Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYADMY4GMN4JP504EMMKY17

Run Details

Duration:
22.2s
Cost:
$0.001164
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots thudded against the damp concrete of the Tube tunnel, the sound swallowed by the silence. She paused, squinting at the rusted rat holes gnawing at the walls, at the overhead sign bent like a broken finger: *Bank*—twelve stops too far from Camden. The air reeked of mildew and something sharper, coppery, but not blood. “Christ,” came a voice from up ahead. “You sure this is the right place, Quinn? Looks like a derelict fridge.” Quinn didn’t look up. Her hand went to the leather strap of her satchel, where the Revolver Smith & Wesson rode easy. “I didn’t come here for warmth, Jensen.” She rounded the corner and saw it: a man in a threadbare black coat crumpled against the wall, his throat split—not by a knife, not by a bullet, but by something that had torn through flesh like paper. His eyes were wide, frozen mid-scream, and there was no blood. Not on the coat, not on the floor, not even on the cracked tile beside his hand. “What the hell happened to him?” Jensen said, his voice tight. Quinn knelt, her knees sinking into mud that smelled of iron. The man’s wrists were raw, as if he’d struggled with something invisible. His left hand was curled, fingers half-spread, and she pried them open. A bone token, smooth and white, lay in his palm—pale, porous, carved with runes she didn’t recognize. But the runes were cracked, like glass. “Jensen.” He leaned down. “Yeah?” “Call for backup. Crime scene unit, ME. And tell them to bring a Geiger counter. This place is *radiating*.” He nodded, backing away. Quinn stayed, her brow furrowed. The token wasn’t right. Veil Market tokens were bound to the location—you couldn’t take one out unless you were leaving. Unless… A shadow moved at the end of the tunnel. She spun, hand on her gun, but it was only a girl. Fifteen, maybe, with curly red hair tumbling over a leather satchel bulging with books. She wore round glasses smudged with ink, and when she saw Quinn, she tucked a strand of hair behind her left ear—*her nervous habit*, Quinn noted. “Eva,” Jensen said, appearing beside her. “You shouldn’t be here. This is a crime scene.” Eva held up her hands, palms out. “I *called* you. Remember? I sent the tip. Told you the clique was moving drugs through the Market. You said it was too slow.” She wet her lower lip, eyes darting to the body. “He didn’t make it, did he?” Quinn stood, wiping her knees on her trousers. “Who?” “Milo. He was selling the Veil Compass. Had it stitched into his coat, under the lining. I told him to hold off. Told him the clique would—” She cut herself off, biting her lip. “I’m sorry. I shouldn’t have… I didn’t know he’d be—” “Wait.” Quinn knelt again, this time to the body’s shoulder. She unbuttoned the coat, ran a finger over the stitching. There was no tear, no blood. “He was killed before the coat was taken. Look at the *marks*.” Eva leaned closer. “What marks?” “On his neck. Not a bite. Not a slash. Look at the pattern. Like… like claw tips, but smaller. More—” “Precise,” Eva finished. “Demonic. They’re called *shade teeth*. You get them from a rift, not a direct attack. The spirit latches on, tears through muscle to get the host’s essence. But usually, they leave a mess. Blood, viscera—” “Not this time.” Quinn’s thumb brushed the man’s cheek. “The bone token. Cracks in the runes. And the compass is missing.” Eva’s breath hitched. “The compass? The one Shade artisans carved? The one that points to rifts? He had it, right? I saw him with it last week. He said the clique was going to kill him if he didn’t—” “Quinn.” Jensen’s voice was sharp. “The ME’s here. And so’s the forensics team.” Quinn stood, dusting off her hands. She looked at Eva, who was still staring at the body, her lower lip caught between her teeth. “You sure you didn’t see anyone else here last night? Before Milo arrived?” Eva flinched, like she’d been hit. “I told you, I called you. I was meeting him to give him a list of the clique’s members. He said he’d wait by the manhole. But when I got here, there was a crowd. The bone token I gave him—Milo, he never used it himself. He said it was ‘too loyal.’ Told me it would alert him if anyone was tracking him. But when I pushed, he just… he got quiet.” Quinn’s gaze went to the manhole behind them, the rusted grate pocked with holes. The bone token Milo had been holding would’ve let him in, but it was cracked—*used*. Someone had taken it from him. “Jensen,” she said, “check the grate. See if there’s a scratch, a mark. Something that doesn’t belong.” Jensen nodded, walking over. Eva stayed, her eyes on Quinn’s hands—the worn leather watch, the scar on her knuckle, the calluses from years of gripping a gun. “You think it’s the clique?” she said. Quinn didn’t look at her. “The clique uses the Market for info, for drugs, for magic. But they don’t *kill* for a compass. Not unless it’s more than a compass.” Eva bit her lip. “Shade magic… the compass is a key. To the rifts. To the spirits. If someone has it, they can open a portal, move through dimensions. The clique wants that power. They’d kill for it.” “Then why the shade teeth?” “To scare people. To make it look like a spirit did it. But Milo’s marks—they’re not *ancient*. The runes in the Market are old, but the teeth? They’re from a new spirit. A hungry one.” Quinn stepped closer, her voice low. “You’ve researched this. All of it.” Eva’s nervous habit flared—she tucked hair behind her left ear again. “I do. It’s my job. At the museum. The restricted archives. The one with the… with the old grimoires.” Quinn studied her. Eva was 26, young, with a freckled complexion that made her look younger. She’d moved to London two years ago, Aurora’s best friend, but Aurora wasn’t here. Aurora was dead, killed in a fire three years ago, her body found with burns that didn’t match the blaze—supernatural burns, the kind Quinn still didn’t understand. “You still think about her,” Quinn said, not a question. Eva’s eyes glistened, but she didn’t look away. “Every day. I promised her I’d find out what happened. That I’d make them pay.” Quinn nodded. “The clique. That’s why you called. To warn Milo. To get him to talk.” Eva looked down at her satchel, at the books peeking out—leather-bound, labeled in crisp script. “He was going to give me a list. Names, addresses, anything. He said the clique was planning to open a rift. A *big* one. Bring a whole army through.” Quinn’s jaw tightened. The clique. The same clique that had killed Morris, that had left her partner’s body with burns that defied explanation. The same clique she’d been chasing for three years, the one that had never left her alone. Jensen called her name, and she turned. He held up a magnifying glass, pointing at the grate. “Scratch. Right here. Looks like… a claw?” Quinn knelt, squinting. The scratch was deep, uneven, as if something with curved fingers had pried the grate open. “Someone didn’t use the bone token,” she said. “They broke in.” Eva’s voice was small. “How? The Market’s protected. Only a token or a ritual can open a portal.” Quinn stood, her eyes narrowing. She walked to the edge of the platform, where the tunnel curved into the dark. The air felt different here—thinner, like a membrane. She closed her eyes, thinking of the Veil Compass, of the way it had pointed to rifts, of the energy it hummed with. If Milo was killed here, and the compass is gone, then… She opened her eyes, facing Eva. “You said Milo was meeting someone at the manhole. What time?” Eva checked her watch. “Eleven. I left my apartment at ten forty-five, took the Overground. The last train was delayed, so I arrived at ten fifty-five. He wasn’t there. The crowd was. I tried to call him, but his phone went straight to voicemail.” Quinn nodded. “The scratch on the grate. It’s fresh. Someone was waiting here. For Milo. Took the compass. Left his body.” Eva stepped closer, her glasses slipping down her nose. “But why leave the body? Why not take it somewhere else?” “Maybe it wasn’t about the compass,” Quinn said. “Maybe it was about the token. The one in his hand. The runes were cracked, but they were still bound to the Market. Someone needed it to get out.” Eva’s hand flew to her mouth. “Oh. Oh, God. If they used the token to get out, then the portal is still open. The clique could still—” Quinn pulled her satchel open, taking out a notepad and a pen. She jotted down the scratch, the marks on Milo’s neck, the cracked token. “Jensen, send for the forensics team to trace the scratch. And Eva—” She looked up, her eyes sharp. “You’re going to give me that list. Right now.” Eva hesitated, then unzipped her satchel, pulling out a folder. She handed it over, her hands shaking. “I have copies. In my apartment. In the fireproof box—” “Good.” Quinn flipped through the folder, her jaw hardening. Names, dates, addresses—Milo’s list, scribbled in a hurry. “We hit the ground running. And when we find the clique, we’re going to—” A sound cut her off: a low, guttural growl, like a dog left to starve. Jensen reached for his gun, but Quinn was already moving, her own hand on the revolver. The growl came again, closer—from the tunnel beyond the manhole, from the dark. Eva grabbed her arm, her green eyes wide. “It’s the spirit. The one that killed Milo. It’s still here.” Quinn didn’t take her eyes off the tunnel. The growl turned into a whimper, then a high-pitched cry—pain, not rage. And then, silence. She stepped forward, her boots crunching on the floor. The tunnel ended at a brick wall, sealed off decades ago. But the wall was moving—cracks spreading like lightning, bricks