Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYA7C5549Q9NB557EMHRC6S

Run Details

Duration:
3m 25s
Cost:
$0.017031
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory fumbled with the third deadbolt’s brass latch, her left wrist’s crescent scar catching the dim curry-house glow seeping through Eva’s flat window. She’d been hunched over a tattered scroll mapping Avarosian demon portals for an hour, her straight black hair falling in a curtain over her bright blue eyes, when the sharp rap on the door jolted her. The latch clicked free after a second of jiggling—Eva’s deadbolts jammed with even the faintest rain, a quirk Rory had memorized after a dozen late-night crashes. She yanked the door open, a half-unrolled scroll crumpling in her right hand. Lucien stood on the step. His tailored charcoal suit fit him like a second skin, the fabric catching the streetlamp’s yellow haze so that every stitch looked intentional. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, no strand out of place, a habit he’d picked up to hide the faint Avarosian horn nubs that sometimes protruded when he was stressed. His ivory-handled cane tapped the concrete once, a quiet warning she recognized from old missions—he only did that when he thought danger lurked nearby. One amber eye locked on hers; the black one glinted, a faint flicker of the Avarosian blood thrumming in his veins that he usually hid with contact lenses (but he’d foregone them today, a sign he was being unguarded). She let the scroll drop. It unfurled across the doorframe’s scuffed wood, its inked runes smudging slightly against the curry-house’s sticky air—cardamom and burnt naan clinging to every breath she took. Ptolemy’s tabby form launched from the windowsill, where he’d been napping on a stack of Eva’s research notes about Avarosian enforcers. He landed on a taller stack of leather-bound books, sending two clattering to the floor (their pages fluttering to reveal sketches of demon claws), and hissed—a sharp, guttural sound that cut through the distant clink of curry-house cutlery and the laughter of a group of patrons below. You forgot the deadbolts jam in the rain. Rory’s fingers curled around the doorframe until her knuckles turned white. She’d not heard that lilt of Marseille in months, the accent he only let slip when he was off-guard or afraid—like the night they’d hidden in a London alley after a demon chase, sharing a stolen kebab and watching the stars. She tugged her wrist back, hiding the scar behind the door’s edge, as if he could read her childhood trauma in its crescent curve. I didn’t forget. I checked them twice before you banged. Lucien’s thumb brushed the cane’s ivory handle, a nervous tic she’d never seen him display before. He shifted his weight, his suit’s shoulder pad catching a gust of wind that carried the scent of cardamom and burnt naan up the steps, and his black eye flickered again—this time, a sign of irritation, not Avarosian power. I need to talk. The flat’s cramped air pressed in. Every surface behind her was stacked with Eva’s research: scrolls on demon summoning tied with frayed string, books on Avarosian hierarchy with cracked spines, loose papers scrawled with Eva’s messy handwriting (she’d been working on a theory that Avarosian enforcers tracked humans via their daily routines). She’d come here that morning to help Eva cross-reference portal locations with her Golden Empress delivery routes, but now the room felt like a trap, full of reminders of the mission where he’d left her. No. She moved to slam the door, but his cane shot out. Its tip slid between the door and the frame, stopping her cold. She knew the thin blade hid inside; she’d seen him use it to cut through a demon’s tentacle once, his movements precise, unforgiving, as he’d pulled her out of the creature’s grasp. You’re in danger. The enforcers from Avaros tracked your delivery route last week. They followed you to Silas’ bar, then to the Golden Empress, then here. Rory’s breath caught. She’d noticed a shadow following her on her runs— a tall figure in a black coat, always lingering by the curry house’s entrance—but she’d brushed it off as a random thief targeting delivery workers. She stepped back, the door creaking open a fraction more, and her boot kicked a loose scroll. It skittered across the floor, landing at Ptolemy’s paws. He batted it once, then curled up on top of it, his purr a quiet counterpoint to the tension in the room. You left me to face enforcers alone six months ago. Why do you care now? Lucien’s amber eye softened. He pushed the door open further, his cane retracting slightly, and stepped over the unfurled scroll. He didn’t touch anything—didn’t brush the books, didn’t glance at the research notes—like he was scared to taint the space with his presence, scared to remind her of the night he’d vanished without a word. I had a contract. Avarosian nobles forced me to leave. They kidnapped my human mother from her Marseille flat, threatened to send her to Avaros if I didn’t abandon the mission and complete a secret task for them. I couldn’t tell you; they would have killed Eva, too—they knew she was your closest friend, your weak spot. Rory’s bright blue eyes narrowed. She’d spent six months replaying that night: she’d been pinned under a demon’s claw, her left wrist scraping against a brick wall (the childhood scar throbbing so badly she’d thought she’d pass out), yelling for him, and he’d vanished. No note, no warning, just his cane’s faint tap fading into the dark. She’d walked back to Silas’ bar alone, her clothes