Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAAGGD61GA9NQDT79BM8XZ

Run Details

Duration:
3m 19s
Cost:
$0.016533
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory’s fingers brushed a crumpled golden foil wrapper from the Golden Empress as she stacked delivery receipts on a tower of ancient scrolls that teetered next to Eva’s half-finished thesis on Avarosian portal mechanics. Ptolemy’s tabby tail flicked once, sending a loose research note fluttering to the linoleum where curry fumes curled up from the shop below—thick with cumin and turmeric, sharp enough to sting her eyes if she lingered too close to the window. She’d forgotten to shed her navy delivery jacket after her last run, the fabric stiff with dried soy sauce splatters from a clumsy drop-off at a supernatural bookstore where a man with amber eyes had stared her down, his gaze lingering on her left wrist’s crescent scar. A sharp rap on the front door jolted her. She stepped to the door, her boots thudding against a pile of leather-bound grimoires Eva had left scattered after an all-night research bender about a relic that could shield half-demons from their demon parents’ agents. The three deadbolts glinted in the dim lamplight; she’d twisted each into place that morning after a jittery run past a man who’d matched Evan’s build, his shadow stretching long across the brick pavement of Brick Lane. She fumbled with the top deadbolt first, its metal digging into her palm until her knuckles whitened, then the middle, its lock sticking for a beat before clicking free, then the bottom, its rusted edge scraping her thumb. When she pulled the door open an inch, a whiff of tailored wool and clove hit her—Lucien’s signature scent, one she’d tried to scrub from her memories by dousing her flat above Silas’ bar with curry powder. She wrenched the door wider. His slicked-back platinum hair held no stray strands, his charcoal suit pressed so sharp it could have sliced the curry fumes drifting between them—he’d always prided himself on his appearance, an armor against the chaos of the supernatural underworld. His ivory cane rested against his shoulder, his knuckles white where he curled around its handle—she knew the thin blade hidden within, had watched him slide it free once to cut through a locking mechanism when Evan’s goons had blocked her escape from a warehouse in East London six months prior. His heterochromatic eyes locked on hers: one amber, burning like the Marseille sun he’d once described as the only thing that made his half-demon blood feel bearable, the other black as the Avaros realm his father hailed from, a place he’d never spoken of without a flicker of fear. You shouldn’t be here. She crossed her arms, her left wrist’s crescent scar tugging—she’d scraped it on his cane the last time they’d spoken, when he’d burst into her flat above Silas’ bar, mumbled a half-hearted apology, and vanished without a word, leaving only a crumpled note with a Avarosian symbol she couldn’t decode until Eva had translated it last week. Ptolemy jumped from the windowsill, his paws thudding across the scrolls as he pressed against her calf, a low purr rumbling in his chest—he’d never been fond of strangers, but something about Lucien’s scent made him linger. I tracked your delivery route. Found Eva’s name on your emergency contact list at the Golden Empress—Yu-Fei Cheung slipped it to me after I promised to erase her debt to a vampire loan shark. Lucien’s gaze darted to the stack of research notes teetering on the entryway table—Eva’s work on the half-demon shielding relic, the same work that had tangled Rory up with Lucien’s underworld contacts when she’d asked him to track a stolen scroll for her. He shifted his weight, his cane tapping once against the linoleum, a habit he’d picked up when he was nervous. You bailed. Left a crumpled note with a symbol I couldn’t decode until Eva spent three nights poring over her grimoires. It meant “hide”—but you didn’t tell me who or what to hide from. Rory’s voice tightened. She’d spent three nights huddled in Silas’ bar’s back room after Lucien’s disappearance, staring at that note, Eva’s books spread around her, as Evan’s goons banged on the bar’s front door, demanding to know where she was. She’d had to hide in a delivery van for two days before Yu-Fei Cheung had given her a new route to avoid them. The symbol warned of my father’s agents. They’d tracked me to your flat above Silas’ bar. They’d have killed you to get to me—half-human relatives of Avarosian demons are their favorite leverage. Lucien’s gaze fell to her left wrist’s crescent scar, his jaw tightening—he’d never asked about its origin, too caught up in his own fear of his father’s agents to notice the small, faded mark from her childhood accident with a broken glass. He stepped forward, but Rory held up a hand, stopping him at the threshold, her boot kicking a loose scroll across the floor. You