Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYADKS3QRYGYPKEJA77GFYK

Run Details

Duration:
8.0s
Cost:
$0.000339
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon glow of the Raven’s Nest pulsed like a slow heartbeat against the damp London night, casting jagged shadows across the bar’s worn wooden floor. Aurora Carter—Rory, as she preferred—pushed open the door, her breath curling in the cold air. The scent of aged whiskey and something faintly metallic clung to the space, the kind of smell that lingered in the bones. She stepped inside, her boots thudding against the tiles, and immediately the room felt smaller than it had when she’d last been here. Silas Blackwood stood behind the bar, his back to her, the way he always was when he was deep in thought. The way his fingers traced the rim of a glass, the way his shoulders hunched slightly as he leaned into the weight of his limp. She knew that posture. Knew the way his eyes—hazel, always shifting like a storm cloud—would darken when he was thinking too hard. “You’re back,” he said without turning. She didn’t answer. She just stood there, letting the weight of the years settle over her like a second skin. The Rory she’d been back then—sharp-tongued, restless, always moving—had been a ghost in her own life. Now, she moved differently. Slower. Her fingers tapped against her wrist, where the crescent scar from her childhood accident still marked her skin, a reminder of how far she’d come and how far she’d fallen. Silas finally turned, his expression unreadable beneath the dim light. “You look different.” “So do you.” A beat of silence. The kind that hung between them like a half-drunk glass. “You’re not the same,” she said, her voice quieter than she’d meant it to be. “You’re… quieter.” Silas exhaled through his nose, the sound rough. “I’m older.” “You look older.” He didn’t deny it. Instead, he reached for a bottle of whiskey, poured two fingers into a glass, and handed it to her. She took it, the burn of the liquid hitting her throat before she could stop it. The amber liquid swirled, catching the light like a secret. “You still work at the restaurant?” she asked, the question coming out before she could think it through. “Same place.” “Same hours?” “Same.” She studied him—the way his beard was now thicker, the way his hands were always still, as if he was waiting for something. “You’ve been here longer than I’ve been in London.” Silas didn’t look away. “I’ve been here since before you left.” “Before I left Cardiff.” “Before you left *everything*.” The words hit her like a punch. She set the glass down harder than she meant to. “I didn’t leave everything.” “You left your father’s law firm. You left your mother’s classroom. You left Evan.” The name burned. She swallowed. “I left him.” Silas didn’t say it, but she heard it in the way his jaw tightened. “You came back.” “No.” “You did.” She turned away, her fingers brushing against the scar on her wrist. The bar was too quiet. Too still. She needed something to break the silence, needed to remember how it used to be—how easy it had been to be Rory, the girl who could talk her way out of anything. “You ever miss it?” she asked, her voice low. Silas didn’t answer right away. He was watching her, really watching her, like he was trying to see through the years, through the weight of her silence. “Miss what?” “Cardiff. The university. The way things used to be.” He took a slow sip of his whiskey, the liquid sliding down his throat. “I miss the way things used to be.” The words hung between them, heavy and familiar. She turned back to him, her breath fogging the air. “You still think about Prague?” Silas didn’t flinch. “Every damn day.” “You’re not the same person you were then.” “No.” “You’re not the same person you were when I left.” Silas set his glass down with a clink. “I’m not.” She looked around the bar, at the maps pinned to the wall, at the faces of the regulars who knew him too well to ask questions. “You’re still here.” “Still here.” She exhaled, the sound sharp. “You’re still here, and I’m still here, and we’re both older than we thought we’d be.” Silas reached for her hand, his fingers warm against hers. She didn’t pull away. “You’re not the same person you were when you came here.” “No.” “You’re not the same person you were when you left.” She didn’t answer. She just looked at him, at the lines around his eyes, at the way his hands were always still, as if he was waiting for something. Waiting for her to say something. Waiting for her to remember. “You ever think about Eva?” she asked, the question coming out before she could stop it. Silas’s grip tightened. “Every damn day.” “You miss her.” “Every damn day.” She pulled her hand away, her fingers aching. “You’re not the same person you were when she died.” Silas didn’t deny it. He just looked at her, really looked at her, like he was trying to see through the years, through the weight of her silence. “I’m not.” She turned away, her back to him, her breath coming faster. The bar was too quiet. Too still. She needed something to break the silence, needed to remember how it used to be—how easy it had been to be Rory, the girl who could talk her way out of anything. “You ever think about what you’d do if you could go back?