Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAEBKV3W7G753W53NXZ3TD

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Duration:
37.5s
Cost:
$0.000598
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Nebius

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air tasted like dust and something metallic, old. Harlow Quinn adjusted the collar of her coat, the fabric rough against her neck. The abandoned Tube station reeked of neglect and something else, something…wrong. Not the wrong of a simple crime scene, but a layered wrong, like peeling back wallpaper to find older, darker wallpaper underneath. Camden Town station’s ghost, she thought, a forgotten echo in the bowels of London. “Charming, isn’t it?” Sergeant Davies said, his voice bouncing off the tiled walls. He was young, still eager to impress, and currently trying not to cough in the swirling particulate matter. “Never thought I’d be investigating a homicide in a disused bit of the Underground.” Harlow didn’t bother with a reply. She already knew Davies considered her old-fashioned. She wasn’t interested in charming. She was interested in *correct*. And nothing about this felt correct. The victim lay sprawled on the platform, a man in a bespoke suit that now looked spectacularly out of place amidst the grime. He was clutching a tarnished silver locket. Forensics were already circling, photographing, bagging. “Name’s Alistair Finch. Art dealer. Apparently made a name for himself brokering… unusual pieces.” Davies consulted his notepad. “Found by a couple of urban explorers, according to their statement. They bolted as soon as they saw him.” Harlow knelt beside the body. Finch was mid-forties, well-kept. The wound, a single, precise puncture in his chest, was…clean. Too clean. No tearing of the fabric, no struggle evident in the way he fell. It was as if he’d simply…collapsed. She cast a glance at the platform edge. No sign of a struggle there either. And Finch hadn’t fallen onto the tracks. The dirt beneath him was disturbed, but not in the way a body thrown or shoved would disturb it. “What does the ME say?” “Preliminary’s pointing towards a single stab wound,” Davies replied. “Looks professional. Quick. Efficient.” “Efficient is an observation, Sergeant, not a conclusion,” Harlow said, her voice clipped. She tugged at her left wrist, checking the worn leather watch. 2:17 AM. Late even for a Friday. “Professional implies intent. We need to establish motive. And opportunity. Finch wasn't robbed, from the look of it.” Davies gestured to a small, overstuffed leather satchel lying near Finch’s hand. “He had this with him. Looks like…books.” Harlow’s attention narrowed. She reached for the satchel, carefully avoiding disturbing any potential evidence, and opened it. Old books. Very old books. Leather-bound, filled with dense text and strange diagrams. Anya, her predecessor, had always joked that the Met had a dedicated occult crimes unit disguised as ordinary detectives. Harlow hadn't seen the joke at the time – not after Morris. But now…now she wondered. “What are we looking at, Sergeant?” she asked, lifting a volume with brittle pages. It was written in Latin, interspersed with symbols she didn’t recognize. “Looks like someone’s library,” Davies said, shrugging. “Maybe a collector. Maybe he bought it at auction.” Harlow didn’t reply. She knew Davies didn't believe in shadows, in things that slithered at the edges of perception. She didn't *want* to believe either, but three years of unanswered questions had worn her down. “The urban explorers,” she said, after a moment. “Their statements. Have they been checked?” “Of course. Standard procedure. Seemed genuinely shaken up. Said they just stumbled across him while exploring.” “Standard procedure isn’t always good enough, Sergeant.” She glanced around the station, her gaze lingering on the crumbling Art Deco tiles. "This isn’t exactly a popular tourist destination.” A figure emerged from the gloom, holding a small, brass object. Eva Kowalski. She was even more out of place than Finch had been, with her curly red hair and round glasses perched on her nose. "Detective Quinn," Kowalski said, her voice a little breathless. “I…I thought I might be able to help.” Harlow felt a familiar tightening in her chest. Kowalski worked at the British Museum, something to do with ancient texts. She'd consulted with the woman once, after a particularly baffling case involving a stolen amulet. Kowalski's knowledge was…extensive. Unsettlingly so. “Ms. Kowalski,” Harlow acknowledged, her tone cool. “What brings you to an abandoned Tube station at this hour?” Kowalski held up the brass object. It was a compass, but not like any Harlow had seen before. The casing was etched with intricate sigils, and the patina of verdigris spoke of age. The needle, instead of pointing north, spun wildly, then settled on a point just beyond the platform, towards a darkened tunnel. “I felt a disturbance. A…resonance. This compass led me here.” “A compass?” Davies scoffed. “What, like a ghost hunter?” “It’s more complicated than that,” Kowalski said, her green eyes flashing. “This is a Veil Compass. Attuned to supernatural energy. It points towards rifts, portals… places where the veil between worlds is thin.” Harlow ignored Davies's eye roll. Kowalski wasn’t interested in impressing anyone. She just… *knew* things. Things she shouldn't. "And you think Finch stumbled into one of these rifts?" Harlow asked, her gaze fixed on the compass. “It’s possible. This station… it has a history. A confluence of ley lines. A lot of energy. And the Market," Kowalski added quietly. “The Market?” “The Veil Market. It operates in hidden locations, moving with the full moon. This station used to be one of its regular spots. They deal in…unusual goods. Enchanted objects. Forbidden knowledge.” Harlow felt a prickle of unease. The pieces were starting to fall into place, forming a picture she didn’t want to see. Finch, the art dealer, dealing in "unusual pieces." The strange books. The impossibly clean wound. She turned back to the body, examining the victim’s hands again. There was something… subtly off. Too manicured. Too smooth. She gently pried open Finch’s clenched fist. Inside, nestled amongst the silver locket, was a tiny slip of paper. Harlow carefully unfolded it. It wasn't a note. It was a token. A small piece of bone, carved with a symbol she vaguely recognized from one of Kowalski’s books. “Sergeant,” Harlow said, her voice now low and tight. “Get a complete trace on Alistair Finch. Every transaction, every contact. I want to know everything he’s bought, everything he’s sold, and everyone he’s met in the last six months. And Ms. Kowalski…lead me to that tunnel.” Davies spluttered. “Detective, are you seriously entertaining this…supernatural nonsense?” Harlow didn’t answer. She was already walking towards the darkened tunnel, following the unwavering pull of the Veil Compass. The air grew colder, heavier with each step. The metallic tang in the air intensified. The wrongness deepened. Finch hadn't simply been murdered. He'd been *chosen*. And Harlow knew, with a certainty that chilled her to the bone, that she was about to step into a world she hadn't believed in, a world that had already taken something from her, and wasn’t finished yet. Morris wouldn’t have missed the bone token. Morris would’ve known. She hadn't been looking hard enough. Not then. Not ever.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
