Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYA7C04EE6STMJRX8V2208M

Run Details

Duration:
39.5s
Cost:
$0.001811
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest hummed like a nest of contented wasps, low and insistent, when Aurora pushed the back door open. Dusk had seeped through the dusty windows, gilding the scuffed oak bar and turning the green neon sign into a pulse of light on the sidewalk. She flipped the "Open" sign over, the clink sharp in her ears, and reached for the mop leaning by the jukebox. The wood was sticky—beer residue, someone's spilled gin, years of it. She scrubbed at a stain near the foot, the mophead dragging, and missed the floorboard creak upstairs. Not Silas. He preferred to let the creaks be heard, a warning, a signal he was coming. Aurora paused, listening. The bar was empty, save for Marlowe, the newsagent, nursing a bitter, and Mrs. Hargrove, the librarian, her knitting in her lap and a gin and tonic that never seemed to empty. They saw her as the girl who delivered takeout from the Golden Empress, the one with the quiet eyes and the scar on her wrist. No one saw the girl who used to sit on Silas's desk, going over case files he'd "accidentally" left out, asking about Prague and MI6 and why he flinched when someone said "limp." The door bell jangled. Aurora tensed, then relaxed. "Evening, Laila," Silas's voice came from the back. She froze. Laila was her alias—Eva had stuck it on her the night she fled Cardiff, said, *"Names get left behind. You can't outrun them if you call yourself Aurora."* Silas had never used it in the bar before. Never. She turned. He stood in the doorway to the back room, his auburn beard trimmed, his left leg slightly bent. The signet ring glinted on his right hand, a family crest she'd memorized: a raven with an olive branch. It had been three years since she'd called him "Sir" out of habit, four since she'd stopped flinching when he touched her shoulder. "Evening, Si," she said, keeping her voice steady. She set the mop against the bar, wiping her hands on her apron—too small, borrowed from Mrs. Patel. "Early soundings, or you just miss my company?" "Company's overrated." He crossed the room, the floorboards creaking under his weight. "How's the delivery run? Still out there chasing night owls and drunk students?" "Drunk students tip better." She nodded at the cash register. "Mrs. Hargrove's gin's on you. She's got her eye on the barkeep again. Says he's got 'better hair than the last one.'" Silas snorted. "Told her I'd introduce her to my cousin in Leeds. Real close cropper." He pulled a flask from his pocket, took a sip, then poured her a glass. "Scotch. On the rocks. For the nerves." Aurora took it, her fingers wrapping around the glass. The liquid burned going down. "Nerves are for people who care. I don't care." "Bullshit." He leaned against the bar, his voice softer. "You care too much, that's the problem. Always have." She set the glass down, hard. It clinked. "How's the knee? Still being a pain?" "Worse when I think about you drinkin' on the job." He nodded at the glass. "One I won't charge you for. But only 'cause it's you." Aurora picked up the glass again, took a slower sip. The scotch burned, but it didn't numb. "You ever think about it? The old days?" Silas looked away, out the window at the neon light. "What days? The ones where I had a job, or the ones where I thought my job was supposed to make sense?" "Both." She set the glass down, too. "I think about 'em. The ones where you'd stay up all night explainin' how to read a map, or why you never wore a holster 'cause it slowed you down. Or the time you brought me a lollipop when Evan yelled at me." His jaw tightened. "I should've..." "You couldn't have stopped him," she said, too sharp. "You weren't there." "I could've tried," he said, quieter. "I could've done more." She looked at her hands, at the scar on her wrist, a pale crescent. "You did more than enough. You gave me a place to stay. A job. A name." "Laila," he said, and it was a whisper. Aurora's eyes snapped up. "Don't." "Don't what?" "Don't remind me who I'm supposed to be." She pushed away from the bar, wiping her hands on her apron again. "I'm Rory Carter, delivery girl. That's who I am now." "No," he said, taking a step toward her. "You're Aurora. The girl who used to climb on my desk and ask about your dad's cases. The girl who cried when I told her your mom was sick. The girl who's still scared of the dark, even if she won't admit it." She flinched. "You don't know shit." "I know you better than you know yourself," he said, steady. "And you know what? I'm sorry. For not being there. For letting you think you had to be someone else." "I didn't think I had to be someone else," she said, but her voice cracked. "I thought I had to survive." Silas reached out, hesitated, then touched her elbow. His hand was warm, calloused. "You did survive. And you're alive. That's the point." The door bell jangled. They both turned. A woman stood there, silhouetted in the light, her hair dark and straight, her height 5'6". Aurora's breath hitched. "Rory?" The woman stepped forward, the light catching her face. She had Aurora's blue eyes, but her face was softer, younger, the lines around her mouth not yet there. "It's me. Eva." Aurora's throat went dry. She looked at Silas, who was already staring at the woman, his mouth