| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.609 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.04% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1003 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1003 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "tinged" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "shimmered" | | 4 | "remarkable" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "stark" | | 7 | "comforting" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "reminder" | | 10 | "velvet" | | 11 | "echoes" | | 12 | "warmth" | | 13 | "unreadable" | | 14 | "glistening" | | 15 | "testament" | | 16 | "imposing" | | 17 | "hulking" | | 18 | "intriguing" | | 19 | "scanned" | | 20 | "chilling" | | 21 | "eyebrow" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 23.81% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seem to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1005 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 825 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 0.85 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Belphegor" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 4 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 7 | | Seer | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Isolde | 4 | | Fae | 3 | | Hel | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Suddenly | 1 | | Belphegor | 4 | | Prince | 2 | | Veil | 1 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Seer" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Hel" | | 6 | "Belphegor" | | 7 | "Prince" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 8.49% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "quite place" | | 1 | "looked like servants – or perhaps former" | | 2 | "rumble that seemed to vibrate through the very ground" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1005 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 64.11% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 18 | | mean | 55.83 | | std | 20.9 | | cv | 0.374 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 100 | | 1 | 82 | | 2 | 45 | | 3 | 67 | | 4 | 77 | | 5 | 49 | | 6 | 47 | | 7 | 78 | | 8 | 36 | | 9 | 72 | | 10 | 63 | | 11 | 54 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 48 | | 17 | 71 |
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| 99.42% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 129 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 69 | | ratio | 0.087 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory felt it first – a prickling at the back of her neck, the sudden awareness of being watched by something she couldn’t see." | | 1 | "Richmond Park hadn’t vanished – the familiar gnarled branches of the ancient oaks still reached for the bruised twilight, but the air hummed with a dissonance, a layered reality overlaid on the mundane." | | 2 | "The scent of damp earth and decaying leaves mingled with something sweeter, cloying – overripe peaches and bruised plums, a sickeningly luxurious combination." | | 3 | "The ground itself felt strangely yielding beneath their feet, like walking on moss-covered velvet – or perhaps something denser, something subtly alive." | | 4 | "Baskets overflowing with the fruit lay scattered about, alongside the skeletal remains of what looked like servants – or perhaps former guests – clad in tattered finery." | | 5 | "\"A gilded cage. The appetites of the damned are a potent fuel for the realms.” She pointed a long, slender finger at a massive feast laid out on a long, ornate table – mountains of roasted meats, glistening pastries, and bottles overflowing with ruby-red wine." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 823 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.038882138517618466 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.019441069258809233 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 69 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 69 | | mean | 14.57 | | std | 7.39 | | cv | 0.508 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 45 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 23 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 70.53% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.4927536231884058 | | totalSentences | 69 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 57.47% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, a figure emerged from" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 95.86% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't a sudden shift," | | 1 | "It was like wading into" | | 2 | "She didn't step back, didn’t" | | 3 | "It wasn't a comforting weight," | | 4 | "She’d taken Isolde’s gift with" | | 5 | "They moved through a forest" | | 6 | "Their bark seemed to ripple," | | 7 | "It pulled at something deep" | | 8 | "she asked, her voice barely" | | 9 | "they said, their voice a" | | 10 | "she corrected, her voice laced" | | 11 | "She pointed a long, slender" | | 12 | "He wore a magnificent crimson" | | 13 | "Her eyes scanned the clearing," | | 14 | "He gestured towards the feast" | | 15 | "they said, their voice a" | | 16 | "They'd stumbled into a trap." | | 17 | "she said, her voice cold" |
| | ratio | 0.31 | |
| 3.10% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "The air thickened the moment" | | 1 | "It wasn't a sudden shift," | | 2 | "It was like wading into" | | 3 | "Rory felt it first –" | | 4 | "Isolde, draped in a shawl" | | 5 | "Richmond Park hadn’t vanished –" | | 6 | "The scent of damp earth" | | 7 | "The standing stones marking the" | | 8 | "Isolde murmured, her voice a" | | 9 | "She didn't step back, didn’t" | | 10 | "The Seer simply continued to" | | 11 | "Rory gripped the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 12 | "It wasn't a comforting weight," | | 13 | "She’d taken Isolde’s gift with" | | 14 | "Nyx drifted ahead, a shifting" | | 15 | "They moved through a forest" | | 16 | "The trees weren’t solid, not" | | 17 | "Their bark seemed to ripple," | | 18 | "Bioluminescent fungi clung to the" | | 19 | "The ground itself felt strangely" |
| | ratio | 0.914 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 67.67% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones marking the boundary of the grove pulsed with a faint, internal luminescence, their surfaces slick with moisture that shimmered with an unna…" | | 1 | "Bioluminescent fungi clung to the trunks, casting an ethereal glow that painted the forest floor in shifting patterns." | | 2 | "Vines, thick as pythons, choked the trellis, laden with fruit that gleamed with an unsettling, deep crimson sheen." | | 3 | "Nyx stepped forward, their form shifting slightly, becoming more indistinct." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde murmured, her voice a brittle whisper" | | 1 | "she asked, her voice barely audible" | | 2 | "they said, their voice a whisper on the wind" | | 3 | "Rory replied, her hand tightening around the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 4 | "they said, their voice a chilling murmur" | | 5 | "she said, her voice cold and resolute" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Rory stated (state)" | | 2 | "she corrected (correct)" | | 3 | "Belphegor chuckled (chuckle)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.391 | | leniency | 0.783 | | rawRatio | 0.444 | | effectiveRatio | 0.348 | |