85.71% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She glanced around [around]"
1"Kowalski added quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.457
leniency0.914
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.114
82.73% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1158
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"very"
2"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1158
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"echo"
count1
1
word"amidst"
count1
2
word"efficient"
count2
3
word"potential"
count1
4
word"standard"
count2
5
word"gloom"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"intricate"
count1
9
word"resonance"
count1
10
word"unwavering"
count1
11
word"chilled"
count1
highlights
0"echo"
1"amidst"
2"efficient"
3"potential"
4"standard"
5"gloom"
6"familiar"
7"etched"
8"intricate"
9"resonance"
10"unwavering"
11"chilled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched fist"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences101
matches
0"felt a prickle"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences101
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences120
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords4
totalWords1155
ratio0.003
matches
0"correct"
1"want"
2"knew"
3"chosen"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions59
wordCount821
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity2.07
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Kowalski"
discoveredNames
Quinn1
Tube1
Town1
London1
Davies10
Harlow17
Finch7
Friday1
Met1
Morris3
Latin1
Art1
Deco1
Kowalski9
British1
Museum1
Veil1
Compass1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Davies"
2"Harlow"
3"Finch"
4"Met"
5"Morris"
6"Art"
7"Deco"
8"Kowalski"
places
0"Town"
1"London"
2"Latin"
3"British"
globalScore0.465
windowScore0.333
63.79% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"tasted like dust and something metallic,"
1"It was as if he’d simply…collapsed"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.866
wordCount1155
matches
0"Not the wrong of a simple crime scene, but a layered wrong, like peeling back wallpaper to find older"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences120
matches
0"joked that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean31.22
std17.05
cv0.546
sampleLengths
070
145
229
336
437
540
641
75
813
949
1019
1165
1225
1316
1435
1514
1616
1728
1836
1917
2040
2118
2264
239
2433
2518
2618
2723
282
2931
3037
3139
3229
3346
349
3537
3666
87.89% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences101
matches
0"was interested"
1"was written"
2"was etched"
3"been murdered"
4"been *chosen"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs150
matches
0"was clutching"
1"were starting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences120
ratio0.008
matches
0"Harlow hadn't seen the joke at the time – not after Morris."
91.46% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount824
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.04975728155339806
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.019417475728155338
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences120
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences120
mean9.63
std7.1
cv0.737
sampleLengths
09
114
211
322
414
513
618
714
86
97
105
115
126
1323
147
156
1618
1719
185
194
2010
212
2213
236
248
257
267
2719
285
299
304
3113
3211
332
345
3518
3612
377
383
3914
402
413
428
4319
4412
454
4614
4711
487
499
58.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.4083333333333333
totalSentences120
uniqueOpeners49
38.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"Very old books."
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences86
matches
0"He was young, still eager"
1"She already knew Davies considered"
2"She wasn’t interested in charming."
3"She was interested in *correct*."
4"He was clutching a tarnished"
5"It was as if he’d"
6"She cast a glance at"
7"She tugged at her left"
8"She reached for the satchel,"
9"she asked, lifting a volume"
10"It was written in Latin,"
11"She knew Davies didn't believe"
12"She didn't *want* to believe"
13"she said, after a moment"
14"She glanced around the station,"
15"She was even more out"
16"She'd consulted with the woman"
17"It was a compass, but"
18"She turned back to the"
19"She gently pried open Finch’s"
ratio0.291
23.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences86
matches
0"The air tasted like dust"
1"Harlow Quinn adjusted the collar"
2"The abandoned Tube station reeked"
3"Camden Town station’s ghost, she"
4"Sergeant Davies said, his voice"
5"He was young, still eager"
6"Harlow didn’t bother with a"
7"She already knew Davies considered"
8"She wasn’t interested in charming."
9"She was interested in *correct*."
10"The victim lay sprawled on"
11"He was clutching a tarnished"
12"Forensics were already circling, photographing,"
13"Davies consulted his notepad"
14"Harlow knelt beside the body."
15"Finch was mid-forties, well-kept."
16"The wound, a single, precise"
17"It was as if he’d"
18"She cast a glance at"
19"The dirt beneath him was"
ratio0.872
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Sergeant Davies said, his voice bouncing off the tiled walls"
1"Harlow said, her voice clipped"
2"She glanced around, her gaze lingering on the crumbling Art Deco tiles"
3"Kowalski said, her voice a little breathless"
4"Harlow acknowledged, her tone cool"
5"Kowalski said, her green eyes flashing"
92.86% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Harlow acknowledged (acknowledge)"
1"Kowalski added quietly (add)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.343
leniency0.686
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.114
79.9645%