Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYACKHPJAF8EM7NHFAWNF7K

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1m 4s
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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The chipped porcelain felt cool against my lips. Earl Grey, strong, two sugars. A pathetic attempt at calm. I’d been cataloging Eva’s scrolls—a mess of arcane symbols and half-translated texts—when the insistent rapping started. Three sharp knocks, precise. Not the haphazard pounding of a drunk, nor the hesitant tap of a neighbour asking for sugar. I knew that rhythm. Another three raps, louder this time. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, lifted his head from a sunbeam and emitted a low growl, his tail twitching. He wasn't a fan of unexpected guests, and very few people earned his disdain. “Hold your horses,” I muttered, placing the mug on the worn wooden desk. The flat smelled of dust, old paper, and Ptolemy’s particular brand of feline indifference. I smoothed down my jeans, a futile gesture, and took a bracing breath. Whatever he wanted, I wasn’t going to let him see it rattled me. I opened the door. Lucien Moreau filled the doorway, looking as meticulously constructed as ever. Charcoal suit, perfectly tailored. Silver tie pin. Not a hair out of place. He hadn't changed. Still radiated an expensive, dangerous air. The disparity between his polished exterior and the gritty Brick Lane backdrop was jarring, a constant reminder of the world he moved in, and the one I was trying to build for myself. “Rory,” he said, his voice a low, carefully modulated rumble. One eye, the amber one, flicked over me, assessing. The other, black as pitch, lingered a fraction too long. “Lucien.” The word tasted like ash in my mouth. He didn’t ask to come in. He simply stepped across the threshold, ignoring Ptolemy’s hiss and the way the cat arched his back, fur bristling. The scent of his cologne—sandalwood and something darker, something that always reminded me of storm clouds—filled the small space. “Charming, as always,” he commented, glancing around the cluttered flat with an expression I couldn’t quite decipher. Disapproval? Amusement? Probably both. “What do you want?” He finally met my gaze, the contrast between his eyes unsettling. “Direct, as always. I admire that.” “Don't patronize me.” “Not my intention.” He moved further into the room, his movements fluid and controlled, like a predator assessing its territory. He stopped by the desk, casually running a finger along the spine of a particularly ancient-looking tome. “Though I’m afraid, these days, bluntness is a rare commodity. Especially in my line of work.” I folded my arms, trying to project an indifference I didn't feel. “What ‘line of work’ brought you to my door?” “A client. A delicate matter. Requires a particular… skill set.” “And you thought of me?” There was a cynical edge to my voice. It had been nearly a year since I'd cut ties with his world, with *him*. He tilted his head, a small, almost sad smile playing on his lips. “You have a knack for finding things, Rory. Things people would rather keep hidden. Plus, you owe me a favour.” “I don’t recall owing you anything.” The claim felt flimsy even as I said it. There were debts between us, a tangled web of favours given and returned, loyalty tested and betrayed. “The Glyndŵr manuscript. The translation. You wouldn’t have secured that contract with the Bodleian if I hadn’t… smoothed things over.” I cursed under my breath. He had a long memory, and a talent for holding a grudge. “That was months ago. And you made it sound like a professional courtesy.” “Everything is transactional, Rory. Let’s not pretend otherwise.” He turned to face me fully, his gaze intense. “A young woman has disappeared. A scholar. Lavinia Bellweather. Specialises in Avarian folklore. Her father is… a man of influence.” “Avarian folklore? That’s your bailiwick, not mine.” I’d deliberately distanced myself from anything involving Avaros, the demon realm Lucien hailed from. Too many ghosts lingered there. “It *becomes* your bailiwick when the clues point to a ritual circle located beneath the Seven Dials.” My stomach tightened. The Seven Dials was a notorious nexus of magical activity, a place I actively avoided. “And Bellweather was dabbling in things she shouldn’t?” “Precisely. Her research indicates she was attempting to summon something. Something… unwelcome.” “So, you want me to find her before she opens a portal to hell?” I raised an eyebrow. “A rather reductive summary, but essentially, yes.” He paused, letting the weight of his words settle. “The police are involved, of course. But Lavinia’s father isn’t keen on involving too many official channels. He prefers… discretion.” “Discretion that comes with a hefty price tag, I presume?” “Naturally. A generous retainer, plus expenses. And the erasure of a certain debt.” I blinked, surprised. "What debt?" “The one relating to your ex-boyfriend. Evan. The ‘disagreement’ over the antique shop. Remember? A little… persuasion was required to ensure he didn’t press charges.” My blood ran cold. Lucien had interfered. He’d protected me, but at what cost? And what did he expect in return? More than just finding a missing scholar, I suspected. “You shouldn't have done that,” I whispered, my voice barely audible. “Sentimentality is a luxury I can’t afford, Rory. Consider it an investment. A down payment on your services.” He took a step closer, invading my personal space. “You’re the best at what you do. You see patterns others miss. You have a… talent for navigating the shadows.” I clenched my fists, fighting the familiar pull of his presence. He knew exactly what buttons to push. “And what happens if I say no?” “You’ll be letting a dangerously naive woman fall into the hands of something… unpleasant. And you'll forfeit the chance to clear your slate. A regrettable outcome for everyone involved.” Ptolemy chose that moment to leap onto Lucien’s shoulder, digging his claws lightly into the fabric of his coat. Lucien didn’t flinch. He simply allowed the cat to perch there, his expression unreadable. “He seems to approve of my presence,” he observed dryly. “He’s just assessing threat levels,” I snapped. "And mine is currently registering off the charts." “Good. As it should.” He reached into his coat and produced a slim, silver envelope. “Details are inside. The address of Lavinia’s last known residence, a list of her contacts, and a photograph. I expect a progress report within forty-eight hours.” He handed me the envelope. Our fingers brushed, and a jolt of electricity shot up my arm. Old habits died hard. “And Rory?” He paused at the door, his hand resting on the handle. “Try not to get yourself killed. It's bad for business.” He turned and left, leaving the scent of sandalwood and storm clouds lingering in the air, and Ptolemy glaring after him as if plotting revenge. I stared at the closed door, taking a shaky breath. Forty-eight hours. Lavinia Bellweather. Avaros. And Lucien Moreau, back in my life, stirring up trouble like a particularly charming devil. I ripped open the envelope. The photograph stared back at me—a woman with bright, inquisitive eyes and a nervous smile. Underneath the photograph was a single line of handwritten text. *She should have known better than to look.*