tight. "You... you came." Eva stepped closer, her gaze falling to Aurora's wrist, to the scar. "I never stopped. I knew you were here. I've been looking for you." She reached out, and Aurora didn't flinch. Their hands touched, warm and solid. "It's been so long." "Too long," Eva said, and there was a tear in her voice. "I'm sorry I didn't come sooner. I was scared." "Scared of what?" "Scared I'd find you... changed." Aurora looked at herself in the mirror behind the bar, at the woman with the scar, the apron, the name Rory. "I am changed." Eva smiled, a little sad. "I'm glad. You needed to change." Silas cleared his throat. They turned. "I'll... I'll get us drinks." He walked to the bar, his limp noticeable now, and Aurora watched him go, her heart pounding. Eva sat down on the stool next to hers, the wood creaking. "How old are you?" "25." "Jesus," Eva said, shaking her head. "You were 15 when I last saw you, and you had this... this fire. Like the world was a puzzle you were determined to solve. Now you just... fit." Aurora laughed, bitter. "Fitting's all I can do." "No," Eva said, taking her hand. "You're still solving the puzzle. Just in a different way." They sat there, silent, as Silas set three glasses down. Aurora stared at her drink, at the way the light hit it, and thought about Evan, about the way he'd hit her, about the way she'd run from Cardiff to London, from Silas's warnings to Silas's protection. She thought about the scar on her wrist, a reminder of a childhood accident, of a life before Evan, before London, before Silas. And now Eva was here, a reminder of the girl she used to be, and Silas, a reminder of the man who'd helped her become more. "We should go," Eva said, after a while, standing up. "It's late." Aurora nodded, standing too. She hugged Eva, tight, and felt the older woman's arms squeeze back. "I'm glad you came." "Me too," Eva said, pulling away. "Call me." She walked to the door, turned, and smiled. "I will." Aurora watched her go, the neon light casting strips across her face. When she turned, Silas was looking at her, his eyes soft. "She looks like you." "Like me did," Aurora said. "No," he said. "Like you are. Just... softer." She laughed, quiet. "Softer's overrated." "Maybe," he said, "but it's necessary." He held out his hand, and she took it, their fingers lacing together. His hand was warm, steady. "You'll come around," he said. "Maybe," she said, but she didn't pull away. The bar hummed, the neon light flickering. Outside, the city of London sprawled, endless and alive. Inside, two friends stood together, the weight of years between them, but the hope of something new, too. The bell jangled again. A man stumbled in, muttering, and Aurora stepped away from Silas. He squeezed her hand once, then let go. "I'll get his drink." She nodded, watching him walk to the bar. The scar on her wrist itched. Eva had been right. She was changed. But maybe change wasn't a bad thing. Maybe it was just... time. The jukebox clicked, and a scratchy song came on—something old, something sweet. Aurora grabbed a cloth, wiped down a stool, and waited. For what, she wasn't sure. But she waited.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags45
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She pushed away [away]"
1"The bell jangled again. [again]"
dialogueSentences81
tagDensity0.556
leniency1
rawRatio0.044
effectiveRatio0.044
96.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1519
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Patel"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
70.38% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1519
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"pounding"
count1
4
word"determined"
count1
5
word"reminder"
count3
highlights
0"pulse"
1"weight"
2"whisper"
3"pounding"
4"determined"
5"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences97
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen96
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords13
totalWords1515
ratio0.009
matches
0"\"Names get left behind. You can't outrun them if you call yourself Aurora.\""
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions27
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions63
wordCount1034
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.84
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Aurora19
Silas16
Marlowe1
Mrs2
Golden1
Empress1
Prague1
Eva12
Cardiff2
Rory1
Evan2
London3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Silas"
4"Mrs"
5"Eva"
6"Rory"
7"Evan"
places
0"Golden"
1"Prague"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
globalScore0.581
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1515
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean22.61
std21.2
cv0.937
sampleLengths
095
1110
216
340
462
534
625
732
837
923
1018
1115
1226
1325
1432
1550
165
1712
1810
1930
208
215
222
2331
2451
256
2631
2721
2822
2926
301
3131
3221
3325
3417
3521
363
375
3824
3911
4011
4129
424
431
4435
458
4616
4796
4812
4920
98.03% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences97
matches
0"were determined"
1"was changed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs200
matches
0"was coming"
1"was looking"
54.95% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences130
ratio0.031
matches
0"The wood was sticky—beer residue, someone's spilled gin, years of it."
