Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAA9QHH60AYK6FNV31PJBN

Run Details

Duration:
22.1s
Cost:
$0.000184
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the cobblestones, a grey sheet slicking the narrow alleyways of Soho. Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted her worn leather watch, the rhythmic tick a counterpoint to the drumming. The scent of wet asphalt mingled with something acrid, metallic – blood, probably. “Damn slick,” she muttered, her voice tight. Behind her, a figure, Tomás Herrera, kept pace, his dark curls plastered to his forehead. He didn’t run, didn’t even break stride, conserving energy, Quinn figured. He was a paramedic, built for endurance, not speed. He wore a Saint Christopher medallion beneath his threadbare jacket – a small, silent plea to a god she didn’t believe in. “Stop,” Quinn commanded, her voice sharp, cutting through the rain. She didn’t bother to wait for a response. She pushed past him, navigating the maze of overflowing bins and damp brickwork. He matched her pace, staying just ahead, a shadowed presence. She noted the faint tremor in his hands as he gripped the small, medical bag slung across his shoulder. He wasn't a criminal; he was a healer, a facilitator, a ghost in a city teeming with things best left unseen. The rain intensified, blurring the gaslights into hazy halos. The alley opened onto a wider street, bustling with rain-soaked pedestrians who hurried past, oblivious to the pursuit. Quinn scanned the faces—nothing. Just the ceaseless flow of London life. “You know this is dangerous, Tommy,” she said, her boots splashing through puddles. The rain beaded on her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair. “You’re making this worse for both of us.” He didn’t answer, just kept moving, his grip tightening on the bag. He headed toward a nondescript doorway, tucked between a pawn shop and a closed pub. A faded green neon sign, “The Raven’s Nest,” flickered above the entrance, casting an unsettling glow on the rain-washed street. Quinn hesitated. The Raven’s Nest wasn’t on any official police roster. Silas, the owner, was a rumour, a whisper in the darker corners of the city. A man rumored to deal in more than just whiskey and cigarettes. “This is where it leads,” she said, pulling out a small, worn photograph from her pocket. It depicted a man, slicked back dark hair and a predatory smile, entering the bar a week ago. Daniel Hayes. He was the thread she’d been pulling on – a low-level enforcer for the clique, suspected of trafficking in illegally sourced magical artifacts. The door of The Raven’s Nest swung open with a groan, revealing a dimly lit interior thick with smoke and the murmur of hushed voices. The walls were covered with antique maps and black and white photographs – faces of long-dead sailors, forgotten wars, unsettling portraits of figures she couldn’t quite place. It felt like stepping into a forgotten corner of London’s past. “You’re going in,” she said, her voice flat. He stopped at the threshold, turning to face her. His brown eyes, usually warm, were shadowed with a grim awareness. “I have to. He needs help.” “He needs a hospital,” Quinn countered, her hand instinctively moving to the holster at her hip. "He needs a lawyer. He needs a long stay." “It’s not that simple, Detective.” His voice dropped, barely audible above the din of the bar. “He’s been poisoned. Something… unusual.” Quinn studied him, assessing his composure, searching for deception. A scar snaked along his left forearm, a brutal reminder of a past he didn’t speak of. “Unusual how?” “The symptoms aren’t consistent with any known poison,” he replied, his gaze fixed on the rain-swept street outside. “It’s like… his life force is being drained.” She pushed past him into the bar, the scent of stale beer and something vaguely floral—cinnamon and something darker—filling her nostrils. The room was a chaotic tapestry of worn leather booths, scarred wooden tables, and shadowy corners. A lone bartender, a gaunt man with a perpetually mournful expression, polished glasses behind the bar with a slow, deliberate rhythm. People sat at tables, their faces obscured by the gloom. The air crackled with unspoken secrets. She spotted Hayes near the back, slumped in a booth, his face ashen, his breathing shallow. Two men, clad in expensive suits that seemed out of place in this rough establishment, stood over him, their expressions unreadable. “Let me see him,” Quinn demanded, her hand resting on the butt of her service weapon. One of the men, broad-shouldered and radiating an aura of barely contained violence, stepped forward. “Detective Quinn. This is a private matter.” “It’s a crime,” she stated, her voice unwavering. “And I’m here to investigate.” He didn’t move. “Mr. Hayes requires… specialized care. This isn’t a situation for the Metropolitan Police.” “Specialized care usually involves hospitals,” Quinn replied, taking a step closer. Suddenly, a voice, smooth and unsettling, cut through the noise. “Perhaps Detective Quinn is right. Specialized care is indeed required.” Silas emerged from the shadows, a tall, slender figure with unsettlingly bright eyes. He moved with a fluid grace that seemed unnatural, almost predatory. He carried a crystal decanter filled with a luminescent liquid. “I sensed an