didn’t tell me. You just ran. I thought you’d grown tired of my mortal problems, of bailing me out from Evan’s messes. A curry house server’s laugh drifted up from the street below, sharp and bright against the tension between them, followed by the clink of beer mugs. Ptolemy nipped at Rory’s boot, then darted past Lucien’s legs, his tabby fur brushing the hem of his suit, as if testing the waters. I couldn’t risk them using you to get to me. My father’s agents monitored all supernatural comms—even Eva’s scrolls were bugged for a week before I found and destroyed the device. I couldn’t send a word, couldn’t even leave a proper note without putting you in more danger. Lucien picked up the scroll that had slid across the floor, unfurling it to reveal a map of Avaros, Eva’s scribbled notes in the margins about hidden portals. He set the scroll down, his gaze locking on Rory’s bright blue eyes, the same eyes he’d stared at for hours on the fire escape of Silas’ bar, when they’d kissed for the first time, the London skyline glowing behind them. I found your old delivery bag. The one Evan’s goons sliced open outside the Golden Empress. I kept the torn golden foil wrapper from the spring roll you’d stuffed in your bag for later. He pulled a crumpled golden foil wrapper from his suit pocket, the same wrapper Rory had stuffed in her bag the night he vanished, the one she’d thought she’d lost when the goons sliced the bag open. She stared at it, her fingers itching to take it, her breath catching at the small, faded stain of soy sauce on its edge. I thought you’d forgotten. I thought that kiss on the fire escape was just a distraction, a way to make yourself feel better before you ran. I don’t forget the things that matter. That kiss wasn’t a distraction. It was the only thing that made sense in the middle of my father’s chaos. Lucien’s gaze darted to her left wrist, his fingers hovering just above the crescent scar—he’d never touched it since the night he’d scraped it, too afraid of the hurt he’d caused, too afraid of the vulnerability it would bring to admit he cared. Rory leaned into his hand, her breath catching as his skin made contact with hers, the familiar heat of his touch sending a shiver down her spine. The curry fumes drifted thicker into the flat, mixing with the clove scent of Lucien’s suit, as a stack of Eva’s thesis papers teetered on the couch, then fell to the floor with a soft thud. Ptolemy jumped onto the couch, his tail flicking between them, as if sensing the thick attraction that still hummed between them—an attraction they’d never fully addressed, even before the split, too caught up in the chaos of Evan’s goons and Lucien’s father’s agents to talk about what they really wanted. I spent six months hiding my father’s agents. Traced them to a warehouse in East London, took them down with my cane’s blade—they didn’t see it coming. They’re gone now. I can finally be here without putting you in danger. Rory’s breath caught. She’d heard whispers in the supernatural underworld about a half-demon taking down a crew of Avarosian agents, but she’d never connected it to Lucien, too busy running from Evan’s goons to pay attention. She crossed to the windowsill, where a stack of her delivery receipts sat next to a jar of curry powder Eva had stolen from the shop below, her boot kicking a loose pen across the sill. You could have sent a message through Yu-Fei Cheung. She’s not supernatural—she wouldn’t have been monitored. I couldn’t. My father’s agents had her restaurant under surveillance. They’d have killed her if they’d seen her talking to me. Lucien stepped closer, his cane brushing her delivery jacket, the fabric stiff with dried soy sauce splatters. Ptolemy jumped onto the windowsill, his tail flicking between them, as if complaining about the slow pace of their conversation. I need your help. Eva’s been researching a relic that can shield half-demons from their father’s agents. It’s in a warehouse near my delivery route—Yu-Fei Cheung told me the goons who stole it are hiding it there. I’ll help. But you have to promise me one thing. What? Rory’s voice was quiet. She leaned against the windowsill, her gaze locking on Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes, the amber one burning bright, the black one softening with a hint of vulnerability she’d never seen before. You’ll tell me the truth. No more secrets. No more vanishing in the middle of the night. I promise. Lucien stepped closer, his cane resting against the windowsill, his fingers brushing her delivery jacket’s collar. He pulled the crumpled golden foil wrapper from his pocket, handing it to her. Rory took it, her fingers curling around it, the memory of their kiss on the fire escape flooding back—his hands in her black shoulder-length hair, his breath hot against her neck, the sound of Silas’ bar’s jukebox in the background. The curry house below let out a loud cheer, as if celebrating