Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAEPNZQ7X8GAWP23RA093M

Run Details

Duration:
18.4s
Cost:
$0.000159
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air tasted of wet concrete and something else, something metallic and faintly floral – not a pleasant bouquet, but the sickly sweetness of overripe lilies. Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the worn leather strap of her watch, the tick a small, insistent counterpoint to the damp echo of dripping water. The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden wasn’t a crime scene in the conventional sense. It was a transaction, a quiet, desperate exchange conducted in the choked shadows of a forgotten artery of London. “Honestly, Quinn,” Eva Kowalski said, her voice a nervous thread in the cavernous space, “you’re going to give yourself a migraine.” Eva, perched on an overturned crate, meticulously adjusted her round glasses, a small, freckled hand tucking a stray curl behind her ear – a habit she’d inherited, Quinn suspected, from a lifetime of anxiety. She held a battered notebook and pencil, sketching the arrangement of flickering gas lanterns that cast a jaundiced glow on the scene. The Veil Market. A perpetually migrating black market dealing in the occult, tucked beneath the city like a festering wound. “It doesn’t *feel* right,” Quinn stated, her brown eyes scanning the area. The victim, a Mr. Silas Blackwood, lay sprawled on a patch of damp flagstones, a single, perfectly circular hole burned through his chest. No visible weapon. No signs of a struggle beyond the neatly arranged remnants of a trade – a handful of shimmering dust in a small, velvet pouch, a single raven feather, and a clay tablet covered in unfamiliar symbols. “That’s because it’s a supernatural murder, Quinn,” Eva countered, her voice sharp. “Blackwood was a collector. He dealt in rare artifacts. He probably acquired something he shouldn’t have, and someone silenced him.” Quinn knelt beside the body, ignoring Eva’s assessment. She ran a gloved hand over the edges of the burn mark. No scorch marks, no residue. Just…gone. “The burn is too precise,” she murmured, her gaze sweeping over the scene with the meticulousness of a military surveyor. “It wasn’t fire. It was targeted. Deliberate. And disturbingly clean.” “The Veil Market artisans are known for their…specializations,” Eva offered, flipping through her notebook. “They can manipulate energy, create localized distortions. Maybe a focused burst of something.” “Maybe,” Quinn conceded, but the word lacked conviction. She’d spent eighteen years navigating the grim underbelly of London, dealing with everything from petty theft to brutal gangland killings. She understood violence, she understood motive, but this felt…different. It lacked the messy, chaotic signature of human rage. It was surgical, cold. “The bone token,” she said, gesturing to the small, bleached skull resting on a discarded crate near the entrance. “It’s a standard entry requirement. Means nothing.” “It’s a gesture,” Eva replied, scribbling furiously. “A recognition of the…territory. The Shades pay people to post them.” Quinn picked up the Veil Compass, its small brass casing cool against her palm. The face was etched with intricate protective sigils, the needle spinning erratically, settling momentarily on a point just beyond the furthest lantern. “The Compass is fluctuating. It’s not pointing towards a rift, not precisely. It’s reacting to…something ambient.” “The Veil Market is always reactive,” Eva said, unimpressed. “It’s a conduit. A place where supernatural energies bleed through.” “This reaction is different,” Quinn insisted, holding the compass closer. She focused, filtering out the ambient energy, trying to isolate the specific distortion causing the needle's erratic movements. “There’s a residue…a trace of chronal displacement.” Eva stopped writing abruptly, her green eyes widening slightly. “Chronal displacement? You mean…time?” “Possibly,” Quinn said, her jaw tightening. “It’s faint, but it’s there. As if something…shifted.” She noticed a small discoloration in the damp flagstone beneath Blackwood’s head – a subtle, almost iridescent shimmer, like heat rising from asphalt on a summer day. It was barely perceptible, but it was undeniably present. “The tablet,” Eva said, pointing to the clay object. “Look at the symbols. I’ve seen similar configurations in ancient Sumerian texts – records of temporal rituals.” Quinn examined the tablet closely. The symbols weren’t Sumerian, not exactly. They were warped, twisted, adapted to a purpose far removed from priestly invocation. “They’re manipulating time, Eva. Not traveling through it. They’re creating a localized temporal anomaly, a bubble where time flows differently.” A memory, sharp and unwelcome, flickered at the edge of her mind – the cold, grey light of the old hospital where DS Morris had died, the unsettling stillness, the feeling that time itself had stuttered. The case had been ruled accidental, a fall down the stairs. Her superiors had closed it quickly. But