"She paused, squinting at the rusted rat holes gnawing at the walls, at the overhead sign bent like a broken finger: *Bank*—twelve stops too far from Camden."
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"She rounded the corner and saw it: a man in a threadbare black coat crumpled against the wall, his throat split—not by a knife, not by a bullet, but by something that had torn through flesh like paper."
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"A bone token, smooth and white, lay in his palm—pale, porous, carved with runes she didn’t recognize."
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"Veil Market tokens were bound to the location—you couldn’t take one out unless you were leaving."
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"She wore round glasses smudged with ink, and when she saw Quinn, she tucked a strand of hair behind her left ear—*her nervous habit*, Quinn noted."
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"The bone token Milo had been holding would’ve let him in, but it was cracked—*used*."
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"Eva stayed, her eyes on Quinn’s hands—the worn leather watch, the scar on her knuckle, the calluses from years of gripping a gun."
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"Eva’s nervous habit flared—she tucked hair behind her left ear again."
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"Aurora was dead, killed in a fire three years ago, her body found with burns that didn’t match the blaze—supernatural burns, the kind Quinn still didn’t understand."
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"Eva looked down at her satchel, at the books peeking out—leather-bound, labeled in crisp script."
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"The air felt different here—thinner, like a membrane."
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"Names, dates, addresses—Milo’s list, scribbled in a hurry."
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"The growl came again, closer—from the tunnel beyond the manhole, from the dark."
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"The growl turned into a whimper, then a high-pitched cry—pain, not rage."
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"But the wall was moving—cracks spreading like lightning, bricks crumbling to dust."
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"And in its chest, a glowing orb—pale blue, pulsing, the compass inside."
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"The figure lunged, but the light from the compass flared, and it screamed—a sound like nails on a blackboard."
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"And now, it was all coming together—clues, tokens, compasses, a clique that wanted power."
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"(Scene ends as per instructions; no further continuation.)"
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"She rounded the corner and saw it: a man in a threadbare black coat crumpled against the wall, his throat split—not by a knife, not by a bullet, but by somethin…"
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"Quinn knelt, her knees sinking into mud that smelled of iron."
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"The man’s wrists were raw, as if he’d struggled with something invisible."
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"She looked at Eva, who was still staring at the body, her lower lip caught between her teeth."
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"Aurora was dead, killed in a fire three years ago, her body found with burns that didn’t match the blaze—supernatural burns, the kind Quinn still didn’t underst…"
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"The scratch was deep, uneven, as if something with curved fingers had pried the grate open."
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"And then, it staggered, the orb in its chest dimming, the compass glowing brighter."
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"And now, it was all coming together—clues, tokens, compasses, a clique that wanted power."