a victory, followed by the clink of beer mugs and the sound of a server yelling an order. A scroll fell from the ceiling—Eva had taped it there, but the tape had loosened after weeks of curry fumes—and Lucien caught it, his fingers brushing Rory’s as he handed it to her. It was a map of the warehouse where the relic was hidden, Eva’s scribbled notes in the margins about the goons’ shift changes. We’ll start tomorrow. At the Golden Empress. Your 7 PM delivery run to the warehouse’s neighboring shop will get us close. I’ll meet you in the back alley. I’ll be ready. I’ll bring an extra spring roll—for the wrapper. Rory’s voice was firm. She tucked the golden foil wrapper into her delivery jacket pocket, her left wrist’s crescent scar tugging as she did, a small smile tugging at her lips—she’d forgotten how to smile without the weight of Lucien’s disappearance hanging over her. Lucien’s gaze locked on her smile, his own lips tugging into a small grin—he’d never seen her smile like that, unguarded, free from fear. Ptolemy jumped onto his shoulder, his tail flicking against his platinum hair, as if giving his approval. I’ll be there. No secrets. No vanishing. That’s all I ask. A stack of Eva’s research notes teetered on the entryway table, then shifted back into place, as if Eva’s invisible presence was weighing in on their truce. The curry fumes wrapped around them, warm and familiar, as Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes held Rory’s, the unspoken words between them thrumming in the cramped flat—words of attraction, of regret, of the future they’d never dared to imagine before he’d knocked on the door.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1993
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.91% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1993
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"flicker"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"tension"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count2
5
word"down her spine"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"flicker"
2"weight"
3"tension"
4"familiar"
5"down her spine"
6"traced"
7"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"a flicker of fear"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences102
matches
0"a flicker of fear"
1"was nervous"
86.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences102
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"start to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen59
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1953
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions98
wordCount1848
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity0.97
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Golden4
Empress4
Eva14
Avarosian3
Evan6
Brick1
Lane1
Lucien18
East2
London2
Marseille1
Avaros2
Ptolemy6
Yu4
Fei4
Cheung4
Rory14
Yu-Fei2
You6
persons
0"Eva"
1"Evan"
2"Lucien"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Fei"
5"Cheung"
6"Rory"
7"Yu-Fei"
8"You"
places
0"Golden"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"East"
4"London"
5"Marseille"
6"Yu"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"as if testing the waters"
1"as if sensing the thick attraction that still hummed between them—an attraction they’d never fully addressed, even before the split, too caught up in the chaos of Evan’s goons and Lucien’s father’s agents to talk about what they really wanted"
2"as if complaining about the slow pace of their conversation"
3"as if celebrating a victory, followed by the clink of beer mugs and the sound of a server yelling an order"
4"as if giving his approval"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1953
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences102
matches
0"place that morning"
1"thought that kiss"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean47.63
std36
cv0.756
sampleLengths
0131
1152
2139
34
494
534
663
734
863
932
1065
1123
1250
1348
1469
1534
1661
1726
1827
1970
2086
2140
2272
2316
2421
2537
2637
2710
281
2934
3017
312
3270
3386
3428
3511
3644
3741
387
394
4070
91.50% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences102
matches
0"were bugged"
1"gone"
2"been monitored"
3"was hidden"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs302
matches
0"was weighing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount26
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences23
totalSentences102
ratio0.225
matches
0"Ptolemy’s tabby tail flicked once, sending a loose research note fluttering to the linoleum where curry fumes curled up from the shop below—thick with cumin and turmeric, sharp enough to sting her eyes if she lingered too close to the window."
1"The three deadbolts glinted in the dim lamplight; she’d twisted each into place that morning after a jittery run past a man who’d matched Evan’s build, his shadow stretching long across the brick pavement of Brick Lane."
