Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYA9YVG8CZ3SBAH1GV1HZF4

Run Details

Duration:
12.9s
Cost:
$0.000539
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon green sign of *The Raven’s Nest* flickered like a dying ember as Rory Carter pushed through the heavy door, the bell above jingling against the weight of her thoughts. The air inside smelled of stale beer, burnt wood, and something faintly metallic—like old coins or the edge of a blade. She hadn’t been here in months, not since Silas had started locking the back room tighter than a vault. She spotted him immediately. Silas Blackwood stood behind the bar, polishing a glass with slow, deliberate strokes, his hazel eyes scanning the room like a man who’d spent too many years watching for threats. His auburn hair, streaked with silver now, was pulled back into a loose tie, but the limp in his left leg was more pronounced than she remembered. He moved like a man who’d been broken and then patched back together with too much care. Rory hesitated by the door, her fingers tightening around the strap of her bag. She hadn’t expected to find him here tonight. Not after all this time. Silas looked up. His gaze locked onto hers, sharp as a blade unsheathed. “Well,” he said, voice low, “if it isn’t the prodigal delivery girl.” She swallowed. “Still the charming bastard, I see.” A ghost of a smile touched his lips—just for a second—before he set the glass down with a deliberate *clink*. “Rory. Long time.” She stepped forward, the soles of her boots clicking against the warped floorboards. “You could’ve said something. I’ve been dropping off orders here for months.” “And I’ve been ignoring you.” He wiped his hands on a rag, his signet ring catching the dim light. “Figured you’d moved on.” She had. Or tried to. The bar was quieter than usual, the usual hum of conversation reduced to a handful of patrons hunched over their drinks. Rory slid onto a stool, the leather creaking under her weight. “Funny. I was just thinking the same about you.” Silas leaned against the counter, arms crossed. “What, that I’d finally retired for good?” “No.” She traced the rim of her wrist with her thumb, the crescent scar there catching the light. “That you’d stopped pretending.” A beat of silence. Then, quietly: “Pretending what?” “That you didn’t know.” She exhaled, sharp. “That you didn’t *see*.” His jaw tightened. “See what?” “Evan.” The name tasted like ash. “The way he looked at me. The way he *talked* to me. You were there that night. You *saw*.” Silas’s fingers stilled. For a long moment, he didn’t answer. Then, softly: “I saw a lot of things that night, Rory. But not all of them were yours to carry.” She wanted to argue. Wanted to unload the years of it—the way Evan’s hands had bruised her ribs, the way he’d laughed when she’d tried to leave, the way she’d stood there, frozen, until Eva had dragged her out of that flat like she was made of glass. But the words stuck in her throat. Instead, she said, “You could’ve said something.” “And what would’ve been the point?” His voice was rough. “You’d have walked away. Just like always.” She flinched. “That’s not fair.” “Isn’t it?” He pushed off the counter, moving to the other end of the bar where the whiskey bottles gleamed in the low light. “You left Cardiff like your skin was on fire. You left *me*. You left everyone who knew you before you became…” His voice trailed off, but the implication hung between them. *Before she became what?* Rory’s fingers curled into the stool. “I had to go.” “Yeah.” He poured two fingers of whiskey into a glass, the amber liquid catching the light like a warning. “You did.” She wanted to scream. Wanted to throw the glass across the room and watch it shatter. But she didn’t. Because she knew the truth of it. She *had* run. From Evan. From the way her father’s disappointment had carved into her like a knife. From the life she’d thought she was supposed to have—lawyer’s daughter, straight path, safe. From the girl she’d been before she realised she was drowning. Silas slid the glass toward her. “Drink.” She took it. The whiskey burned all the way down, hot and clean. “You look different,” he said. She almost laughed. “You too.” His eyes flicked over herher black hair still straight, her clothes still too practical, too *her*. But there was something else now. A weight in her shoulders. A sharpness in her gaze. “You always did,” he said. “Change.” She set the glass down. “What about you?” He didn’t answer right away. Instead, he reached for a bottle of something darker, poured himself a drink. “I got old, Rory. That’s all.” “Bullshit.” A ghost of a smile. “Maybe.” She studied him—the way his hands trembled just slightly when he lifted the glass, the way his limp was more pronounced when he wasn’t paying attention. The man who’d once moved like a shadow now carried himself like a relic. “You still running?” she asked. His eyes snapped to hers. “What?” “Operations. Contacts. The whole thing.” She gestured vaguely at the bar, the maps on the walls, the way his gaze kept darting to the door like he was expecting someone to walk in. “You retired, but you didn’t *stop*.” Silas set his glass down with a slow, deliberate motion. “Some habits don’t die easy.” “Neither do some people.” She met his gaze, unflinching. “You could’ve helped me.” “And what would’ve been the point?” His voice was quiet, but the edge was back. “You’d have walked away anyway.” She wanted to hit him. Wanted to scream that he didn’t know her at all. But the truth was, he was right. She *had* walked away. From Cardiff. From her father’s expectations. From the life she’d thought she wanted. From the girl she’d been before she realised she was breaking. Silas poured another drink, his movements slower now. “You ever think about going back?” The question hit her like a punch. “To Cardiff?” “To *anything*.” She stared at him. “What’s that supposed to mean?” “It means,” he said, voice low, “that you’ve been running for a long time, Rory. And running’s a lonely way to live.” She wanted to argue. Wanted to tell him she wasn’t running anymore. That she’d built something here—something real, something *hers*. But the words stuck in her throat. Because the truth was, she *had* been running. From Evan. From her past. From the girl she’d been before she realised she was drowning. Silas finished his drink in one swallow. “You should go.” She blinked. “What?” “You heard me.” He wiped the glass with the rag, his movements sharp now, precise. “This isn’t your fight anymore.” “Since when?” “Since always.” His gaze locked onto hers, unyielding. “You’ve got your life. I’ve got mine.” She wanted to stay. Wanted to unload everything—the fear, the regret, the way she still woke up some nights sweating, Evan’s voice in her ear. But the words wouldn’t come. Instead, she slid off the stool. The bell above the door jingled as she pushed through, the cold night air hitting her like a slap. She didn’t look back. But for the first time in years, she wondered if she should.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"The name tasted like [like]"
1"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.304
leniency0.607
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.071
91.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1215
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1215
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"implication"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"weight"
2"scanning"
3"traced"
4"silence"
5"implication"
6"flicked"
7"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences104
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences139
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans14
markdownWords19
totalWords1207
ratio0.016
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"clink"
2"see"
3"talked"
4"saw"
5"me"
6"Before she became what?"
7"had"
8"her"
9"stop"
10"had"
11"anything"
12"hers"
13"had"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount932
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.97
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Rory4
Carter1
Silas9
Blackwood1
Evan4
Eva1
Cardiff1
Wanted5
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Carter"
3"Silas"
4"Blackwood"
5"Evan"
6"Eva"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1207
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences139
matches
0"scream that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean18.01
std15.58
cv0.865
sampleLengths
071
14
274
327
413
512
68
723
825
923
105
1141
1214
1322
148
1511
165
1725
1830
1955
207
2117
225
2355
244
2510
2621
2726
283
2940
307
3113
325
335
3432
356
368
3724
381
396
4040
415
426
4339
4415
4513
4620
4722
484
4924
91.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences104
matches
0"was pulled"
1"been broken"
2"was made"
3"was supposed"
10.61% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs176
matches
0"was drowning"
1"was expecting"
2"was breaking"
3"wasn’t running"
4"was drowning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences139
ratio0.058
matches
0"The air inside smelled of stale beer, burnt wood, and something faintly metallic—like old coins or the edge of a blade."
1"A ghost of a smile touched his lips—just for a second—before he set the glass down with a deliberate *clink*."
2"Wanted to unload the years of it—the way Evan’s hands had bruised her ribs, the way he’d laughed when she’d tried to leave, the way she’d stood there, frozen, until Eva had dragged her out of that flat like she was made of glass."
3"From the life she’d thought she was supposed to have—lawyer’s daughter, straight path, safe."
4"His eyes flicked over her—her black hair still straight, her clothes still too practical, too *her*."
5"She studied him—the way his hands trembled just slightly when he lifted the glass, the way his limp was more pronounced when he wasn’t paying attention."
6"That she’d built something here—something real, something *hers*."
7"Wanted to unload everything—the fear, the regret, the way she still woke up some nights sweating, Evan’s voice in her ear."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount940
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.036170212765957444
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.006382978723404255
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences139
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences139
mean8.68
std7.65
cv0.881
sampleLengths
031
121
219
34
430
527
617
714
88
95
103
1110
1212
132
146
1520
163
1713
1812
1919
204
212
223
2321
2411
259
267
277
2818
294
304
314
327
334
343
352
366
3719
383
397
4020
414
4244
437
447
4510
467
472
483
4924
40.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.302158273381295
totalSentences139
uniqueOpeners42
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences92
matches
0"Instead, she said,"
1"Instead, he reached for a"
2"Instead, she slid off the"
ratio0.033
54.78% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences92
matches
0"She hadn’t been here in"
1"She spotted him immediately."
2"His auburn hair, streaked with"
3"He moved like a man"
4"She hadn’t expected to find"
5"His gaze locked onto hers,"
6"he said, voice low"
7"She stepped forward, the soles"
8"He wiped his hands on"
9"She traced the rim of"
10"She exhaled, sharp"
11"His jaw tightened."
12"She wanted to argue."
13"His voice was rough"
14"He pushed off the counter,"
15"His voice trailed off, but"
16"He poured two fingers of"
17"She wanted to scream."
18"She *had* run."
19"She took it."
ratio0.413
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences92
matches
0"The neon green sign of"
1"The air inside smelled of"
2"She hadn’t been here in"
3"She spotted him immediately."
4"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
5"His auburn hair, streaked with"
6"He moved like a man"
7"Rory hesitated by the door,"
8"She hadn’t expected to find"
9"Silas looked up."
10"His gaze locked onto hers,"
11"he said, voice low"
12"A ghost of a smile"
13"She stepped forward, the soles"
14"He wiped his hands on"
15"The bar was quieter than"
16"Rory slid onto a stool,"
17"Silas leaned against the counter,"
18"She traced the rim of"
19"A beat of silence."
ratio0.685
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences92
matches
0"*Before she became what?*"
1"Because she knew the truth"
2"Because the truth was, she"
ratio0.033
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Silas Blackwood stood behind the bar, polishing a glass with slow, deliberate strokes, his hazel eyes scanning the room like a man who’d spent too many years wa…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"he said, voice low,"
1"He wiped, his signet ring catching the dim light"
2"She exhaled, sharp"
3"His voice trailed, but the implication hung between them"
4"He poured, the amber liquid catching the light like a warning"
5"he said, voice low,"
6"He wiped, his movements sharp now, precise"
7"His gaze locked, unyielding"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.107
leniency0.214
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.9354%