Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYACH02GW9V75GENP5B6817

Run Details

Duration:
43.2s
Cost:
$0.001546
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter parked her battered scooter at the edge of Richmond Park, the engine's sputter dying into the night's thick silence. She killed the headlights, plunged the deer path into blackness pierced only by moonlight slicing through the canopy. Her fingers traced the small crescent scar on her left wrist, a habit when nerves coiled tight. The Heartstone Pendant hung heavy against her chest, its deep crimson gem pulsing warmth like a second heartbeat. It had started that afternoon during her delivery shift—faint at first, then insistent, tugging her gaze eastward. Online whispers from obscure forums pointed here: the Grove, a forgotten clearing where standing oaks marked something ancient. She needed answers. The pendant's unknown giver had vanished after slipping it into her palm outside Silas' bar, murmuring only, "It'll call when time comes." This felt like the call. She slung her backpack over one shoulder and slipped through the gate, boots crunching gravel that turned soft underfoot as oaks thickened. No streetlamp glow reached this far; the park swallowed light whole. Wind stirred leaves overhead, but no breeze touched her skin. She checked her phone—10:47 PM. Signal bars flickered to zero. Fine. She pressed on, the pendant's glow seeping through her jacket zipper, casting bloody flickers on tree bark. The standing stones emerged first. Massive oaks, twisted into rough pillars, ringed a clearing no bigger than her flat. Wildflowers carpeted the grass—violets and foxgloves blooming defiant against October chill. She stepped over the boundary, air thickening like soup. The stones loomed taller inside, branches weaving a cage overhead. Moonlight pooled center-stage, turning petals silver. Beautiful, almost. But her stomach twisted. No birdsong, no rustle of squirrels. Just her breath, ragged in the stillness. She knelt amid the flowers, pulled out the pendant. It throbbed hotter now, chain slick with her sweat. "Come on," she whispered to it, voice swallowed. "What now?" No answer. She scanned the clearing. Edges blurred where grass met stone—shadows clung wrong, pooling deeper than night allowed. She blinked hard. Imagination. Long shift, no sleep. She stood, circled the perimeter. Petals crushed under her boots released scents too sweet, cloying like overripe fruit. A snap echoed from the treeline. Twig underfoot? But nothing moved. She froze, ears straining. Wind again? No leaves stirred. The pendant warmed further, a insistent prod against her ribs. She gripped it, gem smooth as river stone. Another sound—low scrape, like nails on wood. From behind the nearest oak pillar. She whipped around. Empty grass. Flowers nodded undisturbed. Pulse hammering, she edged closer to the stone. Bark swirled in patterns, faces almost, eyes half-formed in knots. She touched one. Rough, alive under her palm, vibrating faint. Pulled back. Silence stretched, broken only by her shallow breaths. Time check—phone dead now, screen black. How long since arrival? Minutes? Her watch read 10:50. Impossible. She shook her wrist. Still 10:50. The air grew heavy, pressing lungs. Flowers gleamed brighter, petals unfurling as if dawn broke inside the ring. She paced to the opposite stone, boots sinking into soil that clung like wet clay. A whisper then—not wind, shaped almost. "Rooory..." Her name, drawn out, from nowhere. She spun. Clearing empty. Throat dry, she called, "Who's there?" Voice cracked, feeble. No reply. Just the pendant, burning now, chain hot enough to blister. Shadows lengthened at the clearing's rim. Not cast by moon—self-made, coiling from stone bases like smoke. She backed center, eyes darting. Peripheral flicker: shape darted left, tall and thin, gone when she turned. Heart slammed ribs. "Sod off," she muttered, fists clenched. Another scrape, closer, circling. Clockwise. She tracked it—rustle in flowers ten feet off, petals parting smooth, no footprints. The shape ghosted right now, silhouette humanoid but elongated, joints bending wrong. She bolted for the stones' gap, exit path. Soil sucked boots, slowed her. Halfway, cold fingers brushed her ankle—gone in blink. She stumbled, caught herself on a pillar. Bark yielded soft under grip, like flesh. Pulled free, hand sticky with sap? No, darker, tacky. She wiped palm on jeans. Whisper circled again, "Rory... stay..." Multiple voices now, layered, child's treble under gravel growl. From all stones at once. Pendant scorched skin. She yanked chain free, held it