Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYACQCFM18YE286ST3S13A3

Run Details

Duration:
2m 52s
Cost:
$0.014545
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain came down in cold, stinging sheets, plastering Harlow’s closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair to the sharp angle of her jaw. She leaned against a rain-slicked brick wall in Soho, her left wrist throbbing where her worn leather watch dug into the skin—a gift from DS Morris, three Christmases before he vanished into the unexplained dark of a case she still couldn’t close. It was 2:17 AM, according to the watch’s faded dial, and she’d been staking out the courier for four hours, ever since he’d left a clique safe house with a frayed wool coat bulging at the pocket. She’d seen the glint of a glass vial through the fabric earlier, a hint of the banned alchemical substances she’d linked to the clique’s trafficking ring—the same ring she suspected had gotten Morris killed. The courier’s head snapped up, his eyes flicking to her hiding spot. Harlow tensed, her military precision kicking in—shoulders back, weight shifted to her balls of her feet, hand hovering near the baton at her belt. Before she could move, he bolted, his boots squelching on the cobblestones as he cut between a kebab cart (its metal sides steaming despite the rain) and a closed boutique (its window displaying a tattered Union Jack dress). Harlow gave chase, her brown eyes locking on the flash of his coat as he weaved through the narrow streets. The rain muffled the sound of her breath, but she could hear his ragged gasps, could smell the stale beer and cigar smoke on his clothes as she closed the gap. Her legs burned—18 years on the force had kept her fit, but the rain slowed her, and he gained a step when he skidded around a corner. He skidded to a halt in front of a dimly lit bar, the distinctive green neon sign above the entrance cutting through the rain like a beacon: The Raven’s Nest. Harlow recognized it immediately—her files on the clique were thick with notes about Silas’ bar, the hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, the old maps and black-and-white photographs lining the walls. She’d staked it out twice before, but never managed to get past the bartender—a burly man with a scar across his cheek who’d threatened to call the boys if she didn’t leave. The courier wrenched open the door and vanished inside. Harlow followed, her boots thudding against the bar’s warped wooden floor. The air reeked of whiskey and cigar smoke, and the bartender’s head snapped up, his hand pausing on a bottle of scotch. Two other men at the bar—clique members, by the way they tensed, their hands resting on hidden blades at their belts—glanced at her, but she ignored them, her eyes scanning the room. The walls were crammed with old maps: a 17th-century chart of the Thames, a tattered atlas of the Scottish Highlands, a hand-drawn map of Soho’s secret alleyways. Black-and-white photographs stared down from the rafters—Soho gangsters from the 1950s, their faces hard with menace; a group of women in flapper dresses, laughing at a table; a young Silas, standing behind the bar with a cigar in his hand. The courier was gone, but Harlow spotted the edge of his wool coat disappearing behind a floor-to-ceiling bookshelf tucked in the back corner. She moved silently, her fingers brushing the spines of leather-bound books until she found the trigger: an old atlas of the British Isles, its pages frayed at the edges and marked with red ink. She tugged it, and the bookshelf swung inward with a low creak, revealing a narrow stone staircase leading down into darkness. Harlow hesitated for half a second—her training screamed caution, but the ghost of Morris’s face flickered in her mind, his last words a garbled warning about “things that don’t belong” before he died in her arms, his skin cold and clammy despite the summer heat. She descended, her flashlight cutting through the dark as she took each step slowly, her hand resting on the baton at her belt. The staircase opened into a damp tunnel, its walls lined with moss and the distant drip of water echoing through the space. Harlow’s boots splashed in puddles of rainwater that had seeped through the ceiling, and she pulled her flashlight from her belt, its beam cutting through the gloom. The courier’s footprints were visible in the mud, leading deeper into the tunnel, and she followed them for ten minutes until the tunnel opened into an abandoned Tube station—Camden’s old Northern Line stop, according to the chipped sign above the platform. This was the Veil Market’s current location, she’d learned from her investigations: an underground supernatural black market that moved with every full moon, selling enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and stolen supernatural artifacts to those with the right token. She’d heard rumors of fairies trading wings for healing potions, of werewolves bartering claws for silver bullets, of witches selling