crumbling to dust. A figure emerged, tall, gaunt, its skin gray and stretched, its eyes glowing red. It held something in its hand: the bone token, the one with the cracked runes. And in its chest, a glowing orb—pale blue, pulsing, the compass inside. Quinn raised her gun. “Drop it.” The figure turned, its mouth splitting into a grin that showed no teeth. It opened its hand, and the token fell to the floor. And then, it staggered, the orb in its chest dimming, the compass glowing brighter. Eva let out a breath. “The compass is burning him. The shade can’t stand the light.” The figure lunged, but the light from the compass flared, and it screamed—a sound like nails on a blackboard. It collapsed, dissolving into smoke, leaving nothing but a single, charred bone. Quinn picked up the token, brushing it off. It was whole now, the cracks gone. “Nice work,” Jensen said, approaching. “Took you long enough.” Quinn ignored him. She looked at the compass, at the face etched with sigils, at the needle spinning wildly. “He wasn’t working alone. The clique is still out there. And they’re going to open that rift.” She tucked the token into her pocket, the compass in her hand. The air felt heavy again, the membrane thin. “Let’s go,” she said. “We’re going to Camden.” Eva nodded, her nervous habit forgotten. Jensen pulled out his phone, already dialing. Quinn looked at the smoking wall, at the light still glowing from the broken portal. Three years. Three years of chasing shadows, of wondering what had happened to Morris. And now, it was all coming together—clues, tokens, compasses, a clique that wanted power. She didn’t know what lay beyond the rift. She didn’t know what the clique planned. But she knew one thing: she wasn’t going to let them win. (Scene ends as per instructions; no further continuation.)
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn knelt again [again]"
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.238
leniency0.476
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.032
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2048
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2048
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"furrowed"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"warmth"
2"furrowed"
3"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences126
matches(empty)
97.51% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences126
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"look"
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences172
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen73
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans10
markdownWords13
totalWords2027
ratio0.006
matches
0"Bank"
1"radiating"
2"her nervous habit"
3"called"
4"marks"
5"shade teeth"
6"used"
7"kill"
8"ancient"
9"big"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions81
wordCount1212
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity2.56
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn31
Tube1
Camden1
Revolver1
Smith1
Wesson1
Market1
Eva21
Milo4
Jensen8
London1
Aurora3
Morris2
Veil2
Compass1
Names1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Revolver"
3"Wesson"
4"Eva"
5"Milo"
6"Jensen"
7"Aurora"
8"Morris"
9"Names"
places
0"Camden"
1"London"
globalScore0.221
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences90
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords0.987
wordCount2027
matches
0"not by a knife, not by a bullet, but by something"
1"not by a bullet, but by something"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences172
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs75
mean27.03
std16.81
cv0.622
sampleLengths
058
120
229
366
411
559
61
74
819
930
109
1152
1215
1347
149
1544
1638
175
1820
1938
2021
2139
2213
2337
2478
2535
2617
2727
287
2930
3038
315
3235
3312
3430
3557
3610
3723
3816
3944
4040
4124
4219
4311
4418
4551
4611
4717
4844
4921
94.12% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences126
matches
0"was curled"
1"were bound"
2"was cracked—*used"
3"was killed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs238
matches
0"were leaving"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount18
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences19
totalSentences172
ratio0.11
matches
0"She paused, squinting at the rusted rat holes gnawing at the walls, at the overhead sign bent like a broken finger: *Bank*—twelve stops too far from Camden."
1"She rounded the corner and saw it: a man in a threadbare black coat crumpled against the wall, his throat split—not by a knife, not by a bullet, but by something that had torn through flesh like paper."
2"A bone token, smooth and white, lay in his palm—pale, porous, carved with runes she didn’t recognize."
3"Veil Market tokens were bound to the location—you couldn’t take one out unless you were leaving."