aloft. Crimson glow pulsed wild, illuminated faces in bark—mouths gaping, eyes milky white tracking her. She ran. Branches snagged hair, thorns no thorns slicing cheek. Flowers whipped legs, blooming blood-red in her wake. Exit gap yawned—five steps. Four. Shape lunged from shadow, arm too long, fingers splayed. Missed by inches. She dove through. Park path greeted boots, gravel solid. Gasping, she glanced back. Stones stood sentinel, clearing dark as pitch. No glow, no flowers visible. Pendant cooled instant, glow dimmed to ember. Phone buzzed—10:52 PM, three missed texts from Eva: "Where r u?" "Rory??" "Answer me!!" She jogged toward scooter, branches clawing normal now. But certainty gnawed: eyes watched from oaks lining path. Not hers alone anymore. Whispers trailed, faint under wind. "Come back... soon..." No. She mounted scooter, thumbed ignition. Engine roared life. Twisted throttle hard, tires spat gravel. Park gate rushed past. Streetlights bloomed welcome. But rearview mirror caught it—shape at treeline, motionless, waving slow. She gunned harder, pendant swaying cold against chest. Home. Silas' bar. Safety. But watch ticked 11:05 now. Thirteen minutes gone inside. What waited if she stayed longer next time? The whispers clung, in her head now. "Rory... the door opens..." She shook it off, London lights swallowing her. But the pendant twitched once, warm again. No. Not done. She pulled over two blocks in, breaths heaving. Hand dove to pendant. Still. But clearing's pull lingered, a hook in gut. Why there? Giver's words echoed: "It'll call when time comes." Fae-touched, forums said. Time slips. Portals. Hel? No, deeper. She needed more—Eva's occult books, Silas' drunk tales. Headlights swept past, horn blared. She waved apology, remounted. Throttle twisted. But certainty grew: alone no more. Passenger rode inside, waiting. Back at flat above bar, door slammed shut. Bolts thrown triple. She stripped jacket, pendant clattered table. Glow faint, but stones' faces burned retinas. Sink water scalded hands clean. Mirror showed cheek scratch, thin red line weeping clear. Not thorn. Nail. Bed called, but sleep fled. Clock hit 1 AM. Outside, pub noise filtered—laughter, glasses clink. Normal. She paced, phone lit: Eva's texts piled. "In bed, deliveries killed me," she typed. Lie. Truth too mad. Pendant hummed soft on table. She snatched it. Warm again. Pulled jacket on. Scooter keys jangled. Back to Grove? No. Wait. Dawn crept, gray through window. No sleep. Flowers' scent clung nostrils, sweet rot. Watch gained time—1:15 AM already? Inside ring, minutes stretched. Out here, devoured. She brewed tea, hands shook pouring. Mug warmed palms. Sipped black. Pendant pulsed sync with sips. "Enough," she growled. Grabbed keys. Park gate creaked open under tires. Dawn barely pinked sky, but Grove called stronger. Stones waited. Shapes hungered. She parked same spot, dismounted quiet. Path crunched louder, expectant. Boundary neared. Pendant blazed. Step over. Flowers brighter, full bloom. Air thick honey. Time watch: 5:47 AM. Stones' faces grinned wider. Whispers welcomed. "Rory... home..." She circled slow, boots silent now on petals. No escape this loop. Shapes edged vision, patient. Pendant led deeper, glow path through grass. Center mound rose, unnoticed before. Dirt fresh turned, hand-sized hole yawned. Inside, crimson glint—twin gem? Fingers reached. Cold gripped wrist. Scar burned. Pulled down. Darkness swallowed. Flowers closed overhead. Whispers laughed. Time twisted. Outside, scooter rusted slow. Park woke empty. No Rory. But pendant on mound pulsed on, waiting next. No. She fought. Wrist twisted free. Hole spat her to grass. Shapes closed circle. Ran blind. Stones parted grudging. Path out. Scooter gone. Time noon. Hours lost. Walked home, shapes trailed shadow. Flat empty. Eva's note: "Gone to Cardiff, call me." Pendant cold dead. Night fell. Pulse returned. She geared up. Grove demanded. Cycle gripped. No end. Restraint cracked slow. Eyes everywhere. Alone? Never. Whispers shaped words clear now. "Join us, Rory. Door yours." Pendant key. Grove lock. She entered willing this time. Tension peaked silent. Flowers sang welcome. Stones bowed. Shape embraced. Cold limbs wrapped. Pendant merged chest. Home. But fought still. No. Build held. Horror breathed. She stood center. Waited. Movement full. Shadows solid. Faces stepped free. Oak skin, flower eyes. "Malphora," they chorused. Name not hers. Yet fit. Hand extended scar. Crescent glowed match pendant. Truth dawned slow. Giver? Self. Cycle looped eternal. Time bent. Alone no more. Family found. Pendant pulsed final. Darkness full.