she'd never believed it. Not truly. “And Blackwood,” Quinn continued, her voice low, “he wasn’t a collector. He was a stabilizer. Someone who deliberately disrupted these anomalies.” “But why?” Eva asked, her voice laced with apprehension. “Because someone didn't want them disrupted,” Quinn said, her gaze hardening. “Someone who needed the timelines to remain undisturbed. Someone who has a vested interest in preventing the past from changing.” She examined the position of the raven feather. It was meticulously placed, angled towards a shadowed corner of the station. "And someone with a particular fondness for ravens." She pulled out a small vial from her pocket – a sample of the shimmering dust recovered from the velvet pouch. Carefully, she held it to the light. The dust wasn’t composed of any known substance. It held a faint, echoing quality, like a forgotten memory. “This,” Quinn said, her hand tightening around the vial, “is not a product of the Veil Market. It’s something older. Something… raw. Something connected to the initial fracturing, the moment the Veil truly separated.” Eva swallowed nervously, tucking her hair behind her ear. "That's...a dangerous theory, Detective." Quinn ignored her, her attention focused on the iridescent shimmer beneath Blackwood’s head. She took a small, precise step forward, extending a gloved hand. As her fingers brushed against the flagstone, the shimmer intensified, and for a fleeting instant, she saw it – a flicker of another time, another version of the station, filled with men in archaic uniforms and the ghostly echo of a forgotten street fight. “Morris,” she murmured, the name a painful whisper in the damp air. “He understood. He just didn’t have time to explain.” She straightened, her face grim. The military precision she’d cultivated over years of policing wasn’t about order; it was about control. And right now, she realized, she was losing it. This wasn’t a simple occult murder. This was a carefully constructed defense, a desperate attempt to maintain a fragile, and ultimately doomed, reality. And she was suddenly, terrifyingly, caught in the middle.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.576
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
49.40% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1087
totalAiIsmAdverbs11
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
4
adverb"truly"
count2
5
adverb"deliberately"
count1
6
adverb"carefully"
count2
7
adverb"nervously"
count1
8
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"precisely"
2"slightly"
3"quickly"
4"truly"
5"deliberately"
6"carefully"
7"nervously"
8"suddenly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Blackwood"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
12.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1087
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"echo"
count2
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"velvet"
count2
3
word"navigating"
count1
4
word"chaotic"
count1
5
word"standard"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"intricate"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"disrupted"
count2
10
word"apprehension"
count1
11
word"echoing"
count1
12
word"fleeting"
count1
13
word"flicker"
count1
14
word"whisper"
count1
15
word"constructed"
count1
highlights
0"echo"
1"scanning"
2"velvet"
3"navigating"
4"chaotic"
5"standard"
6"etched"
7"intricate"
8"flickered"
9"disrupted"
10"apprehension"
11"echoing"
12"fleeting"
13"flicker"
14"whisper"
15"constructed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences67
matches
0"d with apprehension"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences67
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences81
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1095
ratio0.001
matches
0"feel"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount807
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.61
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn13
Tube1
Camden1
London2
Kowalski1
Eva11
Veil2
Market1
Mr1
Blackwood3
Compass1
Sumerian1
Morris1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Eva"
4"Market"
5"Mr"
6"Blackwood"
7"Morris"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.695
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.913
wordCount1095
matches
0"not a pleasant bouquet, but the sickly sweetness of overripe lilies"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"feeling that time"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean40.56
std21.16
cv0.522
sampleLengths
083
121
276
374
432
556
627
750
826
918
1052
1119
1235
1313
1450
1526
1644
1760
1821
199
2059
2146
2234
2313
2468
2521
2662
94.79% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences67
matches
0"was etched"
1"been ruled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs135
matches
0"was losing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences81
ratio0.099
matches
0"The air tasted of wet concrete and something else, something metallic and faintly floral – not a pleasant bouquet, but the sickly sweetness of overripe lilies."