curses wrapped in black silk. The courier was standing at the edge of the platform, fumbling in his coat pocket. Harlow pressed herself against a pillar, watching as he pulled out a small, yellowed bone token—the entry requirement, she’d been told, carved from the bone of a supernatural creature. He flicked it at a shadowy figure standing by the ticket barriers, a woman with eyes that glowed with a faint red light, and the figure nodded, stepping aside to let him pass into the market’s main hall. Harlow’s heart sank—she didn’t have a token, couldn’t get in without one, and if she turned back now, the courier would vanish with the vial in his coat, and Morris’s case would remain unsolved. She thought of the way his file had been marked “unsolved” by her superiors, the way they’d told her to move on, to stop chasing ghosts. She couldn’t. A soft murmur pulled her attention to the side of the platform. She turned her flashlight beam, and her breath caught: a man with olive skin and short curly dark brown hair was kneeling beside a figure wrapped in a tattered blanket, his hands moving gently over a wing that glowed with a faint, otherworldly blue light. It was Tomás Herrera—she’d memorized his file: former NHS paramedic, born in Seville, lost his license for unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients, Saint Christopher medallion around his neck, scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack he’d received while protecting a vampire from a mob. He looked up, his warm brown eyes locking with hers, and his hand stilled on the wing. The fairy under the blanket whimpered, and Tomás whispered a prayer in Spanish—a plea to Saint Christopher to protect the creature—before turning back to Harlow. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice low and wary. He tucked the Saint Christopher medallion under his shirt, his scar glinting in the flashlight beam. “You’re treading ground you don’t understand. The Veil Market doesn’t care about your badge, about your rules. The things here—they feed on doubt, on fear. You don’t have a token. You’ll be torn apart before you take three steps inside.” Harlow stepped forward, her sharp jaw set. “I understand the clique is using this market to move a banned alchemical substance,” she said. “Something that ties to Morris’s death. He was investigating the same ring three years ago, before he vanished. I’m not going to let them get away with it.” Tomás stood, brushing mud from his knees. He glanced at the fairy, who had closed her eyes, the blue glow of her wing dimming. “I’ve seen what happens to humans who wander in without a guide,” he said, stepping forward to block her path. “I lost a friend once, a human who tried to sneak in to find his sister. They found his bones three days later, scattered across the tracks. You’ll not make it out alive.” Harlow stared at him, her brown eyes hard with resolve. She’d spent three years chasing the shadow of Morris’s death, three years living with the guilt of not saving him, three years reading and rereading his case file until the pages were frayed. She wasn’t going to stop now. Then she saw it: a small bone token, discarded on the ground beside Tomás’s kneeling spot, probably dropped by the fairy’s caretaker when they’d brought her to him for treatment. She reached down, tucking it into her pocket, her fingers closing around the smooth, yellowed surface. Tomás’s eyes widened, and he reached out to stop her, but she pulled away. “You’re making a mistake,” he said, his voice urgent. “I can help you. I can get you in safely, but you have to listen to me. The clique has eyes everywhere. They’ll know you’re a detective the second you step through that barrier.” Harlow stared at him, her hand hovering over the barrier. She thought of the risk—of the supernatural creatures that would see her as prey, of the clique members that would try to kill her, of the possibility that she’d end up like Morris, cold and dead in a dark tunnel. Then she thought of Morris’s face, of his laugh, of the way he’d always told her to follow the clues, no matter how dark they led. “I don’t need your help,” she said, pushing past him. She walked to the ticket barriers, pulling the bone token from her pocket and flicking it at the shadowy woman. The woman nodded, stepping aside. Harlow paused for a second, her hand hovering over the barrier, the worn leather watch on her left wrist ticking like a countdown in her ear. Then she stepped through—into the dark, unknown heart of the Veil Market, her baton ready, her resolve unbroken, the faint murmur of supernatural bartering rising to greet her like a warning.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.727
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.95% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1654
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.70% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1654
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"glint"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"beacon"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"echoing"
