Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYACQHSP2KCVXV3NZA6QDRT

Run Details

Duration:
8.6s
Cost:
$0.000400
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of *The Raven’s Nest* flickered weakly against the rain-slicked pavement, its glow bleeding into the puddles like spilled ink. Inside, the air smelled of aged whiskey and something sharper—old leather, maybe, or the faintest trace of gun oil. Rory paused on the threshold, her breath fogging the glass door before she pushed it open. The bell above the door chimed, a sound she hadn’t heard in years. The bar was quieter than she remembered. The usual hum of conversation, the clink of glasses, the low murmur of laughter—all of it muted, as if the place itself had exhaled. She scanned the dimly lit space, her fingers tightening around the strap of her messenger bag. The back corner was empty. The booth by the jukebox was empty. Even the pool table stood silent, its cues leaning against the felt like forgotten bones. Then she saw him. Silas Blackwood sat at the far end of the bar, nursing a glass of something amber and slow. His auburn hair was streaked with grey now, thicker than she recalled, and his beard—neat, precise—covered half his jaw. He wore a dark suit, the lapels slightly frayed at the edges, like he’d worn it too many times to count. His left leg gave a slight hitch as he turned, just enough to catch her reflection in the mirror behind the bar. For a heartbeat, neither of them moved. Then he smiled, slow and knowing, like he’d been waiting for this moment all along. “Well,” he said, his voice rougher than she remembered, “if it isn’t the girl who used to steal my whiskey.” Rory’s pulse jumped. She swallowed hard, her throat suddenly dry. “Silas.” His name tasted like ash on her tongue. She stepped forward, her boots clicking against the polished wood. The years between them stretched thin, brittle, like the paper of an old letter. “You look like hell,” he said, and she almost laughed—because he did too. She slid onto the stool beside him, the leather groaning under her weight. The barkeep—a young man with a sharp jaw and a bored expression—glanced at them before turning back to his phone. Silas didn’t order another drink. He just watched her, his hazel eyes dark with something she couldn’t name. “You’re still here,” she said finally. “So are you.” A silence settled between them, thick and unspoken. Rory traced a finger along the rim of her glass, though she hadn’t ordered anything. The condensation beaded under her touch. “You look different,” she said. Silas exhaled through his nose, a sound like a man who’d heard that a thousand times before. “So do you.” She wanted to ask him what he meant. She wanted to ask how he’d ended up here, in this bar, in this life. But the words stuck in her throat. Instead, she reached into her bag and pulled out a crumpled envelope, pressing it onto the bar between them. “Found this in my mailbox this morning,” she said. “Thought you might want it.” Silas didn’t touch it. He just stared at it, his fingers curling slightly around the edge of his glass. “You always were the one who could find things,” he murmured. Rory’s chest tightened. “I didn’t know where else to send it.” Another silence. This one heavier. Silas finally picked up the envelope, his thumb brushing over the stamp before he tore it open. Inside was a single sheet of paper, yellowed with age, the ink faded but still legible. Rory watched his face as he read it, his expression shifting from surprise to something sharper, colder. “This is from Prague,” he said at last, his voice low. “1998.” Rory nodded. “I found it in an old case file. Someone must’ve left it behind.” Silas folded the paper carefully, his movements precise, controlled. “You’ve been digging.” “Just looking for answers.” He let out a dry laugh. “You always did have a habit of digging where you weren’t supposed to.” Rory’s fingers twitched. “I needed to know.” Silas studied her for a long moment, his gaze sharp enough to cut. “Did you?” She didn’t answer. She couldn’t. The barkeep slid a fresh glass of whiskey toward her, untouched. Rory picked it up, the amber liquid catching the dim light. She took a sip, the burn of it grounding her. Silas drained his own glass in one smooth motion, then set it down with a quiet *thud*. “You ever think about what happened that night?” Rory’s breath hitched. “Every damn day.” He nodded, as if she’d confirmed something he already knew. “I thought you’d moved on.” “I did,” she said, though her voice cracked. “I thought I had.” Silas leaned back against the stool, his limp more pronounced now. “You look like you haven’t.” Rory’s hands clenched around her glass. “I’m not the same person I was then.” “No,” he agreed. “You’re not.” The air between them thickened, charged with something unspoken. Rory could feel it pressing down on her, heavy as the weight of all the years they’d lost. “You ever see her?” she asked suddenly. Silas’s fingers stilled on the bar. “Eva?” Rory nodded. “Once,” he said quietly. “Years ago. She was different.” “How?” “Like you.” Rory exhaled sharply. “She’s still in Cardiff.” Silas’s gaze darkened. “She should’ve come back.” “She had her reasons.” “So did I.” Rory’s throat tightened. “You left.” “I had to.” “You always did.” Silas didn’t deny it. He just stared at her, his eyes reflecting the dim light of the bar. “You ever think about what you lost?” he asked. Rory’s chest ached. “Every damn day.” Silas reached into his pocket and pulled out a small, silver key. He slid it across the bar toward her, the metal cold under her fingers. “This was in the envelope,” he said. “With the letter.” Rory turned it over in her palm, the weight of it familiar, foreign. “What is it?” “A key to something you should’ve had years ago.” She looked up at him, her breath catching. “What does it open?” Silas’s expression softened, just slightly. “Your past.” Rory’s fingers tightened around the key. “I don’t want my past.” “You never did.” The silence between them stretched, heavy with unspoken words. Rory set the key back on the bar, her fingers brushing against the envelope. “You ever think about coming back?” she asked. Silas studied her for a long moment, his gaze unreadable. “I’m here.” Rory’s breath hitched. “You’re here.” “And you’re here.” She looked down at the key, then back at him. “What now?” Silas took a slow sip of his whiskey, his eyes never leaving hers. “Now,” he said, “we drink.” Rory picked up her glass, the amber liquid catching the light. She took a sip, the burn of it grounding her. “To old friends,” she said. Silas clinked his glass against hers. “To the ones we lost.” The barkeep slid another drink toward Silas, this one untouched. Rory watched as he picked it up, his movements slow, deliberate. “You ever think about what happened that night?” she asked again. Silas’s fingers tightened around his glass. “Every damn day.” Rory’s breath caught. “Me too.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