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Silas didn’t answer right away. He was watching her, really watching her, like he was trying to see through the years, through the weight of her silence. “I’d go back to Prague.” “You’d go back to the woman you loved.” Silas didn’t say anything. He just looked at her, his eyes dark and unreadable. “I’d go back to the woman I loved.” She turned back to him, her breath fogging the air. “You’d go back to the life you left.” Silas didn’t answer. He just looked at her, like he was trying to see through the years, through the weight of her silence. “I’d go back to the life I left.” She exhaled, the sound sharp. “You’re not the same person you were then.” Silas reached for her hand again, his fingers warm against hers. “No.” She pulled her hand away, her fingers aching. “You’re not the same person you were when you left.” Silas didn’t say anything. He just looked at her, like he was trying to see through the years, through the weight of her silence. The bar was too quiet. Too still. She needed something to break the silence, needed to remember how it used to be—how easy it had been to be Rory, the girl who could talk her way out of anything. Silas stood, his limp making a subtle shift as he moved. “Come on. Let’s get out of here.” She followed him, her steps heavy, her mind racing. The bar was too quiet. Too still. She needed something to break the silence, needed to remember how it used to be—how easy it had been to be Rory, the girl who could talk her way out of anything. Outside, the night air was colder, the city lights a distant glow. Silas led her down the street, his hand on her shoulder, his grip firm but not unkind. “You ever think about what you’d do if you could go back?” She didn’t answer right away. She just looked at him, really looked at him, like she was trying to see through the years, through the weight of her silence. “I’d go back to Cardiff.” Silas didn’t say anything. He just looked at her, his eyes dark and unreadable. “I’d go back to Prague.” She exhaled, the sound sharp. “I’d go back to the life I left.” Silas didn’t answer. He just looked at her, like he was trying to see through the years, through the weight of her silence. “I’d go back to the woman I loved.” She turned away, her breath fogging the air. The city lights blurred behind her eyes. “I’m not the same person I was then.” Silas didn’t say anything. He just looked at her, like he was trying to see through the years, through the weight of her silence. The streetlights flickered, casting long shadows across their faces. She needed something to break the silence, needed to remember how it used to be—how easy it had been to be Rory, the girl who could talk her way out of anything. Silas reached for her hand again, his fingers warm against hers. “You’re not the same person you were when you left.” She pulled her hand away, her fingers aching. “I’m not.” Silas didn’t say anything. He just looked at her, like he was trying to see through the years, through the weight of her silence. The city lights faded, the night air thick with the weight of unspoken words. Silas turned to her, his expression unreadable. “Come on. Let’s walk.” She followed him, her steps slow, her mind still racing. The city lights were a distant glow, the night air cold. They walked in silence, the weight of the years pressing down on them both. Silas stopped suddenly, his hand on her arm. “You ever think about what you’d do if you could go back?” She didn’t answer right away. She just looked at him, really looked at him, like she was trying to see through the years, through the weight of her silence. “I’d go back to Cardiff.” Silas didn’t say anything. He just looked at her, his eyes dark and unreadable. “I’d go back to Prague.” She exhaled, the sound sharp. “I’d go back to the life I left.” Silas didn’t answer. He just looked at her, like he was trying to see through the years, through the weight of her silence. The city lights blurred behind her eyes, the night air thick with the weight of unspoken words. Silas turned to her, his expression unreadable. “You’re not the same person you were then.” She didn’t say anything. She just looked at him, her breath coming faster. The weight of the years pressed down on her, heavy and unyielding. Silas reached for her hand again, his fingers warm against hers. “You’re not the same person you were when you left.” She pulled her hand away, her fingers aching. The city lights faded, the night air cold and still. Silas stepped back, his expression unreadable. “Come on. Let’s go.” She followed him, her steps slow, her mind still racing. The weight of the years pressed down on them both, a silent burden they carried together.