count1
6
word"gloom"
count1
7
word"silk"
count1
8
word"flicked"
count1
9
word"otherworldly"
count1
10
word"glinting"
count1
11
word"resolve"
count2
highlights
0"glint"
1"weight"
2"beacon"
3"scanning"
4"flickered"
5"echoing"
6"gloom"
7"silk"
8"flicked"
9"otherworldly"
10"glinting"
11"resolve"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences62
matches
0"d with resolve"
50.69% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences62
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
1"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences66
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1624
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.48% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount1428
uniqueNames26
maxNameDensity1.05
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow15
Soho3
Morris7
Christmases1
Union1
Jack1
Raven1
Nest1
Thames1
Scottish1
Highlands1
Silas1
British1
Isles1
Tube1
Camden1
Northern1
Line1
Veil2
Market2
Tomás5
Herrera1
Seville1
Saint3
Christopher3
Spanish1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Morris"
2"Union"
3"Jack"
4"Raven"
5"Silas"
6"Camden"
7"Tomás"
8"Herrera"
9"Saint"
10"Christopher"
places
0"Soho"
1"Thames"
2"Highlands"
3"Market"
4"Seville"
5"Spanish"
globalScore0.975
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1624
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
71.92% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs16
mean101.5
std40.77
cv0.402
sampleLengths
0134
1152
2103
3155
4123
5154
6144
7146
865
951
1077
1149
1260
1343
1476
1592
76.97% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences62
matches
0"were crammed"
1"was gone"
2"been told"
3"been marked"
4"were frayed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs237
matches
0"was standing"
1"was kneeling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount18
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences16
totalSentences66
ratio0.242
matches
0"She leaned against a rain-slicked brick wall in Soho, her left wrist throbbing where her worn leather watch dug into the skin—a gift from DS Morris, three Christmases before he vanished into the unexplained dark of a case she still couldn’t close."
1"She’d seen the glint of a glass vial through the fabric earlier, a hint of the banned alchemical substances she’d linked to the clique’s trafficking ring—the same ring she suspected had gotten Morris killed."
2"Harlow tensed, her military precision kicking in—shoulders back, weight shifted to her balls of her feet, hand hovering near the baton at her belt."
3"Her legs burned—18 years on the force had kept her fit, but the rain slowed her, and he gained a step when he skidded around a corner."
4"Harlow recognized it immediately—her files on the clique were thick with notes about Silas’ bar, the hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, the old maps and black-and-white photographs lining the walls."
5"She’d staked it out twice before, but never managed to get past the bartender—a burly man with a scar across his cheek who’d threatened to call the boys if she didn’t leave."
6"Two other men at the bar—clique members, by the way they tensed, their hands resting on hidden blades at their belts—glanced at her, but she ignored them, her eyes scanning the room."
7"Black-and-white photographs stared down from the rafters—Soho gangsters from the 1950s, their faces hard with menace; a group of women in flapper dresses, laughing at a table; a young Silas, standing behind the bar with a cigar in his hand."
8"Harlow hesitated for half a second—her training screamed caution, but the ghost of Morris’s face flickered in her mind, his last words a garbled warning about “things that don’t belong” before he died in her arms, his skin cold and clammy despite the summer heat."
9"The courier’s footprints were visible in the mud, leading deeper into the tunnel, and she followed them for ten minutes until the tunnel opened into an abandoned Tube station—Camden’s old Northern Line stop, according to the chipped sign above the platform."
10"Harlow pressed herself against a pillar, watching as he pulled out a small, yellowed bone token—the entry requirement, she’d been told, carved from the bone of a supernatural creature."
11"Harlow’s heart sank—she didn’t have a token, couldn’t get in without one, and if she turned back now, the courier would vanish with the vial in his coat, and Morris’s case would remain unsolved."
12"It was Tomás Herrera—she’d memorized his file: former NHS paramedic, born in Seville, lost his license for unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients, Saint Christopher medallion around his neck, scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack he’d received while protecting a vampire from a mob."
13"The fairy under the blanket whimpered, and Tomás whispered a prayer in Spanish—a plea to Saint Christopher to protect the creature—before turning back to Harlow."