unwelcome guest,” Silas observed, his gaze sweeping over Quinn with a disconcerting intensity. “Detective Quinn, I presume? A reputation for tenacity. Admirable, though often… disruptive.” "What exactly are you selling, Silas?” Quinn demanded, keeping her hand on her weapon. Silas chuckled, a dry, rasping sound. "Let’s just say I facilitate connections. Mr. Hayes requires a very specific artifact. One that can restore his…” he paused, considering his words, “… vitality. A trade, Detective. A simple exchange." He gestured to one of the men flanking Hayes. "Consider this a demonstration of sorts." The man moved with terrifying speed, producing a small, intricately carved bone token from his pocket. It pulsed with a faint, sickly green light. “A bone token,” Quinn recognized, a cold dread creeping into her stomach. “Entry to the Veil Market.” “Indeed,” Silas said, his eyes gleaming with amusement. “A gateway to possibilities. Though, like all gateways, it comes with a price.” Before Quinn could react, the man lunged toward Hayes. Tomás Herrera shoved him aside, taking the blow himself. The scar on his forearm flared with a crimson light as he moved, shielding Hayes with his body. “Don’t,” he pleaded, his voice strained, "there's a way to reverse this.” The two men pressed their attack, but Quinn acted quickly, firing a single shot into the air. The sudden noise shattered the tense silence, and the bar erupted into chaos. People scrambled for cover, the murmur of conversations replaced by panicked shouts. Quinn moved towards Hayes, ignoring the fray. She knelt beside him, examining his pulse. It was weak, erratic. “The poison… it’s feeding on his life force," she said grimly. "This is beyond anything I’ve ever encountered.” Silas watched her, a subtle smile playing on his lips. "Perhaps you should trust the methods of those who understand the shadows, Detective. The Market offers solutions… solutions that the sanctioned world cannot provide.” Quinn glanced at Tomás, who was desperately trying to stem the bleeding from his forearm. He looked exhausted, defeated. “The Veil Market,” she muttered, a shiver running down her spine. “Underneath Camden. Bone tokens only.” She knew, with a chilling certainty, that she was stepping into darkness – a darkness far deeper and more dangerous than anything she’d faced in her eighteen years on the force. But she had a partner to save, and a killer to bring to justice. Even if it meant descending into the heart of a supernatural underworld. “Let’s go,” she said, turning to Silas. “Lead the way.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"His voice dropped barely [barely]"
1"she said grimly [grimly]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.538
leniency1
rawRatio0.095
effectiveRatio0.095
88.12% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1263
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"very"
2"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
4.99% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1263
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"navigating"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"ceaseless"
count1
4
word"pawn"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"reminder"
count1
8
word"chaotic"
count1
9
word"tapestry"
count1
10
word"gloom"
count1
11
word"unspoken"
count1
12
word"unreadable"
count1
13
word"unwavering"
count1
14
word"crystal"
count1
15
word"intensity"
count1
16
word"pulsed"
count1
17
word"stomach"
count1
18
word"gleaming"
count1
19
word"shattered"
count1
20
word"silence"
count1
21
word"pulse"
count1
22
word"down her spine"
count1
23
word"chilling"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"navigating"
2"scanned"
3"ceaseless"
4"pawn"
5"flickered"
6"whisper"
7"reminder"
8"chaotic"
9"tapestry"
10"gloom"
11"unspoken"
12"unreadable"
13"unwavering"
14"crystal"
15"intensity"
16"pulsed"
17"stomach"
18"gleaming"
19"shattered"
20"silence"
21"pulse"
22"down her spine"
23"chilling"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences86
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1257
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount1006
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.59
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn16
Tomás3
Herrera2
Saint1
Christopher1
London2
Raven2
Nest2
Hayes6
One1
Suddenly1
Silas7
Detective2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Raven"
7"Nest"
8"Hayes"
9"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"One"
globalScore0.705
windowScore0.5
48.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"quite place"
1"felt like stepping into a forgotten cor"
2"seemed unnatural almost predatory"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1257
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean29.23
std15.52
cv0.531
sampleLengths
042
17
257
331
450
538
630
747
838
959
1063
118
1226
1325
1421
1528
1626
1758
1853
1916
2022
2113
2216
2311
2420
2534
2628
2714
2837
2915
3024
3117
3221
3336
3412
3542
3618
3718
3834
3919
4016
4157
4210
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"were shadowed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs176
matches
0"was stepping"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences104
ratio0.077
matches
0"The scent of wet asphalt mingled with something acrid, metallic – blood, probably."
