Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAC4M80P979GSTEX47W3NK

Run Details

Duration:
38.4s
Cost:
$0.000290
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The chipped porcelain of the mug warmed Rory’s hands. Earl Grey, lukewarm now. She’d brewed it back above Silas’ bar, hoping the steam would chase away the chill settling into her bones. Didn’t work. Richmond Park, even in late May, held a dampness that seeped through layers. She adjusted the strap of her messenger bag, the weight of textbooks a familiar discomfort. Finals were looming. Law felt like a distant, ill-fitting costume, but Eva insisted. *Something solid, Rory. A fallback.* A fallback from what, precisely? From chasing whispers and strange gifts? The Fae Grove. Isolde’s Grove, some called it. Locals mostly steered clear, mumbling about tricksy folk and lost time. Rory hadn’t believed the stories, not until the pendant. The Heartstone. Cool against her skin under her sweater, it hadn’t warmed since she’d entered the park. Usually, a subtle thrum against her chest, especially when she neared the standing stones. Tonight, nothing. The air tasted different within the grove itself. Thick, floral, cloying. Wildflowers, a riot of color, bloomed with impossible vibrancy even under the bruised twilight. Ancient oak standing stones, gnarled and moss-covered, formed a rough circle around the clearing, their shadows stretching long and distorted. Rory walked towards the center, gravel crunching beneath her boots. “Hello?” Her voice sounded too loud, brittle against the oppressive quiet. Silence answered. Except… a rustle in the undergrowth. Not the scurrying of a rabbit. Too deliberate. She paused, scanning the perimeter. Just trees. Just shadows. Damn London nerves, she told herself. Too many late nights, too much caffeine. She’d come because of the readings. A concentration of… *something* had been pulling at the Heartstone all week. A subtle tug, almost imperceptible, but enough to make the gem’s usual warmth stutter. And the dreams. Fragmented images of tangled roots and crimson light. Rory pulled out her notebook, flipping to a page covered in frantic scribbles. Coordinates, sketches of the stone circle, notes from old texts. She was looking for patterns, anything to explain the Hel portal she suspected was opening nearby. Another rustle, closer this time. From beyond the stone to her left. “Probably a deer,” she muttered, but her hand instinctively tightened around the mug. She took a sip, the tea doing little to settle her jumpy nerves. She started tracing a line on her map, checking the alignment of the stones. The pendant remained stubbornly cold. Something was wrong. Terribly wrong. It wasn’t just the lack of warmth, it was… a feeling. Like being watched. Not with curiosity, but with hungry attention. A twig snapped. Clear as a pistol shot. Rory whipped around. Nothing. “Right,” she said, her voice shaking slightly. “Time to go.” She turned to leave, but a shape flickered at the edge of her vision. Between two of the standing stones. Tall, slender, indistinct. It vanished before she could properly focus. “What the…” She took a step back, her heart hammering against her ribs. The air grew colder, the floral scent turning sickly sweet. The wildflowers seemed to pulse with a faint, phosphorescent glow. “Is someone there?” she asked, her voice barely a whisper. Silence. The rustling had stopped. Everything was still, too still. Rory reached for her phone, fumbling with it in her trembling hands. No signal. Of course. The Grove always scrambled signals. She cursed under her breath. She risked another glance toward the stones. The shape was gone, but she could feel its presence, a weight in the air. A pressure against her chest. A low hum began to vibrate through the ground, resonating in her bones. The Heartstone remained icy. It should have been screaming, pulsing with warning. Its silence was the most terrifying thing of all. “This isn’t right,” she breathed. The shadows between the trees deepened, swirling and coalescing into amorphous forms. They didn’t seem to obey the rules of light and shadow, twisting and writhing like living things. Another sound. A soft, melodic chime, like distant bells. It seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once. “Who’s there?” Rory demanded, her voice gaining a shaky edge. The chime grew louder, closer. And with it, a new sound. A whisper. Just on the edge of hearing. Like leaves skittering across pavement. But it wasn't the wind. “Lost, little one?” The voice wasn’t male or female, old or young. It was simply… *other*. It echoed inside her skull, bypassing her ears entirely. Rory spun around, searching for the source. But there was nothing there. Only the trees, the stones, the glowing wildflowers. And the shadows, which were growing bolder, reaching out like grasping claws. “Show yourself!” “Patience.” The voice was closer now, right behind her. She could feel a cold breath on the back of her neck. Rory didn’t dare turn. She squeezed her eyes shut, her fists clenched so tight her knuckles ached. “What do you want?” “What anyone wants,” the voice purred. “A little company. A little… warmth.” She felt a touch on her shoulder. Not a hand, not exactly. More like… a pressure. Cold as ice. “The Heartstone is quiet,” the voice observed. “It doesn't recognize…home.” Rory forced her eyes open, slowly turning her head. Still nothing directly in front of her. But the shadows… they were moving differently. Almost… deliberately. Forming shapes. Mimicking faces. “You shouldn’t be here,” she managed to stammer. “Oh, but I think you are the one who shouldn't be.” The voice chuckled, a brittle, rasping sound. "You're trespassing.” The chime resonated again, louder than before. And this time, Rory didn't need to look to know that she wasn't alone.