14"She thought of the risk—of the supernatural creatures that would see her as prey, of the clique members that would try to kill her, of the possibility that she’d end up like Morris, cold and dead in a dark tunnel."
15"Then she stepped through—into the dark, unknown heart of the Veil Market, her baton ready, her resolve unbroken, the faint murmur of supernatural bartering rising to greet her like a warning."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount494
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.020242914979757085
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.008097165991902834
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences66
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences66
mean24.61
std11.4
cv0.463
sampleLengths
021
142
237
334
412
524
638
720
831
927
1030
1132
1232
139
1411
1522
1632
1727
1840
1923
2034
2121
2245
2323
2422
2527
2641
2739
2825
2915
3029
3138
3234
3326
342
3512
3645
3747
3817
3925
409
4116
4240
437
4416
4528
467
4717
4820
4933
43.94% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.25757575757575757
totalSentences66
uniqueOpeners17
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences60
matches
0"Then she saw it: a"
1"Then she thought of Morris’s"
2"Then she stepped through—into the"
ratio0.05
46.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences60
matches
0"She leaned against a rain-slicked"
1"It was 2:17 AM, according"
2"She’d seen the glint of"
3"Her legs burned—18 years on"
4"He skidded to a halt"
5"She’d staked it out twice"
6"She moved silently, her fingers"
7"She tugged it, and the"
8"She descended, her flashlight cutting"
9"She’d heard rumors of fairies"
10"He flicked it at a"
11"She thought of the way"
12"She turned her flashlight beam,"
13"It was Tomás Herrera—she’d memorized"
14"He looked up, his warm"
15"he said, his voice low"
16"He tucked the Saint Christopher"
17"He glanced at the fairy,"
18"he said, stepping forward to"
19"She’d spent three years chasing"
ratio0.433
10.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences60
matches
0"The rain came down in"
1"She leaned against a rain-slicked"
2"It was 2:17 AM, according"
3"She’d seen the glint of"
4"The courier’s head snapped up,"
5"Harlow tensed, her military precision"
6"Harlow gave chase, her brown"
7"The rain muffled the sound"
8"Her legs burned—18 years on"
9"He skidded to a halt"
10"Harlow recognized it immediately—her files"
11"She’d staked it out twice"
12"The courier wrenched open the"
13"Harlow followed, her boots thudding"
14"The air reeked of whiskey"
15"The walls were crammed with"
16"The courier was gone, but"
17"She moved silently, her fingers"
18"She tugged it, and the"
19"Harlow hesitated for half a"
ratio0.9
83.33% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"Before she could move, he"
ratio0.017
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"The courier’s head snapped up, his eyes flicking to her hiding spot."
1"Before she could move, he bolted, his boots squelching on the cobblestones as he cut between a kebab cart (its metal sides steaming despite the rain) and a clos…"
2"Two other men at the bar—clique members, by the way they tensed, their hands resting on hidden blades at their belts—glanced at her, but she ignored them, her e…"
3"She descended, her flashlight cutting through the dark as she took each step slowly, her hand resting on the baton at her belt."
4"Harlow’s boots splashed in puddles of rainwater that had seeped through the ceiling, and she pulled her flashlight from her belt, its beam cutting through the g…"
5"This was the Veil Market’s current location, she’d learned from her investigations: an underground supernatural black market that moved with every full moon, se…"
6"He flicked it at a shadowy figure standing by the ticket barriers, a woman with eyes that glowed with a faint red light, and the figure nodded, stepping aside t…"
7"She turned her flashlight beam, and her breath caught: a man with olive skin and short curly dark brown hair was kneeling beside a figure wrapped in a tattered …"
8"She reached down, tucking it into her pocket, her fingers closing around the smooth, yellowed surface."
9"She thought of the risk—of the supernatural creatures that would see her as prey, of the clique members that would try to kill her, of the possibility that she’…"
10"Harlow paused for a second, her hand hovering over the barrier, the worn leather watch on her left wrist ticking like a countdown in her ear."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he said, his voice low and wary"
1"he said, his voice urgent"
66.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Harlow hesitated (hesitate)"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.545
leniency1
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.167
76.7439%