Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYABMADJTF0EN6SGG682B1F

Run Details

Duration:
41.8s
Cost:
$0.000313
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against Detective Harlow Quinn’s face, each drop a cold slap. She tasted grit and exhaust fumes. Twenty yards ahead, Herrera’s dark curls bobbed in the downpour, a fleeting punctuation mark against the neon smear of Soho. She’d lost him twice already. A former paramedic, conveniently unlicensed, patching up the city’s… clientele. That’s how the tip had described him. ‘Fixer for the shadows.’ A polite way of saying medic to monsters. Quinn lengthened her stride, the worn leather of her watchband cold against her wrist. Her soaked jacket clung to her like a second skin. He’d ditched the cab a block back, opting for the saturated alleyways. Smart. Trying to lose her in the warren. He wouldn’t. She rounded a corner, nearly colliding with a delivery driver wrestling a stack of cardboard boxes. “Sorry,” she barked, not bothering with politeness. The driver offered a mumbled acknowledgement, eyes fixed on securing his cargo. Herrera was nowhere in sight. Quinn cursed under her breath. She scanned the alley – a claustrophobic space choked with overflowing bins and ghostly shadows. Nothing. Dammit. She checked her radio. Static. Typical. The comms had been patchy all night. Then she saw it. A glint of green. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. A low-life haven, nestled between a shuttered music venue and a defunct laundrette. She’d paid it a visit before, fishing for information. Mostly found smoke and liars. But Herrera had headed straight for the distinctive green neon sign above the entrance. She pushed open the door, the smell of stale beer and something vaguely chemical washing over her. The bar was barely half-full. Muted conversation hummed beneath the low throb of a jazz record. Herrera wasn’t immediately visible. She moved towards the bar, her gaze sweeping across the faces in the dim light. A few regulars, nursing pints. Silas, the owner, a hulking man with a shaved head, polishing glasses with a practiced weariness. “Herrera,” she said, her voice cutting through the noise. “Seen him?” Silas didn’t even look up. “Don’t know anyone by that name, Detective.” His tone was flat, devoid of inflection. Quinn rested her hands on the sticky countertop, her sharp jaw tightening. “Don’t play coy, Silas. Dark curly hair, olive skin. Comes in here looking for trouble.” Silas finally raised his head, his dark eyes meeting hers with an unsettling calm. “I serve a lot of people, Detective. Trouble comes with the territory.” “He was heading this way. He didn’t just vanish into thin air.” She let the threat hang in the air. Silas shrugged. “Maybe he found another watering hole.” He returned to polishing glasses. Frustration gnawed at Quinn. She’d reached a dead end. She started to turn away, then noticed something. A section of bookshelves lining the back wall, seemingly crammed with antique maps and first editions. Except… one shelf looked subtly different. Too clean. Too organized. And Herrera had paused right in front of it a moment before disappearing from her sight on the street. She walked toward the bookshelf, ignoring Silas’s watchful gaze. She ran a hand along the spines, noting the titles – ancient geographies, forgotten folklore. Then, she found it. A slight give in one of the shelves. A hidden latch, cleverly disguised as a decorative carving. She pressed it. A section of the bookshelf swung inward, revealing a dark, narrow passageway. A musty odor wafted out, hinting at damp earth and something else… something indefinable and unsettling. Silas hadn’t said a word, but Quinn could feel his eyes boring into her back. “Where does that lead?” she asked, her voice low. Silas shrugged again. “That, Detective, is none of your business.” “It is when it leads to a man I’m trying to find.” “You’re walking into a world you don’t understand, Detective. A world best left alone.” Quinn ignored him. She glanced back at the rain-streaked window, then at the dark opening. She knew Silas wasn’t exaggerating. This wasn't just another dead end. This was something else entirely. But Herrera had gone through it. She had to follow. She took a deep breath, bracing herself. She hadn’t felt this uneasy since… since Morris. The case. A cold dread settled in her stomach, a familiar echo of that night three years ago. The passageway opened onto a steep flight of stairs, descending into darkness. She pulled out her service weapon, then hesitated. The air grew colder, heavier. The scent of damp earth intensified, mingled with an acrid, metallic smell. At the bottom of the stairs, a low hum vibrated through the floor, and a faint, flickering light illuminated a vast cavern. She stepped forward, her boots echoing on a stone floor. The air was thick with the smell of spices and decay. Before her lay the Veil Market. Stalls lined the cavern, crammed with strange and unsettling wares. Bottled eyes stared out from shelves. Dried herbs hung in pungent bundles. Glowing crystals pulsed with an eerie light. People moved through the market, their faces obscured by shadows and hoods. Most were human, but Quinn spotted a few… others. A woman with skin that shimmered like scales. A man with eyes that glowed faintly in the darkness. And there, weaving through the crowd, was Herrera. He was talking to a gaunt figure cloaked in black, handing over a small package. He hadn’t seen her yet. Quinn activated her radio, but still nothing. Dead as a stone. She was on her own. She moved forward, carefully navigating the throng. The whole place felt… wrong. A violation of everything she believed in. She’d chased criminals through some dark places in her career, but this was different. This wasn’t about petty theft or gang warfare. This felt… ancient. Corrupt. She could arrest Herrera now, push her way through the crowd. But something held her back. The faces in the market. The strange artifacts. The feeling that she was walking into a trap. She needed to understand what Herrera was doing here. What he was selling. She kept her weapon trained, her senses on high alert. She had a feeling that one wrong move could escalate things quickly. Very quickly. She was a detective, trained to follow leads, to bring criminals to justice. But as she plunged deeper into the heart of the Veil Market, she couldn't shake the growing sense that she was no longer in control. That she’d stepped into a world where the rules were different. A world where justice might be the least of her worries. The rain continued to fall on the streets above, oblivious to the darkness that lay beneath. And Detective Harlow Quinn, a woman forged in the fires of experience and loss, found herself on the precipice of something far more dangerous than she could have ever imagined.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.417