1"Eva, perched on an overturned crate, meticulously adjusted her round glasses, a small, freckled hand tucking a stray curl behind her ear – a habit she’d inherited, Quinn suspected, from a lifetime of anxiety."
2"No signs of a struggle beyond the neatly arranged remnants of a trade – a handful of shimmering dust in a small, velvet pouch, a single raven feather, and a clay tablet covered in unfamiliar symbols."
3"“It’s faint, but it’s there. As if something…shifted.” She noticed a small discoloration in the damp flagstone beneath Blackwood’s head – a subtle, almost iridescent shimmer, like heat rising from asphalt on a summer day."
4"A memory, sharp and unwelcome, flickered at the edge of her mind – the cold, grey light of the old hospital where DS Morris had died, the unsettling stillness, the feeling that time itself had stuttered."
5"She pulled out a small vial from her pocket – a sample of the shimmering dust recovered from the velvet pouch."
6"As her fingers brushed against the flagstone, the shimmer intensified, and for a fleeting instant, she saw it – a flicker of another time, another version of the station, filled with men in archaic uniforms and the ghostly echo of a forgotten street fight."
7"The military precision she’d cultivated over years of policing wasn’t about order; it was about control."
88.54% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount800
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.03375
lyAdverbCount27
lyAdverbRatio0.03375
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean13.52
std8.85
cv0.655
sampleLengths
026
124
214
319
421
534
622
73
817
912
104
1119
123
1336
1412
1520
168
1712
185
191
2020
2110
2214
2313
248
2520
269
279
284
2919
307
317
3211
3314
3422
3516
369
3710
3810
3918
407
419
424
436
4435
459
469
4717
485
496
50.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.37037037037037035
totalSentences81
uniqueOpeners30
51.28% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences65
matches
0"Carefully, she held it to"
ratio0.015
90.77% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences65
matches
0"It was a transaction, a"
1"She held a battered notebook"
2"She ran a gloved hand"
3"she murmured, her gaze sweeping"
4"She’d spent eighteen years navigating"
5"She understood violence, she understood"
6"It lacked the messy, chaotic"
7"It was surgical, cold."
8"she said, gesturing to the"
9"She focused, filtering out the"
10"She noticed a small discoloration"
11"It was barely perceptible, but"
12"They were warped, twisted, adapted"
13"Her superiors had closed it"
14"She examined the position of"
15"It was meticulously placed, angled"
16"She pulled out a small"
17"It held a faint, echoing"
18"She took a small, precise"
19"she murmured, the name a"
ratio0.323
21.54% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences65
matches
0"The air tasted of wet"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the"
2"The abandoned Tube station beneath"
3"It was a transaction, a"
4"Eva Kowalski said, her voice"
5"Eva, perched on an overturned"
6"She held a battered notebook"
7"The Veil Market."
8"A perpetually migrating black market"
9"Quinn stated, her brown eyes"
10"The victim, a Mr."
11"Silas Blackwood, lay sprawled on"
12"Eva countered, her voice sharp"
13"Quinn knelt beside the body,"
14"She ran a gloved hand"
15"she murmured, her gaze sweeping"
16"Eva offered, flipping through her"
17"Quinn conceded, but the word"
18"She’d spent eighteen years navigating"
19"She understood violence, she understood"
ratio0.877
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She held a battered notebook and pencil, sketching the arrangement of flickering gas lanterns that cast a jaundiced glow on the scene."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"Eva Kowalski said, her voice a nervous thread in the cavernous space,"
1"Quinn stated, her brown eyes scanning the area"
2"Eva countered, her voice sharp"
3"Quinn conceded, but the word lacked conviction"
4"Quinn said, her jaw tightening"
5"Quinn continued, her voice low,"
6"Quinn said, her gaze hardening"
7"Quinn said, her hand tightening around the vial,"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Quinn stated (state)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
2"Quinn conceded (concede)"
3"Quinn insisted (insist)"
4"Quinn continued (continue)"
5"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.455
leniency0.909
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.364
73.5403%