70.97% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
1"she asked suddenly [suddenly]"
2"he said quietly [quietly]"
3"she asked again [again]"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.274
leniency0.548
rawRatio0.235
effectiveRatio0.129
70.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1200
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"suddenly"
count2
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
2"carefully"
3"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.17% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1200
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"weight"
count3
4
word"silence"
count3
5
word"unspoken"
count3
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"charged"
count1
8
word"could feel"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count1
10
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"scanned"
2"pulse"
3"weight"
4"silence"
5"unspoken"
6"traced"
7"charged"
8"could feel"
9"familiar"
10"unreadable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences103
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences148
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords4
totalWords1192
ratio0.003
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"thud"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount932
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity2.36
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Blackwood1
Rory22
Silas19
persons
0"Raven"
1"Blackwood"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore0.32
windowScore0
76.47% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like forgotten bones"
1"tasted like ash on her tongue"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1192
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences148
matches
0"heard that a"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs78
mean15.28
std15.82
cv1.035
sampleLengths
071
174
24
380
47
515
620
711
832
913
1051
116
123
1329
145
1520
1649
1714
1819
1911
2011
215
2250
2312
2415
2512
264
2719
287
2915
305
3132
3225
336
3415
3512
3616
3714
385
3927
407
417
422
439
441
452
467
477
484
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"was streaked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs170
matches(empty)
46.33% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences148
ratio0.034
matches
0"Inside, the air smelled of aged whiskey and something sharper—old leather, maybe, or the faintest trace of gun oil."
1"The usual hum of conversation, the clink of glasses, the low murmur of laughter—all of it muted, as if the place itself had exhaled."
2"His auburn hair was streaked with grey now, thicker than she recalled, and his beard—neat, precise—covered half his jaw."
3"“You look like hell,” he said, and she almost laughed—because he did too."
4"The barkeep—a young man with a sharp jaw and a bored expression—glanced at them before turning back to his phone."
88.97% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount940
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"neat, precise—covered half"
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.045744680851063826
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.01276595744680851
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences148
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences148
mean8.05
std5.57
cv0.691
sampleLengths
023
119
216
313
47
524
616
75
87
915
104
1118
1219
1321
1422
157
1615
1720
183
197
201
218
2210
2314
2413
2513
2620
275
2813
296
303
318
3215
336
345
3517
363
378
3815
397
4019
419
425
434
4415
4511
463
478
482
493
44.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.25170068027210885
totalSentences147
uniqueOpeners37
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences90
matches
0"Even the pool table stood"
1"Then she saw him."
2"Then he smiled, slow and"
3"Instead, she reached into her"
ratio0.044
91.11% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences90
matches
0"She scanned the dimly lit"
1"His auburn hair was streaked"
2"He wore a dark suit,"
3"His left leg gave a"
4"he said, his voice rougher"
5"She swallowed hard, her throat"
6"His name tasted like ash"
7"She stepped forward, her boots"
8"he said, and she almost"
9"She slid onto the stool"
10"He just watched her, his"
11"she said finally"
12"She wanted to ask him"
13"She wanted to ask how"
14"He just stared at it,"
15"he said at last, his"
16"He let out a dry"
17"She didn’t answer."
18"She took a sip, the"
19"He nodded, as if she’d"
ratio0.322
4.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences90
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Rory paused on the threshold,"
2"The bell above the door"
3"The bar was quieter than"
4"The usual hum of conversation,"
5"She scanned the dimly lit"
6"The back corner was empty."
7"The booth by the jukebox"
8"Silas Blackwood sat at the"
9"His auburn hair was streaked"
10"He wore a dark suit,"
11"His left leg gave a"
12"he said, his voice rougher"
13"Rory’s pulse jumped."
14"She swallowed hard, her throat"
15"His name tasted like ash"
16"She stepped forward, her boots"
17"The years between them stretched"
18"he said, and she almost"
19"She slid onto the stool"
ratio0.911
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The usual hum of conversation, the clink of glasses, the low murmur of laughter—all of it muted, as if the place itself had exhaled."
36.76% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he said, his voice rougher than she remembered,"
1"he said, his voice low"
2"she said, though her voice cracked"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.274
leniency0.548
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.065
78.6541%