Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYA84ECG2WV2TQM3Z7FYBPC

Run Details

Model:
Grok 4
Duration:
1m 38s
Cost:
$0.042178
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open with a creak that echoed through the narrow hallway, and there he stood, Lucien Moreau, his heterochromatic eyes locking onto hers like a predator spotting prey in the underbrush. Rory froze, one hand still gripping the knob, the other clutching a half-forgotten mug of tea that sloshed dangerously close to spilling. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, wound around her ankles, oblivious to the sudden tension thickening the air. She hadn't heard his knock over the distant hum of Brick Lane traffic, or perhaps she'd ignored it, assuming Eva had forgotten her keys again. But no, it was him—tailored charcoal suit immaculate as ever, ivory-handled cane tapping once against the threshold, his slicked-back platinum blond hair catching the dim light from the single bulb overhead. "Lucien," she said, her voice steady despite the jolt racing through her veins. She didn't step aside. Not yet. "Aurora." He pronounced her name with that infuriating French lilt, rolling the 'r' just enough to remind her of nights when it had sounded like a caress rather than an accusation. "Or should I say Rory? I hear that's what your... friends call you these days." The scar on her left wrist itched, a phantom reminder of old wounds, both literal and not. She set the mug down on a stack of Eva's research notes, the papers crinkling under the weight. "What are you doing here?" He smiled, that crooked tilt of his lips that always promised secrets. "May I come in? Or shall we discuss matters on the doorstep, where any passing demon might overhear?" Ptolemy meowed, batting at Lucien's polished shoe. Rory hesitated, her mind racing through possibilities—escape routes, half-truths, the sharp letter opener buried under scrolls on the kitchen table. She hadn't seen him in months, not since that last heated argument in the shadows of his upscale flat, where words had flown like daggers and left them both bleeding. Attraction had pulled them together then, a dangerous gravity, but hurt had shoved them apart. Things left unsaid? Plenty. Like why he'd vanished after promising to help her unravel the mess with Evan, her abusive ex who'd followed her from Cardiff like a bad dream. "Fine," she said at last, stepping back. "But make it quick. Eva's due back any minute." He entered with a graceful stride, his cane clicking against the worn floorboards. The flat closed around them, cramped and chaotic—bookshelves groaning under ancient tomes, scrolls unfurled across the sofa, the faint scent of curry wafting up from the shop below. Lucien glanced around, his amber eye narrowing, the black one impassive as stone. "Charming. Your friend's taste in decor runs to the arcane, I see." He picked up a yellowed parchment, scanning it with feigned casualness. " Sumerian binding spells? Amateur work, but effective against lesser imps." Rory crossed her arms, leaning against the kitchen counter to put distance between them. The small crescent scar on her wrist caught the light, and she resisted the urge to hide it. "You didn't come here to critique Eva's library. Spit it out." He set the parchment down, turning to face her fully. Up close, he smelled of expensive cologne, something woody and spiced that clashed with the flat's musty air. "Always so direct, Rory. It's one of the things I admired about you. No games, no pretenses." His gaze dropped to her shoulder-length black hair, then lower, tracing the curve of her neck as if remembering the feel of it under his fingers. Admired. Past tense. She ignored the heat rising in her cheeks. "Admired? That's rich, coming from the man who disappeared without a word." Lucien's expression flickered, a crack in his polished facade. He leaned on his cane, the ivory handle gleaming. "I had reasons. Complications in Avaros—family matters, you might say. My father's realm doesn't take kindly to half-breeds meddling in human affairs." "Complications." She pushed off the counter, closing the gap between them without thinking. "That's what you call leaving me to deal with Evan alone? After you swore you'd handle it?" He straightened, his mismatched eyes meeting hers. "I did handle it. He's gone, isn't he? Back in Cardiff, nursing wounds that won't heal quickly." Rory's breath caught. She hadn't known that. Evan had stopped calling, stopped lurking in the shadows outside the Golden Empress. Part of her had hoped Lucien had something to do with it, but hearing it confirmed stirred a dangerous mix of gratitude and resentment. "You could have told me. Instead, you just... vanished. Left me wondering if you were dead or just done with me." "Done with you?" He laughed, a low, bitter sound that didn't reach his eyes. "As if that were possible." He reached out, his fingers brushing her wrist, tracing the scar with a gentleness that belied his demonic heritage. "This mark— from that childhood fall, yes? You told me the story once, over wine in my flat. How you climbed too high, fell too far. I remember thinking, even then, how resilient you are." She didn't pull away, though every instinct screamed to. His touch sent sparks along her skin, awakening memories she'd buried deep—the way his hands had mapped her body, the husky whispers in French that made her pulse race. But hurt lingered, sharp as the blade hidden in his cane. "Resilient enough to survive without you." "Perhaps." He didn't release her wrist, his thumb circling the scar. "But survival isn't living, Rory. And I've missed you. More than I care to admit." The admission hung between them, heavy as the stacks of books surrounding them. Ptolemy jumped onto the counter, knocking over a pile of notes that fluttered to the floor like fallen leaves. Rory finally stepped back, breaking the contact. "Missed me? Or missed the convenience of