Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYABA7ZP36Y7XER9VWZPPGY

Run Details

Duration:
44.9s
Cost:
$0.000237
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest cast a sickly glow across the rain-slicked pavement. Rory hunched deeper into her threadbare coat, pulling the collar higher. Another delivery for Yu-Fei – General Tso’s chicken and a large portion of egg fried rice, just the ticket for a soggy Tuesday evening. She pushed open the heavy oak door, the scent of stale beer and vaguely floral cleaning fluid hitting her like a physical force. The bar was, predictably, quiet. A couple nursed pints in a darkened corner. A lone figure hunched over a chessboard, oblivious to the world. Silas, perched behind the bar polishing glasses, looked up, his hazel eyes crinkling slightly. “Rory. Late as always.” He didn’t bother with a smile, just a nod of acknowledgement. “Traffic was murder,” she mumbled, heading towards the counter. “Yu-Fei’s got a hungry customer.” She set the insulated bag down with a thump and reached for her wallet. Before she could pull it out, a voice cut through the murmur of the bar. “Rory? Is that really you?” She froze, her hand hovering over her purse. The voice… it was familiar, achingly so, yet warped by time and something else she couldn’t quite place. Slowly, she turned. Standing near the dartboard, leaning against the wall with an easy confidence she didn't remember, was Liam Davies. Liam, with the boyish grin and perpetually ruffled brown hair she remembered from countless late-night study sessions and stolen kisses under the Cardiff University clock tower. But this wasn't the Liam she knew. His hair was cropped short and slicked back, revealing a sharply defined jawline. He wore a tailored suit, the kind that cost more than her entire month's rent, and a silver watch glinted on his wrist. His eyes, once warm and hazel, now held a cold, assessing quality. "Liam," she breathed, the name feeling foreign on her tongue after all these years. "Wow. I...I didn't expect to see you here." He pushed himself off the wall and moved closer, his movements deliberate, almost predatory. “Small world, isn’t it? Though I can’t say I expected to see you either. Last I heard, you were… delivering food?” His tone was laced with a subtle mockery. Rory bristled. "It pays the bills.” She met his gaze, refusing to back down. “What are you doing here?” “Business,” he replied smoothly. “I’m in finance now. Mergers, acquisitions, that sort of thing.” He gestured vaguely. “London’s the place to be.” Silas cleared his throat, his gaze fixed on a spot somewhere beyond Liam’s shoulder. Rory noticed his hand tightened around the glass he held. “So, finance,” Rory echoed, testing the word on her tongue. “Quite a change from debating Roman law.” Liam’s lips curled into a tight smile, devoid of genuine warmth. “People change, Rory. Life happens.” A silence stretched between them, thick and uncomfortable. Rory avoided his gaze, focusing on a chipped tile on the floor. She remembered Liam vividly – the nervous energy, the quick wit, the shared dreams of changing the world. He was supposed to be a human rights lawyer, fighting for the underdog. Instead, he was… this. "You look well," he continued, his voice smooth as polished stone. “You too,” she replied, her voice carefully neutral. “The suit suits you.” He chuckled, a dry, humorless sound. “It’s part of the uniform. Keeps the sharks at bay.” He paused, his eyes searching her face. "What about you? Still chasing those law degrees?" She swallowed, the memory of fleeing Cardiff, of Evan, a bitter taste in her mouth. “I… I didn’t finish.” His eyebrows rose slightly, a flicker of something—pity? Disappointment?—crossing his face. "A shame. You always were the brighter of the two of us." The backhanded compliment stung. “I found other things to occupy my time.” "Like delivering Chinese food?" He didn't mean it as a joke. Rory felt a surge of anger, hot and sudden. "There's nothing wrong with honest work, Liam.” She straightened her shoulders, meeting his gaze head-on. "At least I can look myself in the mirror." He didn't respond immediately, studying her with an intensity that made her skin crawl. “Times change, Rory. Morality is a luxury few can afford.” "Is that what they teach you in finance?" Rory challenged, her voice trembling slightly. Liam’s expression hardened. "You wouldn't understand." “Try me." He hesitated, then let out a sigh, as if bored by the entire conversation. "Let’s just say some compromises are necessary to achieve… certain goals." "What goals?" Rory pressed, unable to resist the pull of the unspoken words hanging between them. He looked past her, towards Silas, who was now pointedly wiping down the already immaculate bar. “Nothing you need to concern yourself with. I just… I was curious. About what you’d been up to. After all, we were quite close once, weren’t we?” The question hung in the air, laced with a sadness that surprised Rory. She remembered a time when those words would have carried a weight of shared intimacy, now they felt like a cruel mockery of what had been lost. "We were," she agreed quietly. "A long time ago." The silence returned, heavier than before. Liam shifted his weight, his gaze darting around the bar. "I should be going," he said finally, his voice losing some of its polished edge. "A business dinner. Important clients." He turned to leave, then paused, looking back at her over his shoulder. “It’s good to see you, Rory,” he said, the words sounding empty even to his own ears. “Take care of yourself.” Rory watched him go, his tailored suit disappearing into the London rain. She felt a strange pang of grief, not for the man he was, but for the boy they both once knew, the boy who was swallowed by time and ambition. Silas slid a glass of amber liquid across the counter. "Whiskey?" "Please," Rory murmured, picking up the glass. She swirled the liquid, the scent of peat and smoke filling her nostrils. "He's changed," Silas observed, his voice low. “He has." Rory took a long sip of the whiskey, the warmth spreading through her chest. “We both have.” Silas remained silent, his gaze fixed on the spot where Liam had stood. Rory caught his eye, and for a moment, she saw a flicker of something—pity, perhaps, or understanding—in his hazel depths. "Some things," Silas said finally, his voice barely a whisper, "are better left buried."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"he replied smoothly [smoothly]"