leniency0.833
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.27% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1128
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count2
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"quickly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.94% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1128
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"fleeting"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"glint"
count1
3
word"throb"
count1
4
word"hulking"
count1
5
word"could feel"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"echo"
count1
9
word"vibrated"
count1
10
word"echoing"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count1
12
word"shimmered"
count1
13
word"navigating"
count1
highlights
0"fleeting"
1"scanned"
2"glint"
3"throb"
4"hulking"
5"could feel"
6"stomach"
7"familiar"
8"echo"
9"vibrated"
10"echoing"
11"pulsed"
12"shimmered"
13"navigating"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences128
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences128
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences136
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1127
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1020
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.98
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Detective2
Harlow2
Quinn10
Herrera9
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Silas8
Frustration1
Morris1
Veil2
Market2
persons
0"Detective"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Herrera"
4"Raven"
5"Silas"
6"Frustration"
7"Morris"
places
0"Soho"
1"Market"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"the back wall, seemingly crammed with antiqu"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1127
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences136
matches
0"feeling that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean28.18
std16.03
cv0.569
sampleLengths
072
146
235
35
435
58
646
737
836
911
1019
1127
1226
1320
1413
1543
1619
1745
183
1928
2015
219
2210
2312
2414
2541
2633
2737
2832
2946
3039
3123
325
3316
3445
3533
3613
3724
3860
3946
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences128
matches(empty)
5.07% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs171
matches
0"wasn’t exaggerating"
1"was talking"
2"was walking"
3"was doing"
4"was selling"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences136
ratio0.015
matches
0"She scanned the alley – a claustrophobic space choked with overflowing bins and ghostly shadows."
1"She ran a hand along the spines, noting the titles – ancient geographies, forgotten folklore."
88.24% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount131
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount7
adverbRatio0.05343511450381679
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.015267175572519083
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences136
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences136
mean8.29
std5.43
cv0.656
sampleLengths
012
16
220
35
49
51
67
712
814
910
1012
111
127
132
1416
157
1612
175
185
1915
201
211
224
231
241
257
264
274
283
292
3013
319
325
3314
3417
355
3611
374
3815
395
4016
419
422
435
4414
4512
4615
4714
4812
4920
53.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.39705882352941174
totalSentences136
uniqueOpeners54
91.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences109
matches
0"Then she saw it."
1"Mostly found smoke and liars."
2"Then, she found it."
ratio0.028
80.55% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences109
matches
0"She tasted grit and exhaust"
1"She’d lost him twice already."
2"Her soaked jacket clung to"
3"He’d ditched the cab a"
4"She rounded a corner, nearly"
5"she barked, not bothering with"
6"She scanned the alley –"
7"She checked her radio."
8"She’d paid it a visit"
9"She pushed open the door,"
10"She moved towards the bar,"
11"she said, her voice cutting"
12"His tone was flat, devoid"
13"She let the threat hang"
14"He returned to polishing glasses"
15"She’d reached a dead end."
16"She started to turn away,"
17"She walked toward the bookshelf,"
18"She ran a hand along"
19"She pressed it."
ratio0.349
65.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences109
matches
0"Rain lashed against Detective Harlow"
1"She tasted grit and exhaust"
2"She’d lost him twice already."
3"A former paramedic, conveniently unlicensed,"
4"That’s how the tip had"
5"Quinn lengthened her stride, the"
6"Her soaked jacket clung to"
7"He’d ditched the cab a"
8"She rounded a corner, nearly"
9"she barked, not bothering with"
10"The driver offered a mumbled"
11"Herrera was nowhere in sight."
12"Quinn cursed under her breath."
13"She scanned the alley –"
14"She checked her radio."
15"The comms had been patchy"
16"A glint of green."
17"The Raven’s Nest."
18"A low-life haven, nestled between"
19"She’d paid it a visit"
ratio0.789
91.74% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences109
matches
0"Before her lay the Veil"
1"What he was selling."
ratio0.018
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she barked, not bothering with politeness"
1"she said, her voice cutting through the noise"
2"she asked, her voice low"
66.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she barked (bark)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.167
84.8914%