torn, her hands shaking, and had lied to Eva about what happened. You could have sent a message. A single rune, a word with Silas. Anything. She turned away, her straight black hair swinging over her shoulder, and knelt to pick up the two books Ptolemy had knocked over. Their faded spines read *Avarosian Enforcer Hierarchy* and *Demon Summoning for Beginners*, and she brushed dust off them before stacking them back on the pile. Ptolemy stood, stretched, and rubbed against her leg—his purr a quiet comfort she’d come to rely on when things felt too heavy. I tried. The enforcers were watching Silas’ bar 24/7. They intercepted every note I sent, every rune I scrawled on a wall. I had to lay low in a safe house in Kent for three months, then work the contract for another three. I didn’t sleep for weeks, worrying you’d get caught by the enforcers I left you to face. Lucien’s voice dropped. He moved closer, his suit’s fabric brushing a stack of scrolls, and his black eye flickered—this time, a sign of guilt. She could hear the truth in his words, the tremor he tried to hide, and her anger softened a fraction. I’m here now. I can fix this. I can get the enforcers off your back. Rory stood. She turned to face him, and her elbow knocked a stack of research notes. They toppled over, sending loose papers fluttering across the floor—each one scrawled with Eva’s sketches of demon portals, each one a reminder of the things they’d left unsaid. She watched them fall, and she thought about the night in the alley, the way he’d pulled her out of the demon’s grasp, the way he’d leaned in so close she could feel his breath on her cheek, the way he’d stopped at the last second and said he couldn’t risk hurting her. You can’t fix what you broke. Rory’s voice cracked. She’d not let herself cry about him since he left, but now the tears pricked the corners of her eyes. She wiped them away with the back of her hand, her fingers brushing her black hair, and she could feel the scar on her wrist throbbing again. I have proof. Lucien pulled a small scroll from his suit’s inner pocket. He unrolled it, revealing a signed contract from the Avarosian nobles—their seal stamped in red wax (a circular mark with a demon’s head in the center), their handwriting scrawled across the paper in a language she didn’t recognize (but she’d seen it on the demon that had pinned her). The scroll had a translation scribbled in the margin in his neat handwriting: he’d been forced to leave her to retrieve a stolen artifact from a London museum, and he could return only when the enforcers were distracted by the artifact’s recovery. I stole it from their safe last night. I had to fight three enforcers to get it. It’s proof I didn’t abandon you by choice. Rory stepped closer. She leaned in to look at the scroll, and her shoulder brushed his. The scent of his suit’s lavender detergent mixed with the curry-house’s cardamom, a familiar combination that made her heart race faster than it had during the demon chase six months ago. She pointed to the seal—she’d seen it on the demon’s chest, a bright red mark that had glowed when it attacked her. That’s their seal. I saw it on the demon that pinned me. Lucien nodded. He rolled the scroll back up, tucking it into his suit pocket, and his cane tapped the floor once, a quiet affirmation that he was telling the truth. I can take you to a safe house in the countryside. It’s hidden from Avarosian enforcers, has a portal to a neutral realm if we need to flee. I’ve already packed supplies—your favorite tea from the Golden Empress, the book on Pre-Law you left in my car last year. Rory’s fingers curled into a fist. She thought about her Pre-Law days in Cardiff, her abusive ex Evan (who’d hated her quick thinking, who’d tried to break her), the way she’d fled to London at Eva’s behest to start over. She thought about the missions with Lucien, the way he’d always had her back until he didn’t, the way he’d remembered her favorite tea (jasmine, with extra honey). She thought about the night in the alley, the way he’d nearly kissed her, the way she’d wanted him to. What about the things we didn’t say? Lucien’s amber eye widened. The black one flickered, a faint glow that told her he was being completely honest. He stepped closer, his face inches from hers, and she could feel his breath on her cheek—warm and steady, a contrast to the chaos of the past six months. We can say them. All of them. We can talk about the alley, about the way I’ve been in love with you since the day you outsmarted a demon enforcer with a delivery bag full of dumplings. We can talk about your Pre-Law days, about your fear of getting hurt again. But first, we have to get you safe. The enforcers will be here in an hour. Ptolemy jumped from the counter. He landed at their feet, rubbing against Lucien’s suit leg—a surprising gesture, since the cat hated strangers (he’d scratched a delivery man once for leaning against Eva’s door). Lucien looked down, a small smile tugging at his lips, and his amber eye softened. He likes you. Rory’s lips twitched. She’d never seen Ptolemy warm up to anyone but Eva and her. She glanced at Lucien’s cane, then at his eyes, and she knew she had to trust him—even if it scared her, even if she still hurt from his departure. She stepped back, her boot crunching on a loose scroll, and walked to the corner of the flat where her Golden Empress delivery bag was tucked under a stack of books. I need to grab my bag. It has my phone, my wallet, the crescent-shaped locket my mother gave me. She slung the bag over her shoulder, her fingers brushing the locket through the bag’s fabric, and turned back to him. He was standing by the door, his cane in hand, waiting for her—no longer the distant fixer she’d known, but the man who’d saved her life, the man who’d loved her in secret. The enforcers will be here soon. Rory nodded. She stepped toward him, her hand brushing his arm—her first deliberate touch since he’d left. His suit was soft, his skin warm under the fabric, and she could feel his heart racing through his coat.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2058