created_at"2026-02-20T20:03:17.133Z" 2/20/2026, 8:03:17 PM
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native_tokens_reasoning660
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num_input_audio_prompt(null)
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Whisper circled again [again]"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.765
leniency1
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.077
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1430
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1430
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"loomed"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"throbbed"
count1
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count2
10
word"pulse"
count2
11
word"whisper"
count2
12
word"flicker"
count1
13
word"pulsed"
count4
14
word"sentinel"
count1
15
word"glint"
count1
16
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"traced"
2"warmth"
3"flickered"
4"chill"
5"loomed"
6"stomach"
7"throbbed"
8"scanned"
9"echoed"
10"pulse"
11"whisper"
12"flicker"
13"pulsed"
14"sentinel"
15"glint"
16"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"fists clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences274
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences274
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences281
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1406
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions67
wordCount1324
uniqueNames25
maxNameDensity0.83
worstName"Pendant"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Pendant"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Richmond1
Park5
Heartstone1
Pendant11
Grove5
October1
Voice1
Soil1
Multiple1
Eva4
London1
Fae-touched1
Headlights1
Sink1
Lie1
Grabbed1
Rory1
Name1
Flowers6
Pulled4
Time6
Stones4
Whispers4
Shapes3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Pendant"
2"Grove"
3"October"
4"Voice"
5"Multiple"
6"Eva"
7"Headlights"
8"Grabbed"
9"Rory"
10"Name"
11"Flowers"
12"Pulled"
13"Stones"
14"Whispers"
15"Shapes"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1406
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences281
matches
0"started that afternoon"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs68
mean20.68
std26.19
cv1.266
sampleLengths
0139
171
274
373
459
560
671
772
868
962
1043
1129
1232
1329
1411
1515
163
1748
1821
1941
2034
2121
2225
2321
2418
2514
262
2715
284
2916
3022
317
322
335
344
359
368
3714
387
396
405
419
423
434
445
454
467
4710
484
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences274
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs319
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount19
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences19
totalSentences281
ratio0.068
matches
0"It had started that afternoon during her delivery shift—faint at first, then insistent, tugging her gaze eastward."
1"No streetlamp glow reached this far; the park swallowed light whole."
2"She checked her phone—10:47 PM."
3"Wildflowers carpeted the grass—violets and foxgloves blooming defiant against October chill."
4"Edges blurred where grass met stone—shadows clung wrong, pooling deeper than night allowed."
5"Another sound—low scrape, like nails on wood."
6"Time check—phone dead now, screen black."
7"A whisper then—not wind, shaped almost."
8"Not cast by moon—self-made, coiling from stone bases like smoke."
9"She tracked it—rustle in flowers ten feet off, petals parting smooth, no footprints."
10"Halfway, cold fingers brushed her ankle—gone in blink."
11"Crimson glow pulsed wild, illuminated faces in bark—mouths gaping, eyes milky white tracking her."
12"Exit gap yawned—five steps."
13"Phone buzzed—10:52 PM, three missed texts from Eva: \"Where r u?\" \"Rory??\" \"Answer me!!\""
14"But rearview mirror caught it—shape at treeline, motionless, waving slow."
15"She needed more—Eva's occult books, Silas' drunk tales."
16"Outside, pub noise filtered—laughter, glasses clink."
17"Watch gained time—1:15 AM already?"
18"Inside, crimson glint—twin gem?"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount145
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount2
adverbRatio0.013793103448275862
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.006896551724137931
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences281
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences281
mean5
std4.03
cv0.805
sampleLengths
021
118
217
318
417
518
63
727
822
911
1010
115
125
131
1417
155
1614
1711
189
1910
206
212
224
236
247
259
269
278
284
294
3013
313
321
334
345
3513
366
372
383
394
402
413
4210
438
447
456
463
472
483
498
83.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.501779359430605
totalSentences281
uniqueOpeners141
36.04% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences185
matches
0"Just her breath, ragged in"
1"Just the pendant, burning now,"
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences185
matches
0"She killed the headlights, plunged"
1"Her fingers traced the small"
2"It had started that afternoon"
3"She needed answers."
4"She slung her backpack over"
5"She checked her phone—10:47 PM."
6"She pressed on, the pendant's"
7"She stepped over the boundary,"
8"She knelt amid the flowers,"
9"It throbbed hotter now, chain"
10"she whispered to it, voice"
11"She scanned the clearing."
12"She blinked hard."
13"She stood, circled the perimeter."
14"She froze, ears straining."
15"She gripped it, gem smooth"
16"She whipped around."
17"She touched one."
18"Her watch read 10:50."
19"She shook her wrist."
ratio0.249
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount126
totalSentences185
matches
0"Aurora Carter parked her battered"
1"She killed the headlights, plunged"
2"Her fingers traced the small"
3"The Heartstone Pendant hung heavy"
4"It had started that afternoon"
5"She needed answers."
6"The pendant's unknown giver had"
7"She slung her backpack over"
8"She checked her phone—10:47 PM."
9"She pressed on, the pendant's"
10"The standing stones emerged first."
11"Wildflowers carpeted the grass—violets and"
12"She stepped over the boundary,"
13"The stones loomed taller inside,"
14"Moonlight pooled center-stage, turning petals"
15"She knelt amid the flowers,"
16"It throbbed hotter now, chain"
17"she whispered to it, voice"
18"She scanned the clearing."
19"Edges blurred where grass met"
ratio0.681
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences185
matches(empty)
ratio0
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She pressed on, the pendant's glow seeping through her jacket zipper, casting bloody flickers on tree bark."
1"Flowers gleamed brighter, petals unfurling as if dawn broke inside the ring."
48.08% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she whispered, voice swallowed"
1"she muttered, fists clenched"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
2"she growled (growl)"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.235
leniency0.471
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.353
81.8357%