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
4.88% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"The word tasted like [like]"
1"He moved further [further]"
2"I’d deliberately [deliberately]"
3"he observed dryly [dryly]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.39
leniency0.78
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.195
74.68% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1185
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"deliberately"
count1
4
adverb"precisely"
count1
5
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"perfectly"
2"carefully"
3"deliberately"
4"precisely"
5"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1185
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"porcelain"
count1
1
word"pounding"
count1
2
word"constructed"
count1
3
word"reminder"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"predator"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"eyebrow"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"ensure"
count1
10
word"navigating"
count1
11
word"familiar"
count1
12
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"porcelain"
1"pounding"
2"constructed"
3"reminder"
4"flicked"
5"predator"
6"stomach"
7"eyebrow"
8"weight"
9"ensure"
10"navigating"
11"familiar"
12"unreadable"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
1
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
2
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
1"clenched my fists"
2"the weight of his words"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences81
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords10
totalWords1176
ratio0.009
matches
0"him"
1"becomes"
2"She should have known better than to look."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount749
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.8
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Grey1
Eva2
Ptolemy5
Moreau2
Brick1
Lane1
One1
Disapproval1
Avaros2
Lucien6
Seven1
Dials1
Bellweather1
persons
0"Grey"
1"Eva"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Moreau"
4"One"
5"Lucien"
6"Bellweather"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
11.11% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"tasted like ash in my mouth"
1"quite decipher"
2"as if plotting revenge"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1176
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences105
matches
0"knew that rhythm"
1"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean25.02
std14.85
cv0.594
sampleLengths
055
14
237
353
44
566
629
79
844
921
104
1117
123
1353
1421
1510
1628
1733
1832
1920
2030
2137
2226
2317
2426
2512
2618
2736
2810
2913
305
3125
3230
3311
3447
3525
3629
3733
3810
3915
4041
4121
4223
4335
4420
4530
468
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs140
matches
0"was jarring, was trying"
61.22% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences105
ratio0.029
matches
0"I’d been cataloging Eva’s scrolls—a mess of arcane symbols and half-translated texts—when the insistent rapping started."
1"The scent of his cologne—sandalwood and something darker, something that always reminded me of storm clouds—filled the small space."
2"The photograph stared back at me—a woman with bright, inquisitive eyes and a nervous smile."
92.55% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount757
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.04491413474240423
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.023778071334214
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean11.2
std6.82
cv0.608
sampleLengths
08
15
25
316
44
517
64
76
817
914
1013
1114
1213
1313
144
1511
164
173
186
193
206
2133
2210
239
2410
259
266
2719
2819
2917
301
311
322
334
3411
356
363
3720
3817
3916
4012
419
4210
4313
4415
4513
4620
4715
4817
4920
76.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.47619047619047616
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners50
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences74
matches
0"Still radiated an expensive, dangerous"
1"Too many ghosts lingered there."
2"More than just finding a"
ratio0.041
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences74
matches
0"I’d been cataloging Eva’s scrolls—a"
1"I knew that rhythm."
2"He wasn't a fan of"
3"I muttered, placing the mug"
4"I smoothed down my jeans,"
5"I opened the door."
6"He hadn't changed."
7"he said, his voice a"
8"He didn’t ask to come"
9"He simply stepped across the"
10"he commented, glancing around the"
11"He finally met my gaze,"
12"He moved further into the"
13"He stopped by the desk,"
14"I folded my arms, trying"
15"It had been nearly a"
16"He tilted his head, a"
17"I cursed under my breath."
18"He had a long memory,"
19"He turned to face me"
ratio0.554
54.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences74
matches
0"The chipped porcelain felt cool"
1"Earl Grey, strong, two sugars."
2"A pathetic attempt at calm."
3"I’d been cataloging Eva’s scrolls—a"
4"I knew that rhythm."
5"Another three raps, louder this"
6"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, lifted his"
7"He wasn't a fan of"
8"I muttered, placing the mug"
9"The flat smelled of dust,"
10"I smoothed down my jeans,"
11"Whatever he wanted, I wasn’t"
12"I opened the door."
13"Lucien Moreau filled the doorway,"
14"Charcoal suit, perfectly tailored."
15"He hadn't changed."
16"The disparity between his polished"
17"he said, his voice a"
18"The other, black as pitch,"
19"The word tasted like ash"
ratio0.811
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
93.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He turned and left, leaving the scent of sandalwood and storm clouds lingering in the air, and Ptolemy glaring after him as if plotting revenge."
1"And Lucien Moreau, back in my life, stirring up trouble like a particularly charming devil."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he said, his voice a low, carefully modulated rumble"
1"He turned, his gaze intense"
2"I whispered, my voice barely audible"
3"He paused, his hand resting on the handle"
28.05% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"I muttered (mutter)"
1"he commented (comment)"
2"I whispered (whisper)"
3"he observed dryly (observe)"
4"I snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.146
leniency0.293
rawRatio0.833
effectiveRatio0.244
72.5226%