1"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
2"she agreed quietly [quietly]"
3"he said finally [finally]"
4"Silas said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.467
leniency0.933
rawRatio0.238
effectiveRatio0.222
67.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1073
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"sharply"
count1
4
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"slowly"
3"sharply"
4"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
30.10% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1073
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"flicker"
count2
5
word"intensity"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count1
7
word"weight"
count2
8
word"pang"
count1
9
word"depths"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"echoed"
2"warmth"
3"silence"
4"flicker"
5"intensity"
6"unspoken"
7"weight"
8"pang"
9"depths"
10"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences74
matches
0"a surge of anger"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences74
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1068
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount808
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.61
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Liam"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Yu-Fei1
General1
Tso1
Tuesday1
Liam9
Davies1
Cardiff2
University1
Rory13
Silas7
Evan1
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Tso"
3"Liam"
4"Davies"
5"Rory"
6"Silas"
7"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
globalScore0.696
windowScore0.667
68.03% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite place"
1"felt like a cruel mockery of what had b"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.936
wordCount1068
matches
0"not for the man he was, but for the boy they both once knew, the boy who was swallowed b"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean23.73
std14.85
cv0.626
sampleLengths
074
138
215
314
429
55
629
744
855
922
1043
1119
1222
1324
1417
1516
1655
1711
1812
1931
2019
2123
2212
2311
2433
2524
2614
276
282
2925
3016
3143
3240
339
3416
3520
3613
3721
3842
3911
4020
417
4219
4333
4414
81.56% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences74
matches
0"was cropped"
1"was laced"
2"was supposed"
3"been lost"
4"was swallowed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs148
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences97
ratio0.052
matches
0"Another delivery for Yu-Fei – General Tso’s chicken and a large portion of egg fried rice, just the ticket for a soggy Tuesday evening."
1"She remembered Liam vividly – the nervous energy, the quick wit, the shared dreams of changing the world."
2"His eyebrows rose slightly, a flicker of something—pity?"
3"Disappointment?—crossing his face."
4"Rory caught his eye, and for a moment, she saw a flicker of something—pity, perhaps, or understanding—in his hazel depths."
91.34% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount813
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.04551045510455105
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.024600246002460024
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean11.01
std6.47
cv0.588
sampleLengths
016
111
224
323
45
58
611
714
815
99
105
1114
1215
135
148
152
1616
173
1818
1926
207
2113
2223
2312
2414
258
2614
2729
282
2912
305
314
3213
335
3414
3510
3610
377
3811
395
408
4112
4218
4313
443
451
4611
478
484
496
69.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4329896907216495
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners42
93.90% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences71
matches
0"Slowly, she turned."
1"Instead, he was…"
ratio0.028
22.82% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences71
matches
0"She pushed open the heavy"
1"He didn’t bother with a"
2"she mumbled, heading towards the"
3"She set the insulated bag"
4"She froze, her hand hovering"
5"it was familiar, achingly so,"
6"His hair was cropped short"
7"He wore a tailored suit,"
8"His eyes, once warm and"
9"she breathed, the name feeling"
10"He pushed himself off the"
11"His tone was laced with"
12"She met his gaze, refusing"
13"he replied smoothly"
14"He gestured vaguely"
15"She remembered Liam vividly –"
16"He was supposed to be"
17"he continued, his voice smooth"
18"she replied, her voice carefully"
19"He chuckled, a dry, humorless"
ratio0.493
2.25% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences71
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Rory hunched deeper into her"
2"Another delivery for Yu-Fei –"
3"She pushed open the heavy"
4"The bar was, predictably, quiet."
5"A couple nursed pints in"
6"A lone figure hunched over"
7"Silas, perched behind the bar"
8"He didn’t bother with a"
9"she mumbled, heading towards the"
10"She set the insulated bag"
11"She froze, her hand hovering"
12"it was familiar, achingly so,"
13"Liam, with the boyish grin"
14"His hair was cropped short"
15"He wore a tailored suit,"
16"His eyes, once warm and"
17"she breathed, the name feeling"
18"He pushed himself off the"
19"His tone was laced with"
ratio0.915
70.42% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"Before she could pull it"
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He looked past her, towards Silas, who was now pointedly wiping down the already immaculate bar."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"She met, refusing to back down"
1"he continued, his voice smooth as polished stone"
2"she replied, her voice carefully neutral"
3"He paused, his eyes searching her face"
4"Rory challenged, her voice trembling slightly"
5"he said finally, his voice losing some of its polished edge"
6"he said, the words sounding empty even to his own ears"
7"Silas observed, his voice low"
8"Rory took, the warmth spreading through her chest"
9"Silas said finally, his voice barely a whisper,"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"she mumbled (mumble)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
2"he continued (continue)"
3"Rory challenged (challenge)"
4"Rory pressed (press)"
5"she agreed quietly (agree)"
6"Rory murmured (murmur)"
7"Silas observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.289
leniency0.578
rawRatio0.615
effectiveRatio0.356
72.1182%