created_at"2026-02-20T20:03:04.466Z" 2/20/2026, 8:03:04 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her voice sounded too [too]"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.579
leniency1
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.091
78.43% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount927
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
3"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount927
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"porcelain"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"looming"
count1
5
word"oppressive"
count1
6
word"silence"
count3
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count3
9
word"fragmented"
count1
10
word"tracing"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"pulse"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count2
14
word"could feel"
count2
15
word"echoed"
count1
16
word"resonated"
count1
highlights
0"porcelain"
1"chill"
2"weight"
3"familiar"
4"looming"
5"oppressive"
6"silence"
7"scanning"
8"warmth"
9"fragmented"
10"tracing"
11"flickered"
12"pulse"
13"whisper"
14"could feel"
15"echoed"
16"resonated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"fists clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences128
matches(empty)
87.05% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences128
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"seem to"
3"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences136
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen21
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords7
totalWords925
ratio0.008
matches
0"Something solid, Rory. A fallback."
1"something"
2"other"
93.75% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Damn London nerves, she told herself."
79.41% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount850
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.41
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory12
Grey1
Didn1
Park1
May1
Eva1
Fae1
Grove3
Heartstone3
Silence2
London1
Hel1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Grey"
2"May"
3"Eva"
4"Silence"
places
0"Park"
1"Fae"
2"Grove"
3"London"
globalScore0.794
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a distant, ill-fitting costum"
91.89% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.081
wordCount925
matches
0"Not with curiosity, but with hungry attention"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences136
matches
0"know that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean22.56
std15.51
cv0.687
sampleLengths
047
144
261
355
411
525
656
739
812
926
1045
118
124
1310
1430
152
1631
1710
1810
1926
2027
2134
225
2329
2419
2510
2629
273
2822
2932
302
3121
3217
334
3412
3519
3610
3729
388
3920
4021
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences128
matches
0"was gone"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs147
matches
0"were looming"
1"was looking was opening"
2"were growing"
3"were moving"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences136
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount44
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount0
adverbRatio0
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences136
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences136
mean6.8
std4.45
cv0.654
sampleLengths
09
14
219
32
413
515
63
710
83
97
106
113
125
1311
149
152
1615
1714
182
198
203
2114
2220
2310
2411
252
261
275
286
292
305
312
322
336
347
356
363
379
3814
393
408
4113
4210
4316
445
457
4613
4713
4814
495
74.02% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.47058823529411764
totalSentences136
uniqueOpeners64
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences104
matches
0"Usually, a subtle thrum against"
1"Too many late nights, too"
2"Just on the edge of"
3"Only the trees, the stones,"
ratio0.038
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences104
matches
0"She’d brewed it back above"
1"She adjusted the strap of"
2"Her voice sounded too loud,"
3"She paused, scanning the perimeter."
4"She’d come because of the"
5"She was looking for patterns,"
6"she muttered, but her hand"
7"She took a sip, the"
8"She started tracing a line"
9"It wasn’t just the lack"
10"she said, her voice shaking"
11"She turned to leave, but"
12"It vanished before she could"
13"She took a step back,"
14"she asked, her voice barely"
15"She cursed under her breath."
16"She risked another glance toward"
17"It should have been screaming,"
18"Its silence was the most"
19"They didn’t seem to obey"
ratio0.269
99.42% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences104
matches
0"The chipped porcelain of the"
1"Earl Grey, lukewarm now."
2"She’d brewed it back above"
3"Richmond Park, even in late"
4"She adjusted the strap of"
5"Finals were looming."
6"Law felt like a distant,"
7"*Something solid, Rory."
8"A fallback.* A fallback from"
9"The Fae Grove."
10"Isolde’s Grove, some called it."
11"Locals mostly steered clear, mumbling"
12"Rory hadn’t believed the stories,"
13"The air tasted different within"
14"Wildflowers, a riot of color,"
15"Rory walked towards the center,"
16"Her voice sounded too loud,"
17"a rustle in the undergrowth."
18"She paused, scanning the perimeter."
19"She’d come because of the"
ratio0.721
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She started tracing a line on her map, checking the alignment of the stones."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she said, her voice shaking slightly"
1"she asked, her voice barely a whisper"
2"Rory demanded, her voice gaining a shaky edge"
3"The voice chuckled, a brittle, rasping sound"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
2"Rory demanded (demand)"
3"the voice observed (observe)"
4"The voice chuckled (chuckle)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.368
leniency0.737
rawRatio0.714
effectiveRatio0.526
80.1325%