2"When she pulled the door open an inch, a whiff of tailored wool and clove hit her—Lucien’s signature scent, one she’d tried to scrub from her memories by dousing her flat above Silas’ bar with curry powder."
3"His slicked-back platinum hair held no stray strands, his charcoal suit pressed so sharp it could have sliced the curry fumes drifting between them—he’d always prided himself on his appearance, an armor against the chaos of the supernatural underworld."
4"His ivory cane rested against his shoulder, his knuckles white where he curled around its handle—she knew the thin blade hidden within, had watched him slide it free once to cut through a locking mechanism when Evan’s goons had blocked her escape from a warehouse in East London six months prior."
5"She crossed her arms, her left wrist’s crescent scar tugging—she’d scraped it on his cane the last time they’d spoken, when he’d burst into her flat above Silas’ bar, mumbled a half-hearted apology, and vanished without a word, leaving only a crumpled note with a Avarosian symbol she couldn’t decode until Eva had translated it last week."
6"Ptolemy jumped from the windowsill, his paws thudding across the scrolls as he pressed against her calf, a low purr rumbling in his chest—he’d never been fond of strangers, but something about Lucien’s scent made him linger."
7"Found Eva’s name on your emergency contact list at the Golden Empress—Yu-Fei Cheung slipped it to me after I promised to erase her debt to a vampire loan shark."
8"Lucien’s gaze darted to the stack of research notes teetering on the entryway table—Eva’s work on the half-demon shielding relic, the same work that had tangled Rory up with Lucien’s underworld contacts when she’d asked him to track a stolen scroll for her."
9"They’d have killed you to get to me—half-human relatives of Avarosian demons are their favorite leverage."
10"Lucien’s gaze fell to her left wrist’s crescent scar, his jaw tightening—he’d never asked about its origin, too caught up in his own fear of his father’s agents to notice the small, faded mark from her childhood accident with a broken glass."
11"My father’s agents monitored all supernatural comms—even Eva’s scrolls were bugged for a week before I found and destroyed the device."
12"Lucien’s gaze darted to her left wrist, his fingers hovering just above the crescent scar—he’d never touched it since the night he’d scraped it, too afraid of the hurt he’d caused, too afraid of the vulnerability it would bring to admit he cared."
13"Ptolemy jumped onto the couch, his tail flicking between them, as if sensing the thick attraction that still hummed between them—an attraction they’d never fully addressed, even before the split, too caught up in the chaos of Evan’s goons and Lucien’s father’s agents to talk about what they really wanted."
14"Traced them to a warehouse in East London, took them down with my cane’s blade—they didn’t see it coming."
15"She’s not supernatural—she wouldn’t have been monitored."
16"It’s in a warehouse near my delivery route—Yu-Fei Cheung told me the goons who stole it are hiding it there."
17"Rory took it, her fingers curling around it, the memory of their kiss on the fire escape flooding back—his hands in her black shoulder-length hair, his breath hot against her neck, the sound of Silas’ bar’s jukebox in the background."
18"A scroll fell from the ceiling—Eva had taped it there, but the tape had loosened after weeks of curry fumes—and Lucien caught it, his fingers brushing Rory’s as he handed it to her."
19"I’ll bring an extra spring roll—for the wrapper."
20"She tucked the golden foil wrapper into her delivery jacket pocket, her left wrist’s crescent scar tugging as she did, a small smile tugging at her lips—she’d forgotten how to smile without the weight of Lucien’s disappearance hanging over her."
21"Lucien’s gaze locked on her smile, his own lips tugging into a small grin—he’d never seen her smile like that, unguarded, free from fear."
22"The curry fumes wrapped around them, warm and familiar, as Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes held Rory’s, the unspoken words between them thrumming in the cramped flat—words of attraction, of regret, of the future they’d never dared to imagine before he’d knocked on the door."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount189
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount4
adverbRatio0.021164021164021163
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean19.15
std14.88
cv0.777
sampleLengths
034
141
247
39
435
537
638
737
85
939
1051
1149
124
1357
1437
155
1629
1743
1820
192
2019
2113
223
2337
2423
257
269
2716
2842
2923
304
313
3216
3326
3424
3510
3621
3717
3828
3941
406
4110
4218
4337
4424
454
4622
477
485
4915
38.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.24509803921568626
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount53
totalSentences94
matches
0"She’d forgotten to shed her"
1"She stepped to the door,"
2"She fumbled with the top"
3"She wrenched the door wider."