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.56% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2058
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"lilt"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count3
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"reminder"
count1
6
word"could feel"
count4
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"race"
count1
9
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"lilt"
2"weight"
3"flickered"
4"tension"
5"reminder"
6"could feel"
7"familiar"
8"race"
9"racing"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences123
matches
0"was scared"
1"n in love"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences123
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences123
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords7
totalWords2028
ratio0.003
matches
0"Avarosian Enforcer Hierarchy"
1"Demon Summoning for Beginners"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions77
wordCount1999
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity0.55
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva11
Avarosian11
Rory11
Marseille2
London3
Golden3
Empress3
Avaros2
Ptolemy6
You5
Silas1
Enforcer1
Summoning1
Kent1
Pre-Law3
Cardiff1
Evan1
Lucien11
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Ptolemy"
3"You"
4"Silas"
5"Summoning"
6"Evan"
7"Lucien"
places
0"Avarosian"
1"Marseille"
2"London"
3"Golden"
4"Avaros"
5"Kent"
6"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences91
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a trap, full of reminders of"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.493
wordCount2028
matches
0"not let herself cry about him since he left, but now the tears pricked the corners of her eyes"
85.37% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences123
matches
0"heard that lilt"
1"here that morning"
2"replaying that night"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean45.07
std32.19
cv0.714
sampleLengths
098
15
2117
331
468
58
676
710
855
94
1087
111
1255
1326
1485
1515
1655
1757
1878
1914
2070
2160
2244
2315
2497
256
2650
273
28101
2925
3069
3112
3230
3349
3488
357
3648
3767
3848
393
4075
4119
4254
436
4437
82.44% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount8
totalSentences123
matches
0"been hunched"
1"was slicked"
2"was stressed"
3"was stacked"
4"was scared"
5"been pinned"
6"get caught"
7"been forced"
8"were distracted"
9"was tucked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs348
matches
0"was being"
1"were watching"
2"was telling"
3"was being"
4"was standing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount22
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences22
totalSentences123
ratio0.179
matches
0"The latch clicked free after a second of jiggling—Eva’s deadbolts jammed with even the faintest rain, a quirk Rory had memorized after a dozen late-night crashes."
1"His ivory-handled cane tapped the concrete once, a quiet warning she recognized from old missions—he only did that when he thought danger lurked nearby."
2"One amber eye locked on hers; the black one glinted, a faint flicker of the Avarosian blood thrumming in his veins that he usually hid with contact lenses (but he’d foregone them today, a sign he was being unguarded)."
3"It unfurled across the doorframe’s scuffed wood, its inked runes smudging slightly against the curry-house’s sticky air—cardamom and burnt naan clinging to every breath she took."
4"He landed on a taller stack of leather-bound books, sending two clattering to the floor (their pages fluttering to reveal sketches of demon claws), and hissed—a sharp, guttural sound that cut through the distant clink of curry-house cutlery and the laughter of a group of patrons below."
5"She’d not heard that lilt of Marseille in months, the accent he only let slip when he was off-guard or afraid—like the night they’d hidden in a London alley after a demon chase, sharing a stolen kebab and watching the stars."
6"He shifted his weight, his suit’s shoulder pad catching a gust of wind that carried the scent of cardamom and burnt naan up the steps, and his black eye flickered again—this time, a sign of irritation, not Avarosian power."
7"She knew the thin blade hid inside; she’d seen him use it to cut through a demon’s tentacle once, his movements precise, unforgiving, as he’d pulled her out of the creature’s grasp."
8"She’d noticed a shadow following her on her runs— a tall figure in a black coat, always lingering by the curry house’s entrance—but she’d brushed it off as a random thief targeting delivery workers."
9"He didn’t touch anything—didn’t brush the books, didn’t glance at the research notes—like he was scared to taint the space with his presence, scared to remind her of the night he’d vanished without a word."
10"I couldn’t tell you; they would have killed Eva, too—they knew she was your closest friend, your weak spot."
11"Ptolemy stood, stretched, and rubbed against her leg—his purr a quiet comfort she’d come to rely on when things felt too heavy."