having a human ally in your little underworld games?" Lucien's jaw tightened. "It's not a game. Not anymore." He glanced toward the window, where the sounds of Brick Lane filtered in—vendors hawking spices, laughter from the curry house below. "There's trouble brewing. Whispers in the shadows about a rift opening. Demons slipping through, targeting those with... connections to both worlds." "Like me?" She scoffed, but unease coiled in her gut. Eva had mentioned odd occurrences lately—strange symbols etched on alley walls, customers at the restaurant speaking in tongues. Rory had dismissed it as overwork, but now, with Lucien here, it felt real. "Like us," he corrected, his voice dropping. "Our paths crossed for a reason, Aurora. That night we met, in Silas' bar, it wasn't coincidence. You with your quick mind, me with my resources—we fit." Fit. The word stung. They'd fit once, bodies and ambitions intertwined, until he'd pulled away, leaving her to piece together the fragments. "We fit until you decided we didn't. What makes this different?" He set his cane aside, leaning against the wall with a sigh that seemed to carry the weight of his dual heritage. "Because this time, I'm not asking for trust. I'm offering proof." From his suit pocket, he withdrew a small, engraved amulet, dangling it by its chain. It pulsed with an inner light, warm against the flat's chill. "This belonged to my mother. It protects against demonic influence. Take it." Rory eyed it warily. The metal felt alive in his hand, humming faintly. "A gift? Or a leash?" "A choice." His black eye gleamed, unreadable, while the amber one softened. "I left because I thought it would protect you. From my world, from the dangers I bring. But seeing you now..." He stepped closer, the space between them shrinking to nothing. "I realise I was a fool." Her heart pounded, attraction flaring like a struck match. She could smell him again, feel the heat radiating from his body. Memories flooded back—stolen kisses in hidden corners, his laughter echoing in her ears, the way he'd whispered promises in the dark. But the hurt roared louder, a barrier she wasn't ready to dismantle. "Then prove it," she challenged, her bright blue eyes meeting his. "Tell me everything. No secrets, no half-truths." Lucien's hand hovered near her cheek, not quite touching. "Everything? That could take all night." "Good thing Eva's out late." She didn't move away this time. He closed the distance, his lips brushing hers in a tentative kiss that ignited old flames. Rory responded despite herself, her hands fisting in his suit jacket, pulling him closer. The amulet pressed between them, warm against her chest. Attraction won out for a moment, drowning the hurt in a rush of sensation—his mouth firm and demanding, his fingers tangling in her hair. But then Ptolemy yowled, scratching at the door. A shadow passed the window, unnatural and swift. Lucien broke the kiss, his body tensing. "They're here," he murmured, drawing the blade from his cane with a sharp snick. "The demons I warned you about. Stay behind me." Rory grabbed the letter opener, her mind sharpening to that out-of-the-box edge. The door rattled under an unseen force, the three deadbolts straining. Whatever came next, it would test them both—attraction, hurt, and all the unsaid words exploding into chaos.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1535
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"warily"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"warily"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
18.57% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1535
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"predator"
count1
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"racing"
count2
4
word"lilt"
count1
5
word"reminder"
count1
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"unravel"
count1
8
word"chaotic"
count1
9
word"scanning"
count1
10
word"tracing"
count2
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"facade"
count1
13
word"gleaming"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
15
word"race"
count1
16
word"fluttered"
count1
17
word"etched"
count1
18
word"pulsed"
count1
19
word"chill"
count1
20
word"unreadable"
count1
21
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"predator"
2"tension"
3"racing"
4"lilt"
5"reminder"
6"weight"
7"unravel"
8"chaotic"
9"scanning"
10"tracing"
11"flickered"
12"facade"
13"gleaming"
14"pulse"
15"race"
16"fluttered"
17"etched"
18"pulsed"
19"chill"
20"unreadable"
21"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences83
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1518
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1069
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.84
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien9
Moreau1
Brick2
Lane2
Eva3
French2
Evan2
Cardiff1
Rory9
Admired1
Golden1
Empress1
Fit1
Ptolemy4
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Evan"
4"Rory"
5"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"French"
3"Cardiff"
4"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
42.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if remembering the feel of it under his fingers"
1"sigh that seemed to carry the weight of his dual heritage"
2"not quite touching"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1518
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean42.17
std21.72
cv0.515
sampleLengths
033
194
219
346
440
530
6102
716
854
934
1043
1171
1223
1340
1430
1524
1665
1773
1855
1926
2055
2151
2242
2334
2433
2571
2618
2749
2854
2918
3015
3111
3263
3323
3423
3540
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs202
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences107
ratio0.084
matches
0"But no, it was him—tailored charcoal suit immaculate as ever, ivory-handled cane tapping once against the threshold, his slicked-back platinum blond hair catching the dim light from the single bulb overhead."