4"She wore round glasses smudged with ink, and when she saw Quinn, she tucked a strand of hair behind her left ear—*her nervous habit*, Quinn noted."
5"The bone token Milo had been holding would’ve let him in, but it was cracked—*used*."
6"Eva stayed, her eyes on Quinn’s hands—the worn leather watch, the scar on her knuckle, the calluses from years of gripping a gun."
7"Eva’s nervous habit flared—she tucked hair behind her left ear again."
8"Aurora was dead, killed in a fire three years ago, her body found with burns that didn’t match the blaze—supernatural burns, the kind Quinn still didn’t understand."
9"Eva looked down at her satchel, at the books peeking out—leather-bound, labeled in crisp script."
10"The air felt different here—thinner, like a membrane."
11"Names, dates, addresses—Milo’s list, scribbled in a hurry."
12"The growl came again, closer—from the tunnel beyond the manhole, from the dark."
13"The growl turned into a whimper, then a high-pitched cry—pain, not rage."
14"But the wall was moving—cracks spreading like lightning, bricks crumbling to dust."
15"And in its chest, a glowing orb—pale blue, pulsing, the compass inside."
16"The figure lunged, but the light from the compass flared, and it screamed—a sound like nails on a blackboard."
17"And now, it was all coming together—clues, tokens, compasses, a clique that wanted power."
18"(Scene ends as per instructions; no further continuation.)"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1229
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.02115541090317331
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0024410089503661514
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences172
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences172
mean11.78
std9.19
cv0.78
sampleLengths
019
127
212
37
413
54
618
77
838
911
1017
1111
1211
1312
1412
1517
167
171
183
191
2019
214
225
234
2416
251
269
2712
2814
2926
306
319
327
3334
346
358
361
3734
3810
3910
4010
416
4212
433
442
4520
463
4735
489
4912
46.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3023255813953488
totalSentences172
uniqueOpeners52
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences115
matches
0"She paused, squinting at the"
1"Her hand went to the"
2"She rounded the corner and"
3"His eyes were wide, frozen"
4"His left hand was curled,"
5"He leaned down."
6"He nodded, backing away."
7"She spun, hand on her"
8"She wore round glasses smudged"
9"She wet her lower lip,"
10"She cut herself off, biting"
11"She unbuttoned the coat, ran"
12"She looked at Eva, who"
13"She’d moved to London two"
14"He held up a magnifying"
15"She walked to the edge"
16"She closed her eyes, thinking"
17"She opened her eyes, facing"
18"She jotted down the scratch,"
19"She looked up, her eyes"
ratio0.261
20.87% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount101
totalSentences115
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots thudded"
1"She paused, squinting at the"
2"The air reeked of mildew"
3"Quinn didn’t look up."
4"Her hand went to the"
5"She rounded the corner and"
6"His eyes were wide, frozen"
7"Jensen said, his voice tight"
8"Quinn knelt, her knees sinking"
9"The man’s wrists were raw,"
10"His left hand was curled,"
11"A bone token, smooth and"
12"He leaned down."
13"He nodded, backing away."
14"Quinn stayed, her brow furrowed."
15"The token wasn’t right."
16"Veil Market tokens were bound"
17"A shadow moved at the"
18"She spun, hand on her"
19"She wore round glasses smudged"
ratio0.878
43.48% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences115
matches
0"If Milo was killed here,"
ratio0.009
38.96% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"She rounded the corner and saw it: a man in a threadbare black coat crumpled against the wall, his throat split—not by a knife, not by a bullet, but by somethin…"
1"Quinn knelt, her knees sinking into mud that smelled of iron."
2"The man’s wrists were raw, as if he’d struggled with something invisible."
3"She looked at Eva, who was still staring at the body, her lower lip caught between her teeth."
4"Aurora was dead, killed in a fire three years ago, her body found with burns that didn’t match the blaze—supernatural burns, the kind Quinn still didn’t underst…"
5"The scratch was deep, uneven, as if something with curved fingers had pried the grate open."
6"And then, it staggered, the orb in its chest dimming, the compass glowing brighter."
7"And now, it was all coming together—clues, tokens, compasses, a clique that wanted power."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Jensen said, his voice tight"
1"She wet, eyes darting to the body"
2"Quinn flipped, her jaw hardening"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.0239%