12"He moved closer, his suit’s fabric brushing a stack of scrolls, and his black eye flickered—this time, a sign of guilt."
13"They toppled over, sending loose papers fluttering across the floor—each one scrawled with Eva’s sketches of demon portals, each one a reminder of the things they’d left unsaid."
14"He unrolled it, revealing a signed contract from the Avarosian nobles—their seal stamped in red wax (a circular mark with a demon’s head in the center), their handwriting scrawled across the paper in a language she didn’t recognize (but she’d seen it on the demon that had pinned her)."
15"She pointed to the seal—she’d seen it on the demon’s chest, a bright red mark that had glowed when it attacked her."
16"I’ve already packed supplies—your favorite tea from the Golden Empress, the book on Pre-Law you left in my car last year."
17"He stepped closer, his face inches from hers, and she could feel his breath on her cheek—warm and steady, a contrast to the chaos of the past six months."
18"He landed at their feet, rubbing against Lucien’s suit leg—a surprising gesture, since the cat hated strangers (he’d scratched a delivery man once for leaning against Eva’s door)."
19"She glanced at Lucien’s cane, then at his eyes, and she knew she had to trust him—even if it scared her, even if she still hurt from his departure."
20"He was standing by the door, his cane in hand, waiting for her—no longer the distant fixer she’d known, but the man who’d saved her life, the man who’d loved her in secret."
21"She stepped toward him, her hand brushing his arm—her first deliberate touch since he’d left."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount646
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.02321981424148607
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.007739938080495356
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean16.49
std12.43
cv0.754
sampleLengths
023
136
226
313
45
523
631
724
839
95
1026
1121
1247
138
1411
1541
1624
173
187
1916
2039
214
226
2346
2435
251
2611
2712
2832
293
3010
3113
323
3334
3417
359
3622
3710
385
394
4016
4135
424
436
4428
4519
465
4739
4813
4921
36.99% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.2032520325203252
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount80
totalSentences117
matches
0"She’d been hunched over a"
1"She yanked the door open,"
2"His tailored charcoal suit fit"
3"His platinum blond hair was"
4"His ivory-handled cane tapped the"
5"She let the scroll drop."
6"It unfurled across the doorframe’s"
7"He landed on a taller"
8"You forgot the deadbolts jam"
9"She’d not heard that lilt"
10"She tugged her wrist back,"
11"I didn’t forget."
12"I checked them twice before"
13"He shifted his weight, his"
14"I need to talk."
15"She’d come here that morning"
16"She moved to slam the"
17"Its tip slid between the"
18"She knew the thin blade"
19"You’re in danger."
ratio0.684
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount111
totalSentences117
matches
0"Rory fumbled with the third"
1"She’d been hunched over a"
2"The latch clicked free after"
3"She yanked the door open,"
4"Lucien stood on the step."
5"His tailored charcoal suit fit"
6"His platinum blond hair was"
7"His ivory-handled cane tapped the"
8"She let the scroll drop."
9"It unfurled across the doorframe’s"
10"Ptolemy’s tabby form launched from"
11"He landed on a taller"
12"You forgot the deadbolts jam"
13"Rory’s fingers curled around the"
14"She’d not heard that lilt"
15"She tugged her wrist back,"
16"I didn’t forget."
17"I checked them twice before"
18"Lucien’s thumb brushed the cane’s"
19"He shifted his weight, his"
ratio0.949
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
ratio0
43.65% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences72
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"He landed on a taller stack of leather-bound books, sending two clattering to the floor (their pages fluttering to reveal sketches of demon claws), and hissed—a…"
1"She tugged her wrist back, hiding the scar behind the door’s edge, as if he could read her childhood trauma in its crescent curve."
2"He shifted his weight, his suit’s shoulder pad catching a gust of wind that carried the scent of cardamom and burnt naan up the steps, and his black eye flicker…"
3"She wiped them away with the back of her hand, her fingers brushing her black hair, and she could feel the scar on her wrist throbbing again."
4"He unrolled it, revealing a signed contract from the Avarosian nobles—their seal stamped in red wax (a circular mark with a demon’s head in the center), their h…"
5"The scent of his suit’s lavender detergent mixed with the curry-house’s cardamom, a familiar combination that made her heart race faster than it had during the …"
6"She thought about her Pre-Law days in Cardiff, her abusive ex Evan (who’d hated her quick thinking, who’d tried to break her), the way she’d fled to London at E…"
7"The black one flickered, a faint glow that told her he was being completely honest."
8"He landed at their feet, rubbing against Lucien’s suit leg—a surprising gesture, since the cat hated strangers (he’d scratched a delivery man once for leaning a…"
9"He was standing by the door, his cane in hand, waiting for her—no longer the distant fixer she’d known, but the man who’d saved her life, the man who’d loved he…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
75.7128%