1"Laila was her alias—Eva had stuck it on her the night she fled Cardiff, said, *\"Names get left behind. You can't outrun them if you call yourself Aurora.\"* Silas had never used it in the bar before."
2"She set the mop against the bar, wiping her hands on her apron—too small, borrowed from Mrs."
3"The jukebox clicked, and a scratchy song came on—something old, something sweet. Aurora grabbed a cloth, wiped down a stool, and waited."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount620
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.02903225806451613
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0032258064516129032
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean11.65
std11.76
cv1.009
sampleLengths
020
126
221
311
417
52
615
73
814
918
1025
1133
124
134
148
152
1637
171
182
1918
2019
2123
228
2317
241
258
2612
2713
2810
2922
302
3128
327
339
345
359
369
379
386
392
407
4115
4211
4310
447
458
4610
4722
487
4943
58.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3875968992248062
totalSentences129
uniqueOpeners50
41.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"Just in a different"
ratio0.012
32.35% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences81
matches
0"She flipped the sign over,"
1"She scrubbed at a stain"
2"He preferred to let the"
3"They saw her as the"
4"He stood in the doorway"
5"It had been three years"
6"she said, keeping her voice"
7"She set the mop against"
8"He crossed the room, the"
9"She nodded at the cash"
10"He pulled a flask from"
11"He leaned against the bar,"
12"She set the glass down,"
13"He nodded at the glass"
14"She set the glass down,"
15"His jaw tightened."
16"she said, too sharp"
17"he said, quieter"
18"She looked at her hands,"
19"he said, and it was"
ratio0.469
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences81
matches
0"The Raven's Nest hummed like"
1"Dusk had seeped through the"
2"She flipped the sign over,"
3"The wood was sticky—beer residue,"
4"She scrubbed at a stain"
5"He preferred to let the"
6"Aurora paused, listening."
7"The bar was empty, save"
8"Hargrove, the librarian, her knitting"
9"They saw her as the"
10"The door bell jangled."
11"Aurora tensed, then relaxed."
12"Silas's voice came from the"
13"Laila was her alias—Eva had"
14"He stood in the doorway"
15"The signet ring glinted on"
16"It had been three years"
17"she said, keeping her voice"
18"She set the mop against"
19"He crossed the room, the"
ratio0.938
61.73% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"Now you just..."
ratio0.012
80.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He walked to the bar, his limp noticeable now, and Aurora watched him go, her heart pounding. Eva sat down on the stool next to hers, the wood creaking."
1"They sat there, silent, as Silas set three glasses down. Aurora stared at her drink, at the way the light hit it, and thought about Evan, about the way he'd hit…"
34.09% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags33
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"He crossed, the floorboards creaking under his weight"
1"He leaned, his voice softer"
2"She set, too"
3"he said, quieter"
4"he said, steady"
5"she said, but her voice cracked"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags20
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"It had (have)"
1"Aurora laughed (laugh)"
2"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences81
tagDensity0.247
leniency0.494
rawRatio0.15
effectiveRatio0.074
81.3950%