
1758
1843
1959
2042
2159
2225
2326
2444
2548
2634
2714
2843
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs208
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences104
ratio0.087
matches
0"His heterochromatic gaze—one amber eye glowing faintly in the dim streetlight, the other black as midnight—locked onto hers."
1"The small crescent scar on her left wrist itched, a phantom reminder of old wounds—childhood ones, and the deeper cuts he'd left."
2"He stepped forward, close enough that she caught the faint scent of his cologne—sandalwood and something darker, like brimstone from his father's realm."
3"His amber eye flickered, a tell she remembered from their heated arguments—the demon side surfacing."
4"He surveyed the chaos—scrolls unfurled across the tiny kitchen table, a half-eaten bowl of rice pushed aside—with a raised eyebrow."
5"Lucien bent to pick it up, fingers lingering on the leather cover—a grimoire on demonic pacts, fitting."
6"She shoved him back, but her hands lingered on his chest, feeling the steady thrum of his heart—half-human, half something wilder."
7"The unsaid words hung between them—love, perhaps, or something close."
8"Whispers filled the gaps—stories of Avaros' fiery landscapes, her Cardiff childhood under rainy skies."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1042
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.02783109404990403
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0009596928982725527
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean14.36
std7.63
cv0.531
sampleLengths
021
120
223
318
416
518
67
78
86
922
108
1111
125
1316
1416
1515
1617
1721
187
1913
2023
2118
2217
2319
2427
2516
268
2718
287
2915
3024
317
3214
3337
3417
358
3617
3711
3820
3926
4012
4136
4213
4311
4413
4514
4617
4724
4812
4926
69.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.4230769230769231
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners44
77.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences86
matches
0"Just her name, like he'd"
1"Then the fight, the accusations,"
ratio0.023
43.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences86
matches
0"His heterochromatic gaze—one amber eye"
1"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
2"His voice rolled out smooth,"
3"She gripped the doorframe, knuckles"
4"He tilted his head, a"
5"He stepped forward, close enough"
6"She blocked the doorway, her"
7"He exhaled, the sound low"
8"His amber eye flickered, a"
9"He reached out, fingers brushing"
10"She jerked back, but not"
11"He surveyed the chaos—scrolls unfurled"
12"He set his cane against"
13"She slammed the door shut,"
14"She moved to the kitchenette,"
15"He followed her into the"
16"She whirled on him, close"
17"His black eye darkened further,"
18"He closed the distance, backing"
19"His hand cupped her cheek,"
ratio0.442
6.51% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences86
matches
0"The door creaked open on"
1"Rory peered through the narrow"
2"Lucien stood there, impeccable in"
3"His heterochromatic gaze—one amber eye"
4"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
5"His voice rolled out smooth,"
6"She gripped the doorframe, knuckles"
7"The small crescent scar on"
8"He tilted his head, a"
9"Rory unlatched the chain with"
10"The three deadbolts gleamed behind"
11"Books and scrolls cluttered every"
12"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, slunk"
13"Lucien adjusted his grip on"
14"He stepped forward, close enough"
15"She blocked the doorway, her"
16"Memories flooded back unbidden: stolen"
17"He exhaled, the sound low"
18"His amber eye flickered, a"
19"He reached out, fingers brushing"
ratio0.907
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, slunk past her legs, eyeing Lucien with lazy suspicion before vanishing under a stack of ancient tomes."
1"The hurt twisted, mingling with the old pull, the spark that had ignited between them in crowded supernatural dens, amid whispers of deals and dangers."
2"They stumbled toward the bedroom, knocking over a stack of notes that fluttered like dying moths."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"He reached out, fingers brushing her arm, light as a question"
1"Rory stepped aside, the door swinging wide"
2"Rory set, water spilling over the edge"
3"His hand cupped, thumb tracing the line of her jaw"
4"Whispers filled, her Cardiff childhood under rainy skies"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.032
leniency0.065
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.065
80.4496%