Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYABA5FNNYJX84CCZWY1EGS

Run Details

Duration:
2m 45s
Cost:
$0.014645
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn ducked through the rusted metal grate marking the abandoned Camden Tube station’s secret entrance. Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair caught on the grate’s jagged edge; she tugged it free without a flinch. The bone token in her right pocket pressed into her palm—seized from a suspect two nights prior, the only key to the Veil Market’s current lair. Her sharp jaw set. Military precision guided every step as she descended the cracked concrete stairs, worn leather watch on her left wrist ticking in time with her boot falls. The station’s air clung to her throat: a mix of burnt sage, rusted iron, and the faint, cloying sweetness of banned alchemical reagents. Faded graffiti of occult sigils crawled up the tunnel walls—marks she’d never seen in 18 years of metropolitan service, but ones that pricked at the back of her mind, a faint echo of her partner DS Morris’s unexplained death three years prior. She’d spent months poring over Morris’s case files, looking for a crack in the “unexplained” label the department had slapped on it, but every lead had died in a dead end until the Veil Market’s vendor turned up dead. She reached the platform. A collapsed wooden stall leaned against the rusted track barrier—its planks splintered as if hit by a sudden blast, nails protruding like broken teeth. A man’s body slouched in the stall’s shadow, his fingers curled around a crumpled piece of parchment etched with more sigils. Forensics officers hovered at the platform’s edge, their gloves glinting under the faint glow of their headlamps; Harlow waved them away with a sharp gesture, her military bearing leaving no room for argument. Eva Kowalski stood by the stall’s remains. Her curly red hair spilled over her shoulders, round glasses slipping down her freckled nose. She tucked a strand behind her left ear—her nervous habit—before her green eyes locked on Harlow. Her worn leather satchel, bulging with ancient history books and restricted British Museum archives manuscripts, rested at her feet, its strap frayed from years of hauling research materials through London’s streets. The Oxford-educated master’s holder had been assigned as Harlow’s occult consultant three days prior; Harlow had resisted the pairing until the crime scene’s supernatural echoes—burnt sage, sigil graffiti, a body with no visible cause of death—became impossible to ignore. Forensics found no bullet holes. No blade wounds. No poison traces. Harlow knelt beside the body. She pried the man’s curled fingers open with a steady hand, her military training keeping her movements precise even as the parchment crumbled into fine dust at her touch. The dust caught the headlamp’s glow, swirling into a faint spiral before vanishing into the station’s cold air. His palm bears bruising. Like he grabbed a piece of molten metal. Eva’s voice cut through the station’s silence, sharp and sure despite her nervous hair tuck. The Veil Market’s vendors deal in enchanted goods that burn to the touch if misused—even something as simple as a sigil-etched parchment can sear skin if handled without the right charm. Harlow stood. Her sharp jaw tightened, the muscle in her cheek twitching as she connected the bruising to Morris’s body—he’d had similar faint bruising on his palm, a detail she’d written off as a workplace accident at the time. The compass on the ground. She nodded to the brass object half-buried in splintered wood. Its casing bore a thick patina of verdigris, its face etched with the protective sigils she’d seen in Eva’s research notes on the Veil Compass—a tool crafted by a Shade artisan to point toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal. The compass’s needle stuck straight up, not swiveling toward the station’s hidden rift—a detail Eva had mentioned earlier, noting the rift’s constant hum and its role as the Veil Market’s anchor point. That’s a Veil Compass. It should point to the nearest rift. This station’s rift is ten feet from us, tucked between the track and the barrier. Eva tucked another strand of hair behind her left ear. She knelt, her satchel’s strap catching on a splintered plank; she tugged it free with a quiet huff before brushing wood shavings from the compass’s face. Her round glasses slipped again; she pushed them up with a finger, her freckled cheeks flushing slightly with frustration. Someone scratched the core sigil. The one circled in my notes—its the anchor for the compass’s attunement. Harlow leaned in. She spotted the faint, deliberate scratch across the compass’s central sigil— a thin, deep gash that cut through the sigil’s curved lines, something she’d missed on her first scan of the scene. Her military training kicked in then, her mind cataloging every detail: the scratch’s 45-degree angle (matching the splintered planks’ edges, as if made with the same broken piece of wood), the dust on the compass’s surface (a fine, greenish powder that didn’t match the platform’s rust-colored dust), the way her worn leather watch’s ticking slowed when she moved closer to the rift’s hidden spot. You’re saying the scratch disabled it. Made it useless for finding an escape. Eva stood. She lifted a book from her satchel—its cover bound in cracked black leather, its pages marked with neon pink post-its and faded pencil notes. The book’s title, Ancient Sigil Tampering: Case Studies from the British Museum Archives, stared up at Harlow. Break the core sigil, and the needle locks. No rift detection. No escape route. The Veil Market moves every full moon, and vendors rely on the compass to find their way out before the rift shifts—if they can’t, the rift’s surge can crush stalls or burn anyone caught in its path. Harlow’s mind raced. She connected the dots: the man was a Veil Market vendor, trying to flee a sudden rift surge. Someone had scratched his compass’s core sigil, disabling his escape. He’d grabbed the sigil-etched parchment in a panic, burning his palm. The rift’s surge had collapsed his stall, killing him with no visible wounds. But forensics missed the scratch. They wrote off the bruising as a fall against a hot pipe. Harlow’s sharp jaw set. She pulled the bone token from her pocket, its smooth surface now vibrating faintly against her palm— a reaction she’d not noticed until she stood close to the compass. You didn’t mention the token’s reaction. Eva’s green eyes widened. She stepped closer, her book still open in her hand. The bone token is a key to the market, but it also resonates with active rifts. If it’s vibrating, the rift’s still unstable—someone’s tampered with it too. Harlow’s boot kicked a piece of splintered wood. It skidded toward the track, hitting the barrier with a sharp clink. The man’s parchment. It crumbled. Why? Eva flipped through her book. She stopped at a marked page, pointing to a faded illustration of a crumbling sigil parchment. Enchanted parchment disintegrates when its bearer dies in a rift surge. It’s a failsafe to hide market secrets—vendors use it to keep their stock lists and client names from falling into the wrong hands. Harlow scanned the tunnel walls again. She spotted a faint trail of verdigris dust leading from the compass to the station’s far exit—thin, almost invisible, but noticeable to her trained eye after she’d focused on the compass’s patina. Her military precision guided her steps as she followed the trail, her boot falls quiet against the concrete. This dust matches the compass’s casing. Eva followed. She tucked hair behind her left ear again, her green eyes fixed on the dust trail as she walked. Whoever scratched the compass left a trail. They didn’t bother to clean it up—maybe they were in a hurry, or they thought no one would notice a greenish dust trail in a rusted tube station. Harlow’s watch ticked faster as she reached the exit, the metal door’s surface covered in faded graffiti. She spotted a faint scratch on the door’s handle—same 45-degree angle as the compass’s sigil scratch, same deep gash made with a sharp, splintered object. Same tool. Same hand. Eva leaned against the door. She pulled another book from her satchel—The Shade Artisans: Creators of Supernatural Tools—its pages dog-eared from constant use. Your partner’s case. Did they find any scratched sigils? Any verdigris dust? Any bone tokens? Harlow’s sharp jaw tightened. She’d never considered that angle. Morris’s body had been found in an abandoned warehouse, no visible cause of death, a faint bruise on his palm—details she’d replayed a hundred times, but never with the lens of sigil tampering or supernatural tools. No one checked for sigils. No one knew to look. The department wrote it off as a random mugging gone wrong, but there was no stolen cash, no missing badge—nothing to support the theory. Eva’s green eyes softened. She closed her book, tucking it back into her satchel. That’s the missing link. The same person— or group— that tampered with your partner’s case is tampering with this one. They’re using sigil damage and rift surges to kill without leaving evidence. Harlow knelt. She ran her finger along the door’s scratch, her military-trained hand feeling the sharp edges of the gash. The bone token in her pocket vibrated harder, its hum matching the faint rift pulse she could now hear, a low thrumming in her ears. They didn’t just kill this vendor. They disabled his escape. Same as they did to Morris. She stood. She scanned the exit’s surroundings again, spotting a faint sigil etched into the door’s frame—another mark she’d missed earlier, its lines scratched and faded but matching the ones on the tunnel walls. Her deduction clicked into place: the killer was a regular at the Veil Market, someone who knew how to tamper with sigils and rift anchors, someone who’d been targeting vendors and anyone who might uncover their scheme—including her partner. Eva tucked hair behind her left ear. She lifted her satchel, slinging it over her shoulder. We need to check the restricted archives for more cases of sigil tampering and rift-related deaths. Harlow’s sharp jaw set. She pocketed the bone token, her watch ticking back to its steady military beat. First, we track the verdigris dust trail. It leads to the station’s street entrance. Whoever left it is still in Camden.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.12% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1739
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1739
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"echo"
count1
1
word"etched"
count5
2
word"glinting"
count1
3
word"echoes"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"charm"
count1
6
word"raced"
count1
7
word"scanned"
count2
8
word"vibrated"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"echo"
1"etched"
2"glinting"
3"echoes"
4"silence"
5"charm"
6"raced"
7"scanned"
8"vibrated"
9"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences122
matches
0"y with frustration"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences122
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen66
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1701
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions77
wordCount1654
uniqueNames26
maxNameDensity1.03
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow17
Quinn1
Camden2
Tube1
Veil9
Market7
Morris5
Kowalski1
British2
Museum2
London1
Oxford-educated1
Eva12
Compass2
Shade2
You2
Ancient1
Sigil1
Tampering1
Case1
Studies1
Archives1
Artisans1
Creators1
Supernatural1
Tools1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Morris"
4"Kowalski"
5"Eva"
6"You"
7"Sigil"
places
0"Camden"
1"Veil"
2"British"
3"Museum"
4"London"
5"Compass"
6"Archives"
globalScore0.986
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1701
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences122
matches
0"considered that angle"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean35.44
std27.42
cv0.774
sampleLengths
091
1104
282
3108
411
552
612
715
831
939
105
1182
1226
1355
1417
1599
1613
1743
1851
1955
2017
2133
226
2314
2427
2520
266
2721
2834
2956
306
3121
3235
3342
344
3523
3615
3745
3834
3914
4032
4145
4216
4373
4416
4516
4618
4721
99.51% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences122
matches
0"been assigned"
1"been found"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs275
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount29
semicolonCount5
flaggedSentences29
totalSentences122
ratio0.238
matches
0"Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair caught on the grate’s jagged edge; she tugged it free without a flinch."
1"The bone token in her right pocket pressed into her palm—seized from a suspect two nights prior, the only key to the Veil Market’s current lair."
2"Faded graffiti of occult sigils crawled up the tunnel walls—marks she’d never seen in 18 years of metropolitan service, but ones that pricked at the back of her mind, a faint echo of her partner DS Morris’s unexplained death three years prior."
3"A collapsed wooden stall leaned against the rusted track barrier—its planks splintered as if hit by a sudden blast, nails protruding like broken teeth."
4"Forensics officers hovered at the platform’s edge, their gloves glinting under the faint glow of their headlamps; Harlow waved them away with a sharp gesture, her military bearing leaving no room for argument."
5"She tucked a strand behind her left ear—her nervous habit—before her green eyes locked on Harlow."
6"The Oxford-educated master’s holder had been assigned as Harlow’s occult consultant three days prior; Harlow had resisted the pairing until the crime scene’s supernatural echoes—burnt sage, sigil graffiti, a body with no visible cause of death—became impossible to ignore."
7"The Veil Market’s vendors deal in enchanted goods that burn to the touch if misused—even something as simple as a sigil-etched parchment can sear skin if handled without the right charm."
8"Her sharp jaw tightened, the muscle in her cheek twitching as she connected the bruising to Morris’s body—he’d had similar faint bruising on his palm, a detail she’d written off as a workplace accident at the time."
9"Its casing bore a thick patina of verdigris, its face etched with the protective sigils she’d seen in Eva’s research notes on the Veil Compass—a tool crafted by a Shade artisan to point toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal."
10"The compass’s needle stuck straight up, not swiveling toward the station’s hidden rift—a detail Eva had mentioned earlier, noting the rift’s constant hum and its role as the Veil Market’s anchor point."
11"She knelt, her satchel’s strap catching on a splintered plank; she tugged it free with a quiet huff before brushing wood shavings from the compass’s face."
12"Her round glasses slipped again; she pushed them up with a finger, her freckled cheeks flushing slightly with frustration."
13"The one circled in my notes—its the anchor for the compass’s attunement."
14"She spotted the faint, deliberate scratch across the compass’s central sigil— a thin, deep gash that cut through the sigil’s curved lines, something she’d missed on her first scan of the scene."
15"She lifted a book from her satchel—its cover bound in cracked black leather, its pages marked with neon pink post-its and faded pencil notes."
16"The Veil Market moves every full moon, and vendors rely on the compass to find their way out before the rift shifts—if they can’t, the rift’s surge can crush stalls or burn anyone caught in its path."
17"She pulled the bone token from her pocket, its smooth surface now vibrating faintly against her palm— a reaction she’d not noticed until she stood close to the compass."
18"If it’s vibrating, the rift’s still unstable—someone’s tampered with it too."
19"It’s a failsafe to hide market secrets—vendors use it to keep their stock lists and client names from falling into the wrong hands."
20"She spotted a faint trail of verdigris dust leading from the compass to the station’s far exit—thin, almost invisible, but noticeable to her trained eye after she’d focused on the compass’s patina."
21"They didn’t bother to clean it up—maybe they were in a hurry, or they thought no one would notice a greenish dust trail in a rusted tube station."
22"She spotted a faint scratch on the door’s handle—same 45-degree angle as the compass’s sigil scratch, same deep gash made with a sharp, splintered object."
23"She pulled another book from her satchel—The Shade Artisans: Creators of Supernatural Tools—its pages dog-eared from constant use."
24"Morris’s body had been found in an abandoned warehouse, no visible cause of death, a faint bruise on his palm—details she’d replayed a hundred times, but never with the lens of sigil tampering or supernatural tools."
25"The department wrote it off as a random mugging gone wrong, but there was no stolen cash, no missing badge—nothing to support the theory."
26"The same person— or group— that tampered with your partner’s case is tampering with this one."
27"She scanned the exit’s surroundings again, spotting a faint sigil etched into the door’s frame—another mark she’d missed earlier, its lines scratched and faded but matching the ones on the tunnel walls."
28"Her deduction clicked into place: the killer was a regular at the Veil Market, someone who knew how to tamper with sigils and rift anchors, someone who’d been targeting vendors and anyone who might uncover their scheme—including her partner."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount800
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount9
adverbRatio0.01125
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean13.94
std11.87
cv0.851
sampleLengths
017
118
226
34
426
523
642
739
84
924
1021
1133
127
1315
1416
1531
1639
175
183
193
205
2129
2218
234
248
2515
2631
272
2837
295
3010
3140
3232
334
347
3515
3610
3726
3819
395
4012
413
4232
4364
446
457
462
4724
4817
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42.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.28688524590163933
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners35
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.63% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount47
totalSentences113
matches
0"Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair"
1"Her sharp jaw set."
2"She’d spent months poring over"
3"She reached the platform."
4"Her curly red hair spilled"
5"She tucked a strand behind"
6"Her worn leather satchel, bulging"
7"She pried the man’s curled"
8"His palm bears bruising."
9"Her sharp jaw tightened, the"
10"She nodded to the brass"
11"Its casing bore a thick"
12"It should point to the"
13"She knelt, her satchel’s strap"
14"Her round glasses slipped again;"
15"She spotted the faint, deliberate"
16"Her military training kicked in"
17"You’re saying the scratch disabled"
18"She lifted a book from"
19"She connected the dots: the"
ratio0.416
39.65% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount95
totalSentences113
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked through"
1"Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair"
2"The bone token in her"
3"Her sharp jaw set."
4"Military precision guided every step"
5"The station’s air clung to"
6"She’d spent months poring over"
7"She reached the platform."
8"A collapsed wooden stall leaned"
9"A man’s body slouched in"
10"Forensics officers hovered at the"
11"Eva Kowalski stood by the"
12"Her curly red hair spilled"
13"She tucked a strand behind"
14"Her worn leather satchel, bulging"
15"The Oxford-educated master’s holder had"
16"Forensics found no bullet holes."
17"Harlow knelt beside the body."
18"She pried the man’s curled"
19"The dust caught the headlamp’s"
ratio0.841
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences113
matches
0"If it’s vibrating, the rift’s"
1"Whoever scratched the compass left"
2"Whoever left it is still"
ratio0.027
37.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Faded graffiti of occult sigils crawled up the tunnel walls—marks she’d never seen in 18 years of metropolitan service, but ones that pricked at the back of her…"
1"A collapsed wooden stall leaned against the rusted track barrier—its planks splintered as if hit by a sudden blast, nails protruding like broken teeth."
2"Forensics officers hovered at the platform’s edge, their gloves glinting under the faint glow of their headlamps; Harlow waved them away with a sharp gesture, h…"
3"The dust caught the headlamp’s glow, swirling into a faint spiral before vanishing into the station’s cold air."
4"The Veil Market’s vendors deal in enchanted goods that burn to the touch if misused—even something as simple as a sigil-etched parchment can sear skin if handle…"
5"Her sharp jaw tightened, the muscle in her cheek twitching as she connected the bruising to Morris’s body—he’d had similar faint bruising on his palm, a detail …"
6"She knelt, her satchel’s strap catching on a splintered plank; she tugged it free with a quiet huff before brushing wood shavings from the compass’s face."
7"The same person— or group— that tampered with your partner’s case is tampering with this one."
8"Her deduction clicked into place: the killer was a regular at the Veil Market, someone who knew how to tamper with sigils and rift anchors, someone who’d been t…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.6736%