1"Rory hesitated, her mind racing through possibilities—escape routes, half-truths, the sharp letter opener buried under scrolls on the kitchen table."
2"The flat closed around them, cramped and chaotic—bookshelves groaning under ancient tomes, scrolls unfurled across the sofa, the faint scent of curry wafting up from the shop below."
3"His touch sent sparks along her skin, awakening memories she'd buried deep—the way his hands had mapped her body, the husky whispers in French that made her pulse race."
4"\"It's not a game. Not anymore.\" He glanced toward the window, where the sounds of Brick Lane filtered in—vendors hawking spices, laughter from the curry house below."
5"Eva had mentioned odd occurrences lately—strange symbols etched on alley walls, customers at the restaurant speaking in tongues."
6"Memories flooded back—stolen kisses in hidden corners, his laughter echoing in her ears, the way he'd whispered promises in the dark."
7"Attraction won out for a moment, drowning the hurt in a rush of sensation—his mouth firm and demanding, his fingers tangling in her hair."
8"Whatever came next, it would test them both—attraction, hurt, and all the unsaid words exploding into chaos."
99.77% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount745
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.040268456375838924
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.008053691275167786
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean14.19
std8.44
cv0.595
sampleLengths
033
122
216
325
431
513
64
72
831
915
1017
1118
125
1312
1418
157
1620
1730
1815
193
201
2126
227
239
2413
2528
2613
2723
2811
2914
3018
3111
3210
3318
3443
351
362
378
3812
399
409
4122
4213
4317
447
4517
463
474
4813
4924
79.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.48598130841121495
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners52
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
35.38% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences78
matches
0"She hadn't heard his knock"
1"she said, her voice steady"
2"She didn't step aside."
3"He pronounced her name with"
4"She set the mug down"
5"He smiled, that crooked tilt"
6"She hadn't seen him in"
7"she said at last, stepping"
8"He entered with a graceful"
9"He picked up a yellowed"
10"He set the parchment down,"
11"His gaze dropped to her"
12"She ignored the heat rising"
13"He leaned on his cane,"
14"She pushed off the counter,"
15"He straightened, his mismatched eyes"
16"She hadn't known that."
17"He laughed, a low, bitter"
18"He reached out, his fingers"
19"She didn't pull away, though"
ratio0.462
4.87% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences78
matches
0"The door swung open with"
1"Rory froze, one hand still"
2"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, wound"
3"She hadn't heard his knock"
4"she said, her voice steady"
5"She didn't step aside."
6"He pronounced her name with"
7"The scar on her left"
8"She set the mug down"
9"He smiled, that crooked tilt"
10"Ptolemy meowed, batting at Lucien's"
11"Rory hesitated, her mind racing"
12"She hadn't seen him in"
13"Attraction had pulled them together"
14"Things left unsaid?"
15"she said at last, stepping"
16"He entered with a graceful"
17"The flat closed around them,"
18"Lucien glanced around, his amber"
19"He picked up a yellowed"
ratio0.91
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
32.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The door swung open with a creak that echoed through the narrow hallway, and there he stood, Lucien Moreau, his heterochromatic eyes locking onto hers like a pr…"
1"Rory froze, one hand still gripping the knob, the other clutching a half-forgotten mug of tea that sloshed dangerously close to spilling."
2"His touch sent sparks along her skin, awakening memories she'd buried deep—the way his hands had mapped her body, the husky whispers in French that made her pul…"
3"He closed the distance, his lips brushing hers in a tentative kiss that ignited old flames."
4"Rory responded despite herself, her hands fisting in his suit jacket, pulling him closer."
5"Attraction won out for a moment, drowning the hurt in a rush of sensation—his mouth firm and demanding, his fingers tangling in her hair."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she said, her voice steady despite the jolt racing through her veins"
1"He didn't, his thumb circling the scar"
2"he corrected, his voice dropping"
30.95% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"He pronounced (pronounce)"
1"He laughed (laugh)"
2"he corrected (correct)"
3"she challenged (challenge)"
4"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.714
effectiveRatio0.238
72.6548%