"Eva had mentioned whispers of odd lights in the park, and with everything piling up—the strange dreams, the scar on her wrist itching like it remembered something she didn't—Rory needed answers."
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"The flowers bloomed in defiant clusters—violets and daisies mingling with blooms she couldn't name, petals edged in silver that caught no light from anywhere."
"The whispers returned, closer this time, overlapping in a murmur that mimicked voices—soft, unintelligible, like children reciting a nursery rhyme from another room."
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"A shape darted at the corner of her vision—low and quick, vanishing behind a trunk before she could turn fully."
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"The isolation played tricks; she'd read about it in her uni psych elective, how the brain filled voids with phantoms."
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"Not vibration—movement."
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"The murmurs swelled, resolving into fragments—names?"
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"Laila, Carter, Malphora—her own aliases tangled in the chorus, spoken with voices that echoed from no direction."
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"There—a flicker again, taller this time, humanoid in silhouette, melting into the underbrush as the light hit it."
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"Eva's tales of the Fae had seemed like folklore, not this—whatever this was."
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"A hand brushed her ankle—cold fingers, bony and fleeting."
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"She glanced back—eyes now, dozens, glowing in the trunks, watching."
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"Then, a shape detached from the treeline ahead—tall, ethereal, blocking her way."
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"She landed softly on the other side, boots sinking into moss that cushioned her step, and straightened up in the clearing."
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"Eva had mentioned whispers of odd lights in the park, and with everything piling up—the strange dreams, the scar on her wrist itching like it remembered somethi…"
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"She circled it, fingers trailing the cool granite surfaces etched with symbols that looked Celtic but felt wrong, lines looping in patterns that tricked the eye…"
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"Shadows pooled at the edges of the oaks, deeper than they should be, swallowing the faint moonlight that pierced the leaves."
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"She resumed sketching, but her scar prickled, the old crescent on her wrist warming as if fresh."
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"The whispers returned, closer this time, overlapping in a murmur that mimicked voices—soft, unintelligible, like children reciting a nursery rhyme from another …"
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"The beam cut through the gloom, illuminating flowers that seemed to lean toward the light, petals unfurling as if waking."
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"The wood beneath her palm vibrated, a low hum that travelled up her arm."
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"Laila, Carter, Malphora—her own aliases tangled in the chorus, spoken with voices that echoed from no direction."
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"The Grove breathed around her, flowers nodding as if in agreement, their scents turning cloying, like honey laced with decay."
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"The air thickened, pressing on her chest, carrying a chill that seeped through her jacket."
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"They circled, never fully emerging, their movements jerky, as if pulled by invisible strings."
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"She ran harder, the park's normal trees rushing to meet her, but the eyes lingered in her periphery, unblinking."