created_at"2026-02-20T20:03:52.749Z" 2/20/2026, 8:03:52 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.087
leniency0.174
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1808
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count5
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"barely above a whisper"
3"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1808
totalAiIsms54
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"weight"
count18
3
word"reminder"
count1
4
word"unreadable"
count7
5
word"silence"
count18
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"racing"
count3
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count2
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"traced"
2"weight"
3"reminder"
4"unreadable"
5"silence"
6"familiar"
7"whisper"
8"racing"
9"flickered"
10"unspoken"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches13
maxInWindow11
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count13
highlights
0"the weight of her silence"
1"the weight of unspoken words"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences125
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences125
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences188
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1794
ratio0.001
matches
0"everything"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
43.09% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount1403
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.14
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
London1
Carter1
Rory7
Blackwood1
Silas30
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Blackwood"
4"Silas"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.431
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1794
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences188
matches
0"knew that posture"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs85
mean21.11
std17.64
cv0.836
sampleLengths
086
168
26
371
413
53
614
717
810
93
1049
1118
122
132
141
1532
1611
174
184
1921
2014
218
2217
231
242
2551
269
2729
289
2922
3023
316
328
331
3410
3510
3629
372
3821
3925
401
4110
4240
4316
446
453
463
4718
4830
4950
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount16
totalVerbs264
matches
0"was thinking"
1"was waiting"
2"was watching was trying"
3"was waiting"
4"was trying"
5"was watching was trying"
6"was trying"
7"was trying"
8"was trying"
9"was trying"
10"was trying"
11"was trying"
12"was trying"
13"was trying"
6.08% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences188
ratio0.048
matches
0"Aurora Carter—Rory, as she preferred—pushed open the door, her breath curling in the cold air."
1"Knew the way his eyes—hazel, always shifting like a storm cloud—would darken when he was thinking too hard."
2"The Rory she’d been back then—sharp-tongued, restless, always moving—had been a ghost in her own life."
3"She studied him—the way his beard was now thicker, the way his hands were always still, as if he was waiting for something."
4"She needed something to break the silence, needed to remember how it used to be—how easy it had been to be Rory, the girl who could talk her way out of anything."
5"She needed something to break the silence, needed to remember how it used to be—how easy it had been to be Rory, the girl who could talk her way out of anything."
6"She needed something to break the silence, needed to remember how it used to be—how easy it had been to be Rory, the girl who could talk her way out of anything."
7"She needed something to break the silence, needed to remember how it used to be—how easy it had been to be Rory, the girl who could talk her way out of anything."
8"She needed something to break the silence, needed to remember how it used to be—how easy it had been to be Rory, the girl who could talk her way out of anything."
88.69% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1417
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount75
adverbRatio0.0529287226534933
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.008468595624558928
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences188
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences188
mean9.54
std7.41
cv0.777
sampleLengths
026
115
222
323
421
525
64
718
86
93
1017
1116
124
131
1430
1510
163
173
184
1910
2015
212
228
232
243
254
2619
2716
2810
2918
302
312
321
3323
349
354
367
374
384
397
4010
414
4214
433
442
453
4614
473
481
492
44.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.13829787234042554
totalSentences188
uniqueOpeners26
28.01% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences119
matches
0"Instead, he reached for a"
ratio0.008
18.32% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount60
totalSentences119
matches
0"She stepped inside, her boots"
1"She knew that posture."
2"he said without turning"
3"She didn’t answer."
4"She just stood there, letting"
5"Her fingers tapped against her"
6"she said, her voice quieter"
7"He didn’t deny it."
8"She took it, the burn"
9"she asked, the question coming"
10"She studied him—the way his"
11"She set the glass down"
12"She turned away, her fingers"
13"She needed something to break"
14"she asked, her voice low"
15"He was watching her, really"
16"He took a slow sip"
17"She turned back to him,"
18"She looked around the bar,"
19"She exhaled, the sound sharp."
ratio0.504
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount113
totalSentences119
matches
0"The neon glow of the"
1"Aurora Carter—Rory, as she preferred—pushed"
2"The scent of aged whiskey"
3"She stepped inside, her boots"
4"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
5"The way his fingers traced"
6"She knew that posture."
7"he said without turning"
8"She didn’t answer."
9"She just stood there, letting"
10"The Rory she’d been back"
11"Her fingers tapped against her"
12"Silas finally turned, his expression"
13"A beat of silence."
14"The kind that hung between"
15"she said, her voice quieter"
16"Silas exhaled through his nose,"
17"He didn’t deny it."
18"She took it, the burn"
19"The amber liquid swirled, catching"
ratio0.95
42.02% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences119
matches
0"Now, she moved differently."
ratio0.008
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The kind that hung between them like a half-drunk glass."
1"She studied him—the way his beard was now thicker, the way his hands were always still, as if he was waiting for something."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she said, her voice quieter than she’d meant it to be"
1"she asked, the question coming out before she could think it through"
2"she asked, her voice low"
3"she asked, the question coming out before she could stop it"
4"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.087
leniency0.174
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
68.2919%