4"His slicked-back platinum hair held"
5"His ivory cane rested against"
6"His heterochromatic eyes locked on"
7"You shouldn’t be here."
8"She crossed her arms, her"
9"I tracked your delivery route."
10"He shifted his weight, his"
11"She’d spent three nights huddled"
12"She’d had to hide in"
13"They’d tracked me to your"
14"They’d have killed you to"
15"He stepped forward, but Rory"
16"You didn’t tell me."
17"You just ran."
18"I thought you’d grown tired"
19"I couldn’t risk them using"
ratio0.564
2.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences94
matches
0"Rory’s fingers brushed a crumpled"
1"Ptolemy’s tabby tail flicked once,"
2"She’d forgotten to shed her"
3"A sharp rap on the"
4"She stepped to the door,"
5"The three deadbolts glinted in"
6"She fumbled with the top"
7"She wrenched the door wider."
8"His slicked-back platinum hair held"
9"His ivory cane rested against"
10"His heterochromatic eyes locked on"
11"You shouldn’t be here."
12"She crossed her arms, her"
13"Ptolemy jumped from the windowsill,"
14"I tracked your delivery route."
15"Lucien’s gaze darted to the"
16"He shifted his weight, his"
17"Rory’s voice tightened."
18"She’d spent three nights huddled"
19"She’d had to hide in"
ratio0.915
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount18
matches
0"Rory’s fingers brushed a crumpled golden foil wrapper from the Golden Empress as she stacked delivery receipts on a tower of ancient scrolls that teetered next …"
1"The three deadbolts glinted in the dim lamplight; she’d twisted each into place that morning after a jittery run past a man who’d matched Evan’s build, his shad…"
2"She fumbled with the top deadbolt first, its metal digging into her palm until her knuckles whitened, then the middle, its lock sticking for a beat before click…"
3"His heterochromatic eyes locked on hers: one amber, burning like the Marseille sun he’d once described as the only thing that made his half-demon blood feel bea…"
4"Ptolemy jumped from the windowsill, his paws thudding across the scrolls as he pressed against her calf, a low purr rumbling in his chest—he’d never been fond o…"
5"Lucien’s gaze darted to the stack of research notes teetering on the entryway table—Eva’s work on the half-demon shielding relic, the same work that had tangled…"
6"Ptolemy nipped at Rory’s boot, then darted past Lucien’s legs, his tabby fur brushing the hem of his suit, as if testing the waters."
7"She stared at it, her fingers itching to take it, her breath catching at the small, faded stain of soy sauce on its edge."
8"It was the only thing that made sense in the middle of my father’s chaos."
9"Rory leaned into his hand, her breath catching as his skin made contact with hers, the familiar heat of his touch sending a shiver down her spine."
10"Ptolemy jumped onto the couch, his tail flicking between them, as if sensing the thick attraction that still hummed between them—an attraction they’d never full…"
11"Ptolemy jumped onto the windowsill, his tail flicking between them, as if complaining about the slow pace of their conversation."
12"Eva’s been researching a relic that can shield half-demons from their father’s agents."
13"It’s in a warehouse near my delivery route—Yu-Fei Cheung told me the goons who stole it are hiding it there."
14"She leaned against the windowsill, her gaze locking on Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes, the amber one burning bright, the black one softening with a hint of vulne…"
15"The curry house below let out a loud cheer, as if celebrating a victory, followed by the clink of beer mugs and the sound of a server yelling an order."
16"She tucked the golden foil wrapper into her delivery jacket pocket, her left wrist’s crescent scar tugging as she did, a small smile tugging at her lips—she’d f…"
17"Ptolemy jumped onto his shoulder, his tail flicking against his platinum hair, as if giving his approval."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
73.0510%