| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx’s violet eyes gleamed faintly [faintly]" | | 1 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 71 | | tagDensity | 0.254 | | leniency | 0.507 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.056 | |
| 89.11% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1836 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 23.75% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1836 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "velvet" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "could feel" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "silk" | | 11 | "perfect" | | 12 | "stomach" | | 13 | "charged" | | 14 | "electric" | | 15 | "warmth" | | 16 | "unreadable" | | 17 | "lurch" | | 18 | "oppressive" | | 19 | "reminder" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes widened" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 154 | | matches | | 0 | "g in sympathy" | | 1 | "was sad" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 154 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 205 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.99% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 47 | | markdownWords | 100 | | totalWords | 1818 | | ratio | 0.055 | | matches | | 0 | "alive" | | 1 | "This is safe. For now." | | 2 | "soft" | | 3 | "thicker" | | 4 | "moved" | | 5 | "alive" | | 6 | "it" | | 7 | "shift" | | 8 | "see" | | 9 | "look" | | 10 | "wrong" | | 11 | "almost" | | 12 | "ribbons" | | 13 | "taken" | | 14 | "soul" | | 15 | "shifted" | | 16 | "unfolded" | | 17 | "moved" | | 18 | "rotten" | | 19 | "In her mind." | | 20 | "“You are not welcome.”" | | 21 | "afraid" | | 22 | "“You carry the scent of the Veil,”" | | 23 | "“You carry the taste of the mortal world. You do not belong here.”" | | 24 | "“The grove hungers,”" | | 25 | "“It hungers for *truth" | | 26 | "moved" | | 27 | "snapped" | | 28 | "caught" | | 29 | "“You have lied to us,”" | | 30 | "“You have *hidden" | | 31 | "“You have withheld,”" | | 32 | "“You have kept secrets from the ones who seek you.”" | | 33 | "“And what do *you" | | 34 | "waiting" | | 35 | "Answer," | | 36 | "longing" | | 37 | "seen" | | 38 | "relaxed" | | 39 | "you" | | 40 | "found" | | 41 | "it" | | 42 | "shift" | | 43 | "glowed" | | 44 | "cheery" | | 45 | "blur" | | 46 | "coming through" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 95 | | wordCount | 1475 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 2.44 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | London | 2 | | Carter | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Isolde | 28 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Shade | 1 | | Rory | 36 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 16 | | Veil | 2 | | Barrier | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.28 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "smelled like honey and damp earth, thick w" | | 1 | "quite know how to hold a knife" | | 2 | "looked like they’d been carved by hands t" | | 3 | "something like static, like she’d stuck her" | | 4 | "looked like *ribbons*—long, silver strand" | | 5 | "smelled like burning sugar and something o" | | 6 | "something like fear" | | 7 | "something like awe" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.55 | | wordCount | 1818 | | matches | | 0 | "not pain, but something like static, like she’d stuck her tongue to a batt" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 205 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 97 | | mean | 18.74 | | std | 20.75 | | cv | 1.107 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 76 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 92 | | 3 | 68 | | 4 | 76 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 40 | | 8 | 48 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 72 | | 12 | 40 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 43 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 88 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 62 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 64 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 43 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 74 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 26 |
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| 96.15% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 154 | | matches | | 0 | "been replaced" | | 1 | "been carved" | | 2 | "been painted" | | 3 | "were wrapped" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 10 | | totalVerbs | 277 | | matches | | 0 | "was staring" | | 1 | "were resisting" | | 2 | "wasn’t looking" | | 3 | "was staring" | | 4 | "was holding" | | 5 | "was *waiting" | | 6 | "was *longing" | | 7 | "was watching" | | 8 | "was thinning" | | 9 | "was *coming" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 19 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 17 | | totalSentences | 205 | | ratio | 0.083 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory Carter adjusted the strap of her backpack, her fingers brushing the cold metal of the Fae-forged blade at her hip—a gift from Isolde, one she still wasn’t entirely sure she deserved." | | 1 | "The Shade had warned them this place would be different—*alive*, in a way that defied mortal logic—but Rory hadn’t expected the way her skin prickled with awareness, like the hairs on her arms had been replaced by tiny, trembling antennae." | | 2 | "The moment she touched it, a jolt shot up her arm—not pain, but something like static, like she’d stuck her tongue to a battery." | | 3 | "Isolde had stopped at the center of the clearing, where the wildflowers grew in impossible colors—blossoms the shade of bruises, petals that shimmered like oil on water." | | 4 | "She pulled her hand back—and her fingers came away damp, but not with water." | | 5 | "The taste exploded across her tongue—sweet, but beneath it, something metallic, like blood and copper." | | 6 | "“Of course it is.” Isolde’s voice was mild, but her fingers twitched at her sides, as if she were resisting the urge to reach for something—anything—to ground herself." | | 7 | "And there it was—a shimmering distortion, like heat rising off pavement, but *wrong*, like the world had been painted with a brushstroke too heavy, too deliberate." | | 8 | "Instead, its limbs were wrapped in what looked like *ribbons*—long, silver strands that moved when she wasn’t looking, coiling and uncoiling like serpents." | | 9 | "She reached out—and touched the oak." | | 10 | "The flowers twisted into shapes that made her stomach lurch—faces, screaming, their petals stretched into silent mouths." | | 11 | "And then—" | | 12 | "The silver ribbons wrapped around the branches *moved*, coiling tighter, tighter—" | | 13 | "For the first time, Rory saw something raw in her eyes—something like fear." | | 14 | "And then—" | | 15 | "Isolde’s fingers brushed the pendant at her throat—a silver chain Rory hadn’t noticed before, one that matched the blade at Rory’s hip." | | 16 | "Because as they turned to leave, Rory saw the oak’s bark *shift*, the silver ribbons coiling tighter around the branches—and one of them, just for a heartbeat, *glowed* with the same pale lavender as Isolde’s eyes." |
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| 98.05% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1492 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 63 | | adverbRatio | 0.04222520107238606 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00804289544235925 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 205 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 205 | | mean | 8.87 | | std | 7.73 | | cv | 0.872 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 40 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 31 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 33 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 28 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 41.71% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 17 | | diversityRatio | 0.23902439024390243 | | totalSentences | 205 | | uniqueOpeners | 49 | |
| 24.69% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, its limbs were wrapped" |
| | ratio | 0.007 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | 0 | "She wasn’t the only one" | | 1 | "It was a wound in" | | 2 | "She didn’t turn back, didn’t" | | 3 | "She never did." | | 4 | "She jerked back, her wrist" | | 5 | "She didn’t look at them." | | 6 | "She was staring at the" | | 7 | "She didn’t need to." | | 8 | "It was *soft*, like treading" | | 9 | "She pulled her hand back—and" | | 10 | "She licked it off her" | | 11 | "She gagged, spitting onto the" | | 12 | "She stepped deeper into the" | | 13 | "She could feel the weight" | | 14 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 15 | "Its bark was black as" | | 16 | "She could feel her pulse" | | 17 | "She reached out—and touched the" | | 18 | "It *unfolded*, peeling back like" | | 19 | "She didn’t look *afraid*, either." |
| | ratio | 0.2 | |
| 15.56% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 120 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled like honey" | | 1 | "Rory Carter adjusted the strap" | | 2 | "The pendant around her neck," | | 3 | "She wasn’t the only one" | | 4 | "Nyx moved like smoke beside" | | 5 | "The Shade had warned them" | | 6 | "The grove wasn’t just a" | | 7 | "It was a wound in" | | 8 | "Isolde walked ahead, her silver" | | 9 | "She didn’t turn back, didn’t" | | 10 | "She never did." | | 11 | "*This is safe." | | 12 | "The standing stones loomed at" | | 13 | "Rory reached out, her fingers" | | 14 | "The moment she touched it," | | 15 | "She jerked back, her wrist" | | 16 | "Nyx murmured, their voice the" | | 17 | "Rory exhaled through her nose." | | 18 | "Nyx’s form flickered, darkening for" | | 19 | "Isolde had stopped at the" |
| | ratio | 0.889 | |
| 37.04% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | 0 | "Because as they turned to" |
| | ratio | 0.007 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "The Shade had warned them this place would be different—*alive*, in a way that defied mortal logic—but Rory hadn’t expected the way her skin prickled with aware…" | | 1 | "Isolde walked ahead, her silver hair catching the dappled light in a way that made it seem less like hair and more like moonlight solidified into strands." | | 2 | "Isolde had stopped at the center of the clearing, where the wildflowers grew in impossible colors—blossoms the shade of bruises, petals that shimmered like oil …" | | 3 | "The flowers bent toward her path, their petals unfurling like fingers beckoning her onward." | | 4 | "Its bark was black as pitch, its branches twisted into shapes that made Rory’s stomach clench." | | 5 | "Instead, its limbs were wrapped in what looked like *ribbons*—long, silver strands that moved when she wasn’t looking, coiling and uncoiling like serpents." | | 6 | "Nyx stepped closer, their shadow merging with the tree’s branches for a heartbeat before pulling back." | | 7 | "Rory gasped as the standing stones behind her *moved*, their roots writhing like serpents before snapping upright in a new configuration." | | 8 | "The flowers twisted into shapes that made her stomach lurch—faces, screaming, their petals stretched into silent mouths." | | 9 | "She was staring at the tree, her breath coming faster now." | | 10 | "But her eyes widened, just for a second, before she reached up and *caught* the ribbon, her fingers closing around it like she was holding a living thing." | | 11 | "She was too busy watching the grove’s edge, where the standing stones were already beginning to *blur*, their forms flickering like candle flames in the wind." |
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| 69.44% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "her fingers twitched, as if she were resisting the urge to reach for something—anything—to ground herself" | | 1 | "Nyx’s violet eyes gleamed faintly, as if lit from within" |
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| 65.49% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "Rory hissed (hiss)" | | 3 | "the voice whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "the voice hissed (hiss)" | | 5 | "the voice demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 71 | | tagDensity | 0.169 | | leniency | 0.338 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.169 | |