1"He wore a Saint Christopher medallion beneath his threadbare jacket – a small, silent plea to a god she didn’t believe in."
2"He wasn't a criminal; he was a healer, a facilitator, a ghost in a city teeming with things best left unseen."
3"Quinn scanned the faces—nothing."
4"He was the thread she’d been pulling on – a low-level enforcer for the clique, suspected of trafficking in illegally sourced magical artifacts."
5"The walls were covered with antique maps and black and white photographs – faces of long-dead sailors, forgotten wars, unsettling portraits of figures she couldn’t quite place."
6"She pushed past him into the bar, the scent of stale beer and something vaguely floral—cinnamon and something darker—filling her nostrils."
7"She knew, with a chilling certainty, that she was stepping into darkness – a darkness far deeper and more dangerous than anything she’d faced in her eighteen years on the force."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount822
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.027980535279805353
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.014598540145985401
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean12.09
std5.98
cv0.495
sampleLengths
013
116
213
37
415
511
69
722
810
98
1013
1110
1219
1321
149
1518
164
177
1813
199
208
2112
2215
2320
242
259
2615
2712
2816
2918
302
3123
3225
3327
3411
358
369
3711
386
3916
409
4116
425
439
4417
452
4618
478
4821
4916
53.85% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.375
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners39
79.37% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences84
matches
0"Just the ceaseless flow of"
1"Suddenly, a voice, smooth and"
ratio0.024
39.05% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences84
matches
0"she muttered, her voice tight"
1"He didn’t run, didn’t even"
2"He was a paramedic, built"
3"He wore a Saint Christopher"
4"She didn’t bother to wait"
5"She pushed past him, navigating"
6"He matched her pace, staying"
7"She noted the faint tremor"
8"He wasn't a criminal; he"
9"she said, her boots splashing"
10"He didn’t answer, just kept"
11"He headed toward a nondescript"
12"she said, pulling out a"
13"It depicted a man, slicked"
14"He was the thread she’d"
15"It felt like stepping into"
16"she said, her voice flat"
17"He stopped at the threshold,"
18"His brown eyes, usually warm,"
19"His voice dropped, barely audible"
ratio0.452
13.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences84
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted her"
1"The scent of wet asphalt"
2"she muttered, her voice tight"
3"He didn’t run, didn’t even"
4"He was a paramedic, built"
5"He wore a Saint Christopher"
6"Quinn commanded, her voice sharp,"
7"She didn’t bother to wait"
8"She pushed past him, navigating"
9"He matched her pace, staying"
10"She noted the faint tremor"
11"He wasn't a criminal; he"
12"The rain intensified, blurring the"
13"The alley opened onto a"
14"Quinn scanned the faces—nothing."
15"she said, her boots splashing"
16"The rain beaded on her"
17"He didn’t answer, just kept"
18"He headed toward a nondescript"
19"A faded green neon sign,"
ratio0.893
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences84
matches
0"Before Quinn could react, the"
1"Even if it meant descending"
ratio0.024
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The alley opened onto a wider street, bustling with rain-soaked pedestrians who hurried past, oblivious to the pursuit."
1"He didn’t answer, just kept moving, his grip tightening on the bag."
2"Two men, clad in expensive suits that seemed out of place in this rough establishment, stood over him, their expressions unreadable."
3"He moved with a fluid grace that seemed unnatural, almost predatory."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount12
matches
0"she muttered, her voice tight"
1"Quinn commanded, her voice sharp, cutting through the rain"
2"she said, her boots splashing through puddles"
3"she said, her voice flat"
4"Quinn countered, her hand instinctively moving to the holster at her hip"
5"Quinn demanded, her hand resting on the butt of her service weapon"
6"she stated, her voice unwavering"
7"Silas observed, his gaze sweeping over Quinn with a disconcerting intensity"
8"Quinn recognized, a cold dread creeping into her stomach"
9"Silas said, his eyes gleaming with amusement"
10"he pleaded, his voice strained,"
11"she muttered, a shiver running down her spine"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"Quinn demanded (demand)"
2"she stated (state)"
3"Silas observed (observe)"
4"Quinn demanded (demand)"
5"he pleaded (plead)"
6"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.385
leniency0.769
rawRatio0.467
effectiveRatio0.359
75.1838%