| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 82.60% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 862 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lightly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 12.99% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 862 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "lurched" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "scanning" | | 9 | "searing" | | 10 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 129 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 129 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 133 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.88% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 32 | | markdownWords | 53 | | totalWords | 854 | | ratio | 0.062 | | matches | | 0 | "alive" | | 1 | "wrong" | | 2 | "breathed" | | 3 | "wet" | | 4 | "hungry" | | 5 | "Move. Now." | | 6 | "above" | | 7 | "leaning" | | 8 | "wrong" | | 9 | "hanging" | | 10 | "scream" | | 11 | "waiting" | | 12 | "\"You’re late.\"" | | 13 | "bones" | | 14 | "shifted" | | 15 | "\"The Grove doesn’t like visitors.\"" | | 16 | "find the portal" | | 17 | "breathe" | | 18 | "laugh" | | 19 | "Hungry" | | 20 | "knew" | | 21 | "felt" | | 22 | "behind her" | | 23 | "waiting" | | 24 | "leave" | | 25 | "\"You shouldn’t have come back.\"" | | 26 | "testing" | | 27 | "fight" | | 28 | "them" | | 29 | "\"You’re not supposed to be here,\"" | | 30 | "\"They’re already hunting you.\"" | | 31 | "\"Move,\"" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.80% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 831 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.44 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 8 | | Hel | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 12 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.778 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 16.07% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if recoiling from the dark" | | 1 | "felt like this before" | | 2 | "alleys that seemed to breathe" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 854 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 18.17 | | std | 18.51 | | cv | 1.019 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 53 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 59 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 53 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 38 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 54 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 42 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 58 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 48 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 42 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 45 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 40 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 5 |
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| 99.82% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "were rooted" | | 1 | "were gone" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 144 | | matches | | 0 | "was watching" | | 1 | "were *leaning" | | 2 | "was *waiting" | | 3 | "wasn’t coming" | | 4 | "was coming" | | 5 | "wasn’t letting" | | 6 | "were *testing" |
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| 13.96% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 133 | | ratio | 0.045 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter had felt its warmth before—faint, like a brand pressed too lightly—but never like this." | | 1 | "The underbrush rustled—too deliberate to be wind, too heavy to be an animal." | | 2 | "The canopy was too dense for stars, but the branches swayed—slow, deliberate, like they were *leaning* toward her." | | 3 | "The laughter came again, closer this time, and she *knew*—she *felt*—it wasn’t coming from the trees." | | 4 | "Their faces were wrong—stretched, hollow, their mouths sewn shut with black thread." | | 5 | "His eyes—black as pitch—locked onto hers." |
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| 98.50% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 839 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.041716328963051254 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0059594755661501785 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 133 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 133 | | mean | 6.42 | | std | 5.47 | | cv | 0.852 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 29 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 36.47% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 18 | | diversityRatio | 0.2556390977443609 | | totalSentences | 133 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, it *breathed*." | | 1 | "Just in, find what she" | | 2 | "Then she saw it." | | 3 | "Just the Grove." | | 4 | "Just the dark." | | 5 | "Just the *waiting*." | | 6 | "Then she saw them." |
| | ratio | 0.075 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "She yanked the silver chain" | | 1 | "She clutched the pendant tighter," | | 2 | "She shouldn’t have come alone." | | 3 | "She pressed herself against the" | | 4 | "She should run." | | 5 | "She should *scream*." | | 6 | "It was *waiting*." | | 7 | "It was in her *bones*." | | 8 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 9 | "She had to move." | | 10 | "She had to *find the" | | 11 | "She followed them, stumbling over" | | 12 | "It was coming from *behind" | | 13 | "She had to find the" | | 14 | "She had to *leave*." | | 15 | "She tried to shake them" | | 16 | "Her lungs forgot how to" | | 17 | "Their faces were wrong—stretched, hollow," | | 18 | "They moved in the periphery" | | 19 | "She had to run." |
| | ratio | 0.28 | |
| 67.53% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 73 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant burned against her" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter had felt its" | | 2 | "She yanked the silver chain" | | 3 | "The glow pulsed, thick and" | | 4 | "The Fae Grove should have" | | 5 | "She clutched the pendant tighter," | | 6 | "The standing stones loomed around" | | 7 | "The air smelled of damp" | | 8 | "The wildflowers here never wilted," | | 9 | "Aurora’s breath came shallow." | | 10 | "She shouldn’t have come alone." | | 11 | "The plan had been simple:" | | 12 | "A twig snapped." | | 13 | "Aurora spun, heart hammering." | | 14 | "The underbrush rustled—too deliberate to" | | 15 | "She pressed herself against the" | | 16 | "The pendant’s heat seared her" | | 17 | "Something was watching her." | | 18 | "Aurora tilted her head back." | | 19 | "The canopy was too dense" |
| | ratio | 0.785 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 53.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The wildflowers here never wilted, but tonight they sagged, petals curling inward as if recoiling from the dark." | | 1 | "The paths she knew were gone, replaced by twisting, thorn-choked alleys that seemed to *breathe*." | | 2 | "She followed them, stumbling over roots that coiled like serpents beneath her boots." | | 3 | "They moved in the periphery of her vision, just out of reach, their fingers brushing the bark of the trees like they were *testing* the air." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "he said, voice low, urgent" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |