| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 21 | | adverbTagCount | 5 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he replied smoothly [smoothly]" | | 1 | "He gestured vaguely [vaguely]" | | 2 | "she agreed quietly [quietly]" | | 3 | "he said finally [finally]" | | 4 | "Silas said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.467 | | leniency | 0.933 | | rawRatio | 0.238 | | effectiveRatio | 0.222 | |
| 67.38% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1073 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "sharply" | | 4 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 30.10% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1073 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "echoed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "flicker" | | 5 | "intensity" | | 6 | "unspoken" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "pang" | | 9 | "depths" | | 10 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 97 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1068 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 808 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.61 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Liam" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | General | 1 | | Tso | 1 | | Tuesday | 1 | | Liam | 9 | | Davies | 1 | | Cardiff | 2 | | University | 1 | | Rory | 13 | | Silas | 7 | | Evan | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Tso" | | 3 | "Liam" | | 4 | "Davies" | | 5 | "Rory" | | 6 | "Silas" | | 7 | "Evan" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.696 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 68.03% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite place" | | 1 | "felt like a cruel mockery of what had b" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.936 | | wordCount | 1068 | | matches | | 0 | "not for the man he was, but for the boy they both once knew, the boy who was swallowed b" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 23.73 | | std | 14.85 | | cv | 0.626 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 38 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 55 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 43 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 55 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 43 | | 32 | 40 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 42 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 33 | | 44 | 14 |
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| 81.56% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "was cropped" | | 1 | "was laced" | | 2 | "was supposed" | | 3 | "been lost" | | 4 | "was swallowed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 148 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 97 | | ratio | 0.052 | | matches | | 0 | "Another delivery for Yu-Fei – General Tso’s chicken and a large portion of egg fried rice, just the ticket for a soggy Tuesday evening." | | 1 | "She remembered Liam vividly – the nervous energy, the quick wit, the shared dreams of changing the world." | | 2 | "His eyebrows rose slightly, a flicker of something—pity?" | | 3 | "Disappointment?—crossing his face." | | 4 | "Rory caught his eye, and for a moment, she saw a flicker of something—pity, perhaps, or understanding—in his hazel depths." |
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| 91.34% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 813 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.04551045510455105 | | lyAdverbCount | 20 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.024600246002460024 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 97 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 97 | | mean | 11.01 | | std | 6.47 | | cv | 0.588 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 69.07% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.4329896907216495 | | totalSentences | 97 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 93.90% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Slowly, she turned." | | 1 | "Instead, he was…" |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 22.82% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "She pushed open the heavy" | | 1 | "He didn’t bother with a" | | 2 | "she mumbled, heading towards the" | | 3 | "She set the insulated bag" | | 4 | "She froze, her hand hovering" | | 5 | "it was familiar, achingly so," | | 6 | "His hair was cropped short" | | 7 | "He wore a tailored suit," | | 8 | "His eyes, once warm and" | | 9 | "she breathed, the name feeling" | | 10 | "He pushed himself off the" | | 11 | "His tone was laced with" | | 12 | "She met his gaze, refusing" | | 13 | "he replied smoothly" | | 14 | "He gestured vaguely" | | 15 | "She remembered Liam vividly –" | | 16 | "He was supposed to be" | | 17 | "he continued, his voice smooth" | | 18 | "she replied, her voice carefully" | | 19 | "He chuckled, a dry, humorless" |
| | ratio | 0.493 | |
| 2.25% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "The green neon sign of" | | 1 | "Rory hunched deeper into her" | | 2 | "Another delivery for Yu-Fei –" | | 3 | "She pushed open the heavy" | | 4 | "The bar was, predictably, quiet." | | 5 | "A couple nursed pints in" | | 6 | "A lone figure hunched over" | | 7 | "Silas, perched behind the bar" | | 8 | "He didn’t bother with a" | | 9 | "she mumbled, heading towards the" | | 10 | "She set the insulated bag" | | 11 | "She froze, her hand hovering" | | 12 | "it was familiar, achingly so," | | 13 | "Liam, with the boyish grin" | | 14 | "His hair was cropped short" | | 15 | "He wore a tailored suit," | | 16 | "His eyes, once warm and" | | 17 | "she breathed, the name feeling" | | 18 | "He pushed himself off the" | | 19 | "His tone was laced with" |
| | ratio | 0.915 | |
| 70.42% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Before she could pull it" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "He looked past her, towards Silas, who was now pointedly wiping down the already immaculate bar." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 21 | | uselessAdditionCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "She met, refusing to back down" | | 1 | "he continued, his voice smooth as polished stone" | | 2 | "she replied, her voice carefully neutral" | | 3 | "He paused, his eyes searching her face" | | 4 | "Rory challenged, her voice trembling slightly" | | 5 | "he said finally, his voice losing some of its polished edge" | | 6 | "he said, the words sounding empty even to his own ears" | | 7 | "Silas observed, his voice low" | | 8 | "Rory took, the warmth spreading through her chest" | | 9 | "Silas said finally, his voice barely a whisper," |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 8 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she mumbled (mumble)" | | 1 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "he continued (continue)" | | 3 | "Rory challenged (challenge)" | | 4 | "Rory pressed (press)" | | 5 | "she agreed quietly (agree)" | | 6 | "Rory murmured (murmur)" | | 7 | "Silas observed (observe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.289 | | leniency | 0.578 | | rawRatio | 0.615 | | effectiveRatio | 0.356 | |